Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember that these are all suggestions.
OKAlso, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
ThanksGeneralA third diff would be a lot better... A difficulty between these two if possible, the difficulty gap is way too high.
As a new mapper,3rd diff may be kills meI don't understand these diff names at all.
I don't understand,tooYour mp3 has a bitrate of 320 kbps... inb4 VBR
I think my mp3 is 163kbpsYour pause-back.png, pause-continue.png and pause-retry.png are too big. Scale then down to 398x116 at most. FixedOver the Light00:05:871 (1) - This slider's slide becomes suddenly loud due to the timing section that switches to Normal. See my speech after the mod for solutions. Most of your sliders have this problem.
Fixed00:43:871 (1) - The part starting here and finishing at 00:49:871 - has very loud finishes, it sounds rather bad to me.
This is OK I think 01:41:871 (1) - to 01:45:871 (1) - same comment
^02:45:871 (4,5,6) - This rhythm is very complicated... I understand your slider placement, but I think it would be better to use sliders to show the rhythm first (because it's a weird rhythm, and I doubt new players would be able to read it like this).
This follow the vocal,I think is OK03:57:871 (1) - Make a more continuous decrescendo ?
This is unnecessary,I thinkOver the StarRaise the AR. Some patterns are very confusing, and a higher AR would make them less confusing.
Low AR is for diffculty01:49:371 (4) - Very surprising slow down.
Fixed,nowcomboed02:31:996 (1) - Way too soon after the spinner.
Follow the vocal,and it is near to the spinner03:25:371 (8) - Surpising slow down.
I don't think it's very surpising03:42:621 (5,6) - This jumps is rather insane, I think you should reduce it a bit.
For diffculty03:44:621 (6,7) - Same.
^03:46:621 (6,7) - Same.
^03:48:621 (5,6) - Same.
^03:54:121 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This pattern is very confusing (because of the placement). If you don't raise the AR, at least, change this pattern's shape.
Little hard in the end is OK I think03:57:871 (8) - I don't like this note's position. Although it plays fine, the spacing is clearly fucked, as it's spaced the same way as all the others in the pattern, but the distance gap is not the same.
I like hexagon03:57:996 (1) - Make a more continuous decrescendo ?
This is unnecessary,I thinkRegarding the suddenly loud sliders, I recommend adding a custom clap (that is the regular normal hitsound), and instead of switching to the Normal sampleset every time, just choose a clap. This way, you'll be able to get rid of most timing sections - and thus of the suddenly loud sliderslide.
If you don't want to, at least add a custom normal sliderslide that will be the same as the soft one.
FixedI'm genuinely surprised. That was a rather good map for a first one. I like the effort you put into hitsounds, but PLEASE fix the sliderslide thing.
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