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S.S.D.Fantasica feat. Yukko - Hanafubuki ~IIDX LIMITED~

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Topic Starter
Cirno
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年1月28日 at 14:30:05

Artist: S.S.D.Fantasica feat. Yukko
Title: Hanafubuki ~IIDX LIMITED~
Source: pop'n music
Tags: Curisu
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3618kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (3.91 stars, 337 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.62 stars, 130 notes)
  3. Hyper (4.12 stars, 405 notes)
  4. Normal (2.26 stars, 219 notes)
Download: S.S.D.Fantasica feat. Yukko - Hanafubuki ~IIDX LIMITED~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Another by 萌妹Curisu

The extended difficulty has been removed since multiple mp3s are no longer rankable. Click here to download the original Hyper Extended:
moegirz yz super moe power

Revived! 3.5 yrs in graveyard WHY NOT.
Oh it's from IIDX... So bad.
Curisu
液 神图

Edit:= =stress 我没说不map啊
我map延长版? 短的好了 长的无力

ps:歌名是Hanafubuki ~IIDX LIMITED~
JauiPlaY
喲~
一些建議:

[General]
保護環境,從我做起請自覺清理osb文件
如果萌妹要做gd記得在tags里面加上yangzd88

[Beginner]
00:10:465(T) - 這綠線有用...?
00:13:265(2) - 結尾需要個nc1的finish
00:24:065(3,1) - 干脆改成3次折返吧...感覺這樣新人miss的幾率還小些
01:14:465(1,2) - 建議改為2個1次折返的slider
01:17:665(2) - 需要個nc1的finish
01:27:965(T) - 這綠線有用...?
01:28:065(3,1) - 同00:24:065(3,1)
01:30:065(4,1) - 我覺得后面那slider沒必要啊...把(4)改成一個slider,結尾放在現在(1)開始的地方吧

[Normal]
00:13:665(5) - 同beginner
01:15:465(3) - 這里需要個sc2的clap
01:16:865(3,4) - 3需要sc1的clap而4不需要,正好反了XD
01:17:665(5) - 同beginner
01:18:665(1,1) - 耶?我覺得不用new combo吧
01:23:665(4) - sc1的clap
結尾和beginner是一樣的建議
和beginner一樣的地方多了2根綠線

[Hyper]
00:05:665(1) - 如果我是MAT我可能會戳泡哦~
00:11:965(2,3) - 我覺得這兩個note不用clap,可是去掉clap音量又太小...嘛看著辦吧(拖
00:13:265(1) - 結尾同beginner
00:19:265(4) - 結尾需要個nc1的clap
00:20:265(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 創意不錯,但這看上去太別扭了...
01:03:965(2) - 沒音效的話不如去掉...
01:04:465(3) - ^
01:17:865(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 比之前那個好些,但看上去還是擠...把間距拉開點會好看一些吧?
01:17:265(2) - 結尾同beginner
01:28:465(2) - 開頭需要個nc1的finish
01:28:865(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 索性(1)(3)(5)(7)也加nc1的finish?
結尾還是一樣的建議~
01:27:965的綠線貌似也沒用處吧?

[Hyper Extended]
前面居然是一樣的...嘛我也不太清楚這樣能不能rank,不過這很酷啊XD
于是前面就還是跳過好了~
02:20:665(T) - 這條綠線有用...?
02:59:665(3) - 結尾需要個nc1的finish
結尾仍然是一樣的建議~

音效下了很大功夫,不過說實話我覺得這歌不好...實在是感覺有點可惜啊
加油!
so
star~
Topic Starter
Cirno
Reply

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]
保護環境,從我做起請自覺清理osb文件 有机会full submit的时候弄掉吧
如果萌妹要做gd記得在tags里面加上yangzd88 鬼知道萌妹是不是坑了...

