368,56,20860,2,0,B|320:32|252:56|248:132,1,142.5,0|2

256,80,81455,6,0,B|280:128|256:176|256:176|232:224|256:272,4,198.000004720688,0|2|0|2|12

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Hyguys' Normal]
00:44:431 - break start here ? yes
00:56:228 (1,2) - why jump here ? it's fince since it goes with spacing
01:17:364 - break start here ? yes

[Hard]
00:07:084 (5) - x:256 y:192 ? yes
00:20:860 (2) -

368,56,20860,2,0,B|320:32|252:56|248:132,1,142.5,0|2

ok
01:02:137 (4,5) - x:112 y:256 ? yes
01:17:818 - break start here ? yes
01:24:182 (2) - ctrl + r ? no

[Insane]
00:35:094 - add circle or 00:35:247 (2) - start at here ok
01:17:818 - break start here ? yes
01:21:455 (1) -

256,80,81455,6,0,B|280:128|256:176|256:176|232:224|256:272,4,198.000004720688,0|2|0|2|12

yes
01:35:318 (2,3,4,5) - 3 circles here plz ! ok

nice map

1. The colors of the 2nd and the 3rd combo blend in the background too much. Consider changing them for a more visible green or another colors.
2. Is the mp3 a VBR one ? If not, you have to reencode it to 192kbps
3. Adjust the audio lead-in of the taiko difficulties to 1000ms
4. Put "rhythm heaven" in the tags and not only "heaven" even if "rhythm" is already the tags. The search system in-game is different than on the website. If someone search "Rythm Heaven" in-game, the game will not detect your map.

1. Difficulty settings : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. HP drain 4, in my opinion it's too much for this difficulty, consider lowering it to 3 ?

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 00:57:250 (2) - You shouldn't make a jump here, not in a normal difficulty, it's too much confusing
   2. 01:12:364 (1) - The reverse is too late, it should be at 01:12:818 because of the crash sound. I recommand you to do something like that if you want you pattern to follow correctly the music :
      
      ( Move this inherited timing section (01:13:614) to 01:12:705 as in the screenshot to make the reverse and the end of the slider sounding like the circle.)
   3. 01:17:364 - I'm not a fan of short break (this one is very short, ~350ms long). Nevertheless, it makes a nice effect here with the warning-arrows. I guess it's fine then :3

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 01:23:273 (1,2) - The shape of (1) hides the beginning of (2). Even if it's easily readable for the most of players, I recommand you using this kind of pattern only in insane diffs. If you're willing to change it and if you want to keep these slider, this pattern is nice too :
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. 01:35:773 (5) - Stack this circle with (2) because 2/1 stacked circle are boring, besides it would make a nice pattern :>

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   1. 00:23:768 (9) - The music suggest a new combo here.
   2. 00:29:737 (1) - As you've made a good job with sliders, I'm kinda sad that this one is not very well-made >w<! It would look nicer like that in my opinion :
      
      SPOILER

      
   3. 00:34:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern shouldn't be only mapped on the background music but on the main part of the song too, I mean the "TU DU DU DU DUM!". You should have something like :
      
   4. 00:43:360 (5) - New combo ?
   5. 01:17:364 (4) - Not a good idea too stack this circle with the slider's end, it's senseless in my opinion. Consider unstacking it ? :3
   6. 01:26:909 (1) - Nice slider :3

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   • 01:06:455 (28) - Katsu ?
   1. Why does the background is not correctly under the playing area as the Oni diff ? Try to fix that please.
      
      SPOILER

      

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   1. 01:25:546 (2,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2) - This sounds kinda odd :/ dkdddkkd would be much better in my opinion
   2. 01:31:796 - Add a d ? (If you add it, don't forget to remove the finish on 01:31:909 (1).)
2. I'm not sure about the 1/8 patterns :/

1. Combo Colours: The dark green blends too much with the BG, sometimes making some stacks really hard to see. Try another green e.g: http://puu.sh/6tiA
2. Breaks: 01:17:423 - This break is way too short, it's not even 2s long. Oh, it's not properly snapped. Anyhow, you should remove this break.
3. Timing Points: Timing points are not consistent through the mapset.

1. Kiai-end is not snapped properly

1. 01:19:636 - Why did you start Kiai 1/8 earlier? The main beat starts here: 01:19:693. Place Kiai properly, please.

Download: Tsunku - Green Construction (Bass-chan) [Ozzy's Oni].osu

xierbaliti wrote:

sorry I'm too late, Bass ~_~
and some suggestions here:

-Storyboard-
01:19:315 - not sure about the SB load :O http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162897
01:35:906~01:36:076 - ^ - checked via test mode and editor, it isn't above 5 so it's fine, lolcubes got similar results

-Hard-
00:44:354 - strongly suggest you to add a circle here ._. no, it fits for me
01:04:826 (7) - how about start this spinner at 01:05:167 and add 3 circles at 01:04:826,01:04:940,01:05:054? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162904 - no

nice map! I like it :3 thanks
have a star