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Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You

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GbL
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quinta-feira, 8 de maio de 2014 at 22:31:50

Artist: Kelly Clarkson
Title: My Life Would Suck Without You
Tags: kingcobra52 0_o All I Ever Wanted
BPM: 145
Filesize: 6689kb
Play Time: 03:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. 0_o's Hard (4,52 stars, 354 notes)
  2. Easy (0,65 stars, 102 notes)
  3. Kingcobra Hard! (4,93 stars, 482 notes)
  4. Normal (3,46 stars, 267 notes)
Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You
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My life would suck without you, osu!
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eeemod GO!!

BPM: I guess it's alright
Offset: 13,822 (it's practicallly the first offset, but nearly all your beats were placed on red ticks, when they should've been white)

[Normal]

Naz-eeemod v
SPOILER
00:23:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - small grid change. move all these one grid to the right so that (2) stacks with the following (6). I get this combo cause (6,7) is in the middle already.
02:02:85 (break) - reinsert break


[Hard]
01:04:71 (1) - end 1/4 later
01:06:27 (1) - move 1/4 later
02:16:35 (break) - reinsert break
03:25:82 (1) - end 03:27:06

[Kiai Mode]
[First Kiai] - 00:41:96
[Second Kiai] - 01:36:58
[Third Kiai] - 02:32:85

I say put the choruses at Normal samplesets, but I guess it's not too important.
Also, there are some new combos that don't seem right, I'm not good at combo modding, Blissfulyoshi makes combo mods from time to time though.

I'll star, it's a pretty decent map, looks like you've gotten better
Topic Starter
GbL
Thank you, eee. =}
Kudosu~
Linox_old
Bom mapa GBL, esperamos que seje rankiado xD

*stars*

Na verdade, nem joguei ainda :P mas já to dando stars ^^
Mismagius
Eu tenho uma sugestão. Não sei se quer, mas tá aí, ah sim, Hard:

02:08:442 - Finish aqui
02:08:856 - Adicione uma beat aqui
02:09:063 - Adicione uma beat aqui
02:09:270 - Adicione uma beat aqui e coloque o hitsound Finish

Depois, arrume o spacing das notas que vierem depois, claro.

Anyways, isso é só uma sugestão.

Ah, estou fazendo uma diff pra seu map tbm :P

Star. ^^
kingcobra52
Normal

01:59:34 (1,1) - Place the best 1 whole beat later (so it ends with the music). Adjusting the spinner is optional. Fix the break afterwards.
02:18:37 (2,3,4) - These meant to be uneven with 02:16:30 (1,2,3) under it?
02:57:68 (1) - (Optional) I'd say switch to normal sounds for this slider.

Hard

-Turn off kiai after the first chorus (before 01:08:44 (1) )
02:04:71 (4) - I"m against muting these sliders. It just feels out of place. :\

Overall, I feel more can be done with the map itself. I'd say using quarter/eighth beats throughout the whole song is basically a last resort when it comes to mapping. (I know there's definitely not many things to follow in this song besides a constant beat, but I know there's a few places where you can trail away from that consistency) This is just me talking from experience, of course. As long as the ranking guidelines are met, it's rankable imo.

Also, I'd like to make a difficulty for this if you don't mind. :)
Topic Starter
GbL
ty, kingcobra.
I'm waiting for your diff. ;)
Tadaki_Laka
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Heath_old
Okay, i think this map is a good map so i will give a star

But the storyboard... I do not like storyboards, i do not even understand why players put storyboards in beatmaps, but this is irrelevant.

*star*
Cheedar
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Cheedar
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Topic Starter
GbL
Thank you so muuch, Cheedar. I liked it. *-*
0_o
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Topic Starter
GbL

0_o wrote:

Normal sampleset would sound awesome on the choruses ;)

Normal
01:59:34 (1) - Extend to next white tick

That's all I really got after a quick run through.

bleh, now I wanna make a difficulty too :P 3 hards is probably a little much though

*
You can make. :}

Next diff by kingcobra, Bue Dragon e 0_o.

