1. Crazy! (4.99 stars, 683 notes)
2. Sorry! (4.66 stars, 547 notes)
3. Ugly! (2.74 stars, 287 notes)

wyaeiga wrote:

in no particular order:

SPOILER

• the band:

1. why 13 people? D: such bad profit splitting, lol. lol
   
   color scheme:
2. no (less) light gray/white! they're too hard to see especially since the dark gray and black notes are incredibly easy to
3. see, you wouldn't expect a hard to see note to come. changed
   
   sliders:
4. crazy diff 01:37:044 (4) - i can see why, kinda
5. crazy diff 01:38:082 (4) - i can't see why ending of a phrase :\ iono i think it fits...
   
   spacing:
6. crazy diff 01:50:070 (14,15) - the 15 should be snapped as far from 14 as 14 is from 13. the way it is right now looks weird and/or suggests an eighth note. fixed
   
   crazy diff:
7. 02:42:051 (8,9,10,11) - the notes aren't snapped to the eighth ticks, they're snapped to something random. oops
8. 02:08:082 (4) - is this on purpose? just making a note, nothing really wrong with it. deliberately placed for slight variation
   
   sorry diff:
9. 00:42:051 (3,4) - the white tick in between feels lonely D: its a lonerr
   
   ugly diff:
10. 00:07:090 (1,2,3,4) - it's just my opinion, but i think it would sound better if you mixed in 4 beat sliders (white, red, white, red ticks) along with the 3 beat sliders (white, blue, red ticks). recalculation residue
11. 00:17:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe add in a red beat occasionally; it wouldn't make it crazy hard either, just less repetitive. check with thomas?
12. 00:24:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yeah... maybe add in white beats along with red ones this time xD ^
    
    overall:
13. the song is okay i guess, but i don't really like (k/j)pop.
14. the maps are definitely fun to play though. at least the harder diffs.

Shulin wrote:

I like this song very catchy ~ Random mod of what's done ~

General

~ Set BG color to black.
~ Disable countdown?

Ugly:

00:59:058 (1,1,1,1) - New combo's seem pointless here I can't see the colors, and you don't do it at say ~ 00:15:027 (1,2,3,4) - Changed (Thomas pls check)
01:06:096 (1,1,1,1) - ^ Changed

Sorry:

00:06:051 (5,6) - Make these sliders completely symmetrical, 6 should look like 5. Fixed
00:51:005 (10,11,12) - A little irritating would probably work better as a stack. Fixed
01:05:013 (5) - Extremely hard to detect, I'd say put it to the left of 4 and maybe give it a new combo. Newcombo'd
01:09:074 (5) - This slider just looks ugly lol. Fixed

Crazy!:

The overall difficulty of what's done so far is what I would expect of an approved map, unless this is going for approval?

01:23:082 (8) - Ugly slider lol. Fixed
01:33:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I know it said crazy but wow those are hard to hit...
02:36:005 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - The new combos do seem rather redundant. Fixed

Cool map, it looks like it will be a good collab I was going to map this song lol

I'll add my star when it's pending keep working on it

JInxyjem wrote:

[Ugly]
03:22:671 (5) - Literally ugly overlap. Done
03:27:748 - Remove break Done


[Sorry]
00:21:517 (10,11,12) - Hyper retarded overlaps Done
00:54:055 (1) - Shorten by 1/1. Currently it sounds like bullcrap. Done
00:55:901 (x) - Add beat here if ^ was done. Done
01:56:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Massive confuzzling here, but not much of a problem
Nazi 02:22:901 (5) - Not straight.
Nazi 02:24:517 (1) - ^
02:32:363 (6,1,2,1,2,1) - I know what I'm saying when I say this jump is clsoe to being impossible.
02:41:363 (1) - 1/2 silder stack becomes 1/4 without warning aaaah
Waiting on Dragonslayerxx

[Crazy]
01:23:132 (7) - Why is this silder bent. Done
Nazi: 01:25:901 (2,3) - If you are trying to make a blanket style, this is NOT the way to go. Fixed lol
Nazi 02:36:055 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Too high Done

The map itself is well made, enough to merit a star.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Here are my updates.

Ugly:
02:12:517 (1) - remove new combo pls (forgot to mod my part thoroughly)

Leorda wrote:

Hi!

