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IOSYS - One-sided Love

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L i a
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L i a
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 1월 22일 일요일 at 오후 8:34:30

Artist: IOSYS
Title: One-sided Love
Source: Touhou
Tags: Nakagawa-Kanon Soror dksslqj
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5838kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. dksslqj's Insane (4.99 stars, 440 notes)
  2. Hard (4.98 stars, 510 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 638 notes)
  4. Soror's Normal (2.81 stars, 188 notes)
Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks for song providing M a D o K a ~
Thanks diff dksslqj (Nakagawa-Kanon) , Soror
Last edited by L i a , edited 90 times in total.
Mapper 31
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iketa
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iketa
star!
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VTC
768 posts
Joined October 2010
VTC
!
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I really believe this map to be ranked

계속 짧다고 더쓰라카네 이런..ㅋㅋ
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
exciting 8-)

망할 글자수 제한
어디까지 써야 하는가
L i a
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L i a
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Vendemmia
Former osu! Champion: 2013
126 posts
Joined July 2009
Vendemmia
동해물과 백두산이 마르고 닳도록
하느님이 보우하사 우리나라만세
무궁화 삼천리 화려강산
대한사람 대한으로 길이 보전하세
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,192 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
스타스타스타스타스타 그리고 나의 맵~ 좋은 성과가 되기를 바라며~ It's Normal~... :) :)

Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love (L i a) [Begin's Normal].osu
What
231 posts
Joined December 2010
What
가나다라마바사아자타카타파하
갸냐댜랴먀뱌샤야쟈챠캬탸퍄햐
거너더러머버서어저처커터퍼허
겨녀뎌려며벼셔여져쳐켜텨펴혀
고노도로모보소오조초코토포호
교뇨됴료묘뵤쇼요죠쵸쿄툐표효
구누두루무부수우주추쿠투푸후
규뉴듀류뮤뷰슈유쥬츄큐튜퓨휴
그느드르므브스으즈츠크트프흐
기니디리미비시이지치키티피히
긔늬듸릐믜븨싀의즤츼킈틔픠희
귀뉘뒤뤼뮈뷔쉬위쥐취퀴튀퓌휘
괴뇌되뢰뫼뵈쇠외죄최쾨퇴푀회
개내대래매배새애재채캐태패해
게네데레메베세에제체케테페헤
괘놰돼뢔뫠봬쇄왜좨쵀쾌퇘퐤홰
궤눼뒈뤠뭬붸쉐웨줴췌퀘퉤풰훼

창의력고갈

star~:D
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,192 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
This is 수정본 ㅇㅅㅇ.... And Insane... Good map~ Reply2

Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love (L i a) [Begin's Normal].osu
ArtRaid
13 posts
Joined April 2011
ArtRaid
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Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
뭘봐 씨발
너 지금 내가 변태력으로 이루어져 있다고 무시하냐?

Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love (L i a) [dksslqj's song].osu
VTC
768 posts
Joined October 2010
VTC
^^.. 하드 다시 고쳐봤어요..ㅋ


봐주시고 PM 이나 채팅창 호출 부탁드립니다 ^^..



http://blog.naver.com/fiuy5668/120135638133
friendok
127 posts
Joined September 2010
friendok
good map good jumps :3 star

it deserves to be ranked eventually..
Sakura Izayoi_old
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Joined May 2011
Sakura Izayoi_old
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AkitaNeru
47 posts
Joined December 2010
AkitaNeru
....알아서수정해요

Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love (L i a) [Neru's Normal].osu
L i a
Topic Starter
L i a
8초라니요 아니 그게 무슨소리요!
글자채우기 글자 채우기 글자 채우기 글자 채우기
Aru10sh1
11 posts
Joined May 2011
Aru10sh1
쵸코보쵸코보쵸코보쵸코보쵸코보
쵸코보쵸코보쵸코보
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
irc modded irc modded irc modded irc modded irc modded irc modded irc modded irc modded
C R E A M
680 posts
Joined February 2011
C R E A M
[General]
곡 정말 좋네요. 이오시스에서 이런곡도 만드는군요. diff spread 관련 문제는 irc로 했으니까 더 언급하지 않겠습니다. 안니버 맵을 쉽게 리맵하든 하드 겟난을 하나 받던 알아서 해결하면 될 것 같네요. 안니버 난이도 리맵쪽으로 가닥이 잡힐 가능성이 높으니 모딩은 훗카 난이도만 하겠습니다.

