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Jesqurt - Super Mario 64 Yahoo Remix (NES Style)

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Artemus_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 14. September 2012 at 22:32:25

Artist: Jesqurt
Title: Super Mario 64 Yahoo Remix (NES Style)
Source: Newgrounds
Tags: POWN P0WN Luigi Bowser Nintendo
BPM: 186,54
Filesize: 19195kb
Play Time: 01:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,35 stars, 33 notes)
  2. Hard (4,4 stars, 93 notes)
  3. Insane (4,92 stars, 136 notes)
  4. Normal (3,17 stars, 76 notes)
  5. Ozzy's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 461 notes)
  6. Taiko Oni (5 stars, 402 notes)
Download: Jesqurt - Super Mario 64 Yahoo Remix (NES Style)
Download: Jesqurt - Super Mario 64 Yahoo Remix (NES Style) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map. Modding and help supported =D.
13/08 Finished BG; feel free to criticize it because I'm terrible at designing pictures!
15/08 Finished BG. WAIT! I re-designed it! (Re-download, please.)
18/09 Added Easy.
23/09 Added Hard =).
15/10 Remapped Insane!
15/10 Added Ozzy's Taiko Oni, made by OzzyOzrock BTW...
Now in pending.
27/10 Added some custom textures~.
13/07 Showing a sign of life...Stupid school :(
Last necessary redownload: 21/11
Elly-chan
Don't forget to get that background image~
Preview point!!
No Kiai's In normal. Add or remove from hard.
DIFFERENT BPM'S IN EACH DIFF. Fix this!!

(Normal)
HP +1? OD -1? AR +1?

00:19:256 - Make the note in the middle of the 'stream' the top of the stream.
00:21:829 - SPACING? Very confusing.
00:50:778 - Add a note?

00:11:537 - New Combo
00:21:829 - New Combo
00:22:473 - Remove New Combo
00:42:415 - New Combo
01:05:086 - New Combo
01:05:729 - Remove New Combo

(Hard)
Too Lazy!


Yawn~
Andruchon
[General]
*look at the ai-mode...you can find it here : http://puu.sh/45Tu there you can avoid wrong spacing, too long combos and other important
issues
*spacing
*can it be, maybe snap divisor 1/3 :/ i don't know, because i never used it...but ask on the irc or the forums...
*preview point isn't set...w8...at normal it isn't set...the preview point must be the same at all diff's!
*no bg-image
*make sure that the slinders end, where they should. and if you dont know what to do at some points...dont just make a slider or a stream so you dont need to do anything >.<

[normal]
00:08:964 (1) - weird slider...try something like that: http://puu.sh/45Vu
after 00:12:823 (3) - try to make something like this: http://puu.sh/45TW
00:21:829 (1,2) - try something different the slider is outrythm
00:26:976 (1) - out rythm http://puu.sh/45UV is much better
00:28:262 (1) - the spinner dont fit that part
00:37:268 (1) - remove the slider and make something creative...
00:44:988 (1) - spinner end at 00:46:918
00:47:561 (1) - add a slider to the white tick
00:48:526 (2) - add a circle
00:52:707 (10) - to 01:07:671 (6) - very odd part...at least every beat out-rythm...ignoring spacing, making sliders at the parts where you had no ideas what to do...
01:02:518 - why kiai time? 1/2 of it is at a spinner !


[hard]
00:10:250 (1) - remove spinner, make something like that http://puu.sh/45XC
00:16:683 (1) to 00:18:935 (1) - confusing part, note the spacing!
00:24:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - spacing?
00:30:353 (9,10,11) - what is that o_O
00:34:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - very confusing...at some parts note the spacing
00:39:842 (1) - make something different
00:47:883 (2) - ^
00:51:421 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confusing....spacing
00:51:421 to 01:08:629 -^
remap the confusing parts :/
OzzyOzrock
[General]
BPM looks unrealistic.

You will need a better spread. (Normal, Hard)
[Easy]
00:11:537 (1) - Try not to jump on an easy.
00:15:396 (1) - Or have small repeat sliders like this.

00:40:485 (1) - Don't put this under the M slider. Speaking of which.

160,256,37268,6,0,B|208:120|208:120|256:246|256:246|304:120|304:120|352:256,1,560
Looks better, then just put it in a better place.
To replace code, just delete the slider, leave with save, open the .osu! and paste that below the [HitObjects] part.

00:48:526 (3) - No new combo needed here.
00:50:134 (7) - Here, yes though.
00:54:637 (1) - Not a new combo here...
00:55:281 (2) - But here..

Generally, keep new combos on the downbeats. Or big white ticks, as they're usually called and depicted as.

00:57:693 (1) - Delete this slider,
00:57:854 - And put a note here instead. Better yet, make it a slider, though you'll need to remove (2) of course.

01:00:588 (1) - Now notes are on red beats? Confusing... why? If it's the BPM, fix it.
[Invisible]
Well this generally looks sloppy but not too bad.

I'd recommend a higher slider velocity instead of so many circles used lol. Then you could have flow.
Anyways, try looking at recent insanes. You're rather close to it, but just a bit off.