[Ugly!]
01:14:363 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:52:671 (x) - Add note with clap hitsound?
02:13:440 (2) - Add a finish hitsound
03:33:286 (5) - Make symetric?Done

[Sorry!]
02:35:132 (x) - Add note?

[Crazy!]
02:28:151 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000)
02:31:844 (1) - ^ Now at 3000
02:48:286 (1) - ^ etc
03:29:825 (1) - ^
03:30:748 (1) - ^
03:31:671 (1) - ^
03:32:594 (1) - ^[/color]

Nice Map!
STAR

bmin11 wrote:

[Crazy!]
Oh god. Increase the Overall Difficulty plz. It gets really dizzy from pianist's part One tick up?
02:39:748 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Ridiculous. It is hard to read too Simplified with less new comboes
Oh and plz don't spam newcombo. It increases the HP drain rate.

[Sorry!]
Increase the Overall Diff please Done
01:38:363 (1) - The spacing is quite confusing but oh well, you may keep it.
03:27:286 (x) - add a break here? It feels like the song ended without the break Done

[Ugly!]
03:27:286 (x) - add a break here? It feels like the song ended without the break Done

That's all for me. The map looks really messy with low Overall difficulty from [Hard] or harder

Dusty wrote:

[Sorry!]
00:08:940 (4,5) - inconsistent with 00:09:863 (1,2) 2nd time goes with the actual lyrics. I thought the first time was just to add a bit of variety (but Iono in a good way)
00:29:132 (7) - It feels like it should have one less repeat and then a note where the slider used to end Kk
00:32:363 (7) - Only one repeat but 1/2 beat long? Kk
01:04:671 (3) - One less repeat, maybe add a note where the slider used to end? Feels a bit awkward.
02:39:748 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - confusing
Increase OD? Ok

[Crazy!]
Does yoshi's part have hitsounds?

[Ugly!]
Increase OD?
00:36:055 (1) - Split the slider in two?

Sushi971 wrote:

[Ugly!]
00:45:748 (3) - move 1 grid left for perfect diamond. looks nicer
00:53:132 (3) - ^ right
02:51:286 (3,4) - align?
Fixed

[Sorry]
01:32:825 (1,2,3,4) - spacin here? it gets bigger after (3). intentional?
02:28:209 (1) - center this better. not properly stacked with following circles
Fixed

[Crazy]
00:53:363 (6,7) - align?

01:13:901 (1) - no new combo imo
01:34:209 (9,10,11,12) - the way (10) and (12) are placed does not follo the pattern : (10) is a little too close (or (12) is too far)
Fixed

02:02:248 (9) - a little too far But but the spacing is "right." lol x) fixed

Considering the amount of Streams, their spacing and their difficulty, maybe lower LifeDrain a little.
kk

Nice map Guys!

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Delete "Sorry Super Junior" from your TAG because It's already on Artist and Title and Source Fixed
- Black combo colour hard to read for me ;___; Changed

[Ugly!]
00:46:648 (5) - not snapped Fixed
00:54:032 (5) - ^.. @.@ Fixed

[Sorry!]
01:14:363 - this timing selection seem useless Fixed
01:21:748 - ^ Fixed
02:00:517 (2) - new combo ~ ?
02:07:901 (2) - ^
03:35:132 - add note like 03:36:978 (5,5) - ?
03:36:055 - ^
03:36:978 (5,5) - try sound finish

[Crazy!]
some part combo are too long for me
01:41:132 - this timing selection seem useless Fixed
00:40:671 (11) - new combo ?
03:40:209 (5) - ^

starrrrrrr ~

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*sjsshqr.jpg is too large. Max bg width allowed is 1024, so please resize it to that width.
*Storyboard-in-front-of-combo-fire is not consistent in the three diffs. Please make them the same.
*Offset seems a tiny bit late. Try 511 and resnap.

