1. Easy (2,08 stars, 206 notes)
2. Hard (4,77 stars, 401 notes)
3. Normal (3,85 stars, 276 notes)

akrolsmir wrote:

Thanks for being like 1 of 2 people to actually follow posting format on my queue!

Easy:

00:45:632 (1) - Delete this note and
00:47:725 - add a note here to mirror the section right before it starting with 00:43:190 (1) .
00:48:074 (5) - Delete? changed in other way, I add slider^

Seems a bit short, even though I know easy diffs can be shorter. Are you planning on mapping it all the way? If not, I'd suggest map to about 2:01:329 It's WIP diff, check the map description

Medium:
Fine

Hard:
00:36:562 (2,3,4) - The song doesn't sound equally spaced here to me; 3 and 4 (the word "gotta") sound closer than 2 and 3.
I tried several different tactics to space it but wasn't completely satisfied with any, so I might just be wrong.
For the record:

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First I tried changing to 1/6- beat and adjusting (3), like so:]

Then I tried doubling the BPM to 172, then moving (3) and 1/8:

Finally I tried resetting it, and using a slider for (3,4) instead of two beats:

If you do change it, note that many sections share a similar rhythm. Such as 00:39:004 (5,6,7), 00:40:399 (2,3,4), 00:41:097 (5,6,7), and all repeats thereof. I wait for other opinions.

00:41:097 (5,6,7,8) - Seems prettier if it would be collinear. Like so:

SPOILER

Same for 00:52:260 (5,6,7,8) and repeats. fixed, thanks.

02:32:725 (7,8,9) - More intuitive if it was the reflection of (4,5,6) instead of the rotation. Same for repeats, especially at 02:44:062, because there is a slider right before that ends there leaving a burst that might mask it. fixed

Overall, very polished for a map with no other mods! Star.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Normal]
00:58:539 (1,2) - Spacing?
01:57:143 (1,2) - ^ it was intention, but ok fixed ^

Only this, sorry. Do you like song/map? no? sorry then..

Star~

Hushu wrote:

Gosh... Your beatmaps are so hard to mod because all of beats don't follow vocals... I'd love for you to do instrumental map next time : "all of beats" - I don't think so. Maybe in easy it's so, but in hard many of them follow vocals - check it. I do so, because vocal follow blue ticks (and do it not very well ). Also I made an instrumental map, but it's hard rock

General:
I would turn volume of sounds lower by 1/1.5... ok

Easy:
0:54:353, 1:52:957 - A perfect place for repeating slider which I don't saw much of in your Easy,.. I use repeating slider at 02:37:957 (3) and 02:49:120 (3)
2:58:539 - This is off for me... Put it 1/4 erlier and shorten it by 1/4? If you don't do that then try to do something else with it pls, cuz this is the only one out of all repeating parts like this what is made as a repeating slider... Well, sorry, I think blue ticks may be confusion for novices. I wait for other opinions for that.

Nothing for normal,..
I can't check your insane now, but I'll check it a few times later, yet I am quite worried I won't find anything~ So if this stays unedited by the end of tomorrow, then ya passed* for me !

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]
- you're placing hitsound really individual-based, it's a bit random for me
- and default hitwhistle is just bad to your song, esp. you OVERWHISTLED your map I don't think so, but I should double-check all hitsounds later
- i cant mod hitsound for normal and insane because i simply have different hitsounding opinion, sorry for that
- open .osu in notepad and delete useless decimal point on slider velocity is it necessary?

[Easy]
<00:30:981> (4) use clap instead
<01:13:190> (4) remove whistle ok^
<01:15:283> (3) whistle during slider is weird
<01:17:725> (4) ^, use whistle only at endpoint? no^
<01:24:004> (5,6) whistle-whistle or clap-clap sounds better ok
- well..copy/pasted KIAI..
<02:23:074> (4) remove whistle
<02:44:237> (3) ^ replaced to claps

[Normal]
<01:23:481> add note here and <01:24:178> makes gameflow better I added note to 01:23:481 only
<03:05:516> add some hitsound here hm, no

[Hard]
<00:26:097> (5,1,2) not a good flow, move to x:256 y:88? (1) to x:200 y:208, (2) stacking with (5) ok (a bit changed your placing for symmetry)
<00:45:806> (2) a 1/2 reverse slider (45:806-46:504) makes better flow here oh, I have to replace the whole pattern here
<01:25:050> (1) clap it? it's like a silent note atm I added a whistle
<02:18:946> add note here and <02:19:295> no, It doesn't feel right for me
<03:10:748> (1) remove finish
<03:13:539> ^ ok^

star~peace song thanks for cool mod

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI
I'm late

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
01:14:411 - add a circle?
01:15:457 (4) - end at 01:15:806 and add a circle at 01:15:981 ?
01:25:574 - add a circle?
01:26:097 (2) - move to 01:25:923 and add a circle at 01:26:271 ?
01:26:620 (3) - end at 01:26:969 and add a circle at 01:27:143 ? it makes this diff too hard, imho^
03:12:841 (5) - move to 03:12:667 ok