[Lunatic]
전체적으로 스페이싱도 넓고 난이도도 좀 있네요. 개인박자의 사용도 꽤나 보이는데 어색하지는 않으니 문제 없을것 같습니다. 이등변삼각형 점프는 훗카님의 새로운 매핑스타일인가 봅니다? 비야 레볼루션 겟난에서도 봤던것 같네요. 일단은 Tick rate 부터 고쳐야 겠네요. 페피가 싫다는 이유로 틱레이트 0.5는 사용불가 입니다. 1로 올리세요. 바이올린 맞춰서 휘슬 넣으셨네요. 이건 상당히 제 개인적인 취향이지만 휘슬 소리 조금 줄이는게 좋지 않나 싶네요. 바이올린 나오는데 휘슬이 덮으면서 나오니가 살짝 거슬리네요.
00:20:814 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 이왕 삼각형 패턴 애용하시는 김에 여기도 그냥 삼각형 배치하는게 좋지 않을까요?
00:44:481 (1,2) - 1번 슬라이더 끝에 대응되는 소리가 전혀 없네요. 2번 노트 친 이후의 박자를 강조하려고 나눈것 같은데 차라리 00:44:314 ~ 00:44:480 을 슬라이더로 이어버리고, 2번노트에 뉴콤보를 넣는것이 좋아보이네요.
00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - 거리 장난 아니네요. 이 부분 읽기 약간 힘들수도 있어 보여요. 갑자기 나오는 삼각형이 점프가 너무 커서. 이 부분 삼각형 크기를 좀 줄이고 00:51:481 (1,2,3,4) - 이부분은 그대로 가는게 어떤가요.
01:08:147 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 이 패턴은 영 추천하고 싶지 않네요. 연타치다가 1/2 쉬고 같은자리에서 다시 슬라이더를 치는건 플레이어를 화나게 하기 쉬우니까요. 슬라이더를 차라리 멀리 배치해 버리는게 좋을 것 같습니다.
01:23:814 (1,2,3,1) - 여태까지 훗카님 배치를 봐서도 그렇고 곡 분위기를 봐서도 그렇고 차차 스페이싱을 늘리는게 좋아 보입니다. 1과2 의 거리보다 3을 멀게. 그리고 2와3의 거리보다 뉴콤보1과 3의 거리가 멀도록요.
02:32:814 (1,2,3) - 2를 지우는 편이 좋다고 생각합니다.
02:33:980 (1,1) - 이부분 슬라이더 속도를 갑자기 느리게 하기 보다는 그냥 살짝만 줄이고 마구꺽인 슬라이더를 사용하는게 더 좋아 보입니다. 02:29:980 (4) - 이런슬라이더 처럼요.
03:02:314 (2) - 뉴콤보 넣어주세요.
03:13:480 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - 위에 언급한것과 마찬가지 이유로 비추천입니다.
Musty
2,252 posts
Joined February 2010
Musty
korean star machine :D

uh, My message is too short apparently ;x;
Soror
79 posts
Joined July 2011
Soror
이지입니다. 최선을 다했지만…….

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Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love (L i a) [Soror's Easy].osu
What
231 posts
Joined December 2010
What
왓 주제에 모딩 해봅니다 ㅠㅠ 전체적으로 나쁜느낌은 없지만 제 생각정도... 반영은 안하셔도 별문제없는 허접모딩입니당. 별문제점은 못찾겟네요 ㅠㅠ

[soror's normal]
01:18:814 슬라를 이렇게 바꿔보는건 어떨까요 물론 저상태가 나쁘다는건 아니고 제견해일뿐입니당..
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/5M6S -> http://puu.sh/5M6W


[normal]
문제점은 보이지않아요

[dksslqj's song]
와 역시 안니버네 할만큼 난이도있고 좋앗음

[lunatic]
와 점프도 파워잇고 연타도 파워잇어서 좋앗어요
Soror
79 posts
Joined July 2011
Soror

What wrote:

[soror's normal]
01:18:814 슬라를 이렇게 바꿔보는건 어떨까요 물론 저상태가 나쁘다는건 아니고 제견해일뿐입니당..
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/5M6S -> http://puu.sh/5M6W
안되옵니다.
Kanon
215 posts
Joined May 2009
Kanon
Hi~ Sry for the late. I am very tired these days.
General
dksslqj's diff has two red lines while other diff has one._.
PreviewTime is not the same in every diff.
Please make combo colour deeper , compare to the bg.
Normal and dksslqj's diff has tick rate 0.5, which is unrankable now, change them to 1 plz.