[Ugly!]
*Disable countdown, since it can't appear anyway.
02:49:209 (2,3,4,5,6) - might be a little bit confusing/tricky for newb players :<
03:05:132 (1) - too far from previous
03:16:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - tricky/confusing for an easy diff, again

[Sorry!]
00:08:363 (3) - Please end this earlier, and make a short slider connecting from where it ended to (4). Otherwise, the circles and sliders together are pretty confusing and hard to it. I had trouble with it myself and this is only the 2nd hardest difficulty. @.@ Hmmm, also, do it for the next sliders too like:

00:10:209 (3) - But then end this one early too and start (4) on the white tick with an extra repeat, please. :>
00:43:209 (4) - hmmm start on the previous white tick and extend?
00:43:901 (6) - expected this to have one more repeat, but nevertheless...
00:43:209 (4,5,6,7) - is a bit tricky to read, so I'd like to see a better pattern here
01:04:671 (3) - remove a repeat, please
01:06:286 (6) - I'd remove a repeat and start a new combo on the end of this since it's the beginning of a new phrase.
02:43:209 (1) - I'd move this a bit closer to the previous since the slider patterns are a bit confusing and one wouldn't be paying attention to this jump

[Crazy!]
00:43:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are evil Please at least make them a little bit straighter ;~;
01:34:209 (9,10,11,12) - evillll please don't place a stream like this @.@
01:38:363 (1,2,3,4) - NO. First, 1,2,3 is evil. Second, 4 is too close to them.
01:40:209 (1,2,3) - ffff
01:45:286 (8) - a bit hard to tell that this is a slider
01:50:248 (10) - hidden from a 100/300 hitburst
01:52:555 (8) - hidden
01:54:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - arghhhhhhh stop it with the deathstreams =|
01:56:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confusing to read
02:09:748 (5) - move farther from 4 so it's not so hard to read when it should be hit
02:10:901 (2,3,4,5) - too hard to read
02:27:286 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - pretty but argh
02:30:171 (1) - oh you better be joking trying to start a deathstream 1/4 after a friggin' spinner alsdfjadsf
02:39:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - NO
02:40:671 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - NO
03:35:709 (2,3,4) - too spread out (just like every damn stream in this map orz)
03:36:632 (2,3,4) - ^

Crazy is... crazy. I'd rather see closer-spaced streams that are more fun than crazy, but whatever. :< Some of the streams WERE fun, but it's just that a lot were either unreadable or just plain ridiculous.

Davidz123 wrote:

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Star~

1. sjsshqr.jpg is a little big, the allowed biggest size is 1024x768 pixels
2. The 3rd Album SORRY SORRY no need to add to TAGs according to this Album Title doesn't belong in "Source" field, and other tips

1. 02:40:434 (x) - Add break maybe

1. 00:43:549 (6) - Reduce a reverse, add a reverse to (7) and (7) starts at 00:43:895, Now it's a little hard to read
2. 00:53:587 (4) - Strange spacing
3. 01:52:203 (5) - Jump, new combo
4. 02:42:049 (2,3 ) - New combo?

1. 00:44:126 (7,8) - Interchange the place of 7,8 better IMO
2. 00:46:203 (7) - New combo maybe, these notes (4-7) spacing looked chaos
3. 01:45:280 (8) - I think this one put here would made many players misread (7) to a slider, or maybe just for me

Breeze wrote:

Only RED part is what I think you should fix, others are just suggestions

[General]

1. sjsshqr.jpg is a little big, the allowed biggest size is 1024x768 pixels
   Resolution is already at 1024 x 683 though. Isn't that ok?
2. The 3rd Album SORRY SORRY no need to add to TAGs according to this Album Title doesn't belong in "Source" field, and other tips

Yeah - I forgot about that. Changed.

[Ugly!]

1. 02:40:434 (x) - Add break maybe

Changed

[Sorry!]

1. 00:43:549 (6) - Reduce a reverse, add a reverse to (7) and (7) starts at 00:43:895, Now it's a little hard to read Changed
2. 00:53:587 (4) - Strange spacing Oops.
3. 01:52:203 (5) - Jump, new combo
4. 02:42:049 (2,3 ) - New combo?

[Crazy!]

1. 00:44:126 (7,8) - Interchange the place of 7,8 better IMO
2. 00:46:203 (7) - New combo maybe, these notes (4-7) spacing looked chaos
3. 01:45:280 (8) - I think this one put here would made many players misread (7) to a slider, or maybe just for me

Spaced a bit farther apart.

star

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Why did you only storyboard lyrics for part of the song? :S Got behind by school. Fill fix over weekend hopefully.

