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Topic Starter
Shiki

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Normal]
00:20:645 (1,2,3,4,1) - 音量渐强,具体多少我懒得试了 我尝试下用40 50 60 50
00:36:764 (1) - end at 00:39:451 done
01:09:899 (2,3) - 太突然了,这里开始DS渐小好点 减小了spacing
01:24:078 (2,3) - 换slider,卧槽你还给不给新人活了 :P 马上换
01:25:869 (2,3) - ^ done
01:36:317 - 绿线挪到spinner尾 done
02:31:391 (1) - 为了flow
184,72,151391,6,0,B|296:72|368:160,1,200,2|8
谢谢 :D
03:36:018 - spinner start here ok

[Hard]
这个diff的spacing感觉很奇怪 /.\ 我没有一直开着ds来做, 不过我认为辨认是没有什么困难的
00:07:511 - add note ? ok
00:20:645 (1,2,3,4) - 音量渐强,ds渐大 done
00:36:764 (1) - end at 00:39:451 okay
00:43:033 (7) - start at 00:42:884 在那个地方加了一个圈
01:27:212 (3) - start at 01:27:361 done
01:42:735 (7) - delete deleted
01:57:809 (4) - end at 01:58:108 ok
02:04:675 - add note 虽然那里的确是有个音没错 但是我总感觉有点奇怪
02:05:570 - ^ ^
02:07:212 (2) - start at 02:07:063 在那里加了note
02:35:869 (2) - start at 02:35:720 don
02:38:705 (1) - end at 02:41:242 done
04:13:182 (6) - delete ok
个人感觉这首歌非常不适合用直slider,也不适合对称排版
Thank you~· XD
The 08 team_Bourdon
你好~~ ^^

Normal
  1. Circle Size change to the Large?
  2. i suggest, in Normal Difficulty, please using Distance snap to arrange them...
01:08:108 (1) - remove this New Combo?
04:00:944 (1) - this slider beginning sound is finish, instead of whistle

Hard
  1. HP Drain change to 6?
  2. OD change to 7?
02:34:526 (x) - add a circle?
03:41:242 (5) - add a New Combo?
03:44:227 (5) - ^
03:55:421 (8) - ^
03:59:003 (7) - ^
04:13:332 (6) - ^
04:16:018 (5) - ^
04:23:332 (3,4) - here is no need to jump, i think.
04:27:809 (6) - add a New Combo?
04:35:421 (10) - ^
04:47:063 (1) - this spinner i suggest start from 04:48:406 .

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Nice Mapset!
Shoot a little Flower Star for you :3
and Good Luck :!:
Topic Starter
Shiki

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

你好~~ ^^ 你好~ XD

Normal
  1. Circle Size change to the Large? Sorry, but i think it will look crowded.
  2. i suggest, in Normal Difficulty, please using Distance snap to arrange them... Okay. I will check the spacing with AIMOD
01:08:108 (1) - remove this New Combo? eh.. okay
04:00:944 (1) - this slider beginning sound is finish, instead of whistle done

Hard
  1. HP Drain change to 6? Okay
  2. OD change to 7? Done
02:34:526 (x) - add a circle? Okay
03:41:242 (5) - add a New Combo? All done except 04:13:332 (6)
03:44:227 (5) - ^
03:55:421 (8) - ^
03:59:003 (7) - ^
04:13:332 (6) - ^
04:16:018 (5) - ^
04:23:332 (3,4) - here is no need to jump, i think. Spacing reduced
04:27:809 (6) - add a New Combo? Done
04:35:421 (10) - ^ Done
04:47:063 (1) - this spinner i suggest start from 04:48:406 . I changed it to start from 04:47:511

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Nice Mapset!
Shoot a little Flower Star for you :3
and Good Luck :!:
Thank you for your mod and star~~ 多谢!
merchat7
As requested,

[General]

- +1 stack leniency to all difficulty? Cleaner stacks.

[Normal]

- Straight sliders :@@@@@

00:11:690 (1,3) - Can you curve these two sliders? More interesting / better flow etc. Don't see any reasons for them to be straight.
00:18:406 (1.2,3,4) - Repeating slider fits better for (1,2) and slider for (3.4). It emphasize the hit circle in the next combo much better. This will require slight remapping, so If not, please curve slider (2) a bit.
00:51:093 (1.2.3.4) - Try to curve all the sliders. Perhaps make (1,2) symmetrical to each other and the same with (3,4) or you can come up with a more interesting pattern if you have one.
00:55:570 (2.3) - The only time straight sliders fit, imo is in rock/fast song and occasionally if the feel calls for it. This part, not at all. Curve the sliders / more interesting slider type instead please.
01:04:526 (1,3) - Don't see why patterns like this http://puu.sh/66vF doesn't work.
01:14:376 (3.4) - http://puu.sh/66w2 Why not?
01:23:332 (1.2 1,2) - :( curve it or something else, don't leave it straight.
03:30:496 (1,2) - ^ you can keep it straight if you want through.
04:29:600 (1.3) - -_- Same suggestion as before

merchat7 wrote:

Straight sliders :@@@@@
[Hard]

00:00:347 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/66xl I like this more.
00:06:317 (5.6) - http://puu.sh/66xz
00:17:362 (2.3.4.5) - Sliders maybe? But it's fine.
00:47:511 (2.3.4) - http://puu.sh/66yD
00:50:197 (4,6) - Curve them.
01:53:799 (1) - Curve
02:27:660 (2.3 2.3) - I'm sure there is better way to arrange them than straight.
02:44:227 (2.3) - Curve (2), copy and paste to the other then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J it and readjust.
03:09:003 (1) - Curve
03:24:675 (1.4.5) - ^
03:28:705 (5,6) - Space out more and curve.
04:14:824 (2.3) - Curve
04:17:361 (1.2.3.4) - Looks a whole better if you curve all of these sliders.
04:26:914 (4.5) - Same as 00:06:317
04:33:779 (1-8) - Hard to read since they are covered by hit bursts, try to rearrange a bit.
04:40:347 (1.2) - Curve

Same comment about straight sliders.