Soror's Normal
Why there are two normal? maybe change this to easy?
after modding the diff, i think it can't be a easy diff. Well then to make the diff spread good, maybe change another normal diff' name to normal+?
00:17:814 (4) - NC
00:42:480 (5) - NC
00:54:147 (4,1,1) - maybe combine all of them to a spin? to make this diff more easy and i think this plays better.
01:19:147 (1) - no kicker slider in easiest diff. use a note instead plz because arrow appear later than hit. confusing for new player

Normal
consider what i said in Soror's Normal
you green line for kiai seems unsnapped, fix them
00:44:758 useless green line
01:51:397 ^
02:33:897 ^ lots here
why not mapping to the end? Soror's Normal mapped to the end too,
nothing to say on placement and hitsound. good diff.

dksslqj's song
00:11:548 useless green line
01:58:796 (4) - unsnapped note
very nice one

Lunatic
unsnapped kiai green line..
01:27:147 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - imo you should increase spacing here.
good diff too.can't find any other problem.

So tired..so most of my mod are nazi. XD
Soror
79 posts
Joined July 2011
Soror

Kanon wrote:

Hi~ Sry for the late. I am very tired these days.
Soror's Normal
00:17:814 (4) - NC fixed
00:42:480 (5) - NC fixed
00:54:147 (4,1,1) - maybe combine all of them to a spin? to make this diff more easy and i think this plays better. fixed
01:19:147 (1) - no kicker slider in easiest diff. use a note instead plz because arrow appear later than hit. confusing for new player fixed
Thank you!

Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love (L i a) [Soror's Normal].osu
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
셤끝나면 하드 만들어 줄수도 있음

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
artpiggo
315 posts
Joined December 2009
artpiggo
Lunatic
00:20:814 (1,2,3) - too high jump IMO maybe in this pattern ?

01:45:980 (6) - make it be same position as 01:46:147 (1)
02:34:980 (2,3,4,5) - think about anti-jump so make it be around 0.11x distance for player to see that there is a little movement.
03:24:147 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - group them and drag these stacks to (256,272)
03:24:814 (1) - finish sound.

dksslqj
circle size +1 ?
00:55:298 (2) - whistle ?
01:12:798 (1,2) - make them closer a little bit?
01:18:131 (1,2) - ^
02:19:464 (1,2) - ^
02:24:797 (1,2) - ^
03:11:798 (2) - move left a little bit ?
03:33:850 (6) - whistle? and 03:34:183 (7) - remove ? I think this song calls for end at (6)
(optional) make 4,5,6 have a little distance snap sloppingly.

normal+
emm remove green line at break pls.

normal
pls end the second kiai time at last note.


:) That's all. 7.5/10
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
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Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love (L i a) [dksslqj's song].osu
RobotoRaccoon
224 posts
Joined December 2010
RobotoRaccoon
Mod :o

Dks' Song
• The offset is different on to the others!
• The preview point is different, too!

Normal+
00:41:980 (2) - Stack that directly under the slider's end so the top left says Prev: 0.00x
01:41:980 (2) - ^
01:44:647 (2) - ^
01:47:314 (3) - ^ (lol)
01:49:980 (2) - ^
02:06:814 (3) - ^

Yeah that's all from me, Didn't look at other 2 due to length
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
[Lunatic]
00:29:980 (1) - Remove new combo
01:39:564 (X) Lower to 50% Is much better coz the finish is too noice ~~
02:49:314 (X) ^
03:24:814 (1) - Change to finish

[dksslqj's song]
01:45:814 (7) - New comb and remove 01:45:980 (1)
02:52:814 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 02:53:314 (2)

[All]
Nice :3
STAR
imRitaka
118 posts
Joined June 2011
imRitaka
By request.

[Soror's Normal]
00:23:480 > Remove new combo?
00:51:479 > Move to the left 2 points and move down 1 point.
01:53:979 > Remove new combo.
01:55:479 > If you removed new combo from ^, then remove new combo here.
01:56:313 > If you did ^, then add a new combo here.
02:09:813 > Add new combo.
02:11:313 > If you did ^, then remove new combo from here.
02:19:646 > Moving (3) 1/2 beat later sounds better to me.

[Hard]
00:38:313 > Remove new combo.
00:56:813 > Move (3) back 1/2 beat. Also, it would sound better if it ended 1/2 beat earlier or later.
01:10:146 > Remove new combo.
01:44:979 > ^

[dksslqj's Song]
02:24:697 > Ctrl+J?

