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Owl City - Deer In The Headlights

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Krisom
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 10 de marzo de 2012 at 22:06:04

Artist: Owl City
Title: Deer In The Headlights
Tags: Gonzvlo SapphireGhost All Things Bright and Beautiful
BPM: 140
Filesize: 5889kb
Play Time: 02:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,77 stars, 169 notes)
  2. Gonz' Hard (4,61 stars, 271 notes)
  3. Insane (4,98 stars, 393 notes)
  4. Sappha's Beautiful Normal (3,44 stars, 206 notes)
Download: Owl City - Deer In The Headlights
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Tell me again was it love at first sight ~

Hard by Gonzvlo
Normal by SapphireGhost
Storyboard by Rena

Thanks to every single person who modded this map. I love you.
Shiirn
FIRST

Kytoxid
Second post! Star!

Oh baby, baby
How was I supposed to know
That somethin' wasn't right?
JauiPlaY
WE
NEED
MORE
OWL
CITY
MAPS

YES

My message is too short.
My message is too short.
My message is too short.
SapphireGhost

The thing wrote:

WARNING: This map needs over 8 Star Priority BEFORE it should be considered for ranking/bubbling
Please focus your modding on maps which have higher star priorities first!
Yeah yeah I know, just posting to sort of save the first 54 seconds of this map.
EDIT: It's done now. Except for one part that I'm probably gonna redo. So yeah.

Download: Owl City - Deer In The Headlights (Krisom) [Sappha's Beautiful Normal].osu
Rena-chan
Dearest Krisom, here is a simple storyboard (and improved background) for you to enjoy and use if you like: http://up.ppy.sh/files/deersandstuff.rar
It isn't much, but I just couldn't help but make it. Also, if you ever revive the map, do remember to disable letterboxing during breaks and enable storyboard above combofire.

That is all !
Kiddo-Kun
[General]

• Remove "guide.png" please~

[Easy]

• 00:42:241 (1) - This note seems a tad out of place to me. I think it would match the music better and give the map a better play if you simply change it to this. I just think it's much more fluent this way.
• 01:26:812 (1) - ^

[Sappha]

• 02:20:812 (1) - Hmm, not very sure about this spacing. May trip up some players.

[Gonz]

• 01:18:883 (1,2,3,4) - Eh, I think this could match the music better. I would do somethinglike this, it feels much better to play imo.

[Insane]

• 02:40:633 (1) - I was rather shocked when I played this for the first time. It really comes out of the blue and seems a tad (dare i say) lazy. It will screw over some players.


One of the shortest mods I've done. Definitely call me back for this~
Natsume
Hello~o! Mod at the request of Gonzvlo!
Let's go! :)

[General]

  1. May be add "electronic" in tags?
[Easy]

  1. 00:14:812 - Add finish?
  2. 00:21:669 - ^
  3. 00:42:669 - Add note?
  4. 02:25:955 - Add finish?
  5. 02:31:955 - ^
  6. 02:45:669 - ^
  7. 02:52:526 - ^
:arrow: That's all. Sorry. Really nice difficulty. :(

[Sappha's Beautiful Normal]

  1. 00:17:169 - Add normal-hitwhistle?
  2. 00:23:598 (4) - and here on start and finish of slider?
  3. 00:39:241 (4) - New combo?
  4. 00:49:312 - remove clap?
  5. 00:49:526 - add note and clap?
  6. 01:08:169 (5,6) - whistles?
  7. 01:23:812 (4) - New combo?
  8. 01:36:241 - Add finish?
  9. 01:36:883 - Remove finish?
  10. 01:57:241 - Add clap?
  11. 01:58:526 - Remove clap?
  12. 01:58:955 - Add clap?
  13. 02:02:383 - ^
  14. 02:02:812 - Add clap?
  15. 02:03:241 - Remove clap? Beause rhythm for this clap - every 2nd tick yellow tick.
  16. 02:07:526 - Clap?
  17. 02:08:383 - ^
  18. 02:09:241 - ^
  19. 02:09:669 - Remove clap.
  20. 02:10:955 - Clap?
  21. 02:11:383 - Remove clap in start of slider and add in finish of slider?
  22. 02:12:669 - Clap?
  23. 02:14:383 - ^
  24. 02:15:669 - Delete clap?
  25. 02:16:098 - Add clap in start of slider and in finish of slider?
  26. 02:25:955 - Why whistle?
  27. 02:28:098 - May be finish?
  28. 02:33:883 (4,5) - Add normal-hitwhistle?
  29. 02:40:741 (4) - ^
  30. 02:44:169 (5,6) - Add normal-hitwhistle and delete clap in (6) ?
[Gonz' Hard]