[Beginner]
00:10:465(T) - 這綠線有用...? deleted
00:13:265(2) - 結尾需要個nc1的finish ok
00:24:065(3,1) - 干脆改成3次折返吧...感覺這樣新人miss的幾率還小些 感觉这里缺了音挺不舒服的 暂且先不动...
01:14:465(1,2) - 建議改為2個1次折返的slider ok
01:17:665(2) - 需要個nc1的finish ok
01:27:965(T) - 這綠線有用...? deleted
01:28:065(3,1) - 同00:24:065(3,1) 同,暂时不动
01:30:065(4,1) - 我覺得后面那slider沒必要啊...把(4)改成一個slider,結尾放在現在(1)開始的地方吧 乐器到01:30:865才完全结束的 所以我想hold到那里

[Normal]
00:13:665(5) - 同beginner ok
01:15:465(3) - 這里需要個sc2的clap ok
01:16:865(3,4) - 3需要sc1的clap而4不需要,正好反了XD I don't really think so...
01:17:665(5) - 同beginner ok
01:18:665(1,1) - 耶?我覺得不用new combo吧 去掉了第二个
01:23:665(4) - sc1的clap 我不是很确信s1clap更好 暂时先不动了...
結尾和beginner是一樣的建議
和beginner一樣的地方多了2根綠線 线已删 结尾一样是没改,抱歉

[Hyper]
00:05:665(1) - 如果我是MAT我可能會戳泡哦~ Clam*4 改日再改...
00:11:965(2,3) - 我覺得這兩個note不用clap,可是去掉clap音量又太小...嘛看著辦吧(拖 我跟bgm下的这三个clap...
00:13:265(1) - 結尾同beginner ok
00:19:265(4) - 結尾需要個nc1的clap ok
00:20:265(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 創意不錯,但這看上去太別扭了... 如果你可以示例一下什么是不别扭会更好 暂时没梗改日再说
01:03:965(2) - 沒音效的話不如去掉...
01:04:465(3) - ^
NC1的hitnormal不是没音效 是有一点低音的
01:17:865(1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 比之前那個好些,但看上去還是擠...把間距拉開點會好看一些吧? 略微拉开了些
01:17:265(2) - 結尾同beginner ok
01:28:465(2) - 開頭需要個nc1的finish ok
01:28:865(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 索性(1)(3)(5)(7)也加nc1的finish? ok
結尾還是一樣的建議~ 还是不变,抱歉
01:27:965的綠線貌似也沒用處吧? deleted

[Hyper Extended]
前面居然是一樣的...嘛我也不太清楚這樣能不能rank,不過這很酷啊XD
于是前面就還是跳過好了~ XD
02:20:665(T) - 這條綠線有用...? 没有,deleted
02:59:665(3) - 結尾需要個nc1的finish ok
結尾仍然是一樣的建議~ still no, sorry

音效下了很大功夫,不過說實話我覺得這歌不好...實在是感覺有點可惜啊
加油!
so
star~
Thanks~
litmus_old
GOOD! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Curisu
怒填坑
为什么object比你h少

Download: S.S.D.Fantasica - Hanafubuki (Cirno) [Another].osu

edit:困 怒睡 中午起来填音效
Topic Starter
Cirno

yangzd88 wrote:

怒填坑
为什么object比你h少

[attachment=0:44794]S.S.D.Fantasica - Hanafubuki (Cirno) [Another].osu[/attachment:44794]

edit:困 怒睡 中午起来填音效
moegirlyz is always so moe
Topic Starter
Cirno
This map is finished now. Well..Yeah.. do whatever you like with it.
Curisu
Topic Starter
Cirno

yangzd88 wrote:

.
sdfjhiuvnsfmoegirlyzsomoesdffbgtrgdsupdatedsdfdsgb

edit: kdstars for moegirlyz's diff because it's moe
Breeze

General

  1. Turn off countdown of [Another] diff., so does letterbox
  2. Add yangzd88 as tag to [Another] diff.
  3. Are you sure only use custom note color in [Another] diff.?
  4. I'm not sure whether it's needed to map at least 2 diff. for a mp3 while useing 2 mp3 file, will give a answer here after I ask some other MATs and BATs

Hyper

  1. 00:02:065 (2) - Strange spacing here
  2. 00:05:665 (1) - ...The end of this slider, I think it's unrankable
  3. 00:12:865 (2) - Spacing too close IMO, might misread to 1/4 beat space
  4. 01:16:865 (2) - ^

Hyper Extended

  1. HP Drain Rate-1? I feel HP drained too fast, especially when slow down, it's easily failed if you miss some notes
    First part is same to Hyper so...
  2. 00:02:065 (2) - Strange spacing here
  3. 00:05:665 (1) - ...The end of this slider, I think it's unrankable
  4. 00:12:865 (2) - Spacing too close IMO, might misread to 1/4 beat space
  5. 01:16:865 (2) - ^
    Same mod /w\

