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Rita - Alicemagic

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Topic Starter
masuo_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月12日 at 23:24:02

Artist: Rita
Title: Alicemagic
Source: Little Busters!
Tags: frost-b-spec,NatsumeRin
BPM: 166
Filesize: 5572kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.9 stars, 113 notes)
  2. fbs's Normal (4.36 stars, 163 notes)
  3. Hard (4.81 stars, 192 notes)
  4. Insane (4.97 stars, 313 notes)
  5. Rin's Taiko (4.83 stars, 507 notes)
Download: Rita - Alicemagic
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 1st beat map.
Please give advice to me.
frost-b-spec
i make Normal diff and chat mod. XD
star :)
digiaria
star~~~~~~~~~~~
Topic Starter
masuo_old
>digiaria
thx star~
Cyril Scarlet
Σ(・ω・ノ)ノ☆とりゃ
Topic Starter
masuo_old
>S i R i R uさん
教えやら☆やらいろいろありがとうございます!
tobaku2784
( ゚∀゚)o彡°star!star!
Insane is very good!
oh...URYYYY!
nxoirx123
( ゚ω゚ )Star!!
Silver acute398
masuo is very ***

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  ヽo,´-'─ 、
   r, "~~~~"ヽ
   i. ,'ノレノレ!レ〉
 __ '!从.゚ ヮ゚ノル ♪
 ゝン〈(つY_i(つ  
  `,.く,§_,_,ゝ,
   ~i_ンイノ~´
zero11_old
( ^ω^)
Topic Starter
masuo_old
>tobaku2784
>nxoirx123
>Silver acute398
>zero11

Thank you for your star.
Ry-HOROiD
Rita VeryGood!!
Topic Starter
masuo_old
>Ry-HOROiD

Thank you for the star.
taros
star
Topic Starter
masuo_old
>taros
Thank you for the star.
NatsumeRin
Edit1: timing: BPM 166 offset: about +12
a [Insane] hitsounds suggestion here...
mapping taiko now. and i'm here to ask your permission again...can i make another osu diff= =..?

Edit2: taiko diff finished...hope you like it. if there's any problems, pm me, i'll fix it as soon as possible.

Edit3: [Rin's Style] diff added...but not finished... with custom sound files.

Download: Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [Insane hitsounds].osu

Download: Rita - Alicemagic (masuo) [Rin's Taiko].osu

Download: Alicemagic~.rar
Topic Starter
masuo_old
>NatsumeRin

thank you star~
I was allowed to mend.
Cyril Scarlet
通常設定

 ● BGを設定して下さい
 ● Tag の人の名前の区切りに使用してる . は必要ありません、スペースを一個あけていればOKです。
 ● スライドメインの譜面って規則とかあまり確信ないのでMOD出来なくてごめんなさい (´・ω・`)

ぱっと見て気になる場所と言えば

Insane の 01:25:417 (1) - を 01:25:327 か 01:25:508 でスタート
01:37:876 (1) - を 01:38:158 に移動して 01:37:797 にノート追加と言うのはどうでしょう。

ハードでは 00:34:538 (4,5,6) - を 1 Tiny Grid 右に
00:37:791 (2,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 Tiny Grid 下へ

そして終わりのスピンは Insane 同様の意見です
Topic Starter
masuo_old
しりるさんありがとー
こちらも直しました。
Vikon
Alicemagic!
hope there will be more ranked Little Busters maps, therefore I am here to give some suggestions~

[Easy]
00:43:212 (1) add clap?
01:23:689 (3,4) spacing (as you 1/4 note to overlap at 01:20:978, but you use 1/2 note to overlap here...)

[Normal]
I can find Nothing ! Nice~

[Rin's Taiko]
dunno how to mod Taiko, but it should set a preview point, right??
preview point : 01:16:280

[Hard]
00:47:729 clap in this part is good, but should be in lower volume and more clap
add clap at these notes :
00:48:896 (2) the end of the slider
00:48:994 (3,4,5,7,8)
00:50:621 (9) add finish on the start and the end of the slider
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00:54:415 this part should echo with the previous, but you miss a note on 00:55:319
would you like to try this?
add clap on 00:54:596 (2,4), 00:55:139, 00:55:500, 00:56:222
to continue the echo, also add clap on 00:56:403 (1,4,5,6), 01:00:198 (1)
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01:05:257 (2) add finish?
01:08:149 this part can be more euphonious, consider to try this:
01:08:149 (1) finish
01:08:510 (2,6,8) clap
01:08:691 (3,9) clap on the start of the slider, also clap on 01:10:679
01:11:040 (9) finish on the end of the slider
01:11:401 add clap on (1,3) the start of slider
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01:18:810 (13) this slider should end at 01:19:171 or 01:19:352
01:36:880 (X) add a note here
01:37:784 (14) move to 01:37:964
01:38:145 (x) add a note here and start the spinner at 01:38:326


[Insane]
set a preview point~ that should be 01:16:280 like other difficulties
00:30:568 (6) this note is unneccesary, but there should be a note at 00:30:749
01:25:327 (1) try to end at 01:27:315 or 01::27:676, if you choose the former, consider to add a note at 01:27:676
01:36:893 (x) add a note here?
01:37:797 (6) move it to 01:37:977
01:38:158 (x) add a note and start the spinner at 01:38:339
lol just realize, why the offset here is different form others??
try to find out which is better and fix it~ (I'm not good at timing, sor~)

Anyway, good map, Get my star and good luck~
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