[Lunatic]
If this were any other difficulty, I would say something about the spacing. But since it's Lunatic, I really can't. ;)
01:40:479 > New combo.
01:40:813 > If you did ^, then remove this new combo.
01:42:479 > If you did ^, then new combo.

Overall, it's a hard map, but a good one. :)
Soror
79 posts
Joined July 2011
Soror

Ritaka wrote:

By request.

[Soror's Normal]
00:23:480 > Remove new combo? The atmosphere of the song changes here, so I want here to be unchanged.
00:51:479 > Move to the left 2 points and move down 1 point. It's symmetric to 1. And with that adjustment, the distance here will be broken.

01:53:979 > Remove new combo.
01:55:479 > If you removed new combo from ^, then remove new combo here.
01:56:313 > If you did ^, then add a new combo here. Modified new combos around here

02:09:813 > Add new combo. Fixed
02:11:313 > If you did ^, then remove new combo from here. Fixed
02:19:646 > Moving (3) 1/2 beat later sounds better to me. Well, I'll keep this for now.
Thank you.
Himekaido Hatate
156 posts
Joined February 2009
Himekaido Hatate
모딩왔어요'ㅈ'/

노래좋당'ㅈ')b

Soror's Normal-

별다른문제가 보이지않습니다 :D

Hard-

00:14:813 (3) - 뉴콤보
00:15:146 (1) - 뉴콤보
00:17:480 (1) - 뉴콤보
00:18:146 (2) - 뉴콤보
00:24:646 (2,3) -

박자를 이정도로만 줄이면 더 알맞을것같아요(추천)
00:29:979 (2,3) - ^
00:32:979 (2) - 이걸 노트로바꿔서 일정한 박자로 맞추는게 좋을것같습니다
00:58:146 (1) -
http://puu.sh/6G3s
이런모양으로 바꾸는것도 추천
01:09:146 (1,2) - 한칸 더 올려주세요
01:13:480 (2) - 뉴콤보
01:13:813 (1) - 뉴콤보
01:14:146 (2) - 슬라이더 끝을 2칸위로 올려주세요
01:30:146 (1) ~ 01:39:313 (4) - 패턴을 좀 붙이는것도 좋을것같아요(필수는 아니므로 넘어가도됩니다)
02:12:479 (5) - 뉴콤보
02:12:813 (1) - 뉴콤보
*슬라이더 전에 나오는 노트는 슬라이더와 색깔을 맞춰주세요! 그게 더 이쁩니다< (이후에 나오는 노트,슬라의 뉴콤보는 적지않겠습니다:D)

02:43:146 (2,3) - 왼쪽으로 한칸
03:06:980 (2) - 한칸내려주세요

dksslqj's Song-

니버님껄 모딩이라니! 라고하기전에 패턴에는 문제없네요.. 그저 하드에서 말했던것처럼 슬라이더와 노트가 같은위치에 겹칠경우 같은 노트색깔을 사용하는게 더 깔끔하게 보인다고 생각합니다<

Lunatic-

00:12:480 (1,2,3,4,5) - 연타를 한곳에다 두는것보단 좀 흐르듯이(?)두는게 좋을것같아요
00:23:813 (3) - 밑으로 2칸 왼쪽으로 3칸
00:27:646 (1) - 뉴콤보
00:28:646 (1) - 뉴콤보
00:53:480 (3,4) - 1칸아래로!
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
Pereira006
hello~~

IMO -> My opinions

Some Suggestions
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Soror's Normal

00:12:479 (1) - whistle? no remove this add finish is most better
01:00:813 (3) - put new combo
01:30:146 at 01:39:813 sorry lack hitsound no pleasse use more hitsound
02:15:146 (1,2) - this overlaps pleasse remove overlaps

you combo and play are fine but you hitsound you lost so many clap,whistle and finish i suggest you add more
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[hard]

this is feel like hard

00:17:146 (5) - remove this new combo and 00:17:480 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/6H8n this is most better combo
00:40:646 (3,4,1) - again try this http://puu.sh/6H8D
00:59:313 (2,3) - this part is not fit try this http://puu.sh/6H99 this is fit more with lyrics you can remap you owm or use my IMO

sorry i not like this hard because speed 1,00 is not fit hard and you note and slider is not fit much lot lyrics and hitsound are random sorry
you should remap this lot
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dksslqj's Song