Another

  1. 01:20:865 (1) - Slider path hidden by previous note, when you get 300, it's kinda hart to see this is a slider

Very fun map, and nice custom hitsound use
2 star for you
Topic Starter
Cirno

Breeze wrote:

General

  1. Turn off countdown of [Another] diff., so does letterbox
  2. Add yangzd88 as tag to [Another] diff.
    Trivia issues fixed for moegirlyz
  3. Are you sure only use custom note color in [Another] diff.?
    copied to other diffs
  4. I'm not sure whether it's needed to map at least 2 diff. for a mp3 while useing 2 mp3 file, will give a answer here after I ask some other MATs and BATs

Hyper

  1. 00:02:065 (2) - Strange spacing here
  2. 00:05:665 (1) - ...The end of this slider, I think it's unrankable
    Fixed these two
  3. 00:12:865 (2) - Spacing too close IMO, might misread to 1/4 beat space
  4. 01:16:865 (2) - ^
    Thanks for mentioning, will fix if others say so too

Hyper Extended

  1. HP Drain Rate-1? I feel HP drained too fast, especially when slow down, it's easily failed if you miss some notes
    -1ed for both [Hyper] and [Hyper Extended] ([Hyper] somehow went 4.5 stars but I don't think that's much of a problem...
    First part is same to Hyper so...
  2. 00:02:065 (2) - Strange spacing here
  3. 00:05:665 (1) - ...The end of this slider, I think it's unrankable
  4. 00:12:865 (2) - Spacing too close IMO, might misread to 1/4 beat space
  5. 01:16:865 (2) - ^
    Same mod /w\
    Mods are only for the first part so synced with [Hyper]
Very fun map, and nice custom hitsound use
2 star for you
Thanks for modding, updated. Will update again after moegirlyz sees the mod
Breeze
问了下其他MAT和BAT
你这种情况以前真没见过
只有一个难度用full ver., 建议是要么都做成full ver. 要么就都只是short ver.
那唯一一个full ver.的前半部分还跟hyper一模一样...
或者把那个难度上传到网盘然后放creator's word里
Topic Starter
Cirno

Breeze wrote:

问了下其他MAT和BAT
你这种情况以前真没见过
只有一个难度用full ver., 建议是要么都做成full ver. 要么就都只是short ver.
那唯一一个full ver.的前半部分还跟hyper一模一样...
或者把那个难度上传到网盘然后放creator's word里
谢谢建议

全full恐怕我map不出来orz 不过没有什么event触发的话我还是想尽量保证图的完整w,所以暂时还是做不到删难度
关于上传那个难度到网盘 该怎么做关于osz2的对策?变成只有一个文件的话恐怕就没办法按原来的办法解决了
...嘛说到底到最后也大半rank不成

总之多谢mod和建议
Curisu
Download: S.S.D.Fantasica - Hanafubuki (Cirno) [Another].osu

= =挪的位置很蛋疼
BinJip
[Beginner]

HP+3
OD+2
00:02:065 (3) - NC
00:03:665 (5) - remove NC
00:04:065 (1) - NC
00:08:465 (3) - remove NC
00:08:865 (1) - NC
00:59:665 (3) - remove NC
01:00:065 (1) - NC
01:16:065 (3) - NC
01:16:465 (1) - remove NC



[Normal]
HP+1
AR-1
OD+1
00:56:865 (1) - remove NC
00:57:065 (2) - NC

[Hyper Extended]

OD+1
00:31:265 (1) - remove NC
00:31:465 (2) - NC


[Hyper]

HP+2
AR-1
OD+1


[Another]

HP+1
OD+2


Good hitsound!!

star~
Topic Starter
Cirno

BinJip wrote:

[Beginner]

HP+3
OD+2
I love Star Rating System...
00:02:065 (3) - NC
00:03:665 (5) - remove NC
00:04:065 (1) - NC
00:08:465 (3) - remove NC
00:08:865 (1) - NC
Did some with my own judgements
00:59:665 (3) - remove NC
01:00:065 (1) - NC
probably not
01:16:065 (3) - NC
01:16:465 (1) - remove NC
ok for this 2



[Normal]
HP+1
AR-1
OD+1
I can't see point in doing this, sorry
00:56:865 (1) - remove NC
00:57:065 (2) - NC
I don't think so o.o

[Hyper Extended]

OD+1
00:31:265 (1) - remove NC
00:31:465 (2) - NC
imo the settings are good as it is, sorry...
Good hitsound!!

star~
Thanks~
Kanari
Haii~
You requested in my queue~

Beginner
-00:56:465 (x) - Add note?