NOT ACCEPT MORE DIFFS
kingcobra52
Topic Starter
GbL
Wow, very nice.
Added, ty.
Mashley
Dammit these hitcircles are awwwwwful. Can we have a visible spinner circle please?
You need to work on your breaks, maybe add some shorter ones. They're differerent between difficulties too.
00:58:51 (1) - Why does the kiai cut out here? Keep it until the end of the chorus.
01:53:13 (1) - ^
02:57:68 (1) - ^

Normal
YES

Hard
01:28:30 (3) - Space this like the rest of the combo, it looks like 1/4
02:49:40 (1) - ^

Kingcobra Hard
YES
Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. Kiai: 00:40:71 - Start the first Kiai at 00:41:96 (1).
  2. Kiai: 01:35:44 - Start the second Kiai at 01:36:58 (3).
  3. 151,632ms - Remove it. This inherited timing section is unused.
  4. Kiai: 02:31:71 - Start the third Kiai at 02:32:85 (1).
  5. 02:32:85 (1) - Maybe add a finish at the start of this slider.
  6. 03:25:82 (2) - Move this farther from 1's endpoint. People would probably treat this as a 1/4 note and hit it too fast.
Hard~
  1. 01:13:61 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish.
  2. 03:19:40 (1) - Move farther from 3.
Saw nothing wrong with Hard~
Topic Starter
GbL
All fixed, ty Mafiamaster. ;}
Inozuma
Hi! :D

[Normal]
00:23:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Align the whole combo on the center.
02:40:71 (2,1) - Spacing?
03:23:96 (1,2) - Align two with the slider.


[Hard]
00:57:47 - Add a note?
00:50:02 (1,2,3) - Move it to the right to match symmetry.
00:56:23 (1,2,3) - Move it to the left to match symmetry.
01:28:30 (3,1) - Spacing?
01:32:65 (3,4) - ^
02:16:30 - Add a note? :/ (If you do, redo the break)
02:45:68 (3,4) - Spacing?

[Kingcobra Hard!]
02:21:26 (1,2,3,4) - :/
03:14:01 (5,6,7,8) - Haha

Well I like the hitsounds.
I just think that you could have mixed up with normal hitsounds on chorus part.

Anyway, star~
0_o
:D

Let me know if I got a little too kiai happy :P

Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [0_o].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
Veeery good, 0_o. Added.
All finished, waitin' a BAT. c_c
Cheedar
Well, i think that is out of time, but i hope that isn't TT_TT
I think these timing points fit best with the music (just made changes at the beginning of kiai mode)

[TimingPoints]
13822,413.793103448276,4,2,0,85,1,0
41959,-100,4,2,0,85,0,1
58321,-200,4,2,0,85,0,0
59563,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
96161,-100,4,2,0,85,0,1
113045,-200,4,2,0,85,0,0
114183,-100,4,2,0,85,0,0
136130,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
151632,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
152875,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
177494,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
179547,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
201804,-200,4,2,0,100,0,0

Hope you think the same >_>'
yeahyeahyeahhh
Kingcobra Hard!:
02:32:84 - Add a note here! maybe back in the middle where 1 was.
02:39:46 - ^
I really like the parts where the spacing starts small and gets larger.

Hard:
Fine ^^

Normal:
00:23:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This section has too much focus on the x-axis. I would suggest maybe go somewhere else on the new combos?
03:22:09 (1,1) - Make both of these into some kind of shape, don't leave them as straight lines.
Topic Starter
GbL

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Normal:
00:23:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This section has too much focus on the x-axis. I would suggest maybe go somewhere else on the new combos? Fix
03:22:09 (1,1) - Make both of these into some kind of shape, don't leave them as straight lines. Fix
Thank you, wait for kingcobra.(=
kingcobra52
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Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [Kingcobra Hard!].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
Al done. :D
[deleted user]
Um map de um brasileiro /o/
Muito legal, e como eu n sei fazer mod eu prefiro n arriscar.