make tick same other pleasse

00:24:313 (1) - remove this new combo and at 00:24:479 (2) - put new combo and 00:25:646 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:313 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - super weird combo try this http://puu.sh/6HaC this is better combo if you fix have more
00:29:646 (1,2,1,2,3) - this http://puu.sh/6Hb9 to better conscienty combo
00:33:979 (5) - remove new combo and put new combo at 00:34:146 (1)
01:30:979 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - same happened like 00:24:313 this http://puu.sh/6HbA if you fix this here more
01:33:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/6HbP
01:40:646 (5,1) - same above 00:33:979

i like you diff but you combo are very very weird sorry and i guess this is lost copy+past but this is fine
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[b]Lunatic[/b]

fine
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that all i think i like this song and play is good but i so lot confused abut you combo sorry
good luck sorry my poor eng
Soror
79 posts
Joined July 2011
Soror

Pereira006 wrote:

Some Suggestions
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Soror's Normal

00:12:479 (1) - whistle? no remove this add finish is most better Fixed
01:00:813 (3) - put new combo Fixed
01:30:146 at 01:39:813 sorry lack hitsound no pleasse use more hitsound Fixed
02:15:146 (1,2) - this overlaps pleasse remove overlaps Fixed

you combo and play are fine but you hitsound you lost so many clap,whistle and finish i suggest you add more
I intended to use them minimal and consistent, anyway thank you.
And thank you for the modding.

Download: IOSYS - One-sided Love (L i a) [Soror's Normal].osu
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze

Timing

  1. Offset should be 813 so that long white tick is right on downbeat, move to 813 and no need to resnap all notes

Soror's Normal

  1. I feel this diff. lack of hitsound, try add some more hitsounds?
  2. 00:58:146 (1) - Use finish instead of clap?
  3. 01:46:146 (2) - Slider ends here seems better
  4. 02:26:146 - How about drag break to here
  5. 03:03:479 (1) - Use finish instead of clap seems better

Hard

  1. 01:51:048, 01:51:381 - Useless timing section

dksslqj's Song

  1. 03:24:850 - No need to set another red line here, use 0.5xBPM at 03:24:813, then resnap all notes
  2. I can't there are anything wrong with this diff., just, some spacing looked a bit far, like 00:28:146 (1),01:00:813 (1), 01:13:146 (2), 01:18:480 (2) etc.
  3. 00:58:146, 02:04:812, 03:03:479 - KIAI starts here (make timing section right on ticks)
  4. 01:19:479, 02:26:146, 03:24:812 - KIAI ends here

Lunatic

  1. 01:50:646 (3) - Spacing kinda far
  2. 02:39:479 (1) - It seems no need to new combo here
  3. 03:01:812 spinner - Add whistle?
  4. 03:14:146 - KIAI starts here
  5. 03:24:813 (1) - Remove new combo?

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Asgard
639 posts
Joined June 2011
Asgard
우선 안니버/루나틱
둘다

아래와같이 에러
에러는 뱃들이 절대적으로 있으면 안다나 뭐라나..;;;


나머지는 도저히
이상해보이거나 박자가 이상한건 내눈엔 안보임.ㅠ
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,848 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
[General]
키아이타임 통일하세요.
SV 3개 초과로 쓰는건 일단은 언랭인데, 이건 어케될지 모르니 두고봅시다.


[Soror's Normal]
콤보 모딩
00:17:812 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:18:146 (2) - 뉴콤보
00:23:479 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:49:812 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:50:812 (2) - 뉴콤보
00:52:646 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
01:06:146 (5) - 뉴콤보
01:08:479 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
01:08:812 (2) - 뉴콤보
01:19:146 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
01:33:146 (5) - 뉴콤보
01:38:479 (5) - 뉴콤보
01:40:146 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
01:43:813 (4) - 뉴콤보
01:45:146 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
01:46:479 (3) - 뉴콤보
01:53:979 (5) - 뉴콤보
01:55:479 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
01:57:479 (3) - 뉴콤보
02:15:146 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
02:15:813 (2) - 뉴콤보
02:49:479 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
03:01:812 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거

00:51:479 (2) - 1/3 슬라이더로 변경
SPOILER
01:04:479 (2,3,4) - 이렇게 하면 음악에 더 맞는거같은데 어떠신가요
SPOILER
01:06:146 (6) - ^
SPOILER
이후 패턴은 상하반전시키면 대충 스페이싱이 맞더군요.
02:24:313 (2) - 노트로 변경하여 02:24:479에 배치
02:24:812 ~ 02:26:146 - 스피너 추가

