Yo.
[General]
Your video is a .flv. An AVI is highly recommended due to performance issues with FLV files on lower-end machines.
Only two diffs is a bit ehh. You could always make a Hard and say the Collab is a mild Insane. It would make the map's spread a lot nicer, since the Normal is easier than average and the Hard/Collab is harder than average.
03:27:923 (1) - You could ease the volume down with a few more green lines, otherwise the spinner spinning sound and bonus sound is loud enough that it overtakes the music.
[Normal]
02:33:923 (1) - Silence this slidertick?
03:18:173 (1) - Could make this section like this: http://puu.sh/4M1j. No real beat here, so it's not any harder to catch a red tick note.
It's okay. Seemed a bit boring at some points, so you could consider using a few more interesting patterns. Then again, it's an easy Normal.
[Collab]
00:18:236 (1) - These two mini-spinners are pretty hard to nail; I'd recommend dropping OD to 5 just for these spinners, if you intend for this to be a Hard. Or you could replace these with sliders, I guess.
00:28:643 (5) - Untuck this slider from under 4, makes it a bit easier to read and looks better.
02:41:423 (1,1,1) - You don't really need 3 new combos here, I think it looks better with just 1.
03:16:860 (1,2,3,4) - This sudden reduction in spacing is pretty surprising, coming right after the spinner.
This map is pretty good overall, I think the two points in General are the most important to look at and consider.
[General]
Your video is a .flv. An AVI is highly recommended due to performance issues with FLV files on lower-end machines.
Only two diffs is a bit ehh. You could always make a Hard and say the Collab is a mild Insane. It would make the map's spread a lot nicer, since the Normal is easier than average and the Hard/Collab is harder than average.
03:27:923 (1) - You could ease the volume down with a few more green lines, otherwise the spinner spinning sound and bonus sound is loud enough that it overtakes the music.
[Normal]
02:33:923 (1) - Silence this slidertick?
03:18:173 (1) - Could make this section like this: http://puu.sh/4M1j. No real beat here, so it's not any harder to catch a red tick note.
It's okay. Seemed a bit boring at some points, so you could consider using a few more interesting patterns. Then again, it's an easy Normal.
[Collab]
00:18:236 (1) - These two mini-spinners are pretty hard to nail; I'd recommend dropping OD to 5 just for these spinners, if you intend for this to be a Hard. Or you could replace these with sliders, I guess.
00:28:643 (5) - Untuck this slider from under 4, makes it a bit easier to read and looks better.
02:41:423 (1,1,1) - You don't really need 3 new combos here, I think it looks better with just 1.
03:16:860 (1,2,3,4) - This sudden reduction in spacing is pretty surprising, coming right after the spinner.
This map is pretty good overall, I think the two points in General are the most important to look at and consider.