[Normal]
-Well mapped~

[Hyper]
-00:01:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
-00:02:065 (5) - New combo? (If you do that^)

[Hyper Extended]
-00:01:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
-00:02:065 (5) - New combo? (If you do that^)
-01:43:265 (3) - Slider should end at 01:43:665.
-01:43:865 (x) - Add note.

[Another]
-00:04:665 (x) - Add note.
-01:05:665 (x) - ^

Mostly suggestions~
Topic Starter
Cirno

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii~
You requested in my queue~

Beginner
-00:56:465 (x) - Add note?ok

[Normal]
-Well mapped~

[Hyper]
-00:01:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
-00:02:065 (5) - New combo? (If you do that^)
um maybe not, since consistent colors look better imo

[Hyper Extended]
-00:01:865 (1) - Remove new combo?
-00:02:065 (5) - New combo? (If you do that^)
um maybe not, since consistent colors look better imo
-01:43:265 (3) - Slider should end at 01:43:665.
-01:43:865 (x) - Add note.
no, I'm mapping right I think. maybe you should try listening carefully in 25%

[Another]
-00:04:665 (x) - Add note.
-01:05:665 (x) - ^
moe girl yz doesn't want to change this o.o sorry

Mostly suggestions~
thanks anyway
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Beginner]
3.02??
you need to make this diff easier
01:15:265 (2) - confusing for easy user?

[Normal]
little hard
fine

[Extend Hyper]
some stream confusing me, but no problem :D short ver. too :D

[Another]
00:18:064 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:565 (2) - add new combo
Topic Starter
Cirno

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

[Beginner]
3.02??
you need to make this diff easier Andrea says to me that around 3 should be fine rankable.
01:15:265 (2) - confusing for easy user? extended for 1 repeat, I think it's not confusing now.

[Normal]
little hard
fine

[Extend Hyper]
some stream confusing me, but no problem :D short ver. too :D they're intentionally made a bit confusing XD

[Another]
00:18:064 (1) - remove new combo
00:18:565 (2) - add new combo
sorry but I can't find problem from moegirlyz's combo colors >_>
thanks for modding~
NatsumeRin
The hitsounds made me impressed.

Edit: some little irc thing don't worth kud.

Bubbled.
GigaClon
Hyper-
00:17:065 (1) - this is one of several places where the 300's cover up upcoming notes and makes it hard to read.

Beginner-
Change the difficulty name cause 3 stars is not a beginner map. Also lose the break a 90 sec song doesn't need it.

Also change the preview music to 11:800 cause the current preview starts in the middle of the word and sounds weird
Topic Starter
Cirno

GigaClon wrote:

Hyper-
00:17:065 (1) - this is one of several places where the 300's cover up upcoming notes and makes it hard to read.
Come on, this is a [Hyper]. I mean, did you ever play any [Hard]s [Insane]s and such? Go get at least 8000 plays before you talk about maps, that helps you understand maps better, I mean it. I'm being helpful to your mapping, give me kds plz.

Beginner-
Change the difficulty name cause 3 stars is not a beginner map. Also lose the break a 90 sec song doesn't need it.
Everyone knows the star rating system is not even remotely accurate, especially on short songs. All I care is that this diff is easy enough for beginners and it fits the ranking criteria, that's enough. The break huh, the song might not need it but beginners sure do.

Also change the preview music to 11:800 cause the current preview starts in the middle of the word and sounds weird
I'm setting it according to the instruments.
Thanks for trying anyway. I might sound a bit harsh, sorry about that if I had mistaken you for someone else.
GigaClon
If someone can't play for more than 30 secs, They aren't going to pretty much any song out there. The Break is jarring and ugly, if you want you can map that section easier as a break. Just saying. All im saying it sounds weird to have a preview start in the middle of a word, I have been playing rhythm games for a decade and have never heard a preview sound start in the middle of a word. The Voice is an instrument too.

