MoodyRPG wrote:

General
Clean

Easy
00:22:182 (1) - More symetric with (3)
00:33:051 (2) - Move to center
00:34:138 (3) - ^
01:03:486 (4) - New combo and add new combo here 01:04:029
01:46:421 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo here 01:48:051
02:41:312 (5) - New combo and add new combo here 02:41:856
02:46:747 (2) - Add whistle
02:47:834 (3) - Delete whistle

Normal
02:09:790 (5) - Ugly slider IMO

Hard
00:00:986 (2) - Align with (1)
00:12:127 (6,7) - Spacing
00:14:573 (4,5) - ^

Good Luck ^^

S h i o n wrote:

General
- For a nice difficulty spread,you'd better make your 'normal' show as normal. Otherwise, you can just leave one of them.
- More work on sliders' shape and that will improve the quality of your beatmap.
-Your kiai time lasts too long.Consinder making them shorter.Also your current kiai time should be ended on 02:50:008,in all diffs.


Easy
- Kiai time is different from other diffs. You use 01:57:290 here ,but it should be on 01:57:834.　Fixed
02:06:529 (x) - Add one note Fixed
02:06:529 (4) - To (344,160)　　　　　　Change some note　　　


Normal
01:02:943 (5) - Finish on end ? (If you do so,don't forget to reduce its volume.) Fixed
01:12:182 (1) - Finish on start ? ( ^ Fixed
01:20:877 (x) - Add one note ?　　　sorry
01:57:834 (1,2) - Really ugly and meanless slider-shape.(Will not mention such thing again.) Fixed
02:32:073 (4) - No finish. Fixed
02:40:769 (4) - Finish on end. Fixed


Hard
01:37:725 (8) - Finish removed?At least reduce the volume. Fixed
01:49:138 (5) - Add finish Fixed
02:40:225 (6) - Put ending tick to (320,244)


I like the song~
Good luck~

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[Easy]
Very nice. Some unnecessary timing points you can remove though:
00:06:828 (both of them), 00:42:426, 00:43:377

[Normal]
All good, but you might want to consider reducing the circle size (CS +1)
Very easy for Normal.

[Hard]
Some timing points to remove:
00:52:616, 01:46:285, 01:46:557, 01:55:660

Solid maps. I couldn't really find a lot, sorry. No kudosu please.

1. I feel better offset -10ms
2. 02:32:616 - I suggest turn on kiai again at this time.

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. I feel better offset -10ms
2. 02:32:616 - I suggest turn on kiai again at this time.

[Hard]
00:09:410 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo


[Normal]
Nothing to point out


[Easy]
00:42:970 - Delete useless timing point
01:27:399 (1) - Spinning sound is too loud. Try audio volume 30~40.
02:41:312 (1) - Add finish
02:41:856 (2) - Put whistle to start of slider instead of finish


Good luck

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Slow miku song ;_;. Anyways I really don't think this song needs kiai time imo. I suggest removing it. I don't hear much "epic" in kiai time. If you want, you can use kiai fountain instead.
Kiai times are inconsistent. If you want to keep kiai times, make them the same for all diffs please.
OK,Fixed

Easy:
00:54:790 (1,2) - You can read on how to make these elbow sliders with this guide. Fixed
01:21:421 (2) - Make your arc a better curve?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169279 Nice idea:)Fixed
02:23:921 (1) - Add a note here? Add whistle hitsound too. It seems kinda bland to me since you can hear Miku sing this part before she echoes. You even did this at 02:41:312 (1). Fixed
02:41:312 (1) - Add whistle hitsound? some hitssound change

Normal:
00:32:508 (2) - Add note? The way you've been mapping, you've been getting all 1/1s, so this one felt awkward since you skipped it.
Nothing else I guess. OK,Add note

Hard:
00:12:127 (6) - Move 5 grids right to center it between the two sliders? It's a hard so I think players will start reading approach circle more instead of DS. Fixed
00:15:388 (5) - 4 grids right? Fixed
00:24:356 (6) - Turn this into a slider instead? Gap seems awkward since you can hear Miku hold a note. Sorry,No fixed.
01:06:475 (6) - Change this into 2 1/2 notes with the second 1/2 note as a slider? They would still follow the vocals but better since the slider will act as the hold note. 　That's right Fixed
01:08:649 (2) - ^? 2 1/2 note with 2nd 1/2 note as a slider? ^
01:20:877 (5) - Add whistle or finish hitsound? You can hear the piano/keyboard (I think) in the music here. Fixed

kissfly wrote:

General
Very beauitfu and easy song haha,I like easy song.
Add KIMI TIME?