[Hard]
01:34:643 - add a circle?
01:34:992 - ^ no^
02:39:702 (6,1) - I thnik you should make more jump like this I use it enough here
02:59:934 (3,5) - change to circles ok + add jump

Good map
Star~

Ekaru wrote:

General:

The actual BPM here is 172. If you have it at 86 BPM for kiai time purposes, then at least move the offset to 981 so it looks right in Taiko mode and so the Kiai Time doesn't look as weird. Ideally you would also double the BPM to 172 and half the slider velocity and tick rate so it looks perfect in Taiko mode, but it depends on why it's at 86 BPM in the first place. I use MixMeister BPM Analyzer for timing. Nothing more. If you really sure that timing is 172, I changed it. But 0.5 tick rate is strange and I never use blue lines then. (and what's wrong with kiai time?)

Hard:

03:00:283 (4,5) - This jump's kinda random. fixed

Other than that... I LOVED IT!

Normal:

Loved this too.

Easy:

<3

Great mapset. Star. thanks

Samah wrote:

Press F6. Change the offset to 994 and choose "Snap objects to new timing". Click OK. Your map is now correctly timed! <3 thanks! (hope it's right)
Don't forget to manually fix all the inherited sections, because osu! isn't smart enough to do that for you.
One of the problems with this song is that it's a swing feel, so it should really be done with a beat snap divisor of 1/6, like so:

SPOILER

well, 1/6 or 1/3 sounds very strange here. I think it's played nice now, so why I need to change that..

[Easy]
Too many whistles I think. I'd suggest going for a clap every other beat (in the more prominent sections). Your hitsounds are pretty random too. Try to make them follow the beat. I will try it, maybe..
A lot of the places you've switched to soft hitsounds are unnecessary. The quiet section at the end is fine though. all diffs have it, or is it general tip?
Combos should (if possible) start at logical places in the music. I'm bad with that -_-
00:16:329 (6) - Whistle sliders like this don't really fit in a slow song.
01:15:283 (3) - ^ whistle removed

[Normal]
Hitsounds in this are much better, and the map flows quite well. I still think the whistle sliders are a bit overkill though. whistle removed
01:32:026 (5) - Left two grids. oh

[Hard]
Good hitsounds and flow.
00:57:667 (4,1) - This is not a good idea. The second note is visible before you hit the first one (due to the approach rate), so the anti-jump here doesn't really work. Either increase the approach rate or do something slightly different with it. approach rate increased
01:56:271 (4,1) - ^
03:14:411 (4,1) - ^

Nice maps, star.

backstep wrote:

Sorry for delay gyt.

[General]
- Delete .osb file in your folder, If you don't make SB.
- This is my first indy song when I mod. I can mod a little. (Hard to find rhythm for me.)
- This is my mod style you can fixed or not.

[Easy]
02:16:691 (1) end of slider remove whistle. fixed

[Normal]
02:55:412 (6,1,2,3,4,1) make your note like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/77209 ok

[Hard]
Suggest : OD,AR +1
01:28:203 (2) delete your note then copy (1) --> ctrl+H --> ctrl+R ok
01:41:110 (?) add note ? no

Star ~[/color]

Aleks719 wrote:

Hard Привет, напишу что не исправил
00:26:459 (1) - свисток в начало
00:30:819 (5) - свисток в конец
00:36:226 (1) - Вокал начинается раньше и невольно жмешь раньше, а там ещё нет ничего. Но ничего лучше я придумать не смог)
00:39:540 (1) - свисток в начало
00:41:633 (8) - ^ этот что-то совсем не нравится
00:42:854 (2) - мб финиш вместо хлопка? тут финишей нет в округе, да. Но здесь он звучит лучше хлопка
00:47:389 (5) - добавь финиш не
00:52:796 (8) - свисток в начало
00:54:017 (2) - мб финиш вместо хлопка? *паттерны повторяются ^^*
00:55:761 (6) - сдвинуть на 1/2 раньше
01:11:110 (1) - добавь финиш не, как-то рандомно
01:14:773 (2,3) - добавь свистки
01:15:470 (4) - а тут свисток в начало странно звучит^
01:34:133 (11) - сдвинуть на 1/2 позже сбивает с ритма
01:40:238 (8) - свисток в начало
01:41:459 (2) - мб финиш вместо хлопка?
01:46:168 (6) - свисток в начало
01:49:307 (1) - ^
01:51:400 (8) - ^
01:52:621 (2) - мб финиш вместо хлопка?
01:54:366 (6) - сдвинуть на 1/2 раньше копипаста же, мог бы и не писать^
02:18:959 (х) - добавить сёркл
02:44:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - в этом комбо хлопки куда-то упыгали
03:01:342 (7) - не звучит. удали, перемапай этот слайдер как в других аналогичных местах до этого.
03:07:447 (4) - добавть сёркл
03:07:796 (6) - ^ мини 1/2 стрим, но имхо, лучше что-то не хочется^