  1. 00:37:955 (5) - <3
  2. 00:41:383 (1,2) - May be such is better?
  3. 00:43:527 (6,7) - And this for symmetry.
  4. 01:22:526 (5) - :oops:
  5. 01:53:383 (1,2) - same as in 00:41:383 (1,2)
  6. 02:37:526 (8) - soft-hitwhistle may be?
:!: Hmm.. In my opinion...
  1. 02:47:169 - Add whistle?
  2. 02:47:812 - ^
  3. 02:48:026 - ^
:arrow: Really cute difficulty. Like this sliders. <3

[Insane]

  1. 00:23:812 (10) - Add whistle?
  2. 00:48:241 - Add finish? And in other chorus too.
  3. 00:53:383 - ^ And in other chorus too.
  4. 01:19:098 - Add note?
  5. 02:16:526 (9) - May be linear slider is better?
:?: 02:29:812 (7) - This slider.... isn't cute, i think. :( May be such is better..?
:arrow: If I deserve kudosu - star for you. ;) Really cute map! I should add in my Favourite maps. Symmetry. <3 Coodluck!
Gonzvlo
Everything done, thanks guys!

Download: Owl City - Deer In The Headlights (Krisom) [Gonz' Hard].osu

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wcx19911123
[General]
fine

[sb]
unused image file : guide.png

[Easy]
01:56:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest change some to sldiers or this is kinda hard for newbies to play
02:10:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:33:883 (5,6) - I suggest change this to sldier , this rhyme is really hard to read

[Normal]
difficulty setting is too low , at least AR+1 HD+1
00:53:812 (2,3) - stack this notes or it is hard to play imo
01:38:383 (2,3) - ^ , or at least reduce the spacing plz
01:52:526 (1,2,3) - change this to a repeat sldier plz , this is really too hard to play as a Normal diff
02:19:955 (5) - put this note stack on 3? or the anti-jump is confusing
02:44:169 (5,6) - change this to sldier plz , or it is kinda hard to play
02:46:526 (4) - this shape.. my feeling is that it is really hard to read when it end , for newbies..

[Hard]
00:40:955 (6) - I just don't know why not stack on the slider end..
01:25:526 (6) - ^
01:30:883 - add note here? sound much better

[Insane]
difficulty is kinda low imo , HD+1 is more like an Insae
00:50:812 (8) - use a straight slider? for symmetry
00:55:526 (1) - stack this on 01:08:812 (1) - ? the anti-jump is not too hard to read as an Insane diff
01:39:669 (11) - x:256 y:188?
02:02:812 (7) - same suggestion here
02:54:455 (10) - x:256 y:192?
Nymph
Hi there~

General:
I saw a guide.png in the folder but I didn't saw it was using at anywhere, so I guess maybe delete it?


Easy:
fine for me.


Sappha's Beautiful Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:241 (4) - actually I was thinking maybe a newcombo here to help read this slow slider
01:23:812 (4) - same ^

Hitsound
01:52:955 (3) - there is a very clear finish sound in the music, so I think a finish here would be much better than a clap.
others fine for me.


Gonz' Hard:
fine for me.


Insane:
fine for me~


Sorry seems didn;t find anything useful T.T
Melophobia
Hi!