Ugly!
Fine

Sorry!
01:51:972 (4,5) - No, that jump is horrible and pointless. Get rid of it

Crazy!
01:38:818 (4) - Why? Just... why? Slider redone
03:40:203 (5) - New combo

Good job.

ErufenRito wrote:

Should i assume that storyboard is still in work? Cause if not, you should start to storyboard the whole map. Still have a minute left to go.

Ugly:

03:08:818 (1,2) - They are slightly offmap (overlaps with hp bar) . Not sure if they are okay Moved

Crazy:

01:36:511 (1,2,3) - This is kind of way too evil. Why is it to me? Because the sudden use of 1/4 back and forth beats is wayyyy too unexpected, besides, i think this is the only place that they are used in this way, and this part have nothing special compared to others... This is just an opinion though, feel free to ignore it. Changed to a stack

Senbon wrote:

omg. this used to be my favorite song ever. <3 Glad there's an epic map for it.

Feel free to take or leave any suggestions.

[Ugly!]

01:04:664 (8) - New combo?
01:58:664 (1) - Clap on end?
03:24:049 (1) - Clap? Fixed
03:24:972 (3) - ^ Fixed

[Sorry!]

00:46:203 (5) - Clap on start? Fixed
00:52:664 (1) - Clap? Fixed
01:11:126 (11) - Clap on start? Fixed
02:43:203 - end - Where'd the hit sounds at?

[Crazy!]

01:22:203 (2,3,4,5,6) - (3) is not as equal distance to (2) as (3,4,5) are. Fixed

Shulin wrote:

There are too many members to this band.

General:

-- Reading the lyrics made me giggle.

Ugly!:

00:01:895 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those claps are too loud.
01:14:357 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:40:664 to 02:42:511 -- Put something here, please.
02:53:818 (6) - Move from under the slider since its the easiest difficulty. Fixed
03:06:511 (3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing rhythm maybe? Fixed

Sorry!:

-- Ends earlier than the others, making all difficulties end at the same point is a good idea imo. (Actually if you want people to see the SB then I guess you should end all the diffs at this point.

01:04:664 (3,1,2,3) - A bit of a clustered overlap, I guess it's okay though.
02:00:511 (2) - New combo? (Following your pattern)
02:07:895 (2) - ^
02:31:895 (5) - ^

Crazy!:

-- Your stream (or 1/4) spacing isn't consistent and that's always a pain imo. A lot of it is really wide and irritating to play (well the triples at least).
-- A lot of spinners start on 1/8 not sure this is entirely necessary. It was there so the 2000+ bonus actually has a third ding for 3000

01:34:549 (12) - Delete? Sounds bad. Start the spinner earlier imo. Fixed
01:36:511 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
01:38:818 (4) - This is ugly. Fixed
01:41:126 (6) - Expected this to be a slowdown because of the previous pattern. Changed
01:51:511 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The pattern is just messy and really confusing, the triples threw me off no matter how many times I play it =/ Changed a bit
01:54:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Gradually increasing the volume didn't work here imo, also the stream is too widely spaced imho. Stream spacing is consistent to all others aren't they?
02:01:895 (8,9) - Spacing? Felt too close. Fixed
02:09:972 (6,7,8) - Yeah this gets confusing, I read this as 1/2 because of 02:08:818 (4,5) - again the widely spaced triples threw me off.
02:30:049 -- What's this uninherited timing section doing here? Fixed
02:30:164 (1) - Scrap this, it doesn't play well at all, the spinner pattern is much better. Changed
02:31:895 -- Same about this uninherited timing section. (I deleted them and didn't get any unsnapped notes so.... ?_?) Fixed
03:36:741 (3) - Hidden. Vertical flip?

Ideally I'd say make all your stream spacing consistent, if not this then make sure it's as readable as possible a lot of those triples in particular are confusing.

Nice overall.
~ Star.