Good enough for a star. Your beatmap would be a lot better if you curve the sliders but no real issues. Good luck on rank.
Topic Starter
Shiki

merchat7 wrote:

As requested,

[General]

- +1 stack leniency to all difficulty? Cleaner stacks. Okay~

[Normal]

- Straight sliders :@@@@@

00:11:690 (1,3) - Can you curve these two sliders? More interesting / better flow etc. Don't see any reasons for them to be straight. Curved
00:18:406 (1.2,3,4) - Repeating slider fits better for (1,2) and slider for (3.4). It emphasize the hit circle in the next combo much better. This will require slight remapping, so If not, please curve slider (2) a bit. Done
00:51:093 (1.2.3.4) - Try to curve all the sliders. Perhaps make (1,2) symmetrical to each other and the same with (3,4) or you can come up with a more interesting pattern if you have one. Curved all XD
00:55:570 (2.3) - The only time straight sliders fit, imo is in rock/fast song and occasionally if the feel calls for it. This part, not at all. Curve the sliders / more interesting slider type instead please. Done.
01:04:526 (1,3) - Don't see why patterns like this http://puu.sh/66vF doesn't work. Thank you~
01:14:376 (3.4) - http://puu.sh/66w2 Why not? Sure~
01:23:332 (1.2 1,2) - :( curve it or something else, don't leave it straight. Done
03:30:496 (1,2) - ^ you can keep it straight if you want through. Curved.
04:29:600 (1.3) - -_- Same suggestion as before Done as before

merchat7 wrote:

Straight sliders :@@@@@
[Hard]

00:00:347 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/66xl I like this more. I like this too~
00:06:317 (5.6) - http://puu.sh/66xz Yes, why not?
00:17:362 (2.3.4.5) - Sliders maybe? But it's fine. Sorry, I want to keep them.
00:47:511 (2.3.4) - http://puu.sh/66yD Done
00:50:197 (4,6) - Curve them. Curved.
01:53:799 (1) - Curve Done
02:27:660 (2.3 2.3) - I'm sure there is better way to arrange them than straight. Yes.
02:44:227 (2.3) - Curve (2), copy and paste to the other then Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J it and readjust. Done
03:09:003 (1) - Curve Okay
03:24:675 (1.4.5) - ^ Done
03:28:705 (5,6) - Space out more and curve. I make the spacing here on purpose, curved.
04:14:824 (2.3) - Curve Done
04:17:361 (1.2.3.4) - Looks a whole better if you curve all of these sliders. Yes, it's better now
04:26:914 (4.5) - Same as 00:06:317 Done
04:33:779 (1-8) - Hard to read since they are covered by hit bursts, try to rearrange a bit. It may be better now.
04:40:347 (1.2) - Curve Done

Same comment about straight sliders.

Good enough for a star. Your beatmap would be a lot better if you curve the sliders but no real issues. Good luck on rank.
Thank you very much. I believe it will play better with curved sliders. :P And I've learned a new word curve.
bmin11
[Hard]
04:33:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Might have worked better if you made a loop like this
04:39:302 (6,7) - Move this somewhere else. Looks sloppy


Beautiful song and fantastic job on that slow down before kiai
Topic Starter
Shiki

bmin11 wrote:

[Hard]
04:33:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Might have worked better if you made a loop like this Thanks, but I like the old one better :p
04:39:302 (6,7) - Move this somewhere else. Looks sloppy Oh... Done

Beautiful song and fantastic job on that slow down before kiai
:) Thank you~
Nyquill
o/ 第一个要华语Mod的人。

我不知道我的语言用法对不对,请原谅 :<

[Normal]
看了好几遍,没有找到问题,就是感觉01:09:003 的0.75有一点奇怪。


[Hard]
有很多note要是跟着vocal走的话不是1/3。
01:11:242 (7) - 把一个note放在这个的后边?这里有一个很空的clap
01:58:556 (1,2) - spacing跟以前不一样
03:05:720 (2,3) - 这些应该挪开一点,离(1)太近了。有一个03:13:481 (4,5,6) 的spacing就好了
03:06:615 (5,6) - ^
03:17:959 (1,2) - 把这两个也挪远一点吧,离03:17:511 (8) 太近了

没有能找到很多问题,抱歉:/
YTYuyu
Alright time to mod this :)

Normal:
00:21:541(3) - stack it on (2) at 00:19:749
00:47:511(1) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6eYq
00:51:988(2,3) - Spacing
01:01:839(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6eYY
01:09:899(4,5) - Spacing
01:17:063(2,3) - ^
01:23:332(1,2) - ^
01:25:869(2,3) - ^
01:57:361(4) - 1 grid left
01:58:705(7) - ^
01:59:152(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
02:34:973(1,2) - Spacing
02:51:093(4) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6f8j
03:03:182(6,1) - Spacing
04:26:018(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6f9i
04:27:809(3) - make it the same shape as 1. it should be or close like this http://puu.sh/6f9s
04:34:973(3,1) - Spacing
04:43:929(1,2) - ^

Hard:
00:01:839(4,5) - Replace it with a slider
00:22:436(1) - If it's possible can u stack it perfectly?
00:40:794(2,3) - Spacing
01:05:421(1) - 1 grid up for the end point.
01:06:317(2) - 1-2 grids up for the end point.
01:13:929(8) - New combo?
01:19:152(9) - ^
01:47:511(4) - 1 grid down for the end point. if u follow this Aline (5) with the end point

This is the best i can do. U deserve a star and GL :D
Topic Starter
Shiki

Nyquill wrote:

o/ 第一个要华语Mod的人。

我不知道我的语言用法对不对,请原谅 :< 你的中文很好耶 :)