General
Fine to me T.T

Easy
01:37:954 (2,1) - spacing

Sappha's Beautiful Normal
the volume should be intoned

Gonz' Hard
00:37:098 (1,5) - switch newcombo for your pattern

Insane
01:19:098 - add note here for better flow
01:24:026 (1) - this spinner is too loud to me
02:40:633 (1) - finish here instead of whistle
Yasora
Try to modding this~

General
  1. Inconsistency kiai time in Sappha's diff. make consistent with other diff?
Easy
  1. 00:18:241 (2) - Clap in slider's end is weird to heard by me. Imo, to remove that clap?
    00:19:526 (3) - from reason in above, clap should adding in slider's begin. that's more better imo
  2. 00:43:955 (3) - add clap in here more better than whistle imo
  3. 00:55:741 (break) -drag this break into 00:55:955? more better when play imo
  4. 01:28:526 (3) - same as 00:43:955 (3)
  5. 02:49:098 (2) - same as 00:18:241 (2)
Sappha's Beautiful Normal
  1. 00:11:383 (2) - remove clap in slider's beginning? the sound really weird to me
  2. 00:14:812 (2) - here same again as above, but adding clap in slider's end for following drum sound is more better imo
  3. 00:31:098 (1) - add clap in slider's end?
  4. 00:54:026 (3) - the spacing is too far from (2). make it consistency?
  5. 01:08:598 (6) - the spacing is too far from (5). this is like jump in my eyes. consider to change the spacing with normal spacing
  6. 01:13:526 (3) - add clap in slider's beginning?
  7. 01:38:598 (3) - same as 00:54:026 (3)
  8. 01:52:526 (1,2,3) - these sound is really weird when hear in playing imo. I suggest to increase the volume 40%~60%
  9. 01:56:812 (1) - add clap in slider's end?
  10. 02:02:383 (3) - add clap? for consistency hisounding
  11. 02:07:098 (1,2) - add clap in slider's end?
Gonz' Hard
  1. Maybe this difficulty should be Gonz's Hard?
  2. 00:40:955 (6) - I suggest to stack it with (5)'s tail. more better to see
  3. 01:25:526 (6) - here same as above
  4. 01:55:955 (7) - make it more blanketing (6) like this?
  5. 02:16:526 (8) - add new combo in here? I think the combo set is too long
  6. 02:53:383 (1,1,1) - remove them new combo? I think no need new combo in here since the vocal and rhythm is same
Insane
  1. 00:17:169 (11) - add new combo in here? the jump is too huge imo and for combo pattern
  2. 00:53:383 (5) - add new combo in here?
  3. 00:54:669 (5) - ^
  4. 00:55:526 (1) - also, remove new combo in here
  5. 01:37:955 (5) - add new combo again?
  6. 02:34:312 (11) - add new combo? same reason as 00:17:169 (11)
  7. 02:40:633 (1) - this spinner is too short. I'm afraid some player can't following this spinner. I suggest to change this spinner with slider
Nice map~
Good luck (:
L_P
saw a mod queue...and here is me...

kiai: sapphaha has different kiai time, but i wonder why end the last kiai at 02:27:276...i would choose 02:27:669 - here..

Easy
00:37:098 (6) - add default soft whistle here? i was expecting one here

saphaha's beauty
00:28:955 (3) - maybe lower the volume a bit, it is kinda loud here...or just delete that finish?

00:54:026 (3,4) - not beauty anymore QAQ maybe make these 2 a slider

01:53:383 (1) - strongly felt that the last head should have some hitsound

gonz hard
00:32:598 (x) - add a note?
i noticed you try to make some whistle once for 2 bars or something like that.. but 00:44:812 (1) - 01:29:383 (1) - 01:56:812 (1) - 02:10:526 (1) - has no whistle sound because of slider, consider add a whistle tick sound?

01:19:098 (8) - add note?

general: i did enjoy, but actually i think that you could feather the edge of the moon a little..just a little

useless mod..
Lan wings

[Insane]

  1. 00:33:133 - change whistle?volume down
  2. 01:10:526 (6) - a little radian?this
  3. 01:13:526 (5) - ^this
  4. 01:17:705 - the same 00:33:133 - and radian here
  5. 01:20:383 (4) - this
  6. 01:37:741 - whistle
  7. 01:52:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - i like this hitsound>.<

[Hard]

