Just go through a quick check and no main problems found.

/me shoots a star.

Looks great, only some minor combo suggestions, feel free to ignore if you disagree~ :3

[Hard]

[Normal]
01:07:371 (4) - Maybe new combo?
01:34:871 (3) - Move the end square one grid left
01:46:996 (3) - New combo?
03:10:746 (2) - Move middle square one grid right

Look awesome, take my star<3

0.0 之前没仔细看 音效是做的不错 但是.......

可以去看看Custom音效教程相关的帖子

比如：你这里大量使用了SampleSet:normal的hit音，虽然很合，不过代价是每个节拍都加两条绿线，太浪费人参了......

正确方法是用附件的soft-hitclap.wav（这个音和SampleSet:normal的hit音一样）,放到歌曲文件夹下，然后在timing设置-Audio设置中选择“Custom 1”
回到Compose里选择要发出hit音的那个note，应用clap音效
这样就能达到你想要的效果

不知道我表达清楚没有>__< 不会复杂的中文

[hard]

高潮部分完全没加音效

其他都很好的~

star~ 会使用Custom音效的话 你会是神mapper

(●´3｀)⌒★

Fixed and thanks you all
Waiting for further modding

Oh my God

I'm not a fan of these songs ... can tell they even annoy me.. I will not be a mod ... so just a star D:

hihi~
一些建議

[General]
combo color不好看...
try this:

Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 0,47,94
Combo3 : 255,215,215
Combo4 : 0,123,183

另外這歌比較歡快,找個地方插段kiai time進去吧
還有,這首歌最低的難度也在3星以上,請降低normal難度...或者做個easy出來

[Normal]
開頭太別扭了...
01:41:871(1) - 換成折返slider. 如果這節奏你想擺circle也起碼放在幾個同節奏的slider后面,讓人習慣了這節奏再說
01:43:121(1) - remove new combo.
01:43:871(2) - new combo.
01:45:121(1), 01:45:871(2) - ^
01:46:996(1) - 位置別扭,而且為什么幾乎沒聲音...
02:51:871(2) - 出于對新人著想,少一次repeat?
03:25:871(1) - 無意義的new combo.

[Hard]
這Insane啊
沒看到什么大問題,做得不錯呢

音效很不錯的圖
so
star~

Edit:
Combo Color
KIAI Time
Diffs' Name

Thanks you all
Waiting for further modding

azu-nyaaaaan !!!! :3
/me nosebleed

[General]
00:11:871 - delete the kiai D: cannot play firework XD
02:31:871 - ^

Cannot mod this song :3
azu-nyan bg too cute :3
take the star XD

[General]
Map's good, it sure have my star.
I think you should consider to map a Normal difficulty, so it can balance the difference between Easy's slowness and Hard/Insane fastness.

[Over the Star]
02:19:871 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:21:871 (3) - New Combo.
02:36:871 (5) - Spacing.

[Over the Light]
00:01:746 (4) - New Combo.

General
Offset = -129 Delete the other red lines.

Caution: When using this offset, do not resnap notes in the Timing Setup screen. Instead use the resnap all notes option in the timing menu tab.


Over the Star



00:38:871 (4,5) - I don't quite like this stack. It plays weird. Maybe you could mess around with half stacks here. I think they play better, but slightly more difficult to hit. Specifically this rhythm
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71791

Or just space the current setup like the rest of the song and not have a stack there.

02:21:871 (3,1) - Maybe use a spinner. I'm not sure though.

03:50:621 (3,4) - I think you should delete note 3 and then place the slider where note 3 was and add a repeat. I think it simplified the beat and compliments the vocals.

03:52:621 (3,4) - Do the same with this.

Over the Light

I think the speed required to hit the 1/4th notes at 1/2th stacks outpaces the song. I really liked the 0.4 snapped 1/4th notes the most. Most of the 1/4ths were just awkward if they didn't go into a slider or stacked. I couldn't expect you to change it though.

00:04:996 (4,5) - This feels like it should be a slider to me.

I like how this plays. You don't have to change if you don't want to.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71800

00:49:371 (6,7,8,9) - Resnap to 1.2 distance snap.