Also Love the background.
Crimmi
Sorry to ruin your bubble, but i was checking out your map and you're missing a couple few things there:

Artist: "S.S.D.FANTASICA feat. Yuuko"
the title should be: "Hanafubuki ~ IIDX LIMITED ~"

And if you don't believe me, this IIDX wiki will tell you.

probably you should make the "B" in "Beatmania" lower case.

and it wouldn't hurt to add 14 GOLD to the tags as well.

overall, the map is awesome. I'm surprised that NatsumeRin missed this
Muya

Crimmi wrote:

Artist: "S.S.D.FANTASICA feat. Yuuko"
You are wrong



Artist: S.S.D.FANTASICA feat.ユッコ
"ユッコ" is "Yukko"

Artist should be "S.S.D.FANTASICA feat. Yukko"
Crimmi

Muya wrote:

Crimmi wrote:

Artist: "S.S.D.FANTASICA feat. Yuuko"
You are wrong



Artist: S.S.D.FANTASICA feat.ユッコ
"ユッコ" is "Yukko"

Artist should be "S.S.D.FANTASICA feat. Yukko"
ah, lol i misspelled it.
Topic Starter
Cirno
Artist -> S.S.D.FANTASICA feat. Yukko
This is fine for me, but we have http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3912 , is the inconsistency fine? Holding this back until I get an answer, will update this and tags stuff after I'm informed, since I don't like uploading 2 times.

For the title, I am aware from the beginning that the IIDX version (short, used in [B][S][H][A]) is called 花吹雪 ~ IIDX LIMITED ~, but the OST full version (used in [H E]) is called 花吹雪 ~ 香にたゆたう愛の唄 ~, so I took the common part "Hanafubuki". Not sure about this.

k
Faust
>>> VJARMY

A previous map has an error and you intend to bring that up so as to keep that very same mistake for little to no reason, unless for consistency?
Actually there's not even a need to discuss this when you can look up official records and listings of this song.
It is really not a reason to be holding back on what needs to be corrected.

See, you already know it's been specifically listed as "花吹雪 ~ IIDX LIMITED ~"

Just make these changes and your re-bubble should come as it should. Hope I don't sound too imposing here. I edited this post 3 times already !
Topic Starter
Cirno
lol seems you have mistaken me. I was sincerely asking questions to avoid a second full upload, since my network is freaking slow.
Anyway you answered my questions so there should be no problems now.
@Crimmi you've got your pop, get a party.
Faust
I did at first, but then I kept editing as it became clearer to me.

Do apologize about the tone of my response. Was kind of weary at the time.
Crimmi

Cirno wrote:

@Crimmi you've got your pop, get a party.
Umm, was just merely pointing that the Artist & Title was wrong, that's all. No need to think that I did this intentionally dude. >.<
Topic Starter
Cirno

Crimmi wrote:

Cirno wrote:

@Crimmi you've got your pop, get a party.
Umm, was just merely pointing that the Artist & Title was wrong, that's all. No need to think that I did this intentionally dude. >.<
It's over, no need posting over this anymore.
Or did you post just to get my 呵呵 nvm
Faust
I always perceived Cirno as a female.

And no, I don't always think people with girly usernames as female. :roll:

Really !
Topic Starter
Cirno

Faust wrote:

I always perceived Cirno as a female.

And no, I don't always think people with girly usernames as female. :roll:

Really !
:roll:
bomber34
[General]
- add Curisu to tags because yangzd88 changed name