  1. 00:13:312 (8) - whistle to the beginning and sliderbody add whistle (normal-hitwhistle)it seems good,but only one too little
  2. 02:17:383 - finish
  3. 02:20:812 - ^
  4. 02:23:598 (5) - ^
  5. 02:24:241 - ^
  6. 02:28:098 - finish to the beginning
  7. 02:29:812 (4) - ^
  8. 02:30:455 (6) - 00:13:312 (8) -
  9. 02:31:955 (2) - whistle
  10. 02:34:955 - finish
  11. 02:41:812 - ^
  12. 02:48:669 - ^
easy and normal is good~
Jenny
gosh this map is nice ._.
"modding" insane & hard since i suck at lowdiff-modding ;w;


Insane:

  • Use 80% volume for non-kiai times and 90% for kiai? (100% too high for non-kiai and even in kiai it's little too high imo)

    01:49:955 (1) - i suggest 20% volume on spinner's end, sounds too high at 50%
    01:52:526 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'm not sure whether stacking this fits the music best; a compressed stream would fit aswell
    02:40:526 (9) - add clap?
    02:47:169 (9,10,11) - these 3 circles feel too straight/edgy compared to the rest of the combo (but somehow nice aswell... well, see yourself what you'll do there, just poking you at it /o/)
Gonz' Hard:

  • I'd suggest you to lower the hitsound-volume by 5-10% on this aswell (except kiai), but that might be me.

    00:15:455 (4) - might be me being picky/naziing but that slider isn't all symmetrical + it could be little more aligned to 3's approach circle
    00:37:955 (5) - the sliderslide sounds unfitting on this big one, use lower volume for the time the ball is tracking?
    00:48:883 (4,5) - a little more curvyness would be nice here (at the beginning of 4 and at ending of 5, just like moving the first sliderpoint a bit to the outer if you know what i mean by that)
    01:22:526 (5) - again the sliderslide feels unffitingly loud, lower the volume here aswell please
    01:52:526 (1) - that's an... um... interesting shape you got there... that might be a question of taste
    02:03:026 - feels like there's a note missing here
    02:52:955 (1,1,1,1) - not sure about these NCs being a good idea
Topic Starter
Krisom
Wow, talk about fast mods :)! Thanks a lot everyone, I shall take a detailed look into every mod once I get home today.

Again, thank you all!
Jenny

Krisom wrote:

Wow, talk about fast mods :)! Thanks a lot everyone, I shall take a detailed look into every mod once I get home today.

Again, thank you all!
thanks for that map bro! o/
Sekai

[Easy]

  1. 00:10:955 (2) - spacing problem, and one grip down looks better
  2. 00:16:098 (3) - spacing
  3. 00:32:383 (2) - 1 grip down and left
  4. 00:34:526 (1) - ^
  5. 00:36:241 (4) - NC~
  6. 00:37:955 (1) - remove NC
  7. 00:46:526 (4) - NC
  8. 01:31:097 (4) - ^
  9. 01:32:812 (1) - remove NC and move the NC to here 01:33:454 (2) - ?
  10. 02:08:813 (2) - stack with the 02:06:669 (5) - ?

[Sappha's Beautiful Normal]

wow i loved those sliders OAO <3


[Gonz' Hard]

  1. 00:24:241 (1) - 1 grip up seems better~
  2. 00:40:955 (6) - stack it at the end of last slider, looks better IMO
  3. 01:25:526 (6) - ^

[Insane]

nothing ~ seems fine to me :3

good map :3
Weez
Insert witty intro here

Easy
00:51:669 (1,2) - Try to extend each slider by 1/2, works better for me. http://puu.sh/jGJh
01:36:240 (1,2) - Same^
02:24:241 (1,2) - ^

Sappha's Beautiful Normal
00:23:598 (4,1) - Bit far from each other...
02:10:526 (1,2) - Isn't this spacing a bit too much for a normal...
02:25:955 (4,1) - Same^
02:40:741 (4,1) - Again far...

Gonz' Hard
....nothing just nothing. Nice diff!

Insane
- Increase HP drain by 1 or 2, its the same as hard now and i feel its should be higher.

Thats all, nice map as usual Krisom!even though I hate owl city >.<
BeatofIke
[General]
-Is Guide.png file being used on the storyboard (maybe for flashes)? If, not please remove it.

[Easy]
- 00:14:812 (2) - Maybe make this a rainbow slider?