01:26:746 (3) - Remove. It's empty. Reposition the notes after. It plays a lot better without.

01:36:746 (5) - I don't think this note is needed.

01:36:871 (6) - I think you should remove the repeat and add a note here 01:37:371 -

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71805

01:39:746 (1,2,3) - This throws me off beat. I find it hard to find the rhythm in this combo. I suggest spacing 01:40:121 (3) - out from the stack.

01:40:621 (4,5,6,7,8) - Stack the 1/4th notes >.< I can't find the rhythm.

01:50:121 (5,6) - This is awkward. I suggest deleting note 6 and adding 2 repeats to note 5.

01:55:371 (1) - Remove new combo

01:55:871 (3) - New combo (It goes with every other slowdown in the song)

02:07:996 - End kiai time here 02:07:871 -

02:23:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think these patterns are entirely accurate. I have trouble FCing this section.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71809

You can ignore the sliders and positions. Where the notes are on the timeline is where I think the sounds are.

02:37:121 (5,6) - Move down 1 unit (or how much the distance snap lets you.)

02:37:621 (7,1,2) - Make this look like the opposite form of the previous notes.

02:39:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Awkward and confusing. >.< (I think half notes play a lot better forward than whipping backwards after those 1/4th notes.)

02:41:996 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (Half notes play better forward than backward)

02:43:871 (1,2,3,4) - Please make them slider. This is wtf awkward to me.

02:56:996 (1,2,1,2,1) - This is not right. You can't wildly slow down like this without warning.

03:10:121 (3,4,5,6,7) - WTF...... >.<

03:42:621 (5,6) - Jump is way too large for a vocal transition that doesn't scream jump. It's just unintuitive and only here to combo break people.

03:44:621 (6,7) - ^

03:46:621 (6,7) - ^

03:48:621 (5,6) - ^



Conclusion


I'm withholding my star, because Over the Light is unneedingly awkward to me when I was hoping for a nice flowing beatmap. I'll recheck once it gets more stars and if your current patterns in the map are well accepted, then I'll star.

只打了hard,好多折回note扭得好歡樂233
space很微妙>.<
star了喵❤

NORMAL
1PCSS,节奏比较标准,排版有轻微错位现象,改不改均可.
INSANE
实在打不来,陷阱太多了...

总体感觉不错，能不能AR+1-2？
增加难度之后稍微控制总分，别再高了
能否增加HARD难度？

好图。。。可惜我渣MOD

Ayeen mod:

Major issues I found:


1. Mp3 bitrate is vbr (Not recommended). It should be in between 192kbps to 128kbps and at fixed bitrate
Quoted from "Official guidelines submission criteria" : The song audio file should also be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself - ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more

2. Offset issue: There is 2 Offset and very near to each other. Ask someone who is know better in timing about this. Im not good in timing.

3. Notes on blue tick.This is because of the timing issue, Some of the beat drop at blue tick which is not good.

4. Hitsound and not properly use inherited timing section. You put inherited time on notes, but no hitsound was on that note. Not to mention, both map didn't even heard the hitsound. This maybe because of vbr mp3 (VBR tend to have louder voloume). I didnt check thoroughly.


I give you a star for encouragement. I am sorry, I do saw some mistake in your map, but those major issues should be fixed first beforehand...

Edit:
Added skins
Changed mp3 file
etc.

@Ayeen:I don't think timing is wrong.

You didn't use my offset why? The BATs aren't going to let you use red lines like that.

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.

[Over the Star]
imo Fine~

[Over the Light]
Nice diff~ just some minor suggestions:
00:01:746 (4) - new combo?
00:08:621 (6) - new combo
00:38:871 (4) - 最后一个repeat去掉normal音 (用soft或降音量)
00:53:121 (3) - 去掉normal音 (用soft或降音量)
01:08:621 (6) - new combo
01:35:746 (1) - slider尾加normal音
01:57:371 (1,2,3,4) - 换grid4做成伪stack..? 现在这样不大好看x.x
02:05:371 (1,2,3,4) - 同理 只不过和02:03:871 (1,2,3) 共线而不是横向
02:59:371 (1,2,3,4) - 同理 只不过和02:57:871 (1,2,3) 共线而不是横向
Others fine 0.0 hexagonal distance snap streams GJ

P.S. 我觉得最好还是用peppy - Offset Wizard检查一下你的Global Offset (http://osu.ppy.sh/s/4659), 然后再检查一下timing有没有问题 = = Normal测试的时候左上Mistimed 60%+ avg 15ms early.