박자가 굉장히 가능성이 보이시네요, 앞으로 계속 매핑하셨으면 좋겠습니다 :)


[Hard]
00:15:146 (1) - 이어지는 두 슬라이더 사이에 정확히 들어가도록 배치를 살짝 수정하면 보기 좋을듯
SPOILER
00:32:646 (1) - 볼륨도 죽일거면 그냥 안넣는게 낫지안나 시프요
00:39:312 (X) - 노트 추가
00:40:146 (3,1) - 이것도 앞 슬라이더가 뒤 슬라이더의 중앙에 오게 조금만 수정
SPOILER
00:44:813 (1,2,3,4) - 시간적 간격은 이 패턴이나 "00:46:146 (1,2,3,4) " 패턴이 더 넓은데 스페이싱은 "00:48:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6)" 패턴이 더 넓은게 좀 이상하네
01:25:812 (1,2) - 이렇게 수정하면 음악에 더 잘 맞는듯
SPOILER
01:39:312 (1) - 얘도 없는게 나을듯 시프요
01:45:812 (6) - 슬라이더로 변경
SPOILER
02:03:979 (6) - 한 칸 위로
02:04:812 (1,2) - 위 모딩을 따른다면 적절히 조절
SPOILER
02:07:646 (2) - x:155 y:258로 이동
02:09:146 (7,8,9) - 묶은채로 x:276 y:206으로 이동
02:09:812 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거, 혹은 "02:09:812 (1,2)" 를 "02:09:646 (9)" 말고 "02:10:146 (3)" 쪽에 더 가깝게 배치
02:10:812 (5,6) - 좀 더 대칭이 되도록 수정
SPOILER
02:24:812 (4) - 뉴콤보
02:24:812 (4,5,6,7) - 그리드 풀고 모양새좀 맞춰야 되지 않을까 시프요


[dksslqj's Song]
너 누가 po복붙wer하래.

00:23:146 (1) ~ 00:33:979 (5) - 앞에는 어쿠스틱을 따라가다가 뒤에는 보컬을 따라가는데 (00:29:979 (2) 얘부터), 둘중 하나로 통일하는게 낫지 않을까 싶은데. 2절에 반복되는 부분도 마찬가지
나머지는 ok, 힛사 좋다


[Lunatic]
00:40:645 (6,7) - 긴 슬라이더 하나로 통일하는게 나을듯 시프요

라기보단 난이도 전체가 무리수가 아닌가 싶은데, AR9도 그렇고 패턴도 그렇고...차라리 이 난이도를 지우고 안니버 난이도를 최상위 난이도로 한담에 이지를 넣는게 맵셋 전체를 봤을땐 훨씬 나을거같다는 생각이 들어



스타!
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
[dksslqj's Song]
너 누가 po복붙wer하래.

00:23:146 (1) ~ 00:33:979 (5) - 앞에는 어쿠스틱을 따라가다가 뒤에는 보컬을 따라가는데 (00:29:979 (2) 얘부터), 둘중 하나로 통일하는게 낫지 않을까 싶은데. 2절에 반복되는 부분도 마찬가지
나머지는 ok, 힛사 좋다




어쿠스틱 따라가다가 보컬따라가는거 처럼 보여도
어쿠스틱 박자에 보컬박자 합친거니까
박자가 추가된다는 느낌입니다
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
난이도 분포 그리 좋지 않습니다.
일단 점수에 맞는 위치 잡기 위해서 OD 값 조정하세요. 밑에 적어놨습니다.
보통 하드난이도가 I로 표시되긴 하는데, 안니버님 난이도랑 하드 난이도가 하드치곤 그렇게 호락호락한 수준은 아니네요.
뭐... 별 문제 없으려나~
그리고 슬라이더 스피드 3개 이상 언랭? 이거는 변속을 병맛같이 쓰지 않는 이상은 하드/인세인에선 상관 없어요.