[Normal]
看了好几遍,没有找到问题,就是感觉01:09:003 的0.75有一点奇怪。因为歌曲节奏变慢了


[Hard]
有很多note要是跟着vocal走的话不是1/3。
01:11:242 (7) - 把一个note放在这个的后边?这里有一个很空的clap 好的
01:58:556 (1,2) - spacing跟以前不一样 我相信这个可以辨认出来的 :)
03:05:720 (2,3) - 这些应该挪开一点,离(1)太近了。有一个03:13:481 (4,5,6) 的spacing就好了 但是这里的时间间隔小了, DS没变
03:06:615 (5,6) - ^
03:17:959 (1,2) - 把这两个也挪远一点吧,离03:17:511 (8) 太近了 Okay~

没有能找到很多问题,抱歉:/ 没关系的啦 :D
谢谢~ :)
Topic Starter
Shiki

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright time to mod this :) XD

Normal:
00:21:541(3) - stack it on (2) at 00:19:749 Done.
00:47:511(1) - make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6eYq Okay
00:51:988(2,3) - Spacing I think 1.0x and 1.1x is similar XD
01:01:839(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6eYY Okay
01:09:899(4,5) - Spacing I don't think it matters much in playing
01:17:063(2,3) - ^
01:23:332(1,2) - ^
01:25:869(2,3) - ^
01:57:361(4) - 1 grid left I think it's fine :D a straight line.
01:58:705(7) - ^
01:59:152(1) - 1 grid up for the end point Okay
02:34:973(1,2) - Spacing Okay
02:51:093(4) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6f8j Okay
03:03:182(6,1) - Spacing Slider speed changes
04:26:018(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/6f9i Okay
04:27:809(3) - make it the same shape as 1. it should be or close like this http://puu.sh/6f9s Yes
04:34:973(3,1) - Spacing It plays fine.
04:43:929(1,2) - ^

Hard:
00:01:839(4,5) - Replace it with a slider They used to be a slider, but I changed them.
00:22:436(1) - If it's possible can u stack it perfectly? Done
00:40:794(2,3) - Spacing
01:05:421(1) - 1 grid up for the end point. Done
01:06:317(2) - 1-2 grids up for the end point. Done
01:13:929(8) - New combo? New combo added
01:19:152(9) - ^ Done
01:47:511(4) - 1 grid down for the end point. if u follow this Aline (5) with the end point Okay

This is the best i can do. U deserve a star and GL :D
Thank you very much :)
Ekaru
Hard:

-You first go two minutes with a break, and then go two and a half minutes without a break from the last break to the end of the map. Please add more breaks, since this is a long song.

00:02:287 - I would add a hit circle here to make the 1/3 rhythm flow better.
00:06:167 - You're following the lyrics. But, you suddenly break from the lyrics and have (5) start in a weird spot. I would put a hit circle here to keep the flow up.
00:45:720 (7,8) - The jump from 7 to 8 feels out of place. There is nothing in the music to suggest such a jump, and it does not flow well.
00:50:197 (4,5) - Same here. This kind of stuff works better with 1/2s, but with 1/3s, the groups-of-two should be kept together.
01:07:511 (4,5,6,7) - Here, it DOES work because it's consistent for that section and flows well. Keep that in mind.
01:31:391 (3,4) - Again, this jump is not consistent with the section and does not flow well.
04:19:750 (6) - Having this with nothing 1/3 before it breaks your rhythm, so add a hit circle 1/3 before it to help the flow.
04:34:227 (4,5,6) - (5) should partially overlap (4) like it does with (6). It'll look nicer.

Normal:

00:20:645 (1,2,3,4,1) - The last hit circle in this combo can be a bit hard to read for newer players because it's overlapped by the first hit circle in the combo. I would rearrange these so there's no overlap.
01:23:332 (1,2) - You go with a beat-based rhythm prior to this, so this 2/3 stuff feels weird and is unintuitive.
01:25:123 (1,2) - ^
02:32:735 (2,3,4,5) - Again, (2)'s hitburst can make (5) a bit hard to see for newer players due to the overlap. Again, I would rearrange this combo.
02:52:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. While the hitburst fades out, it's still a bit unintuitive since most of the map constantly goes forward and not back on itself like this.
03:51:541 (2,3,4,5) - Like the pattern you copy and pasted, (5) is overlapped by (2)'s hitburst. Again, I would rearrange this, but into a different pattern for some variety.
04:14:376 (4) - Again, hitburst overlap on easier difficulties is bad. This gets overlapped by the sliderend's hitburst. Again, I would do some rearranging.
04:44:824 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is anticlimatic. You can do something like this - I believe in you!

Here, have a star.
Topic Starter
Shiki

Ekaru wrote:

Hard:

-You first go two minutes with a break, and then go two and a half minutes without a break from the last break to the end of the map. Please add more breaks, since this is a long song.

00:02:287 - I would add a hit circle here to make the 1/3 rhythm flow better. Yes, it sounds better now
00:06:167 - You're following the lyrics. But, you suddenly break from the lyrics and have (5) start in a weird spot. I would put a hit circle here to keep the flow up. Okay
00:45:720 (7,8) - The jump from 7 to 8 feels out of place. There is nothing in the music to suggest such a jump, and it does not flow well. Okay.
00:50:197 (4,5) - Same here. This kind of stuff works better with 1/2s, but with 1/3s, the groups-of-two should be kept together. Oh.. But I like this.
01:07:511 (4,5,6,7) - Here, it DOES work because it's consistent for that section and flows well. Keep that in mind. Yes sir.
01:31:391 (3,4) - Again, this jump is not consistent with the section and does not flow well. Okay
04:19:750 (6) - Having this with nothing 1/3 before it breaks your rhythm, so add a hit circle 1/3 before it to help the flow.Added circle.
04:34:227 (4,5,6) - (5) should partially overlap (4) like it does with (6). It'll look nicer. Done it.