[Easy]
  1. not much to complain about. I am just unsure with some thinks like
    - 00:24:065 (3,1) - I am really not sure about this one xD might be hard for a beginner
    - 01:14:465 (1,2,1) - a bit harder than ^ . I just don't like in general different slider repeat counts in the same combo for Easy's. I found that confusing as a beginner
    - 01:28:065 (3,1) - same as first one
  2. 00:42:465 (1,2) - I don't like the flow between this two. (2) should be more diagonal down to (1) . I like (2) on the postion X: 408 Y: 168 . The question is what you do with (3) then
  3. 00:56:465 (2,3) - I think this overlap can be done better
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:865 (4) - why not a symmetrical pattern like it seems suggested by 00:05:665 (1,2,3,4) - (4) on X: 332 Y: 116 if you like
  2. 01:25:865 (1) - abit higher on the grid please ... feels more natural then for the flow
[Hyper]
  1. A bit to much a jump in diff spread from normal ... but oh well hypers are known for being really hard
  2. 00:00:865 (3) - This sliderend sounds just wrong. Either use a soft hitsound without any hitsound or make slider 1/2 longer
  3. 00:03:465 (2,3,4) - These jumps are a bit to far for my taste. Lower distance a tiny bit. Maybe 4.0x DS ?
  4. 00:05:665 (1) - lol at these slider anchor points
  5. 00:12:665 (1,2) - that plays not so fine :( same goes for 01:16:665 (1,2) - ... just increase spacing or so. plays like 1/4 rather than 1/2 :(
  6. 00:22:865 (3) - dunno. hard to see, because of hitbursts. On the other side the map already suggest that there must be a note there similar to other spots in this diff
[Another]
  1. I know why you start at 00:01:465 (1) - but it is still really weird ... orz
  2. can't find anything bad really. I would just like to see a KIAI time like in the other diffs. And maybe adding Guest mappers name to diff name. I know it is fine to just mention it in the thread but still ^^ (at least write in the thread the new name of yangzd88
[Hyper's Extended]
  1. to be honest. I see no real reason for an Extended version just for one diff. But oh well i mod it anyway
  2. same suggestion for this one like on hyper- only mod "new" part
  3. 01:49:065 - add 1/2 , 01:49:065 - 01:49:265 - , 01:49:465 - keep the stack and lower volume for each note :3 that would be awesome
  4. 02:31:865 (1) - unfair. previous stream is quite fast and then this super slow slider :(
yep really cool map. Should be ranked :(
Hope you like some suggestions. Good Luck
Topic Starter
Cirno

bomber34 wrote:

[General]
- add Curisu to tags because yangzd88 changed name Done

[Easy]
  1. not much to complain about. I am just unsure with some thinks like
    - 00:24:065 (3,1) - I am really not sure about this one xD might be hard for a beginner
    - 01:14:465 (1,2,1) - a bit harder than ^ . I just don't like in general different slider repeat counts in the same combo for Easy's. I found that confusing as a beginner Changed this
    - 01:28:065 (3,1) - same as first one
  2. 00:42:465 (1,2) - I don't like the flow between this two. (2) should be more diagonal down to (1) . I like (2) on the postion X: 408 Y: 168 . The question is what you do with (3) then I think the flow is pretty well as it is, with 1's slider end point at 2
  3. 00:56:465 (2,3) - I think this overlap can be done better Made a rotation so that it does not overlap.
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:865 (4) - why not a symmetrical pattern like it seems suggested by 00:05:665 (1,2,3,4) - (4) on X: 332 Y: 116 if you like nice
  2. 01:25:865 (1) - abit higher on the grid please ... feels more natural then for the flow ok
[Hyper]
  1. A bit to much a jump in diff spread from normal ... but oh well hypers are known for being really hard
  2. 00:00:865 (3) - This sliderend sounds just wrong. Either use a soft hitsound without any hitsound or make slider 1/2 longer I think it's pretty good...
  3. 00:03:465 (2,3,4) - These jumps are a bit to far for my taste. Lower distance a tiny bit. Maybe 4.0x DS ? 4.0 looks too clamped to me
  4. 00:05:665 (1) - lol at these slider anchor points Cleaned up
  5. 00:12:665 (1,2) - that plays not so fine :( same goes for 01:16:665 (1,2) - ... just increase spacing or so. plays like 1/4 rather than 1/2 :( This is an intentional slowdown following 00:11:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
  6. 00:22:865 (3) - dunno. hard to see, because of hitbursts. On the other side the map already suggest that there must be a note there similar to other spots in this diff I would say it's predictable = =
[Another]
  1. I know why you start at 00:01:465 (1) - but it is still really weird ... orz
  2. can't find anything bad really. I would just like to see a KIAI time like in the other diffs. And maybe adding Guest mappers name to diff name. I know it is fine to just mention it in the thread but still ^^ (at least write in the thread the new name of yangzd88 done
[Hyper's Extended]
  1. to be honest. I see no real reason for an Extended version just for one diff. But oh well i mod it anyway
  2. same suggestion for this one like on hyper- only mod "new" part
  3. 01:49:065 - add 1/2 , 01:49:065 - 01:49:265 - , 01:49:465 - keep the stack and lower volume for each note :3 that would be awesome good
  4. 02:31:865 (1) - unfair. previous stream is quite fast and then this super slow slider :( it fits the music I think
yep really cool map. Should be ranked :(
Hope you like some suggestions. Good Luck
thanks
Curisu
卧槽你要回来搞这个了?
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Snowy Dream
:3 哇 好⑨没有看到你出新图了
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Melophobia
[General]
You might as well add a silenced soft-sliderslide.