Star~ 新手mod不出什么东西,抱歉...

TheVileOne wrote:

You didn't use my offset why? The BATs aren't going to let you use red lines like that.

I use the -129ms offset,but when I save the map it change to -100ms automatically

star >.<

没违和的感觉.......
沙包表示打不好 反向
2 PC PASS~

※ I'm not good at English. so, no much belive me.

[over the star]
No problem. good.

[over the light]
difficult is very hard. please drop the this difficult.

00:41:746 (1) - change slider(length ~41:996). and delect '(2)'.
00:57:871 (1,2,3) - I know you to adjust with song's melody feel. but, That's rather thick. Each marks far put.
▽same too.

01:05:871 (1,2,3) - ^
01:55:871 (1,2,3) - ^
02:03:871 (1,2,3) - ^
02:57:871 (1,2,3) - ^
03:05:871 (1,2,3) - ^

01:07:371 (1,2) - Shift (1) into another place, and delect (2).
01:39:746 (1) - How about doing like this?

02:49:871 (5,6) - Spacing.

star.

star!

wcx19911123 wrote:

TheVileOne wrote:

You didn't use my offset why? The BATs aren't going to let you use red lines like that.

I use the -129ms offset,but when I save the map it change to -100ms automatically

You need to do it in the Timing Window. Use the arrow keys. If it is an even number, you need to hold alt to change it to an odd number.


You can also change it in the .osu. Just go to a timing section and change the offset to -129.

Edit:
Fixed timing issue
etc.

sorry . I'm late

General
skin:写下谁做的这个皮肤(如果是你自己做的可以无视)

Over the Star
OA/OD +1 ?
00:53:746 (1) - kiai建议从这里开始
01:51:746 (1) - ^
03:01:746 (1) - ^
02:36:871 (5) - spacing
03:20:371 (4,5) - 向上一格

Over the Light
00:01:746 (4) - new combo
00:53:746 (1) - kiai建议从这里开始
01:51:746 (1) - ^
03:01:746 (1) - ^
00:57:871 (1) - 距离感觉可以再远一点
01:05:871 (1) - ^
02:24:871 (5) - new combo
02:27:871 (5) - ^
03:02:621 (4) - ^
03:03:746 (8) - ^
03:09:371 (8) - 换成finish试试
03:12:621 (T) - 加个note?
03:18:996 (6) - new combo
03:19:746 (1) - finish试试
03:20:121 (2) - 去掉finish,不是很协调 lol
03:54:121 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 适当缩短点距离,,,

Star~

啊啊冒充专业人员来骗KD了~~

Normal

00:37:371 - add combo?虽然没vocal但是停顿一下有点不舒服。。

01:27:371 - 同上 还有01:37:371个人感觉。。

01:46:996 (1) - 换成finish？

02:21:871 (3) - 换个长slider？间隔太长了

嘛这图做的很不错啊~其实也MOD不出什么东西~以上个人见解。。


Over the Light

首先觉得AR+1会更爽点吧。毕竟是hard 整个图的节奏感下来了

01:36:371 (4) - 这个slider。。偶数连打slider容易让人MISS(好吧我承认我miss了) 把slider去掉中间空一格？这样好读

01:49:371 (4) - 减速来的有点突然，稍微弯曲点slider？

02:56:996 (6) - New combo

水平不高MOD不出来什么= =star~

- It would be a lot easier if you mixed soft+normal custom hitsounds together rather than NSNSNSNSNS (I didn't say it bad though)
- Set BPM to 240.000 and reduce slider velocity a half.
- Don't forget to check hitsounds again, just for sure you didn't miss something.


