quintitem wrote:

></ star~

SPOILER

ah and a little timing advice...
I think maybe offset 320 (+10ms for current) will be better? xD
hmm please try it and decide whether you change it or not :3
but if you want to change this, please don't forget to resnap all notes and align all greenlines to timeline.xD

KingsAL2 wrote:

#Modreq

- Insane
00:12:454 (5,6) - Spacing
01:32:342 (1) - Remove new combo
01:33:859 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:34:364 (2)
01:44:814 (X) - Timing section should be 40 -50 Coz 30 is a bit low
01:50:039 (1) - Remove new combo
01:50:544 (1) - ^
01:51:219 (1) - ^

- Hard
00:13:803 (1) - Remove new combo
00:18:859 (3,4) - spacing
00:39:758 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:061 (1) - ^
01:46:331 (1) - ^
01:46:836 (1) - ^
01:51:218 (1) - ^

- All
Lovely and good luck ~
STAR ~

1. Video file : Remove 2 audio tracks from this file and make full submit :
   
2. Tags: use "spaces" between tags. Your tag "Lump_of_Sugar" works like 1 tag, it must be "Lump of Sugar". Fix it for all diffs. Also add "opening" to the tags in all diffs.
3. Stack Leniency 2 is unrankable. Set Stack Leniency 4 at least.

Aleks719 wrote:

Well

General

1. Video file : Remove 2 audio tracks from this file and make full submit :
   
2. Tags: use "spaces" between tags. Your tag "Lump_of_Sugar" works like 1 tag, it must be "Lump of Sugar". Fix it for all diffs. Also add "opening" to the tags in all diffs.
3. Stack Leniency 2 is unrankable. Set Stack Leniency 4 at least.

Insane
00:31:836 (1) - *nazi* not stacked perfect with 00:30:825 (1)
00:32:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe in another direction? (1)-(2) reads bad
01:36:724 (1) - finish here sounds strange

Hard
00:56:106 (3) - clap sounds bad
00:58:128 (1,2,3) - add 3 finishes?
00:59:645 (1) - add finish to the start
01:15:825 (3) - add finish
01:23:915 (1) - not sure in this finish

Normal
00:21:050 (2) - add whistle?
00:29:645 (4) - finish sounds bad here. remove it?
00:52:904 (1) - remove finish
00:54:252 (1) - add finish instead of clap
also recheck you claps from here till 01:03:690. Rhythm is not constant
01:53:915 (1) - remove finish

Easy
AR+1
00:28:297 (7) - finish sounds bad here. remove it?
00:38:915 (1) - remove nc
00:41:612 (1) - ^
00:51:555 (6) - add finish + nc
00:52:567 (8) - add finish to the start instead of clap
01:02:342 (1) - add nc
01:11:443 (2,3,4,5) - you missed rhythm here again
01:22:567 (3,4,1) - spacing : It happened becauce you use 0.75x. AI says "spacing is fine", but it's not a true

01:25:263 (3) - add whistle to the end?
01:36:724 (3) - remove finish
01:37:398 (1) - add finish to the start
01:50:207 (5) - remove finish?

Pretty nice mapset without huge mistakes. Star!

xierbaliti wrote:

here are some suggestions

-Overall-
the "Papapa" claps sounds bad :< how about using normal-hitnormal instead?
maybe you need disable the letterbox.

-Easy-
01:50:544 (1) - let this spinner start at 01:50:881?
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Normal-
00:08:072 (1) - let this spinner start at 00:08:409?
01:05:376 (1) - new combo here.
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Hard-
01:53:915 (1) - end at 01:55:600?

-Insane-
00:05:039 (1) - maybe you need new combo here :3
00:29:645 (7,8,9) - add clap? (oh I mean normal-hitnormal)
01:35:544 (1) - why new combo?
01:35:881 (2) - don't like this jump.
01:35:966 (3) - how about remove this note and let the stream start at 01:36:050 (4)?
01:43:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - emm.. a 9-notes stream here... what about remove (2) and (8)? the 5-notes stream seems much better here.
01:44:898 - add a circle here?
01:45:067 - ^
01:53:746 (1) - let this spinner end at 01:55:600?