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Lucy_Heartfilia_old

Strawberry wrote:

:D
hi kissfly~

[General]
-没有设Preview point?这个提醒的好
-TAG+Dual Blade?(我只是看到BG上有这东西lol这个你懂的,游戏里解释过了

[Easy]
-circle size-1
-slider velocity也减少点? :o
00:36:009 (1) - 00:39:438 (1) - 这两个好像没有必要NC?[/color] Fix

[Normal]
02:17:152 (1) - hitsound的音量改变一下? 来体现出最后几个重音 比如: (仅供参考
Fix听起来不错

[Can't Finish]
02:10:295 (1) - 没找到什么规律0.0
02:17:152 (1) - 这里开始rankble?至少不要等距吧lol 如果只是为了难而这么摆请remap这里 (蛋痛 怎么撸过去都是一串50/.\[/color]
这里是因为最后个难度,我高潮特意从1/2到1/3到1/4到1/6到1/8结束,BGM也是越来越激情

总体来说很不错的map><
希望早日rank!
Strawberry's Star~❤
terametis
hello~
These are all suggestions.

[General]
You must check from the spinner's end point to the next note.


[Easy]
00:34:295 (1)      It is too far, the spinner's end point to the next note. It is x2.3 when it converts into DistanceSnap.
00:54:886 (1)      I don't like this pattern.
01:22:295 (1)      It is too far, the spinner's end point to the next note.
01:25:724 (1)     ^
01:29:152 (1)     ^
01:49:724 (1)     ^


[Normal]
00:34:295 (1)     same of easy's suggestions.
01:49:724 (1)     ^
02:17:152 (1)      I don't like this pattern.

[Hard]
looks good

[Can't Finish]
01:14:581 (3)     How about this?02:17:152 (1)~(24) It is impossible :o

Your map makes DJPOP remember... :)

I wish your map is Ranked~~star~
bye~
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old

terametis wrote:

hello~
These are all suggestions.

[General]
You must check from the spinner's end point to the next note.


[Easy]
00:34:295 (1)      It is too far, the spinner's end point to the next note. It is x2.3 when it converts into DistanceSnap.FIX
00:54:886 (1)      I don't like this pattern.I haven't image parttern recently
01:22:295 (1)      It is too far, the spinner's end point to the next note.FIX
01:25:724 (1)     ^FIX
01:29:152 (1)     ^FIX
01:49:724 (1)     ^FIX


[Normal]
00:34:295 (1)     same of easy's suggestions.FIX
01:49:724 (1)     ^FIX
02:17:152 (1)      I don't like this pattern. NOT FIX

[Hard]
looks good

[Can't Finish]
01:14:581 (3)     How about this?FIX
02:17:152 (1)~(24) It is impossible :oFIX CHANGE TO SLIDER

Your map makes DJPOP remember... :)

I wish your map is Ranked~~star~
bye~
Samah
From queue:

[General]
Source should be MapleStory (capital S).
Hitsounds could use a little more fleshing out.
Your skin's combo hits are clipped, and it looks awful. Look at the 300s in this screenshot to see what I mean:

[Easy]
00:34:295 (1) - Probably too soon after the spinner for Easy. I'm not saying change it, just watch for things like this.
00:54:866 (1) - This is killer! Not sure if it's alright for Easy.
01:22:295 (1) - Might be too soon after the spinner.
01:25:723 (1) - ^
01:29:152 (1) - ^
01:37:723 (1) - ^
01:41:152 (1) - ^
01:42:866 (1) - ^
01:49:723 (1) - ^

[Normal]
Lots of very short combos in this, otherwise good.
Duplicated timing points: 01:39:214, 01:42:642

[Hard]
Lots of short combos in this, too.
00:22:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is really hard to read. It looks like a mess of approach rings! D:
00:48:009 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit confusing.
01:24:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also a mess of approach rings. :(
Duplicated timing points: 00:23:785, 00:27:214, 01:25:499, 01:39:214, 01:42:642

[Can't Finish]
As mentioned before, reduce the drain rate slightly. At the moment you only have to miss a few notes and it's almost impossible to get your bar to full. Those really short repeat sliders should boost your bar right up, but they don't.
00:35:152 (2) - This plays strange being silenced.
00:38:581 (2) - ^
01:36:866 (2) - ^
01:40:295 (2) - ^
Duplicated timing points: 00:23:785, 00:27:214, 00:35:785, 01:25:499, 01:37:499, 01:39:214, 01:40:928, 01:42:642

Heh, I just started playing MapleStory too. :)
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[General]
Source should be MapleStory (capital S).FIX
Hitsounds could use a little more fleshing out.
Your skin's combo hits are clipped, and it looks awful. Look at the 300s in this screenshot to see what I mean:

