animask wrote:

No Authentic Map?

Also, MMzz glitched some stars P=

I'll mod when everything is done.

[Hyguy's Normal]

01:32:137 (2) - Add a clap here? no
01:33:955 (4) - ^ ^

animask wrote:

[Hyguy's Normal]

01:32:137 (2) - Add a clap here?
01:33:955 (4) - ^

[Hard]

SB is yummy~

00:43:819 (7) - Kind of nazi-spacing. Should be closer to the end of 6. (but if I see it, I say it) - fixed

Why didn't the added/SB music play at the end of Normal? - fixed

[Backfire's Taiko]

I'm not so good at modding taiko...

Seems alright though =/

[Ozzy's Oni]

I saw that 1/8 and I was like ( O3O" )

The 1/8 notes work out fine.

[Insane]

Does the AR really need to be that high? .__. - yes, because SB would look weird with hardrock mode

I'd lower it by 1... no

00:22:237 (6) - New Combo -
01:02:932 (2) - Remove Finish (Finish spam is no good here. Replace with Whistle?) - no
01:26:909 (1) - Add claps on the slider ends? (Feels empty without hitsounds here...) fixed

Overall, I think this mapset is pretty good. Seeing 2 Taiko maps in 1 mapset is kind of rare for a non-taiko
song. I don't think anyone used those other BPMs except for the taiko difficulties. You should probably
just leave it there for consistency.

Starr'd


(bleh, haven't modded in a looong time.)

1. SB: Afaik, you're allowed one 800x600 element only if it's the same background image you're currently using. Black.png is not, and honestly there is no reason for it to be 800x600 either. Resize it to lower resolution. Spotlight is also 800x600, make it 640x480 at most. Just to be sure check with a MAT/BAT so it doesn't turn out you have to fix those because I am talking nonsense (I do sometimes ;x;).
2. SB: You might wanna clean up the values. 0.98XXXXXXX can stay 1 for sure without anyone noticing anything.

1. Don't think you really need tick rate 2. Sometimes that slider tick is in empty space as well. Maybe put it back to 1?
2. Set AR to 8. 9 doesn't fit at all. Also I recommend lowering OD by 1, because of the occasional uncommon note timing, but that's up to you.
3. 00:22:237 (1) - This note is close to impossible to hit correctly unless you know it's coming. You have to be really really good at sightreading to see it coming the first time. I suggest you make a slider in it's place and make some nice slider patterns of the notes that follow.
4. 00:24:839 (1) - This slider feels too close to the previous combo. Increase spacing if possible.
5. 00:43:666 (7) - This note doesn't follow anything in the music. I suppose you can leave it there to complete that stream, but something else could fit better. Up to you.
6. 01:02:818 (1,2,3) - This spacing always throws me off. Maybe I just suck but consider reducing the spacing cause it's kinda confusing.
   01:19:637 (2) - Finish at the start of the slider.
7. 01:26:909 (1) - Tbh, I don't think this belongs in an insane diff. Why not continue mapping like you did until now? Even in hard there is no such thing (it's much shorter and there is more stuff). Not really wrong I suppose so it's up to you.
8. 01:35:318 (1) - Remove new combo.

1. OD8 in a hard, really? Set it either to 6 or 7 (6 if you decide to put 7 in your insane), 8 is way too much for a hard.
2. 00:32:186 (5) - New combo, remove NC from 00:32:798 (1).
3. 00:34:635 (5) - New combo.
4. 00:51:796 (4,5) - Increase the spacing. You might have to redo that hexagon pattern so all notes are distance snapped more or less.

1. No complaints.

1. As I don't know much about taiko I won't be pointing fingers, but I am curious why does this diff have higher HP drain than an Oni diff which is supposed to be harder?

lolcubes wrote:

Hey Bass-chan! \o

[General]:

1. SB: Afaik, you're allowed one 800x600 element only if it's the same background image you're currently using. Black.png is not, and honestly there is no reason for it to be 800x600 either. Resize it to lower resolution. Spotlight is also 800x600, make it 640x480 at most. Just to be sure check with a MAT/BAT so it doesn't turn out you have to fix those because I am talking nonsense (I do sometimes ;x;).
2. SB: You might wanna clean up the values. 0.98XXXXXXX can stay 1 for sure without anyone noticing anything.