LoweH wrote:

Hey :3

Ugly!
01:05:126 (9) - New combo here
02:12:511 (1) - Remove new combo
02:13:434 (2) - New combo here + hitsound finish
02:41:126 (1) - Add a slider reverse here *
* example :

SPOILER

[attachment=0:ce875]screenshot113.jpg[/attachment:ce875]

02:49:203 (2) - New combo here
Done

Sorry!
00:50:818 (9) - New combo here
00:54:049 (1) - Hitsound clap
01:50:818 (10) - Hitsound finish Huh?
Done (except the last one)
Starr**

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hai there
Sorry for the wait
Korean version of Morning musume, oh wait they're all boys

[General]
- you really don't need 3rd album in the tags Kk
- SB is great and funny I like that digga-digga-dance and the oh- oh- cracks me

[Ugly]
The combos aren't consistent, The combo in dragon and pianist part can last up to 9, while in bliss only 4. Cause this is the easiest diff better to break some long combo into smaller one

SPOILER

This is only a suggestion, use bliss pattern of 1 set of combo for 1 stanza Fixed
some example :
00:02:587 (6) - NC (new combo)
00:06:511 (4) - ^
00:09:741 (3) - ^

02:13:434 (3) - add finish will sound good imo Fixed
03:42:049 (1) - Fade out this? Fixed

[Sorry]
Sorry I can't find anything wrong here

[Crazy]
Just like Shulin said The inconsistent spacing in stream is very noticable and irritating. It'll play very nice if you make them more closer like in this set 00:07:895 (1,2,3,4,5)

Hmm. So I reduced stream spacing greatly in my part to be slightly easier (as in image below) since my friend complained to me about it earlier this month or so...however it makes the inconsistency more visible >< I dunno if this works - let me know?

SPOILER

Hmm...not anything major I guess, just the combo in ugly diff that's bothering me
The rest are AWSOME

have a Double Star~

wmfchris wrote:

[Crazy!]
0:53:934 (7) down 1 grid
1:12:972 (2) right 1 grid for symmetry
1:13:434 (3) left 1 grid for symmetry (4 can't move right anymore)
3:34:780 (2,3,4,1) down 1 grid

[Sorry!]
0:47:126 (8) up 1 grid
0:50:703 (9,10,11,12,13) down 1 grid, (13) down 2 grid (achieve even slope)
2:12:511 (1) remove new combo?

[Ugly] Fine.
All fixed

star~

• • Some SB images contains unnecessary transparency.
  • Add kiai

• • 03:40:203 (5) - New combo

1. Timing looks good
   
   1. You're storyboarded lyrics have a fair bit of transparent space in them. Perhaps you could crop those out to lower memory usage? There are others, but the lyrics are the main culprit.
   2. Just as an idea, how about you use soft hitsounds for the intro? (from the start - 00:15:280). Sounds better to me that way.
   3. the difficulty gap between Ugly and Sorry seems a bit big. perhaps you could map something to go in between those? (getting the other 2 mappers to come back and map another difficulty might be a little hard though, I understand D:)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Some SB images contains unnecessary transparency.See below
  • Add kiaiHmmm.

[Crazy!]

• • 03:40:203 (5) - New combo

Fixed

Doomsday93 wrote:

Hi

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing looks good
   
   1. Your storyboarded lyrics have a fair bit of transparent space in them. Perhaps you could crop those out to lower memory usage? There are others, but the lyrics are the main culprit. Cropped (hopefully nothing will shift too much).
   2. Just as an idea, how about you use soft hitsounds for the intro? (from the start - 00:15:280). Sounds better to me that way. Did for my part.
   3. the difficulty gap between Ugly and Sorry seems a bit big. perhaps you could map something to go in between those? (getting the other 2 mappers to come back and map another difficulty might be a little hard though, I understand D:)

[UGLY!]

Seems fine

[SORRY!]

hmm. Looks good.

[CRAZY!]

Some of the jumps in this don't fit well to me, mainly because the song isn't intense enough to warrant them. Could be just me though.

Dragonslayerxx's bit in this is a little overmapped imo. not the jumps, but mainly how the streams are spaced out wider, making them
tougher, which doesn't fit well in the song imo.

02:28:145 (1,1) - These spinners hit 2000+ bonus when auto hits them, yeah, but they still seem a bit out of place. Perhaps you could replace them with 1 spinner instead of 2? (or map something else there entirely?)
02:31:837 (1,1) - ^ Remapped for above two.
03:29:471 (1,1,1,1) - ^ (4 spinners here, so it would be 2 spinners., or just map something else here)

Not bad. Pretty solid overall, and pretty fun at times too. Nice work

Starred