Normal:

00:20:645 (1,2,3,4,1) - The last hit circle in this combo can be a bit hard to read for newer players because it's overlapped by the first hit circle in the combo. I would rearrange these so there's no overlap.Rearranged :)
01:23:332 (1,2) - You go with a beat-based rhythm prior to this, so this 2/3 stuff feels weird and is unintuitive. Done, both of them.
01:25:123 (1,2) - ^
02:32:735 (2,3,4,5) - Again, (2)'s hitburst can make (5) a bit hard to see for newer players due to the overlap. Again, I would rearrange this combo. Rearranged.
02:52:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^. While the hitburst fades out, it's still a bit unintuitive since most of the map constantly goes forward and not back on itself like this. Done as before
03:51:541 (2,3,4,5) - Like the pattern you copy and pasted, (5) is overlapped by (2)'s hitburst. Again, I would rearrange this, but into a different pattern for some variety. Okay
04:14:376 (4) - Again, hitburst overlap on easier difficulties is bad. This gets overlapped by the sliderend's hitburst. Again, I would do some rearranging. Okay.
04:44:824 (2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is anticlimatic. You can do something like this - I believe in you! Pattern changed :D

Here, have a star.
:) Thank you for your real mod and star~ It does help a lot.
Yasora
Yuhuu~~ time to mod your map :3

Normal
00:22:436 (1) del combo ?
00:54:675 (1) ^
00:55:570 (2) new combo ?
02:34:526 (6) ^
02:34:973 (1) del combo ?
03:42:585 (x) add circle + whistle ?
04:47:063 (1) move into 04:47:511, end in the 04:52:884
^ (x) add circle

Hard
00:22:436 (1) del combo ?
00:57:660 (7) new combo ?

Sorry if my mod is bad <:3
Good map~~~ >w</
Topic Starter
Shiki

Yasora-chan wrote:

Yuhuu~~ time to mod your map :3 \:D/

Normal
00:22:436 (1) del combo ? Okay~
00:54:675 (1) ^
00:55:570 (2) new combo ?
02:34:526 (6) ^
02:34:973 (1) del combo ?
03:42:585 (x) add circle + whistle ?
04:47:063 (1) move into 04:47:511, end in the 04:52:884 Done~
^ (x) add circle

Hard
00:22:436 (1) del combo ? Well, I want to keep it.
00:57:660 (7) new combo ? Done

Sorry if my mod is bad <:3
Good map~~~ >w</
Thank you~ :3
al2e10
I love this song ~~<3 耶耶 ~~~ 有完整板了~~~

[Hard] That should be change to Insane =3=
00:45:570 (6) - New combo
02:02:585 (5) - New combo and remove 02:02:735 (1)
02:34:526 (8) - New combo and remove 02:34:973 (1)
03:16:167 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing problem ~.~
太好聽了 T.T 感動 ~~~~~~~
mod不了什麼.

[Normal]
Try - Ctrl+Alt+a >> AImod
The spacing NEEDED to fix up.

[all]
大致都沒有問題normal自己看吧=]
我可以做個guest diff 嗎? ><
Topic Starter
Shiki

KingsAL2 wrote:

I love this song ~~<3 耶耶 ~~~ 有完整板了~~~ 我也很喜欢这歌耶 :D

[Hard] That should be change to Insane =3= Okay~
00:45:570 (6) - New combo
02:02:585 (5) - New combo and remove 02:02:735 (1) 好的
02:34:526 (8) - New combo and remove 02:34:973 (1) Yes sir~
03:16:167 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing problem ~.~ Fixed now :)
太好聽了 T.T 感動 ~~~~~~~
mod不了什麼.

[Normal]
Try - Ctrl+Alt+a >> AImod
The spacing NEEDED to fix up. 修正了一些比较明显的 还有一些为了形状就不修改了 /.\ 都是可以读出来的

[all]
大致都沒有問題normal自己看吧=]
我可以做個guest diff 嗎? >< 当然可以呀 欢迎 :3
谢谢~~
Nymph
Hi~ 以前在3K和WCX的QUEUE里面看见这个 然后给忘了..

General:
MP3后面有很多没用上 有可能的话最好砍一下
看着FLOW是肯定需要HARD了 估计GD会是简单向HARD吧

Normal:
00:11:690 (1,3) - 个人建议这两个SLIDER头加上WHISTLE 这里你2处白线1和白线3WHISTLE的切换 像这种节奏过渡的地方我觉得13都加上就是比较好的选择了
00:40:347 (1) - 我个人其实觉得这里用CLAP有点早了 01:09:003 (3) - 开始用CLAP似乎更好
01:27:958 (2) - 绿线没用 砍了吧
02:09:899 (4) - 感觉这SLIDER意义就不大了 不如转盘直接从这起 要不转盘还有点嫌短
02:27:362 (1) - 这里怎么1白线也CLAP了 跟你后面的只下3白线CLAP一比就有点违和了 不如改WHISTLE
02:52:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 突然变成24白线whistle也有点怪感觉. 我个人建议13白Whistle
03:00:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉这里这么加 真不如全CLAP了..做个递增的音量渐变很适合
03:07:212 (1) - 03:12:585 (3) - 03:14:376 (5) - 忘了加Whistle还是故意不加? 看你后面相同的节奏都加了 这里却没加
03:23:332 (1) - 这个也该加一个w
03:26:018 (3,5,6) - 35尾whistle 6whistle来配合4?
04:08:108 (1) - 再来个喷泉嗎

Insane:
00:02:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用SLIDER吧?NOTES有点赶
00:55:570 (3) - 同NORMAL 这个段落起CLAP太早了 应该下一段再用
01:22:884 (1) - 从这开始这点咋没有WHISTLE
01:27:809 (5) - 加个NOTE?很怪异这里空着
01:28:705 (4) - clap?
01:29:600 (8) - delete clap?感觉没必要就这用4白线CLAP 什么也没表达出来的样子
01:31:391 (3) - 为啥是clap呢 头whistle换掉clap?
01:32:287 (5) - clap?
01:33:182 (7) - remove clap?
01:33:630 (8) - 尾CLAP?我个人比较推荐这样整齐的用CLAP
01:37:063 (1) - 这后面不适合24CLAP 听起来满别扭的 并不符合节奏 像NORMAL那样的1w3c就挺好的感觉
02:05:720 (6,7,8,9) - 渐变是有了 没CLAP感觉也表达不了什么啊^^;
噗 后面不看了 感觉也都跟前面是一样的建议 先这样吧~
Topic Starter
Shiki