[Another]
Awesome!

[Hyper]
00:05:665 (1) - How about rearranging the rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/46tcP.jpg
00:13:165 - Add a note here?
00:20:065 (6) - Considering your newcombo usage i think this note can have a newcombo too.
00:32:265 (3) - A newcombo here would be nice and the pattern will look better imo.
00:42:465 (1) - This one flows better imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/938537
01:03:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Why not respect its own rhythm? http://puu.sh/46sfU.jpg
01:11:265 (3) - Something like finish would be nice here.
01:28:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Can be intenser like you did in extended ver. This section is the last so should be more interesting imo. Honestly the current one is boring imo.
01:30:265 (1) - Feels better if this finish is removed. The echoed sound isn't that suitable for the end of this difficulty imo.

[Normal]
00:04:065 (3,4) - Should be more curved considering how 00:02:465 (3) - is shaped.
00:13:665 (5) - Considering 00:15:265 (1,2) - , the newcombo should be here.
00:38:065 (3) - Removing this note feels better to me.
00:42:265 - Add a note here?

[Beginner]
00:10:065 (4) - I'm not really asking you to fix this up, because it'd be too tough for you. But I don't think it's a good idea to follow the heavy beat with a slider end. I want them to be clickable. So please keep in mind that it'd be better to use slider beginning or just a circle for that.
00:24:065 (3) - This kick slider isn't suitable for the easiest diff imo because beginners cannot expect how long the slider lasts for. I think it wouldnt hurt anything to reduce one repeat.
00:44:065 (3) - This long slider makes your hitsounds inconstant. Consider replacing it with shorter ones.
00:55:265 (1) - The vocal is stressed so i think you can emphasize it as well by using circles.
01:01:665 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
Cirno

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
You might as well add a silenced soft-sliderslide.
ok

[Hyper]
00:05:665 (1) - How about rearranging the rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/46tcP.jpg
Sorry but I hear no 16ths here 0.0
00:13:165 - Add a note here?
00:20:065 (6) - Considering your newcombo usage i think this note can have a newcombo too.
00:32:265 (3) - A newcombo here would be nice and the pattern will look better imo.
ok for all
00:42:465 (1) - This one flows better imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/938537 ok
01:03:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Why not respect its own rhythm? http://puu.sh/46sfU.jpg the current one sounds good enough to me
01:11:265 (3) - Something like finish would be nice here. ok
01:28:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Can be intenser like you did in extended ver. This section is the last so should be more interesting imo. Honestly the current one is boring imo.let me think over.
01:30:265 (1) - Feels better if this finish is removed. The echoed sound isn't that suitable for the end of this difficulty imo. ok

[Normal]
00:04:065 (3,4) - Should be more curved considering how 00:02:465 (3) - is shaped.
00:13:665 (5) - Considering 00:15:265 (1,2) - , the newcombo should be here.
00:38:065 (3) - Removing this note feels better to me.
00:42:265 - Add a note here?
ok for all

[Beginner]
00:10:065 (4) - I'm not really asking you to fix this up, because it'd be too tough for you. But I don't think it's a good idea to follow the heavy beat with a slider end. I want them to be clickable. So please keep in mind that it'd be better to use slider beginning or just a circle for that. Ok, I see.
00:24:065 (3) - This kick slider isn't suitable for the easiest diff imo because beginners cannot expect how long the slider lasts for. I think it wouldnt hurt anything to reduce one repeat.
00:44:065 (3) - This long slider makes your hitsounds inconstant. Consider replacing it with shorter ones.
00:55:265 (1) - The vocal is stressed so i think you can emphasize it as well by using circles.
01:01:665 (1) - ^
ok for all
thanks
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