Kytoxid wrote:
[General]
Looking at the video, you should probably have "Leaf ticket (Short Ver.)" as the title. There's also 7 seconds of silence at the end that you could probably cut. ..I guess that's not really need to cut it,in fact,the gameplay will show the result after the end of the video.Also,the MP3 and Video were taken from youtube : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pb6Q1pzb2Pw
[Easy]
01:32:155 - Feels a bit empty, add a note here? //k,Done
[Hard]
00:30:630 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is pretty confusing on the first play since it's under the sliders, though it gets better after. //Did something here.
00:37:749 (3,4,5) - Stagger this like you do for the next 2 notes? //no because here didn't have any vocal/drum to support 1/2,however here had a 3/4 drum sound,so I decided to keep it.
01:02:664 - This lack of a note feels a bit empty too. Did something here.
01:10:672 (2,3,1,2,3) - I don't really like this spacing because it's all equal but the timing's different. //That's why I put a new combo on (1)- and I'm pretty sure this layout have been used many time in other map.Oh,and it plays really fun during gameplay.
01:59:105 (6) - Symmetry is a bit off. //make it more beautiful.
Doop.
you should probably have "Leaf ticket (Short Ver.)" as the titleWhat do you mean?I have already put the (Short Ver.) in title.
Anyway~Thanks!