Nymph wrote:

Hi~ 以前在3K和WCX的QUEUE里面看见这个 然后给忘了.. Hi~ =w=

General:
MP3后面有很多没用上 有可能的话最好砍一下
看着FLOW是肯定需要HARD了 估计GD会是简单向HARD吧 不知道耶 大概是吧

Normal:
00:11:690 (1,3) - 个人建议这两个SLIDER头加上WHISTLE 这里你2处白线1和白线3WHISTLE的切换 像这种节奏过渡的地方我觉得13都加上就是比较好的选择了
00:40:347 (1) - 我个人其实觉得这里用CLAP有点早了 01:09:003 (3) - 开始用CLAP似乎更好 那我就把前面的clap都砍掉了 :)
01:27:958 (2) - 绿线没用 砍了吧
02:09:899 (4) - 感觉这SLIDER意义就不大了 不如转盘直接从这起 要不转盘还有点嫌短 嗯 换成转盘了
02:27:362 (1) - 这里怎么1白线也CLAP了 跟你后面的只下3白线CLAP一比就有点违和了 不如改WHISTLE Okay
02:52:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 突然变成24白线whistle也有点怪感觉. 我个人建议13白Whistle Okay
03:00:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 感觉这里这么加 真不如全CLAP了..做个递增的音量渐变很适合 Good idea~
03:07:212 (1) - 03:12:585 (3) - 03:14:376 (5) - 忘了加Whistle还是故意不加? 看你后面相同的节奏都加了 这里却没加 好像加了好听一点耶 :)
03:23:332 (1) - 这个也该加一个w 好的w
03:26:018 (3,5,6) - 35尾whistle 6whistle来配合4?
04:08:108 (1) - 再来个喷泉嗎 Okay~

Insane:
00:02:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用SLIDER吧?NOTES有点赶
00:55:570 (3) - 同NORMAL 这个段落起CLAP太早了 应该下一段再用
01:22:884 (1) - 从这开始这点咋没有WHISTLE
01:27:809 (5) - 加个NOTE?很怪异这里空着 okay
01:28:705 (4) - clap?
01:29:600 (8) - delete clap?感觉没必要就这用4白线CLAP 什么也没表达出来的样子
01:31:391 (3) - 为啥是clap呢 头whistle换掉clap?
01:32:287 (5) - clap?
01:33:182 (7) - remove clap?
01:33:630 (8) - 尾CLAP?我个人比较推荐这样整齐的用CLAP
01:37:063 (1) - 这后面不适合24CLAP 听起来满别扭的 并不符合节奏 像NORMAL那样的1w3c就挺好的感觉
02:05:720 (6,7,8,9) - 渐变是有了 没CLAP感觉也表达不了什么啊^^;
关于hitsound的全部fixed XD
噗 后面不看了 感觉也都跟前面是一样的建议 先这样吧~
当时做完了insane再做normal发现24白线根本不该下clap lol
非常感谢~~ <(_ _)>
Megurine Luka
Hmm 326神触w
太久没关心mod queue了所以迟了不好意思

[General]
Stack Leniency 保持一致比较好,有一个是0.7

[Normal]
因为这个难度不仅仅是NM还同时是最低难度,所以建议降低AR和OD
00:03:630 (3) - spacing
00:47:511 (1) - nazi一下,slider尾巴的tick在112, 128
00:53:779 (4) - 换成单个circle比较好?
01:16:167 (1) - nazi,stack的好一点w
01:23:332 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里我感觉整体往前移四分之一拍会比较符合歌曲,但是我明白spinner要留空的困扰w,如果觉得需要改的话spinner可以在01:21:541结束,然后01:26:466+一个circle
01:56:914 (3) - del

[Hard]
HP-1~2
00:02:735 (1) - 既然都用了1/3了为啥不放00:02:585上
00:04:376 (x) - add circle
00:05:272 (x) - ^
00:06:167 (x) - ^
00:41:988 (5) - 这个跳有点太过突然了O O,建议ctrl+h
02:34:526 (x) - add circle
03:17:959 (1) - 拉远,和5,6距离一样
03:18:854 (2) - 形状和1不一样啊w
03:47:959 (7) - spacing


w液
Topic Starter
Shiki

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hmm 326神触w 326神触←w
太久没关心mod queue了所以迟了不好意思

[General]
Stack Leniency 保持一致比较好,有一个是0.7 怪了 我这里看都是0.5的说

[Normal]
因为这个难度不仅仅是NM还同时是最低难度,所以建议降低AR和OD AR-1 OD-1
00:03:630 (3) - spacing 中间隔着两拍应该不会有太大问题吧 所以为了形状这个先保留了
00:47:511 (1) - nazi一下,slider尾巴的tick在112, 128 Okay~
00:53:779 (4) - 换成单个circle比较好?Yes
01:16:167 (1) - nazi,stack的好一点w 关掉grid stack好了
01:23:332 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里我感觉整体往前移四分之一拍会比较符合歌曲,但是我明白spinner要留空的困扰w,如果觉得需要改的话spinner可以在01:21:541结束,然后01:26:466+一个circle 我总觉得这样spinner的声音显得不够协调... 所以还是保留原来的了
01:56:914 (3) - del deleted

[Hard]
HP-1~2 HP-1
00:02:735 (1) - 既然都用了1/3了为啥不放00:02:585上 诶?? 不是已经在了吗
00:04:376 (x) - add circle 这里有一个slider的开头呀 /.\
00:05:272 (x) - ^ 已经有了呀
00:06:167 (x) - ^ ^
00:41:988 (5) - 这个跳有点太过突然了O O,建议ctrl+h
02:34:526 (x) - add circle 这里已经有过了
03:17:959 (1) - 拉远,和5,6距离一样 Done.
03:18:854 (2) - 形状和1不一样啊w oops..
03:47:959 (7) - spacing
>< 其实我感觉是因为我改了diff名 乃忘了更新的说
w液
谢谢 :)
zsr123
一点点建议 a_a

[Insane]
01:00:496 (9) - 为什么这个地方要突然来个鼓@ @..
01:29:600 (8) - clap ?
01:31:391 (3) - 头 clap ?