~Over the Star~
03:57:871 (1) - end on 04:01:537 (1/3 snap) this is optional

~Over the Light~
02:29:871 (1,1) - too sudden, not a good idea =.= (change or not, ↑2U)
03:57:996 (1) - end on 04:01:537 (1/3 snap) this is optional
TIMING 48,871 - remove
TIMING 85,371 - remove


+Star

Star

hello~ (mod4modSerebro - Let's Hold Hands)

Offset can not be -129 О_о

Offset: 1342

Kiai Mod

all sections of Kiai should be moved to the big white ticks

[Over the Star]

00:01:746 (2) - new combo
01:43:121 (1) - remove the new combo
01:43:871 (2) - new combo
01:45:121 (1) - remove the new combo
01:45:871 (2) - new combo
01:46:996 (1) - remove the new combo
01:48:371 (3) - new combo
01:49:371 (1) - remove the new combo
02:35:871 (4,5) - spacing

ok..nice~

hi sorry for the delay

[General]
- next time you should use custom hitsounds instead of a massive amount of timing sections, it'll be easier to maintain in case there's a timing change

[Over the Star]
01:01:746 (1) - unstack this, it's on 1/4 stacking this will make it hard to read
02:29:871 (T) - a weird place for kiai fountain, the section after this is not cheerful or energetic enough to put a fountain before it
02:29:871 (1) - add finish please
02:38:871 (3) - lengthen this 1/4 beat then remove the repeat, it'll sound better imo
03:36:871 (3) - ^

[Over the Light]
00:49:246 (5) - remove this, better follow the "la la la" in the song then putting random 1/4 note
00:52:871 (4,5,6,7,8) - ah too random, try mix in some slider to make it sync with the vocal something like this http://puu.sh/1rFj
01:26:621 (2,3,4) - hmmmm I'm not very sure with these even though it's spacing is technically correct :?
01:49:371 (4) - please no, it's visually have the same length as the previous sliders and to make it worse the slider tick is not there to help player notice the speed change
02:07:371 (10) - this is much better cause there aren't any slider with the same length before this
03:23:746 (4) - might as well stack this to the previous tacked notes
03:25:371 (8) - same as 01:49:371 (4)
the triple and streams in the last part is kinda over-killing with the big spacing but because this is Insane I guess it's fine

That's all, sorry for the sloppy modding I don't feel good atm :(
nice map and Good Luck
Star

Okay, let's go

[Over the Star]

01:01:746 (1) - finish
02:03:871 (1) - ^

[Over the Light]

00:09:871 (10) - new combo
01:09:871 (10) - ^
01:33:871 (1) - finish
01:37:746 (1) - ^
02:53:746 (2) - ^
03:03:746 (2) - ^
03:07:746 (4) - ^
03:08:371 (5) - remove finish
03:11:746 (1) - finish
03:15:746 (4) - ^
03:57:871 (8) - new combo

Gooood! Good luck and star~

~Over The Star~
Meh, I didn't really see any problems.

~Over The Light~
DISCLAIMER: I'm not super experienced with mapping and the like, so I'm not always sure what constitutes a good insane. So I may hate on something that Insanes are allowed to do that other difficulties aren't.

01:41:871 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know... something about this entire section gets on my nerves... It just doesn't seem very polished... You might want to consider moving the notes so that they look a little... better.

03:06:871 (3,1) - This jump just comes out of nowhere and feels kind of unfair, especially since 02:58:871 (3,1) - leads directly to the triple. I would say that either you should fix this pattern to match with the others (you would also need to change 03:13:871 (1,2,3,1,2,3), or you could change 02:57:871 (1,2,3,1,2,3) to incorporate the jump.

To clarify, the jump is fair in my opinion. I just don't like how it starts up in the middle of what feels like a regular pattern.

03:25:371 (8) and 03:56:871 (5) - Both of these notes are hanging off of the screen. The beat at 03:56:871 is fine In My Honest Opinion, but I don't like how the slider at 03:25:371 touches the health bar.

Overall, I like the beatmap. Starred.