estrelinha >.>
GabrielRKF
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Topic Starter
GbL
Valeu, vou esperar o restante pra fazer o upload. :}
GabrielRKF
//Hard//
Gostei do estilo non stop dessa diff, realmente machuca o meu pulso XD
Essa diff vai ajudar a música a ficar nas most played song
  1. 00:18::995(spinner) - finish?
  2. 00:29:753(x) - uma nota aqui?
  3. 00:29:959(x) - ^ (+hit finish)
  4. 00:32:235(spinner) - E se esse spinner acabasse 00:33:063 e você adicionasse uma nota (+hit finish) em 00:33:270?
  5. 00:56:443(2,3) - se você olhar com cuidado, você verá q eles não estão espelhados com os (1,2,3) anteriores. Desce um pouquinho o 2 e 3 (uma tiny grid)
  6. 01:27:684(x) - adiciona uma nota aqui e depois bota hit finish no (1) seguinte.
  7. 02:59:546(3) - pela seqüencia sequencia (agora sem trema =p), agora tem um New Combo aqui.
//Kingcobra//
Juro q tentei mas:
  1. Nothing wrong here
Mais skin(como hit 50, usa o original mesmo ^^):

Ta de parabens GbL. O mapa é muito divertido e a música é foda demais.
Nada a acrescentar. *Kudosustar*

Topic Starter
GbL
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GabrielRKF
Mais uma coisinha pra skin xD


Malz ficar zoneando o seu forum. Valew o/
Topic Starter
GbL
Nada, rox. :D

All done, uploaded.
gdeath
plz look these as suggestion

[Normal]
fine

[0_o]
00:51:67 (11) - remove the whistle on end of slider
03:02:43 (10) - new combo
03:07:40 (7) - ^

[Hard]
01:09:89 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:96 (1) - ^
01:25:61 (1) - ^

[Kingcobra Hard!]
01:24:57 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:15 (6) - new combo

awesome map.starry*
Topic Starter
GbL

gdeath wrote:

[Hard]
01:09:89 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:96 (1) - ^
01:25:61 (1) - ^
all fix, ty.
0_o
Sorry for the wait, here's the update. I decided to keep the last two long combos, but I changed the other two.

Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [0_o].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
Ty, 0_o.
0_o
Just some self-modding on my diff

00:50:64 (9) - replace clap with finish
00:51:05 (10) - replace endpoint's clap with whistle
03:22:09 (1) - Make this a soft finish

No kudos :P
Topic Starter
GbL

0_o wrote:

Just some self-modding on my diff

00:50:64 (9) - replace clap with finish
00:51:05 (10) - replace endpoint's clap with whistle
03:22:09 (1) - Make this a soft finish

No kudos :P
Ok, done~
EEeee
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Topic Starter
GbL
Ty, EEeee. All fix in my diffs. :D
0_o

EEeee wrote:

O_o
01:00:98 (5) - I can see the kind of jump ur attending for, but I might as well just snap this note to 4, then it will still be kinda challenging since the next pattern will maybe be jumpish It's not that much of a jump
01:51:88 (5) - New combo sure
02:31:40 (1) - end 1/4 forward, may be a bit hard, but who cares, this diff ain't easy right :P The rest of the spinners give 1/1 leeway, so I think if I do that it'll throw people off. That and I hate when people put notes directly after spinners :P
03:08:43 (9) - New wombo wure
03:13:40 (5) - ^ I'll keep it like it is for phrasing reasons
Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [0_o].osu
Zerostarry
Offset: 13,820

3 Hards and a normal? No way~

Add a difficulty that has 3stars or less.
Mismagius
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Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [Blue's EaZy].osu
Topic Starter
GbL
Added, ty. =)
GabrielRKF
//Easy// - 2 tick rate está muito alto. Bota 1.
  1. 00:16:923(3) - não ta começando no local certo. Esse slider começa em 00:17:130 e termina em 00:18:785.
  2. 01:04:923(1) - não gostei desse slider, bota uma coias mais parecida com uma meia lua, menos "quebrado".
  3. 02:32:854(1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Número 1: Tá muito dificil pra uma Easy diff. Número 2: Os hit sounds estão meio aleatórios. Cria algo mais sequencial.
  4. 02:54:578(2) - faz esse igual ao (1). Não espelha.
  5. 02:58:716 até 03:07:199 - Mais uma vez. Difícil demais para um easy. Refaça essa parte. Obs.: Você tem q tirar mas outro erro nessa parte foi os sliders estarem cmeçando no tick vermelho. Ficaria melhor nos brancos.
Gostei, apesra de ser meio que aleatório demais =/
Armin
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Topic Starter
GbL
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0_o
Made most of the above suggestions ^_^

Download: Kelly Clarkson - My Life Would Suck Without You (GbL) [0_o].osu
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