01:33:182 (7) - 头尾 clap ?

01:58:556 (1) - clap ?
01:58:705 (2) - 尾clap?

02:04:675 (x) - + clap ? (如果加了的话 前面1 , 2 也clap ,并且 02:04:973 (3) - 去掉whistle)

03:37:660 (1) - clap ?
03:38:108 (4) - clap ?
03:38:406 (6) - clap ?

04:29:003 (1) - clap ?
04:29:153 (2) - 尾clap ?


star :)
Topic Starter
Shiki

zsr123 wrote:

一点点建议 a_a a_a

[Insane]
01:00:496 (9) - 为什么这个地方要突然来个鼓@ @.. > > 去掉了
01:29:600 (8) - clap ? 这一段我只想在长白线上加clap ><
01:31:391 (3) - 头 clap ?

01:33:182 (7) - 头尾 clap ?

01:58:556 (1) - clap ? Okay. 下面一样
01:58:705 (2) - 尾clap?

02:04:675 (x) - + clap ? (如果加了的话 前面1 , 2 也clap ,并且 02:04:973 (3) - 去掉whistle) >< 这个不太喜欢

03:37:660 (1) - clap ? Done.
03:38:108 (4) - clap ?
03:38:406 (6) - clap ?

04:29:003 (1) - clap ? Okay~
04:29:153 (2) - 尾clap ?

star :)
Thank you for modding and star~ XD
kosiga
I love Anohana :oops:

and
↓my mod↓

[Normal]
  1. 00:40:346(1,3) - more beautiful(reference 2 Approach rate and use DS 1.04x) http://puu.sh/7k72
  2. 00:52:884(3,4) - spacing (use DS 1.0x)
  3. 01:03:630(3,1) - remove circle1 and circle3 change repeat slider(1 repeat) 01:03:630~01:05:421
  4. 01:05:869(2,3) - remove 2,3 and add slider 01:05:869~01:07:212
  5. 01:33:966 - add timing point volume 50% and this slider end point remove clap
  6. 01:34:526(1) - gradually raise volume up 01:34:973 60% and 01:35:869 70%
  7. 02:38:444 - same ^^
  8. 02:41:242 - volume down
  9. 02:52:884(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - volume up a little. 3 and 5 and 7 whistle
  10. 03:35:981(1) - gradually raise volume up
  11. 04:24:227(4) - more beautiful(reference 3 Approach rate
  12. 04:47:511(1) - spinner end 04:54:675 and volume try this http://puu.sh/7kb1 http://puu.sh/7kb4
[Hard]
  1. 01:33:929 - same Normal 01:33:966
  2. 01:34:227(1) - same Normal 01:34:526
  3. 01:36:764 - volume 5% (same Normal)
  4. 01:36:914 - volume down (maybe 20% ?)
  5. 02:38:406 - same Normal 02:38:444
  6. 02:41:242 - volume down
  7. 04:35:421(1,2,3,4) - move 1:04:35:272 , 2:04:35:421 , 3:04:35:720 , 4:04:35:869
  8. 04:47:511(1) - same Normal
That's all.

Interesting rhythm. Star~☆ :)
Topic Starter
Shiki

kosiga wrote:

I love Anohana :oops: I love it too ^^

and
↓my mod↓

[Normal]
  1. 00:40:346(1,3) - more beautiful(reference 2 Approach rate and use DS 1.04x) http://puu.sh/7k72 Yes~
  2. 00:52:884(3,4) - spacing (use DS 1.0x) Yes
  3. 01:03:630(3,1) - remove circle1 and circle3 change repeat slider(1 repeat) 01:03:630~01:05:421 Sorry, I don't quite like it /.\
  4. 01:05:869(2,3) - remove 2,3 and add slider 01:05:869~01:07:212 ^
  5. 01:33:966 - add timing point volume 50% and this slider end point remove clap Done~
  6. 01:34:526(1) - gradually raise volume up 01:34:973 60% and 01:35:869 70% Okay~
  7. 02:38:444 - same ^^ Done.
  8. 02:41:242 - volume down Done.
  9. 02:52:884(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - volume up a little. 3 and 5 and 7 whistle Done~
  10. 03:35:981(1) - gradually raise volume up yes
  11. 04:24:227(4) - more beautiful(reference 3 Approach rate Yes
  12. 04:47:511(1) - spinner end 04:54:675 and volume try this http://puu.sh/7kb1 http://puu.sh/7kb4 Sorry, I want the sound at 04:54:675 appear after the scoreboard come out


[Hard]
  1. 01:33:929 - same Normal 01:33:966 Done
  2. 01:34:227(1) - same Normal 01:34:526 ^
  3. 01:36:764 - volume 5% (same Normal) Yes
  4. 01:36:914 - volume down (maybe 20% ?) No, I don't think it sounds good
  5. 02:38:406 - same Normal 02:38:444 Yes
  6. 02:41:242 - volume down No.
  7. 04:35:421(1,2,3,4) - move 1:04:35:272 , 2:04:35:421 , 3:04:35:720 , 4:04:35:869 Yes~
  8. 04:47:511(1) - same Normal Same as Normal :p
That's all.