Easy
00:00:433(1) one grid down in order to Parallel (3)
01:18:693(3) make the slope same as (4)?

Normal
No problem

Hard
00:29:509(6) Set it in X:92 Y:148
00:51:248(3) the repeat turn to left,not right
01:11:085(3) one grid right
02:01:365(3) one grid down

Good job
I hope it RANKED,I like MUKI too.

Yasora-chan wrote:

Yo~ o/ time to mod your map~

General 　　please let me suspend.
Kiai Time = * 00:54:780 - 01:07:824
* 01:57:824 - 02:10:867
* 02:32:606 - 02:45:650

Easy
OD +1　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Fixed
00:43:911 (1) maybe like this? http://puu.sh/7HIS　　　　　　　　　　　Fixed
01:34:998 (2,3) 1 grid right　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Fixed
02:07:063 (1) little neat again? http://puu.sh/7HJ9　　　　　　　　　　Fixed
02:54:889 (x) add spinner until 02:56:519 + volume 5% - 10%?　sorry,no change

Normal
00:06:954 (4) more better like this? http://puu.sh/7HJE　　　 Fixed
00:09:128 - 00:11:846 try this? http://puu.sh/7HJK　　　　　　sorry,this rhythm is good,but I would like to keep step with other portions. no change

00:15:650 - 00:17:280 try this? http://puu.sh/7HJU　　　　　　^
01:06:737 (4) add finish in the end?　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　I do not desire to use many finish sounds. sorry no change.
01:25:215 (1) del whistle, add finish?　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　^
01:27:389 (3) ^　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　^
01:29:563 - 01:33:367 like this? http://puu.sh/7HKy　　　　　this rhythm is very good,,,sorry no change
01:51:846 (2) more neat like this? http://puu.sh/7HKI　　　　change
02:45:650 (1) del whistle, add finish?　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　no change
02:45:922 (x) add slider until 02:46:193?　　　　　　　　　　　　no change

Hard
00:30:867 (x) add circle and like this? http://puu.sh/7HLw　　[Hard]diff is placed based on a voice,sorry no change.
00:31:954 (2) little neat again like this? http://puu.sh/7HLj 　Fixed
00:42:009 (5) NC (new combo)?　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　hum,please let me suspend.
00:56:954 (3) more neat again like this? http://puu.sh/7HLI^.
01:03:476 (1) del whistle in the end?　　　　　　　　　　　　no change
02:18:748 (6) NC?　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　sorry,no change
02:23:367 (6) ^　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Fixed
02:24:454 (1) del NC?　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Fixed

Okay, that's all mod from me :3 I hope that's can helpful
Good luck~

1. KIAI TIME 00:54:780~01:29:563　、　01:57:824~02:31:519 , 02:32:606~02:48:911　まで？　最後のパートだけでも伸ばしてはどうでしょうか？

1. 00:34:128(3) - スライダーend にfinish
2. 00:54:237(3) - finish削除
3. 00:54:780(4) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
4. 01:12:172(1) - ^
5. 01:57:280(3) - finish削除
6. 01:57:824(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
7. 02:32:063(2) - volumeを下げると次のfinishが生きると思います。
8. 02:54:346(3) - grid x256,y184

1. 00:53:693(5) - endのfinish削除
2. 00:54:780(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish　＆DS 外れ(0.9x)
3. 01:20:324 - スライダー追加 01:20:324~01:20:867 and スライダーendにfinish
4. 01:56:737(3) - endのfinish削除
5. 01:57:824(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
6. 02:11:954(1,2,3,1) - DS外れ ? わざとかな？　わざとであれば最後3,1のDSだけでも直したほうがよいかと思います。
7. 02:14:128(3) - endのfinish削除
8. 02:15:215(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
9. 02:32:063(4) - easyといっしょでfinishに？

