Wooops, I kinda messed up in [yami] diff :<
01:39:023 (6) - Was supposed to be a new combo, sorry!!
01:39:023 (6) - Was supposed to be a new combo, sorry!!
IceBeam wrote:
as you requested
there's nothing wrong with folder or settings,though I would rename Easy to something else,as it's the only default name in the mapset..looks a bit odd
I noticed you already adjusted SB to the new offset,that's good
but is it intentional,that pics get changed around ~01:20:709? I't be totally okay,if the fade would continue up to the downbeat/start of chorus part (01:21:058),so I have to make sure it was in purpose :p
[Easy]
00:22:104 (3) - I hear a note..I'd add one,cause rhytm sounds a bit incomplete w/o it i have add a note,lolcube if you dont like it just tell me
perfect otherwise..
easy and cute
[yoru]
okay,considering this is a really old map and it's supposed to be Normal - I won't nazi it too much,but still you'll have to do some improvements,if you want to see it ranked :< we have a easy and cute [easy] so it can be normal+ = 3= yes!
00:11:290 (1,1,2,3,1) - I'd fully remap this pattern^
first of all,spacing between 00:11:290 (1) - 00:12:686 (1) doesn't make much sense,and in case it's mirrored with 00:14:081 (1) - this pattern should have a constant spacing
and 00:12:686 (1,2,3) are too far from each other,I'd reccomend not to juse circle jumps in the first pattern of the map,even if they aren't major
it'd help to read the distance (red/white ticks) ahead more correctly
00:16:872 (1) - move first waypoint 1 grid left (lvl3)
00:19:662 (1) - move last waypoint 1 grid right (lvl3)
00:41:988 (2) - add a reverse,so it would follow vocals on 00:43:034? its only follow the music's rhythm,,not the vocals
00:48:965 (1,2,3) - 1/1 rhytm would be more obvious here 00:48:965 (1,2,3) - i like fit the music's rhythm in my map,,not the vocals >_<
01:06:755 (4) - you don't need a clap here ok
01:12:686 (1,2,1,2) - you should reduce this 1/1 jump a bit..how about this? fix
01:16:348 - how about adding a note here? ok
01:17:744 - ^ fix (it have a note at first,, but we havent easy diff, so i think 1/2 is hard to the first diff,now we have XD)
01:26:639 (1,1,1,1) - same,reduce these jumps please its not hard =3=
01:43:383 (1) - add a finish hitsound?
01:48:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - once again,too hard jump for a Normal,consider remapping it i change it back (delete 01:49:488 (2,2) - )
02:08:500 (1,1,2,3,1) - same issue as for 00:11:290 (1,1,2,3,1) = 3= normal+~
02:14:081 (1) - 1 grid up for whole object,and 1 grid right for the last waypoint
02:30:825 (1) - to clear up the spacing,place this slider in the center? new combo then minus jump,is ok ,AR6 not hard to read
02:33:267 (3,1) - fix distance between them,they should be much closer new combo then a little jump is ok
02:52:802 (4) - clap isn't needed fix
02:58:732 (1,2,1,2) - well,same suggestion as for 01:12:686 (1,2,1,2) fix
03:23:848 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - reduce distance between all of them yes, is hard for a normal+ ,remap it
03:29:430 (1) - finish fix
[Alazy]
01:16:872 (4) - distance looks wrong in case of previous 1/2 jumps,so,could you place it farther? i think use new combo is ok
01:17:395 (5,6) - you could make them more neat: fix (alace if you dont like this note set just tell me XD)
[yami]
I can't agree with AR 9 =\ there's not much flow,but a lot of whole screen jumps,so that high approach rate doesn't fit much,seriously
and reduce OD by 1 please =3= i think is ok,i have afk 1 year,then i can fc it XDD
00:41:639 (3,4) - they should be much closer to each other,clear up the spacing please =3=its not hard too read,,but ok
00:44:779 (1) - finish fix
00:52:802 (3,4) - they should be much closer to each other,clear up the spacing please ^
00:55:941 (1) - finish ^
01:07:104 (1) - ^ ^
01:56:988 (6) - unreadable speed change..yes,have to state this..the only thing I could suggest is to use 1x :c @_@ but,,i feel decelerate is fit the song,,in the slider .thats a pause in the music,then a new start(finish),,i juet want to make a feel like pause
02:09:895 (1,2,3,4) - it's really hard to hit,could you reduce a distance between (2) and (3)? delete 2
02:40:593 (1) - again unreadable speed change ;~; fix it,please.. the music's rhythm is pause(or slow?),can you feel it?
02:58:732 (1) - finish? fix
03:01:523 (1) - ^ ^
that's it!
I hope you'll use some of my suggestions at least
I'd really love to bubble it,but you have to fix unreadable speed changes in yami and wrong spacing/hard jumps in yoru
it's really major
other things are up to you,but it'd be better to fix them too
have my star for this masterpiece~
yes,it fits,I agreeFurawa wrote:
01:56:988 (6) - unreadable speed change..yes,have to state this..the only thing I could suggest is to use 1x :c @_@ but,,i feel decelerate is fit the song,,in the slider .thats a pause in the music,then a new start(finish),,i juet want to make a feel like pause
a galgame name"何処へ行くの、あの日"Anonymus wrote:
What is the source of the pics?
The answer to that question is right above you.MoeruBeryal wrote:
hey guys i have a question: which anime is this pic in this beatmap did anyone know this? write back pls thx