Normal
пу-пу-пу... Скажу так, из-за усечённого числа нот хитсаунды очень сильно проигрывают харду, попробуй оживить, а то я ща совсем без идей. Я тоже, наверное, но мне всё нравится.
до 1го киай тайма всё показалось совсем грустно, но потом вроде ничё, прислушался. в киай не нравятся комбо вроде этого 00:54:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - свистков многовато.
02:37:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - а тут хлопков.

00:14:075 (5) - удлиннить на 1/2 ?
01:26:110 (2) - сдвинуть на 1/2 раньше + добавить сёркл на 01:26:284 заменил на слайдер
01:28:900 (3) - укоротить на 1/2
01:29:598 (4) - сдвинуть на 1/2 раньше не^
02:08:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ну это уж совсем откровенный копипаст, не будь как нотшинта, подвигай слайдеры-то хоть в стороны-то) может чуть поменяю, но сейчас лень
02:18:959 (8) - добавь сёркл
03:13:203 (6) - может удалить сёркл этот не^

Easy
Я не очень за хлопки рандомные, но раз больше нет ничего, то сойдет)
00:42:854 (х) - сюда бы и на большие белые тики в дальнейшем я б нот наставил с финишами, как здесь 00:48:435 (5) - ^^ поменял кое-что

SPOILER

Скажу, как делаю я. сворачиваешь окно с осу при играющей музыке со всеми хитсаундами. Если тошнить не тянет и ритмичненько, то ок, если нет, то фиксь это) это я к тому, что смотришь и вроде ничего, а в папку потянулся, свернул, так сразу уши режет.

В принципе, нормально, но звуки не понравились, когда свернул)
ах да. осб файл,но мне на него всё равно, захочешь - удалишь :3
Удачи ~ спасибо за мод!

Leorda wrote:

Privet

Easy
00:16:342 (6) - Flip these slider to make a better flow
00:26:459 (T) - Move this green sections to 00:26:284, it's odd to hear when sliderslide changing from normal to soft it doesn't sound better for me

Normal
Approach Rate +1 looks comfortable for me. Other was fine for me, though

Hard
00:33:610 (5) - Ugly slider
01:32:912 (9) - New combo?
all fixed^
Sorry for my useless post not so useless

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.

[Hard]
imo You could have used more patterns and less copy-pastes. yeah, but it's something like map style.
00:57:680 (4,1) - this anti-jump feels really unnatural to me. Please change it. same with all the other copy-paste occurrences later. It's fine for me. So I wait for other opinions, sorry.
01:33:261 - 01:33:784 - 01:33:959 - add note here?
01:34:133 (6) (3 if you didn't add the notes) - move to 01:34:307 I add note at 01:34:307 instead of this
02:52:273 - add note here
02:52:621 - ^ noo
03:10:587 (9,1) - swap new combo ok
03:14:424 (4,1) - anti-jump feels unnatural. Please change it.

[Normal]
I think it's fine, still, it has too much copy-paste imo :/

[Easy]
00:42:854 (4,1) - swap new combo. same with all the other copy-paste occurrences later.
00:50:877 (3,1) - ^ ok^
03:16:342 (2) - this stack is a bit hard for beginners. Consider stacking it under the end of (1) changed in other way

Star

Soul-less wrote:

Second time modding your map I think? XD yeah, do you wanna mod a third one?

[General]
- (Very minor issue) System prompt me to save after resnapping all notes.

[Easy] + [Normal]
- Nice and easy.

[Hard]
- 01:12:505 (4) - I would kinda want this beat at 01:12:331 (4) due to vocal(You did this for the first pre-chorus part, why the change?). Up to you if you're keeping the clap. I wanted change something here - this song is so repeating. Now I remap this part a bit - makes it harder, but better, IMO.

A very pleasant song to listen to, and relaxing map to play with. Thanks!
Sorry can't really suggest anything useful. XD

senaya wrote:

а ты не хотел бы запилить простую стриборду в брейках или припевах, например, где медленно снизу вверх поднимаются шарики светлые?
типа как в этом ролике http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_wDsz9nU4pc но получше)))

gyt wrote:

Не умею сторибордить, но всё может быть. Сама-то мапа понравилась?