Interesting rhythm. Star~☆ :)
That helped me a lot~
Thank you for your modding and star~~ :)
S h i o n
General
- Remove 'ed' from tags since tag words need more than 3 letters.(If you search ed, you will find nothing.)
- 后面还有1分钟的时间 要截一下音频吧,需要的话可以帮你弄下=.=


Normal
- AImod的spacing

01:48:854 (3) - 这样放?

02:52:884 (1) - 被02:51:093 (4) - 挡住了 be carefull T.T (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 那么长一串大丈夫?
03:01:839 (3,4,5,6) - 效果不太明显,从这几个开始渐响吧 幅度大一些?
03:16:167 (2) - Hidden by 03:14:376 (5)


Hard
03:38:556 (7) - New combo
03:38:854 (1) - Remove new combo
04:22:287 (3) - ^



Star'd
加油~~
Topic Starter
Shiki

S h i o n wrote:

General
- Remove 'ed' from tags since tag words need more than 3 letters.(If you search ed, you will find nothing.)
- 后面还有1分钟的时间 要截一下音频吧,需要的话可以帮你弄下=.= /.\ 我感觉不用了 80%以上都用到了 谢谢


Normal
- AImod的spacing lol 一个new combo解决4个 剩下一个我感觉没什么大问题 所以就保留了
01:48:854 (3) - 这样放? 改了一下 不过不是这样

02:52:884 (1) - 被02:51:093 (4) - 挡住了 be carefull T.T (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 那么长一串大丈夫? 调整了一下(4)的形状. 关于那一串 我感觉应该还是比较好打的 :)
03:01:839 (3,4,5,6) - 效果不太明显,从这几个开始渐响吧 幅度大一些? Done~ 40 45 50 55 65 75 85 95
03:16:167 (2) - Hidden by 03:14:376 (5) fixed~


Hard
03:38:556 (7) - New combo 这个就不了 和前面几个保持一致 :D
03:38:854 (1) - Remove new combo ^
04:22:287 (3) - ^ ^

加油~~
多谢~
Tenshi-nyan
heya.

General
Too much Kiai Time. Way too much Kiai time. Consider shortening it.
Cut the MP3, 1 minute of it is not mapped.

Hard
04:00:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - nooooo don't do this. it looks and plays very, very bad. arrange it like this: http://puu.sh/7y9x much better IMO.
04:33:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ... don't jump to the stream.

Can't find anything worth improving really... and I'm no nazi modder.
Topic Starter
Shiki

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya.

General
Too much Kiai Time. Way too much Kiai time. Consider shortening it. Okay
Cut the MP3, 1 minute of it is not mapped. Since so many modders have mentioned it, I think I should get the mp3 cut :)

Hard
04:00:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - nooooo don't do this. it looks and plays very, very bad. arrange it like this: http://puu.sh/7y9x much better IMO. Done~
04:33:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ... don't jump to the stream. Okay.. fixed

Can't find anything worth improving really... and I'm no nazi modder.
Thank you for modding :3 I believe it is more playable now
nimi
super super delay, sorry >_<

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:705 (x) - add a note here?
  2. 01:20:197 (4) - consider reducing a bit the volume on the end of this slider, fits better on the spinner right after it imo
  3. 04:36:615 (x) - add a note here?
Yeah.. couldn't find much. Really cool mapset/song :) good luck on ranks
Topic Starter
Shiki

Wiinter wrote:

super super delay, sorry >_< it's nothing :)

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:705 (x) - add a note here? Done
  2. 01:20:197 (4) - consider reducing a bit the volume on the end of this slider, fits better on the spinner right after it imo Yes, it's done
  3. 04:36:615 (x) - add a note here? Done
Yeah.. couldn't find much. Really cool mapset/song :) good luck on ranks Thank you~
Thank you again for your modding :)
nimi

Shiki wrote:

Wiinter wrote:

super super delay, sorry >_< it's nothing :)

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:705 (x) - add a note here? Done
  2. 01:20:197 (4) - consider reducing a bit the volume on the end of this slider, fits better on the spinner right after it imo Yes, it's done
  3. 04:36:615 (x) - add a note here? Done
Yeah.. couldn't find much. Really cool mapset/song :) good luck on ranks Thank you~
Thank you again for your modding :)
you're welcome~ :)
Niva
Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

Hard diff mod only, as you requested :3

[General]
-> Remove "ed" in tags from Hard diff. This "ed" isn't included in the Easy diff's tag, and the osu! web search couldn't look for less than 3 characters word so it would be better if deleted imo
-> Disable letterbox during breaks? It doesn't fit cheerful songs like this imo ><

[Hard]
  • 00:02:212 (6) - I checked and this should be 1/6 later orz
    00:09:451 (7) - Why not whistle at slider end? Would VERY fit the vocal here :3
    00:21:541 (3) - ... I prefer a repeating 1/3 here. Also, you could add soft-hitwhistle or clap on (2) and (4)'s start
    01:04:973 (8) - Uh, I suppose the whistle should be here?
    01:08:108 (6) - Change to repeating 1/3? Also add whistle on (7)'s start better imo
    01:16:914 (x) - Add note with whistle?
    01:40:645 (9) - Curve this more symmetrical?
    02:08:406 (2,3,4,5) - Converting these into slider sounds better imo ><
    02:29:451 (2) - Lower the clap's volume? The previous clap sound is covered by the bass sound, but this one has no bass sound, so I think if this note is quieter it would be better
    02:53:332 (1) - Not in the center. Is it intentional?
    03:21:541 (1) - Finish better here imo
    04:00:496 (2,5) - Whistle on (2) and finish on (5)'s start perhaps?
    04:16:615 (8,9) - Whistle?
    04:32:735 (4) - Imperfect stack, but it's barely noticeable
Beautiful map~
This mod is mostly suggestion ^^