[Lunatic]
OD 8? 이 정도 BPM에 인세인이면 OD8 해도 괜찮을 것 같은데요. 이건 별 문제 아니고 다른 난이도가 문제임.
00:58:146 (1) - 슬라이더 시작에 피니시
01:08:813 (1) - 슬라이더 시작에 클랩 추가
01:27:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이거 대칭으로 만들면 좋을것 같네요
02:15:479 (1) - 슬라이더 시작에 피니시 추가
03:14:146 (1) - ^
03:16:813 (1,2,3,4) - 끝을 예쁘게 모으세요. 쉬프트 누른 상태로 움직이면 직각이나 45도에서 고정됩니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/161809
03:22:146 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 그리드 레벨4에서 좌측으로 한칸만 움직이세요. 대칭

역시 후트카. 'ㅅ'b


[dksslqj]
OD 6으로 올리세요. 이 정도 BPM에 하드인데 OD 낮아서 확실하게 안쳤음에도 불구하고 300뜨면 느낌 이상합니다.
00:22:146 (1) - 이 슬라이더 끝 소리 거의 안들리게 하고 싶으면 노멀말고 소프트로 하세요.
01:28:812 (1) - ^

다 괜찮은데, I smell copy&paste. :x


[Hard]
OD 7로 올리면 난이도 분포 문제 해결됩니다.
03:23:479 (4) - 뉴콤보
03:24:813 (15) - 휘슬 대신에 피니시 (루나틱에서 피니시 썼음)


[Soror]
히트사운드가 심심하네요...
그거 말고는 딱히 꼬집을거 없습니다.


달려라 훗카 ;)

PS : 훗카님 난이도 보면 슬라이더 끝이랑 다음 노트랑 살짝 어긋난게 굉장히 많은데, 이건 의도적인 오버래핑이라 볼 수 없기 때문에 정확하게 스택하는게 낫습니다. 슬라이더 끝을 확실하게 다듬으세요.
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
Form net & 2004 mod queue.

General

None

[Soror's Normal]

01:19:146 (1) - i think 1/1 slider is match than 1/2 return.
02:04:813 (1) - make it to curve slider
02:20:479 (4,1) - new combo at 4 not 1 if you new combo by vocal line base other wise ignore this.

[b]Hard [/b]

01:02:646 addnote
01:28:812 (3) - pull end of slider down 2 grid (lv4) sorry if you don't want nazi
02:22:646 (8,9) - a bit of wrong spacing i know you want 9 and 10 pattern but try to consider it.
02:43:146 (4,5,6) - i think this is better without whistle
02:46:813 (4) - ^
02:48:813 (4) - ^

[dksslqj's Song]

03:14:146 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can you change this slider direction instead face out in same direction x 4
sample is sort like the sun like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/161928

Nice Heavy slider diff

[Lunatic]

Nice no suggestion.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
general

you meant "Back Ground" or exactly "Background" ?

Soror's Normal

ok

Hard

[01:20:812] irrelevant nazi here

maybe it plays better being shaped more like a circle
[02:01:479] 1 grid right in grid size 3
[02:07:979] this slider overlaps not very properly with note 2&7
[02:44:146] use clap instead of whistle

dksslqj's Song

this is fine

Lunatic

yes, nothing is essential enough to point out
but dose nor-whistle really fit the song?
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Hello~ as you requested

[Soror's Normal]

00:44:812 (1) - finish?
And why here are finishes and then there are no ones :S
Add them, please!
01:03:479 (1) - finish
01:08:812 (1) - ^
01:14:146 (1) - ^
And so on :S

Good diff, but if you add more hitsounds, it will be better.

[dksslqj's Song]

00:34:146 (1) - finish?
01:08:812 (x) - this part have too many finishes, maybe remove some?
01:40:812 (1) - finish?
02:15:479 (x) - same as in 01:08:812 -
02:50:146 (2) - finish?
02:55:479 (1) - ^

Very impressive diff.

[Hard]

00:12:812 (5) - finish
00:18:146 (5) - ^
00:39:312 (x) - add note :<
00:44:812 (1,2,3) - move them farther from each other
00:46:146 (1,2,3) - ^
00:50:146 (1,2,3) - ^
00:51:479 (1,2,3) - ^

Love this >w<

[Lunatic]

00:12:812 (5) - finish
00:13:812 (1) - remove nc
00:14:146 (2) - nc
00:18:146 (7) - finish
01:03:479 (1) - ^
01:08:812 (1) - ^
01:14:146 (3) - ^
01:19:479 (1) - ^
02:20:812 (1) - ^
02:50:146 (1) - ^
03:19:479 (1) - ^

Sooo good map. Good luck! ;)
Sync
osu! Alumni
1,575 posts
Joined April 2011
Sync
General:
What a great mapset.

Lunatic:
Couldn't spot a single thing wrong with this...