[Easy]
00:34:295 (1) - Probably too soon after the spinner for Easy. I'm not saying change it, just watch for things like this.FIX
00:54:866 (1) - This is killer! Not sure if it's alright for Easy.
01:22:295 (1) - Might be too soon after the spinner.FIX
01:25:723 (1) - ^FIX
01:29:152 (1) - ^FIX
01:37:723 (1) - ^FIX
01:41:152 (1) - ^FIX
01:42:866 (1) - ^FIX
01:49:723 (1) - ^FIX

[Normal]
Lots of very short combos in this, otherwise good.
Duplicated timing points: 01:39:214, 01:42:642FIX

[Hard]
Lots of short combos in this, too.
00:22:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is really hard to read. It looks like a mess of approach rings! D:NOT FIX
00:48:009 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit confusing.NOT FIX
01:24:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Also a mess of approach rings. :(NOT FIX
Duplicated timing points: 00:23:785, 00:27:214, 01:25:499, 01:39:214, 01:42:642FIX

[Can't Finish]
As mentioned before, reduce the drain rate slightly. At the moment you only have to miss a few notes and it's almost impossible to get your bar to full. Those really short repeat sliders should boost your bar right up, but they don't.
00:35:152 (2) - This plays strange being silenced.FIX
00:38:581 (2) - ^FIX
01:36:866 (2) - ^FIX
01:40:295 (2) - ^FIX
Duplicated timing points: 00:23:785, 00:27:214, 00:35:785, 01:25:499, 01:37:499, 01:39:214, 01:40:928, 01:42:642not fix

Heh, I just started playing MapleStory too. :)
VTC
yay hello ~ fast modding here


[General]

You will need more study about hit sound.

[Easy]
High SV?


00:24:009 (1,2) - strange. change some pattern
00:20:581 (1) - delete clap? because it is little strange..
00:24:009 (1) - ^
00:28:295 (2) - ^
00:30:009 (2) - ^
00:35:581 (2) - ^
00:39:009 (2) - ^
00:45:009 (2,4,7,8) - ^
01:07:723 (4) - stack with 00:54:866 (1) 's end
01:24:009 (1) - short. maybe this spin will be unranked.
01:27:438 (1) - ^
01:36:009 (1) - ^
01:39:438 (1) - ^
01:30:866 (1) - delete new combo
01:44:581 (1) - ^
01:50:581 - add circle? because it is so boring. (it is pretty easy . but too empty)
01:52:295 - ^
01:54:009 - ^
01:55:724 - ^
01:57:438 - ^
01:59:152 - ^
02:00:866 - ^
02:02:581 - ^
02:20:581 (1) - delete new combo

[Nomal]
high SV?
too hard(?) like hard diff.;

00:35:152 (3) - don't stack 00:34:295 (1)
00:43:723 (2) - move to x:88 y:48
00:48:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - oh my god ... too hard ! this diff is nomal !! more easier plz.
01:06:866 (1,2,3) - ^
01:12:866 (3,4) - don't stack
01:17:581 (2,3,4,1) - hard.
01:37:723 (1) - remove clap
01:38:152 (2) - ^
01:41:152 (1) - ^
01:41:152 (1,2,3) - do not stack !
01:41:581 (2) - ^
01:49:724 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - too empty.
02:03:438 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - too hard. very hard.



[Hard]

AR -1

00:22:295 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what are you doing :( (almost people is cannot read this.) too strange pattern
00:26:259 (4) - remove clap
00:26:366 (5) - ^
00:28:081 (4) - ^
00:28:938 (8) - ^
00:31:509 - ^
00:32:366 - ^
00:32:581 (5) - remove 5 repeat and add circle in 00:33:866
00:35:581 (3) - remove clap
00:39:009 (3) - ^
00:39:974 (3,4,7,8) - ^
00:44:152 - add circle
00:45:223 (5,10) - remove clap
00:49:509 (9) - ^
00:50:581 (6) - ^
00:51:223 (9) - ^
00:51:866 (2) - add clap in head and remove clap in tail
00:52:402 (4) - add clap
00:52:938 (7) - remove clap
00:54:009 (4) - ^
00:54:652 (7) - ^
01:00:438 - add circle
01:00:866 - ^
01:01:295 - ^
01:24:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what are you doing :( (almost people is cannot read this.) too strange pattern
01:27:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - strange. use the distance snap
01:36:438 - add circle?
01:38:366 (4) - remove clap
01:38:795 (6) - ^
01:39:009 (7) - add clap
01:39:223 (8) - remove clap
01:41:795 (4) - ^
01:46:295 (1,3,5,7) - add clap
01:46:509 (2,4,6,8) - remove clap
01:57:009 (3) - remove clap
01:58:938 (4) - ^
02:00:866 (2) - ^
02:20:581 (1) - remove new combo

after diff [Can't finish],
i'll not suggest about hit sound.
because so many error in hit sound.
don't add hit sound in red stick

go.