As per request from mod queue~(抱歉，有点迟)

[Over the Star]
- 00:01:746 (1) - 可以考虑换成slider(00:01:146 - 00:02:371, 跟00:04:746 (4)相似)
- 00:02:746 (2) - ^
- 00:03:746 (3) - ^
- 00:27:871 (1) - 可以考虑repeat多一次(00:29:371 end), 也可以考虑hitsound每两拍N (跟同区的Over the Light hitsound比较)
- 00:35:871 (1) - ^
- 01:25:871 (1) - ^
- 01:31:371 - 若有作以上更改，这里也加多一拍吧。
- 需要注意若repeat多一次slider后的后续spacing。

[Over the Light]
- 00:45:121 (4) - New combo?
- 00:47:121 (4) - New combo?
- 00:49:121 (4) - New combo?
- 01:49:371 (4) - 这里减速感觉奇怪，换个slider吧？(因为跟之前三个slider非常相似，却不同速度)
- 02:27:871 (5) - New combo?
- 03:12:371 (3) - 考虑在这用slider(03:12:621 end + hitsound)，若用slider的话，注意下之后的spacing吧？

相比之下比之前我刚下载时好很多了，加油~

hi~ :3

All my suggestion

[Over the Star]
00:57:871 (1) finish?
01:05:871 (1) ^
01:55:371 (1) add finish at the back?
02:03:371 (1) ^
03:13:871 (1) finish?

[Over the Light]
00:08:621 (6) new combo?
01:08:621 (6) ^

I can't find any problem.
really great map!!

I'm mostly checking for symmetry since your spacing looks good.

[Over the Star]
00:58:371 (2,4) - If you want perfect symmetry, move either 2 or 4 up one (but not both). Not sure if it plays better though.
01:07:371 (4,5,6,7) - One grid up.
02:28:371 (2,3) - If you wanted to make this shape absolutely perfect, move these half a grid left.

[Over the Light]
02:03:371 (6) - One grid right.
03:50:121 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - One grid down.
03:57:871 (8) - One grid down.

Nice maps, and you get a star both for quality and because of the chibi Azunyan.

梓喵www ☆

[Over the Star] - Should it be "Stars"?
02:32:871 (1) - Normal hitsound?
02:48:871 (4) - Slider頭 Finish
02:59:371 (1) - End at 02:59:746?
03:03:746 (3) - Slider頭 Finish
03:05:871 (1) - Finish
03:07:371 (4) - End at 03:07:746?
03:11:746 (4) - Slider頭 Finish
03:15:371 (4) - End at 03:15:746?
03:23:371 (4) - End at 03:23:746?
03:49:746 - Start Kiai?
03:57:746 - End Kiai?
03:57:871 - Start Kiai? (For star fountain)
03:57:996 - End Kiai?

[Over the Light] - "Lights"?
00:52:871 (4,5,6,7,8) - Soft Hitsounds?
01:38:121 (2) - Slider頭 用Normal Hitsounds?
01:59:746 (2) - Slider頭 Finish
02:49:871 (5) - New Combo

Fixed.
Thanks you all.

Waiting for further modding.

Heey ~ Here's my mod, maybe you could mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/21222 ?

General;
- Everything good here ~

Skin;
- I don't think 300g looks good, try something else other than yellow, maybe use this one ?
- I think the spinner-osu should be pink like spinner-spin an spinner-clear
- There are some elements where you can use a 1x1 transparent png image so you save space: cursortrail, scorebar-ki, scorebar-kidanger, scorebar-kidanger2 and sliderscorepoint
- Comboburst looks weird while playing maybe because is cut off ;w;

Over the Star;
- It should be Over the Stars >w<
- 01:09:871 >> End kiai here
- 02:07:871 >> End kiai here
- 02:37:371 >> Add a note ?
- 02:47:871 >> Finish at start ?
- 02:49:871 >> ^
- 03:24:121 >> Add a note ?
- 03:24:621 >> ^
- 03:25:871 >> End kiai here
- 03:57:871 >> Maybe add a little kiai fountain here ? This goes for all diffs

Over the Light;
- 01:09:871 >> End kiai here
- 02:07:871 >> End kiai here
- 03:25:871 >> ^

* Star ~

Hi~></

[Over the Star]
01:39:371 (3) - 1grid right?

[Over the Light]
fine~

Nothing wrong!

Sorry,couldn't find anything wrong ><
Don't deserve kudosu;;

good luck!!XD