Try not to make it confusing, like weird stacks on on streams like 01:07:664 (11,1,2,3) - just looks bad and weird.
Basically, a makority of this simply lacks flow.

01:09:272 (1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - Combo spam is bad.

BUT, not that bad a first map. Anyways, good luck. :3
Mara
So, Super Mario time, eh? I remember when I beated that first one without teleporting when I was damn young.

[General]
Delete .OSB and full submit, if you are not going to make a storyboard.
Is it just me or is this video quite big? You may want to try to encode it.
Background music in this track is from Kirby Super Star, put I guess the guy who made this didn't realize.
You need make one Easy-difficulty.

[Small]
00:23:116 (4) - This slider would look cooler if you can stack it with that previous slider.
00:24:403 (1) - Spacing. You also don't need a new combo in here.
00:48:848 (2,3,4) - One grid right. Remember to check spacing after this - it will affect to next notes.
00:52:707 (1) - Start kiai in here.
00:54:637 (1) - You don't need a new combo in here, put it in 00:55:281 instead.
01:00:588 (1,2) - These doesn't sound right.

[Invisible]
00:12:823 (4) - New combo.
00:18:613 (9) - Even though this is really symmetric - spacing.
00:36:303 (5) - This note isn't stacked with others.
00:44:345 (4) - Doesn't look so sexy. Yes. I'm serious.
00:52:707 (1) - Start kiai in here.
00:55:924 (5-9,1-5) - This kind of pattern looks so sick that I suggest you to stack them.
01:07:825 - (1,2,3) - This stacking these ones too.

There are some spacing problems, but I'll leave them for more advanced modder. If I were helpful somewhere, please reward me with some SEXY KUDOSU! OOOH!! LunaticMara's out.
eldnl
I'll check it tomorrow but, you can find a better mp3? The quality is very low, I hate it.
Also, are you sure that the timing is correct? Ask to doomsday to check it :3
~
Topic Starter
Artemus_old

eldnl wrote:

I'll check it tomorrow but, you can find a better mp3? The quality is very low, I hate it.
Well I don't think so....
This song / movie is pretty un-known and it's just a fan-made, there isn't even a valid download, I recorded it with Camtasia so how to improve the quality?
eldnl

Artemus wrote:

Well I don't think so....
This song / movie is pretty un-known and it's just a fan-made, there isn't even a valid download, I recorded it with Camtasia so how to improve the quality?
Asking to the creator of the song can be an option.

[General]

- First off, you shouldn't add timing points (red lines) to add kiai time, these points are used to bpm changes or something like this, to add a kiai time you should use a inherited section (green lines), obviously this is unrankable.
- You need a difficulty with less than 3 stars, actually your easier difficulty have 3.49 stars, very hard.

[Normal]

8 Unsnapped notes.
00:24:403 (5) You need a new combo here.
00:32:122 - Extend the spin to here.
00:40:485 (1) Don't hidden notes under the slider track, can be very confusing for beginners.
01:00:587 (1) I miss here, feels like a jump, considering the previous pattern that you following and that the song is offbeat here, I suggest to put a slider here.
01:05:733 (2,3,4,5,6) Don't make patterns like this, really, considering the AP is hard to read for beginners.

[Insane]

A quick view of this difficulty, you need a remap.
The difference between normal and this is HUGE, you need a hard.
00:18:935 (1) Hidden repeat.
00:24:242 - End the slider in the previous white tick, follow better the rhythm imo
00:36:625 (8) Hidden slider and repeat.
00:37:268 (1) Hidden repeat.

Do not try to do extreme difficulties, it is only your first map.

Far away from the rank, you need an easy and hard, also a remap of the insane difficulty.
Maybe I check it again in the future ~
Good luck !
Topic Starter
Artemus_old

eldnl wrote:

Maybe I check it again in the future ~
Hopefully.... you might tell me then why I exactly need a remap; it doesn't make sense if I try again with the same style!

eldnl wrote:

Do not try to do extreme difficulties, it is only your first map.
Yeah so what??? Remap or just delete???

So next goal will be 2 more diffs.....
eldnl

Artemus wrote:

eldnl wrote:

Maybe I check it again in the future ~
Hopefully.... you might tell me then why I exactly need a remap; it doesn't make sense if I try again with the same style!

eldnl wrote:

Do not try to do extreme difficulties, it is only your first map.
Yeah so what??? Remap or just delete???

So next goal will be 2 more diffs.....
I say remap, change the slider speed and the distance snap, some more cute xD
Also give me kudosss >:)
OzzyOzrock
AHA, well the taiko sure is fun but it's not good in a sense. Make more like this and send them to me.

Being that I've said this I guess I have to make the taiko now lol.

Download: Jesqurt - Super Mario 64 Yahoo Remix (NES Style) (Artemus) [Ozzy's Taiko Oni].osu
EDIT: Because it's too easy...

Download: Jesqurt - Super Mario 64 Yahoo Remix (NES Style) (Artemus) [Outer Tenshi].osu
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