[Insane]:

1. Don't think you really need tick rate 2. Sometimes that slider tick is in empty space as well. Maybe put it back to 1? - fixed
2. Set AR to 8. 9 doesn't fit at all. Also I recommend lowering OD by 1, because of the occasional uncommon note timing, but that's up to you. - fixed
3. 00:22:237 (1) - This note is close to impossible to hit correctly unless you know it's coming. You have to be really really good at sightreading to see it coming the first time. I suggest you make a slider in it's place and make some nice slider patterns of the notes that follow. - fixed
4. 00:24:839 (1) - This slider feels too close to the previous combo. Increase spacing if possible. fixed
5. 00:43:666 (7) - This note doesn't follow anything in the music. I suppose you can leave it there to complete that stream, but something else could fit better. Up to you. - note left
6. 01:02:818 (1,2,3) - This spacing always throws me off. Maybe I just suck but consider reducing the spacing cause it's kinda confusing. - fixed
   01:19:637 (2) - Finish at the start of the slider. added
7. 01:26:909 (1) - Tbh, I don't think this belongs in an insane diff. Why not continue mapping like you did until now? Even in hard there is no such thing (it's much shorter and there is more stuff). Not really wrong I suppose so it's up to you. - slider left
8. 01:35:318 (1) - Remove new combo.

- fixed

[Hard]:

1. OD8 in a hard, really? Set it either to 6 or 7 (6 if you decide to put 7 in your insane), 8 is way too much for a hard. - fixed
2. 00:32:186 (5) - New combo, remove NC from 00:32:798 (1). - fixed
3. 00:34:635 (5) - New combo. fixed
4. 00:51:796 (4,5) - Increase the spacing. You might have to redo that hexagon pattern so all notes are distance snapped more or less.

fixed

[Hyguys' Normal]:

1. No complaints.

capitao so lucky

[Backfire's Taiko]:

1. As I don't know much about taiko I won't be pointing fingers, but I am curious why does this diff have higher HP drain than an Oni diff which is supposed to be harder?

fixed

SapphireGhost wrote:

Modding this because I FEEL LIKE IT. Also I'm tired so forgive me.

[General]
Breaks: Drag break to 00:44:431 where applicable. - done
Use Tick Rate 2! - done

Kiai: Kiai should be the same on [Hard] and [Insane]. - done
Storyboarding: SB Load should really not be at 2 when the screen is completely dark. There's a guide or something to help you avoid that, mmkay. - SB Load isn't turning red... so I guess my current SB is okay.


[Hyguys Stuff]
00:29:737 (1,2) - Poorly made blanket. It's also waaay too close to overlapping. - done
00:50:773 (1,2) - Overlap looks really bad here. - done
00:53:614 (2,1) - ^ - done
01:01:455 (1) - Short sliders with multiple repeats can be confusing for newer players. - done
01:25:546 (4) - ^ - done
01:32:137 (2) - Ya don't put notes under sliders if you're not going to do it for the rest of the difficulty. - done

[Hard]
01:02:818 (1) - Why? - done

[Insane]
00:44:431 - Drag break to here, please. - done
01:35:318 (2,3,4,5) - I guess this is okay? - it's okay since notes are mapped to drums there

[Ozzy's Oni]
That was a rather cute and fairly simple Oni that I could actually pass! Honestly I don't know if you HAVE to have those 1/8 parts but other than that, I enjoyed it a lot.

Everybody's starry eyed.

368,56,20860,2,0,B|320:32|252:56|248:132,1,142.5,0|2

256,80,81455,6,0,B|280:128|256:176|256:176|232:224|256:272,4,198.000004720688,0|2|0|2|12

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
fine

[Hyguys' Normal]
00:44:431 - break start here ? yes
00:56:228 (1,2) - why jump here ? it's fince since it goes with spacing
01:17:364 - break start here ? yes

[Hard]
00:07:084 (5) - x:256 y:192 ? yes
00:20:860 (2) -

368,56,20860,2,0,B|320:32|252:56|248:132,1,142.5,0|2

ok
01:02:137 (4,5) - x:112 y:256 ? yes
01:17:818 - break start here ? yes
01:24:182 (2) - ctrl + r ? no

