Hard:
-You first go two minutes with a break, and then go two and a half minutes without a break from the last break to the end of the map. Please add more breaks, since this is a long song.
00:02:287 - I would add a hit circle here to make the 1/3 rhythm flow better.
00:06:167 - You're following the lyrics. But, you suddenly break from the lyrics and have (5) start in a weird spot. I would put a hit circle here to keep the flow up.
00:45:720 (7,8) - The jump from 7 to 8 feels out of place. There is nothing in the music to suggest such a jump, and it does not flow well.
00:50:197 (4,5) - Same here. This kind of stuff works better with 1/2s, but with 1/3s, the groups-of-two should be kept together.
01:07:511 (4,5,6,7) - Here, it DOES work because it's consistent for that section and flows well. Keep that in mind.
01:31:391 (3,4) - Again, this jump is not consistent with the section and does not flow well.
04:19:750 (6) - Having this with nothing 1/3 before it breaks your rhythm, so add a hit circle 1/3 before it to help the flow.
04:34:227 (4,5,6) - (5) should partially overlap (4) like it does with (6). It'll look nicer.
Normal:
00:20:645 (1,2,3,4,1) - The last hit circle in this combo can be a bit hard to read for newer players because it's overlapped by the first hit circle in the combo. I would rearrange these so there's no overlap.
01:23:332 (1,2) - You go with a beat-based rhythm prior to this, so this 2/3 stuff feels weird and is unintuitive.
01:25:123 (1,2) - ^
02:32:735 (2,3,4,5) - Again, (2)'s hitburst can make (5) a bit hard to see for newer players due to the overlap. Again, I would rearrange this combo.
02:52:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. While the hitburst fades out, it's still a bit unintuitive since most of the map constantly goes forward and not back on itself like this.
03:51:541 (2,3,4,5) - Like the pattern you copy and pasted, (5) is overlapped by (2)'s hitburst. Again, I would rearrange this, but into a different pattern for some variety.
04:14:376 (4) - Again, hitburst overlap on easier difficulties is bad. This gets overlapped by the sliderend's hitburst. Again, I would do some rearranging.
04:44:824 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is anticlimatic. You can do something like this - I believe in you!
Here, have a star.