00:15:224 (1) - remove circle
00:25:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - strange. use distance snap
00:30:438 (4) - don't stack
00:36:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - strange. use distance snap
00:39:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^


that's all
mancuso_JM_
Mod Request :P

General:
The green lines are unsnapped you have to move this lines to red, white or blue ticks
In General is quite symetric beatmap, you can use more curve sliders. You can check this Guide to improve your sliders

Easy:
Circle Size : -1
00:54:866 (1): This slider is very large. Try to short it and add some notes
01:27:438 (spin- (1)): This is difficult to new players. I think that (1) should be at the middle. Like this

01:29:152 (1,2,3,4): And here somthing like this:

Normal:
01:07:938 (3): Clap in second reverse arrow
01:08:581-01:22:081: Maybe some hitsounds in this part.
For example:
01:09:009 (2): Clap
01:09:866 (4): ^^
01:11:581 (4): ^^
01:13:295 (4): ^^
01:14:581 (3): Hitfinish
01:16:081 (2): Clap at the end of slider
01:16:295 (3): Clap
01:17:795 (2): Clap at the end of slider
01:18:009 (3): Clap
01:18:438 (4): Clap in reverse arrow and at the end of slider
01:18:866 (1): Clap
01:19:509 (3): Clap at the end
01:19:724 (3): Clap
You can make something like this in all difficulties

01:49:714 and 02:20:581: Don't forget to resnap the kiai section (All Diff)
02:17:152 (1): This slider is too large, try to short it

Hard:
00:46:509 (1): Clap at the end
01:08:581-01:22:438: You can use some hitsounds something like Normal

Can't Finish:
00:14:152 (x): Add a Note
00:15:866 (x): ^^
01:40:081 (x): ^^
01:42:652 (x): ^^

Well that's all. I can't find big problems, only the unsnapped kiai
Good Luck with your beatmap ;)
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request :P

General:
The green lines are unsnapped you have to move this lines to red, white or blue ticks fix
In General is quite symetric beatmap, you can use more curve sliders. You can check this Guide to improve your sliders I like straight slider very much,it's my style,and i don't like slider overlapped too

Easy:
Circle Size : -1 Not fix,Easy use Size 3 is too hard
00:54:866 (1): This slider is very large. Try to short it and add some notes Fix
01:27:438 (spin- (1)): This is difficult to new players. I think that (1) should be at the middle. Like this Fix

01:29:152 (1,2,3,4): And here somthing like this: Fix

Normal:
01:07:938 (3): Clap in second reverse arrow Fix
01:08:581-01:22:081: Maybe some hitsounds in this part.
For example:
01:09:009 (2): Clap
01:09:866 (4): ^^
01:11:581 (4): ^^
01:13:295 (4): ^^
01:14:581 (3): Hitfinish
01:16:081 (2): Clap at the end of slider
01:16:295 (3): Clap
01:17:795 (2): Clap at the end of slider
01:18:009 (3): Clap
01:18:438 (4): Clap in reverse arrow and at the end of slider
01:18:866 (1): Clap
01:19:509 (3): Clap at the end
01:19:724 (3): Clap
You can make something like this in all difficulties
Fix
01:49:714 and 02:20:581: Don't forget to resnap the kiai section (All Diff)
02:17:152 (1): This slider is too large, try to short it not fix

Hard:
00:46:509 (1): Clap at the end Fix
01:08:581-01:22:438: You can use some hitsounds something like Normal Fix

Can't Finish:
00:14:152 (x): Add a Note not fix
00:15:866 (x): ^^ ~
01:40:081 (x): ^^ ~
01:42:652 (x): ^^ ~

Well that's all. I can't find big problems, only the unsnapped kiai
Good Luck with your beatmap ;)

Thank you
Breeze
不好意思, 没太多时间细看, 我还是暂时只mod queue里的图
关于你的几个问题我回答下好了

kissfly wrote:

1。皮肤,帖子里人说了,这个皮肤看上去底像被削掉一块一样,我也发觉了。这个影响RANK伐?
:arrow: 首先, skin需要成套的做, 你现在点击的圈那套还差hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, 分数那套差个hit0.png, 即使不想做, 加默认的进去也行. 分数那个skin现在比较要求可以明确看出是打了多少, 你的skin颜色比较相近可能会比较能分辨, 所以可以考虑换不同的颜色来加以区分
2。HARD和Can't finish里有几个CIRCLE和SLIDER碰到了一点点血条,你看看在允许范围里吗?
:arrow: 我test感觉问题不大, can't finish里的那几个circle最好还是再下面一点或者换其他摆法
3。NORMAL最后那个长滚轮,UNRANKABLE伐?
:arrow: 我没发现什么unrankable的地方
4。音效是不是非常糟?
:arrow: 每个人用音效有自己的风格, 只要听着顺就行, 我个人感觉你用的音效至少不会听着难受, 对于我是可以接受的音效使用
arien666
[General]
This song's name is actually 'Hontale' but I just wonder if this would be okay...
Just set Artist as 'Wizet' not 'Wizet, Nexon'
Source = 'MapleStory' (No need to add any other things)
If you fixed song name, add tag 'Horntail' I guess :3?