[Insane]
00:35:094 - add circle or 00:35:247 (2) - start at here ok
01:17:818 - break start here ? yes
01:21:455 (1) -

256,80,81455,6,0,B|280:128|256:176|256:176|232:224|256:272,4,198.000004720688,0|2|0|2|12

yes
01:35:318 (2,3,4,5) - 3 circles here plz ! ok

nice map

1. The colors of the 2nd and the 3rd combo blend in the background too much. Consider changing them for a more visible green or another colors.
2. Is the mp3 a VBR one ? If not, you have to reencode it to 192kbps
3. Adjust the audio lead-in of the taiko difficulties to 1000ms
4. Put "rhythm heaven" in the tags and not only "heaven" even if "rhythm" is already the tags. The search system in-game is different than on the website. If someone search "Rythm Heaven" in-game, the game will not detect your map.

1. Difficulty settings : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. HP drain 4, in my opinion it's too much for this difficulty, consider lowering it to 3 ?

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 00:57:250 (2) - You shouldn't make a jump here, not in a normal difficulty, it's too much confusing
   2. 01:12:364 (1) - The reverse is too late, it should be at 01:12:818 because of the crash sound. I recommand you to do something like that if you want you pattern to follow correctly the music :
      
      ( Move this inherited timing section (01:13:614) to 01:12:705 as in the screenshot to make the reverse and the end of the slider sounding like the circle.)
   3. 01:17:364 - I'm not a fan of short break (this one is very short, ~350ms long). Nevertheless, it makes a nice effect here with the warning-arrows. I guess it's fine then :3

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 01:23:273 (1,2) - The shape of (1) hides the beginning of (2). Even if it's easily readable for the most of players, I recommand you using this kind of pattern only in insane diffs. If you're willing to change it and if you want to keep these slider, this pattern is nice too :
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. 01:35:773 (5) - Stack this circle with (2) because 2/1 stacked circle are boring, besides it would make a nice pattern :>

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 00:23:768 (9) - The music suggest a new combo here.
   2. 00:29:737 (1) - As you've made a good job with sliders, I'm kinda sad that this one is not very well-made >w<! It would look nicer like that in my opinion :
      
      SPOILER

      
   3. 00:34:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern shouldn't be only mapped on the background music but on the main part of the song too, I mean the "TU DU DU DU DUM!". You should have something like :
      
   4. 00:43:360 (5) - New combo ?
   5. 01:17:364 (4) - Not a good idea too stack this circle with the slider's end, it's senseless in my opinion. Consider unstacking it ? :3
   6. 01:26:909 (1) - Nice slider :3

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   • 01:06:455 (28) - Katsu ?
   1. Why does the background is not correctly under the playing area as the Oni diff ? Try to fix that please.
      
      SPOILER

      

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 01:25:546 (2,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2) - This sounds kinda odd :/ dkdddkkd would be much better in my opinion
   2. 01:31:796 - Add a d ? (If you add it, don't forget to remove the finish on 01:31:909 (1).)
2. I'm not sure about the 1/8 patterns :/

1. Combo Colours: The dark green blends too much with the BG, sometimes making some stacks really hard to see. Try another green e.g: http://puu.sh/6tiA
2. Breaks: 01:17:423 - This break is way too short, it's not even 2s long. Oh, it's not properly snapped. Anyhow, you should remove this break.
3. Timing Points: Timing points are not consistent through the mapset.

1. Kiai-end is not snapped properly

1. 01:19:636 - Why did you start Kiai 1/8 earlier? The main beat starts here: 01:19:693. Place Kiai properly, please.

Download: Tsunku - Green Construction (Bass-chan) [Ozzy's Oni].osu

xierbaliti wrote:

sorry I'm too late, Bass ~_~
and some suggestions here:

-Storyboard-
01:19:315 - not sure about the SB load :O http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162897
01:35:906~01:36:076 - ^ - checked via test mode and editor, it isn't above 5 so it's fine, lolcubes got similar results

-Hard-
00:44:354 - strongly suggest you to add a circle here ._. no, it fits for me
01:04:826 (7) - how about start this spinner at 01:05:167 and add 3 circles at 01:04:826,01:04:940,01:05:054? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162904 - no

nice map! I like it :3 thanks
have a star