1. 00:06:954(1) - volume控えめなfinish
2. 00:54:237(6) - スライダーstartのfinish削除
3. 00:54:780(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
4. 00:56:954(3,4) - 前の1,2と同じリズムに？
5. 01:04:563 - note追加?
6. 01:11:628(4) - finish削除
7. 01:12:172(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
8. 01:57:280(6) - スライダーstartのfinish削除
9. 01:57:824(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
10. 02:14:128(2) - スライダーendのfinish削除
11. 02:15:215(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
12. 02:32:063(3) - easyといっしょ

kosiga wrote:

いつもmodありがとうございます。

~my mod~
気に入らなければスルーでお願い致します。

[General]

1. KIAI TIME 00:54:780~01:29:563　、　01:57:824~02:31:519 , 02:32:606~02:48:911　まで？　最後のパートだけでも伸ばしてはどうでしょうか？

[Easy]

1. 00:34:128(3) - スライダーend にfinish
2. 00:54:237(3) - finish削除
3. 00:54:780(4) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
4. 01:12:172(1) - ^
5. 01:57:280(3) - finish削除
6. 01:57:824(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
7. 02:32:063(2) - volumeを下げると次のfinishが生きると思います。
8. 02:54:346(3) - grid x256,y184

[Normal]

1. 00:53:693(5) - endのfinish削除
2. 00:54:780(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish　＆DS 外れ(0.9x)
3. 01:20:324 - スライダー追加 01:20:324~01:20:867 and スライダーendにfinish
4. 01:56:737(3) - endのfinish削除
5. 01:57:824(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
6. 02:11:954(1,2,3,1) - DS外れ ? わざとかな？　わざとであれば最後3,1のDSだけでも直したほうがよいかと思います。
7. 02:14:128(3) - endのfinish削除
8. 02:15:215(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
9. 02:32:063(4) - easyといっしょでfinishに？

[Hard]

1. 00:06:954(1) - volume控えめなfinish
2. 00:54:237(6) - スライダーstartのfinish削除
3. 00:54:780(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
4. 00:56:954(3,4) - 前の1,2と同じリズムに？
5. 01:04:563 - note追加?
6. 01:11:628(4) - finish削除
7. 01:12:172(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
8. 01:57:280(6) - スライダーstartのfinish削除
9. 01:57:824(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
10. 02:14:128(2) - スライダーendのfinish削除
11. 02:15:215(1) - スライダーstart にwhistle消してfinish
12. 02:32:063(3) - easyといっしょ

finishに関してが多くなってしまいましたが、finishはできるだけ長い白線に置いたほうがbetterかな？と思うので書かせていただきました。ですが音付けは個人で違うので気に入らない場合は変えなくても良いと思います。

nice map & Star~☆

頑張ってください~

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

General
* I would like to hear the hitsound of custom normal-hitwhistle and normal-hitclap in this song. I suggest you to put that in kiai or something. If you didn't change this, remove normal-hitclap.wav

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Easy
01:46:411 (5) - It feels odd if the tail slider is overlapped by head slider (Nazi) Not fixed
02:23:911 (4) - AFAIK, stack the tail slider at easy diff is confusing for beginners. I think it because it hard to tell where the next object　Fixed

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Normal
02:36:954 (1) - Do 90" Clockwise (Ctrl+>) 2 times. And reverse it (Ctrl+R). Flow is better if you change for this　Fixed
01:49:128 (5) - Flip horizontally (Ctrl+H) to make better flow at gameplay (Nazi)　Fixed
02:43:476 (2) - Having the slider like this one is kinda odd for me. Perhaps, try something better slider than this? (Nazi) Fixed
02:44:563 (3) - ^　 Fixed