Good luck xD
Topic Starter
Shiki

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

Hard diff mod only, as you requested :3

[General]
-> Remove "ed" in tags from Hard diff. This "ed" isn't included in the Easy diff's tag, and the osu! web search couldn't look for less than 3 characters word so it would be better if deleted imo Done
-> Disable letterbox during breaks? It doesn't fit cheerful songs like this imo >< Goodbye letterbox~

[Hard]
  • 00:02:212 (6) - I checked and this should be 1/6 later orz It's not necessary imo, since players will feel strange at 00:03:929 (4)
    00:09:451 (7) - Why not whistle at slider end? Would VERY fit the vocal here :3 Good idea
    00:21:541 (3) - ... I prefer a repeating 1/3 here. Also, you could add soft-hitwhistle or clap on (2) and (4)'s start Sorry, I like this way now and want to keep it
    01:04:973 (8) - Uh, I suppose the whistle should be here? No, i don't think so :P
    01:08:108 (6) - Change to repeating 1/3? Also add whistle on (7)'s start better imo No, and adding whistle on (7) sounds not good to me ><
    01:16:914 (x) - Add note with whistle? Oh, but I like what it is now better ><
    01:40:645 (9) - Curve this more symmetrical? Done :)
    02:08:406 (2,3,4,5) - Converting these into slider sounds better imo >< ... Why can't I find the difference between them..
    02:29:451 (2) - Lower the clap's volume? The previous clap sound is covered by the bass sound, but this one has no bass sound, so I think if this note is quieter it would be better Yes
    02:53:332 (1) - Not in the center. Is it intentional? Yes, I think it looks better
    03:21:541 (1) - Finish better here imo Oh, but I think finish on (2) is better
    04:00:496 (2,5) - Whistle on (2) and finish on (5)'s start perhaps? Only added finish on (5)
    04:16:615 (8,9) - Whistle? Add on (8) only because I think the whistle on (9) is too loud
    04:32:735 (4) - Imperfect stack, but it's barely noticeable Now it is fixed :D
Beautiful map~
This mod is mostly suggestion ^^

Good luck xD
Thank you for modding :) so helpful
YGOkid8
offset is early, but i can't check due to osu! crashing every time i try to change
pointed out two slowdowns which i thought hindered the map

i didn't completely mod this, but the map looks great :)
Topic Starter
Shiki
Thank you YGO~
Fixed the slowdown
:)
ertyukjh010
Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

Normal

很好,我也沒甚麼建議

Hard

這個難度的Distance有點小亂0.0 雖然我知道是故意的

00:55:157 (2) - 向下和向右移動一格 (Lv3)
00:55:604 (3) - 向下兩格 (Lv3);太概就是這樣:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/180255
00:57:694 (4,5) - 兩點的距離好怪異,重疊如何?
01:10:231 (4) - 放近一點?;我怕會被誤讀
01:27:395 (3,4) - 我比較喜歡對稱www http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/180258
01:46:201 (6,7) - 由於這難度的距離會不停變,我怕(7)會容易被按到100hit;我建議換成Slider
02:00:530 (7,8) - ^
02:46:948 (4) - 有點小遠0.0;後面的02:48:291也是
02:47:992 (3) - 向左移動一格 (Lv4) < 其實我不清楚您是用哪種網格0.0"
02:49:783 (4) - 不要黏住(3)
03:37:694 (1~7) - Distance要不要換成越來越遠的樣子www
04:33:813 (1) - 距離太遠0.0
閒話一下,這種風格應該屬於很難SS的。是說昨天有類似的風格的圖,我就為了SS花了半小時以上TT:按我

不錯的圖。
原諒我手上沒有很多KD,這圖的星星也很多,所以我就不Star了
Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
Shiki

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

Normal

很好,我也沒甚麼建議

Hard

這個難度的Distance有點小亂0.0 雖然我知道是故意的 嗯 0.0

00:55:157 (2) - 向下和向右移動一格 (Lv3)
00:55:604 (3) - 向下兩格 (Lv3);太概就是這樣:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/180255 上面两个done~
00:57:694 (4,5) - 兩點的距離好怪異,重疊如何?我想让别人看出这里的时间间隔只有2/3拍 因为距离一样容易被误读
01:10:231 (4) - 放近一點?;我怕會被誤讀
01:27:395 (3,4) - 我比較喜歡對稱www http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/180258 yes 不过是第一个
01:46:201 (6,7) - 由於這難度的距離會不停變,我怕(7)會容易被按到100hit;我建議換成Slider yes
02:00:530 (7,8) - ^ 这个我感觉slider没地方摆了 ><
02:46:948 (4) - 有點小遠0.0;後面的02:48:291也是 这个改了一下 后面那个没动..
02:47:992 (3) - 向左移動一格 (Lv4) < 其實我不清楚您是用哪種網格0.0" 嗯 我有时候用lv3 有时候就干脆关掉grid ww
02:49:783 (4) - 不要黏住(3) 嗯 拉开了些
03:37:694 (1~7) - Distance要不要換成越來越遠的樣子www 当然啦ww
04:33:813 (1) - 距離太遠0.0 嗯 拉近了 XD
閒話一下,這種風格應該屬於很難SS的。是說昨天有類似的風格的圖,我就為了SS花了半小時以上TT:按我 其实我从来就没想过要SS这图 我只求FC就够了ww

不錯的圖。
原諒我手上沒有很多KD,這圖的星星也很多,所以我就不Star了 :)
Good Luck :)
你的mod真的很有用耶
谢谢~~ :)
spboxer3
[genenal]
kiai需要一致 修改吧

[other]
沒什麼好mod的 你這首我很久以前就有關注了 沒什麼問題的~

有25顆星就不star了:( ~
good luck~
Topic Starter
Shiki

spboxer3 wrote:

[genenal]
kiai需要一致 修改吧 Done~

[other]
沒什麼好mod的 你這首我很久以前就有關注了 沒什麼問題的~ 那我就放心地去找MAT啦~

有25顆星就不star了:( ~
good luck~
Thank you~
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