Hard:
00:46:146 (1,2,3,4) - I think flipping this pattern vertically would look nice

dksslqj's Song
00:49:646 (6) - Add a hit circle here
00:49:812 (7) - and here
00:49:979 (8) - and here
01:56:312 (6) - Same deal
01:56:479 (7) - ^^^
01:56:646 (8) - ^^^
The ending is really awesome

[bNormal[/b]:
02:47:979 (4) - Move this one tick to the right. It's weird to suddenly follow the vocals when you've been following the beat the whole time.
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
Soror's Normal

SliderMultiplier:0.699999999999999 ?!
change it to 0.7 in .osu [Difficulty]
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,192 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
개인적으로 하드가 너무 어렵다고 보는데;;

게스트 난이도 아닌 하드는 되도록 쉽게 해줬으면 좋겠습니다.
(연타도 많이 나오고 중간중간에 점프까지...)

하드

00:38:646 (3) - : ㅇ? 삼각형 만드시려고 하신거 같은데 한칸 오른쪽으로 하시는게 좋을 듯.(솔직히 하드치곤 어려운 노트배치)

00:48:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - : 하드에 엄청난 점프로군요...

00:57:146 (4,5) - : ^

01:05:313 (8) - : 3칸 옆으로 가시는게 좋을듯 합니다.

01:16:146 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - : 이 역시 점프가..

01:44:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - : ^

01:55:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - : ^

02:02:479 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - : ^

02:12:146 (1,2,3,4) - : ^

03:01:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - : ^

03:09:479 (6,7) - : ^

03:10:813 (10,11) - : ^

03:12:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - : ^

토탈 스코어를 보니까 9700000이더라고요;; 연타도 너무 많고... 약간 줄이시는게 좋을 듯 합니다.

하드치곤 너무 많은 스코어 같아보입니다. (디스턴스 + 프리 스타일은 인센있는 하드 상에서는 별로 않 좋다고 생각됩니다...)

이 모딩이 마음에 안드시면 버리셔도 되요 ㅠ... 아직 미완이시면...

여튼 모딩 끝입니다. 감사합니다. ^^... 맵 랭크 되기를 기원합니다!

나머지 맵은 모두 좋아요!
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
  • General
    The hitsound is just a little loud, all 70% -> 60%

    Soror's Normal
  1. I don't know why here is
    in fact, we all know it should be 0.7
  2. 01:55:479(3,4) 3 end at 00:15:812, and 4 begin at 01:56:146

    Hard
    fine

    dksslqj's Song
    the second section is just Ctrl+H? Maybe you should change some patterns.
  3. 00:23:479(3) end at 00:24:146
  4. 00:24:312(1) remove
  5. 00:57:146(2) I know you want to jump here, but 3.06x is still too far, maybe 2.5x is better
  6. 01:05:419(3) ^
  7. 01:30:146(3,1) like 00:23:479
  8. 03:00:812(1~4) too far, like 03:19:419
Sry, I cannot mod Lunatic, it's too hard for me...
Good luck, and No kds
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Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
Nice map L i a :)
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
A short little mod for you~

[General]
• You can barley hear the Normal Hit clap. You can't hear the difference between the normal sounds and normal clap in game.
• Not quite fond of the spread on this map. Only one easier diff and three harder ones. You should make an Easy.

[Normal]
• 01:06:146 (1) - This squiggly slider is slow and would throw people off. I suggest re-making the slider or maybe speeding it up would do the trick.
• 01:49:146 (4) - Add a new combo on this note to match 01:43:813 (1).
• 01:56:313 (4) - This slider is pretty off-putting, people would hit it too early because the guitar is on 01:56:146. I suggest you try this:

• 01:59:313 (4) - New combo on this note to match the lyrics better.
• 02:04:812 - Why don't you have another Kiai time to stay consistent?

[dksslqj's Song]
• 00:28:146 (1) - Move this note closer so people would not confuse it for a note on the red tick like 00:27:646 (1)
• 01:04:646 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note to match with 00:59:313 (3).
• 01:34:812 (1) - Same as the first point.
• 02:11:312 (1) - Same as the second point.

[Hard]
• 01:18:146 (1) - This slider would work better if it started on 01:17:979. It flows better and matches the music also.
• 03:22:646 (2) - I think this pattern would work better if you deleted this note. It's pretty frustrating to hit.

[Lunatic]
• 00:44:479 (6) - Not sure anyone is going to get this slow down on their first play through especially since everything else is so fast paced.

Good map and ready for MAT.
Deserves a star ♪~
(Yay! 100th Kudosu earned :3)
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