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Hard
00:58:041 (4) - Try move this to 00:58:313 and remove 1 repeating slider. And then, add note at 00:58:041. If you change this, the circle is following the song and the slider is following the vocal　 Fixed
01:03:476 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider for following vocal?　 Fixed
02:43:476 (3) - I feel this slider is not symetric (Nazi)　 Fixed

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Oyasumi nasai

1. 00:54:780 (4) - add new combo
2. 01:03:476 (1) - place this new combo at 01:04:019 (2)?
3. 01:21:411 (2) - meh, that's nazi >< but.. make it "follow" the previous note better (like this http://puu.sh/8oaV)

1. 01:39:889 (3) - reverse it? looks better imo
2. 02:13:041 (2) - replace it for a slider (which finishes at 02:13:585)?
3. 02:18:748 (4) - place here the new combo at 02:19:563 (1)?

1. 00:45:813 (5) - align with the previous notes?
2. 01:33:639 (x) - add a note here
   Also, I think you could increase HP Drain Rate a bit, it's kinda low for a Hard

VocaloidTACU wrote:

....i'm late.... right ?....; S o.. sorry..

here modding !
waypoint is this - > http://puu.sh/8cP6
small gray square

[Easy]
00:25:433 (4) - use ctrl+H and 1grid down
00:27:606 (1) - move x48 y176
01:21:411 (2) - 4th way point 1grid down

[Normal]

00:12:661 - add whistle
00:17:009 - ^
01:19:780 (4) - 1 grid up and 1grid left (center)
01:19:780 (4) - add circle?
01:57:824 (1) - 2nd waypoint 1grid right
01:59:998 (1) - ^ 1grid left
02:05:976 (5) - 3rd waypoint 1grid down
02:14:128 (3) - 3rd waypoint 1grid right


[Hard]

00:03:150 (2) - move x96 y208
00:25:704 - add circle?
00:28:693 (5) - 2nd waypoint 1grid right and 3rd waypoint 1grid down
00:47:987 (1) - change to circle like - > http://puu.sh/8cPU
02:40:215 (6) - 3 grid left
02:42:389 (2) - 6 grid left
02:43:476 (3) - 4 grid left


How awesome song
so impressed.

Wiinter wrote:

Hey~ modding as requested.

[Easy]

1. 00:54:780 (4) - add new combo Fixed
2. 01:03:476 (1) - place this new combo at 01:04:019 (2)?
3. 01:21:411 (2) - meh, that's nazi >< but.. make it "follow" the previous note better (like this http://puu.sh/8oaV)Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:39:889 (3) - reverse it? looks better imo　
2. 02:13:041 (2) - replace it for a slider (which finishes at 02:13:585)? Fixed
3. 02:18:748 (4) - place here the new combo at 02:19:563 (1)?

[Hard]

1. 00:45:813 (5) - align with the previous notes?　 Fixed
2. 01:33:639 (x) - add a note here
   Also, I think you could increase HP Drain Rate a bit, it's kinda low for a HardFixed

Overall, good map! Glad you didn't map an insane, the map fits the relaxing-easy diffs Good luck on ranks~

athiota33 wrote:

Mod req from shikyu & athiota33 Modding Queue
Sorry about the delay. shikyu is really bussy. So,i replace her job for a while..
Here we go!~

[Easy]

01:16:519 (1) - Add wishtle?　　sorry,no change
01:19:780 (4) - Remove wishtle?　^

[Normal]

02:27:172 (1) - RNC? Fixed
02:29:346 (5) - NC?　Fixed

[Hard]

02:45:650 (1) - Make it a line with (5)　Fixed

That's all i can do.
Your map is really awesome! i like it

Good luck!

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:56:954 (2) - Maybe set up the anchor points like this so you have an even curve.　Fixed

SPOILER

[Normal]
02:11:954 (1) - This would look better with one more point so it's a smoother curve.　Fixed

SPOILER

02:24:454 (1) - This could be smoothed out a little more too. Reference the example in Easy that I gave.　Fixed

[Hard]
02:29:346 (4,1) - Spacing　Fixed

Solid set. Fix that spacing issue. Adjust slider prettiness if you wish.