[Hard]
Some trick jumps might be good but some not ;___;



Not sure about bubbling due to some jumps but whatever orz

:3
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
General FIX
And remove jump in hard
safawu
这图风格超明显,打惯了一般的图,发现这种排版打起来很不错^ ^

下面基本没什么有用的建议,实在找不出什么有毛病的地方..真的很赞很有个性的一张图
[Normal]
总体感觉偏难...也没怎么打过NM不大懂...
01:06:866 (1,2,3) - 这里对新手是不是有点难读?

[Hard]
00:32:581 (5) - 好偷懒XD...至少拆成2个slider吧@ @
00:47:581 (7) - 这个7太下面了好像.../.\
01:20:581 (3) - 好偷懒+1...

[Can't Finish ]
00:34:724 - 放个note怎么样,否则当中突然太空了
00:34:938 - 同上
00:38:152 - 同上,对称
01:32:581 (1,2,3,4) - 把三来回的slider改成四来回slider试试看?
01:34:295 (5) - ...好吧..狂拉slider是这张图的风格..

顺便丢个星星:3

ps: kissfly是上海宁是伐,看前面你用了好多"伐"什么的@ @
Ultimate
Hey Kissfly ^^/
I've made a preview for you, so you can check out the progress and the direction that i'm going for (mapping style).
Hope you're satisfied with the progress :D. I'm really Enjoying mapping this! xD

http://puu.sh/8rr4

EDIT:
It's all finished! and I'm very proud at the results!
Enjoy this map :D :

http://puu.sh/8xts
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
I agree to Ultimate edit Insane replace my "Can't finish"
So no MOD4MOD this song recently.Thank you
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Ultimate's Insane has completed by Ultimate.
I think it's beauitful.
Share you are.
Plz
shikyu
edit: i use wrong account --" orz
athiota33
Hi :D
I'm really sorry about the delay..><

[General]
Why artist name in Ultimate's Insane diff is different from other diff?

[Easy]
00:33:438 (1) - Remove Finish
00:56:581 (1) - Remove whistle. Add clap
01:00:009 (1) - ^
01:05:152 (1) - Remove wishtle
02:17:581 (2) - Delete note
02:18:438 (2) - ^
02:19:295 (2) - ^
02:20:152 (2) - ^

[Normal]
Why this diff has stream?

[Hard]
Nice diff :D~

[Insane]
Nice diff :3~

That's all :D
Good Luck!x3~
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old

athiota33 wrote:

Hi :D
I'm really sorry about the delay..><

[General]
Why artist name in Ultimate's Insane diff is different from other diff? It's the same name " Wizet"

[Easy]
00:33:438 (1) - Remove Finish fix
00:56:581 (1) - Remove whistle. Add clap fix
01:00:009 (1) - ^ fix
01:05:152 (1) - Remove wishtle fix
02:17:581 (2) - Delete note save recently,if it must delete, i will delete it
02:18:438 (2) - ^ ~
02:19:295 (2) - ^ ~
02:20:152 (2) - ^ ~

[Normal]
Why this diff has stream? ~

[Hard]
Nice diff :D~

[Insane]
Nice diff :3~

That's all :D
Good Luck!x3~
athiota33

kissfly wrote:

[General]
Why artist name in Ultimate's Insane diff is different from other diff? It's the same name " Wizet"
Maybe I must re-download this beatmap.
YellowerYoshi
My only concern is with the spinner at 01:35:152 (1) in Ultimate's Insane. It scores a 2000 on AutoPlay so it's fine by a rules standpoint, but it still feels really fast without much room before or after it.

Other than that, really great map! I would throw a star if I had one.

EDIT: Just a general thing, you might want to add more related tags to aid with searching.
Ultimate
I forgot to ask :P

Can you add my name "Ultimate" in the tag list?
This way, when you type in my name, this map also appears when searching for me :P.
so the tags should be:

Horntail Nexon Maplestory Ultimate

ty ♥
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
No problem
when I coming back in evening,I will add it.
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Done
Topic Starter
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
Because of deleted "Can't finish",I add some easy jump in hard
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