[Normal]
-Good, but the Kiai Time is not consistent compare to the other difficulties.
-HP Drain +1. It's a bit low for a normal difficulty.

[Hard]
-FLAWLESS SLIDERS! O_O Nothing to say here.

[Insane]
-Not really a fan of small circles. I would increase it.
-HP Drain 7?
-02:40:633 (1) - Spinner seems a bit short to me.
Realazy
Hi~

[Easy]

Nice !

[Sappha's Beautiful Normal]

This diff totally deserves its title \:D/

00:21:026 (1,2,3) - <3
00:49:741 (3) - 1,40x spacing for a Normal diff asdasdasdasd
01:08:598 (6) - ^
01:36:241 (1,2) - Lovely.
02:33:883 (4) - 1,60x spacing for a Normal diff asdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasd
02:34:741 (1) - 1,40x spacing for a Normal diff asdasdasdasd
02:48:669 (1) - So pro at delicious sliders

[Gonz' Hard]

This is a great diff o/

00:37:955 (5) - <3
00:40:955 (6) - Unexpected antijump imo
00:46:526 (4) - New combo?
00:48:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce the spacing of this pattern? I know you want to be symmetrical, but you could have a similar symmetrical pattern with a lower spacing. :v
00:51:669 (1,2) - <3
01:16:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - Lovely.
01:22:526 (5) - Okay I love you man
01:25:526 (6) - Unexpected antijump again
02:07:741 (4,5) - Have my babies
02:49:526 (4) - New combo?
02:50:812 (7) - ^

[Insane]

I love this difficulty


assdasdasdasdAWESOME MAPSET MAN

I'd star this if I could :v
Kryptogram
Hi There is my mod !

General: Nothing

SB: Nothing

Easy

00:18:241 (2) - Add whistle instead of clap at the end
00:19:526 (3) - Change whistle for clap at the begin
00:21:669 (2) - Add whistle instead of clap at the end
00:22:955 (3) - Change whistle for clap at the begin
00:55:955 (3) - Start break here ? http://puu.sh/jHcV
02:49:098 (2) - Add whistle instead of clap at the end
02:50:383 (3) - Change whistle for clap at the begin

Sappha's Beautiful Normal

00:28:955 (3) - Change finish or add clap at the begin
00:44:812 (1) - The tail its is not at the end and i think that sapphire sliders are symetrical ? http://puu.sh/jHhH
01:32:812 (1) - Add clap at the end
01:36:241 (1) - Add finish at the begin
01:53:383 (1) - Add clap at the end
01:55:526 (5) - Add clap at the begin
01:56:812 (1) - Add clap at the end
02:02:383 (3) - Add clap
02:07:098 (1) - Add clap at the end
02:07:955 (2) - ^
02:10:526 (1) - ^
02:12:241 (4) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
02:13:955 (1) - Add clap at the end
02:15:241 (x) - Add note whit clap ?
02:17:383 (1) - Add clap at the end
02:20:812 (1) - ^
02:24:241 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:44:383 (6) - Change clap for whistle ?

Gonz' Hard

Its me or Gonz' is missing the s at the end so it should be Gonz's Hard

Good !!

Insane


Good !!

Beautiful Map Love it

Good Luck! And Star!!
Kiddo-Kun
...Damn Krisom, that is a lot off mods in one day o_o
Topic Starter
Krisom
Hello guys.

Things I changed:
SPOILER
General.-
· Removed "guide.png"

Easy.-
· 02:33:883 (5,6) - Changed into a slider for the sake of keeping easy more simple. This rhythm repeats later, though it was introduced several times up to this point anyways.
· 01:37:954 (2,1) - Modified spacing a bit due to the modification of the previous sliders.
· 00:16:098 (3) - Modified almost unnoticeable spacing issue.
· 00:51:669 (1,2) - Extended each slider by 1/2. Did the same with 01:36:240 (1,2) and 02:24:241 (1,2)

Insane.-
· Changed HP Drain to 7.
· 02:40:633 (1) - Changed into a slider.
· 02:29:812 (7) - Modified slider shape.
· 00:55:526 (1) - Moved somewhere else.
· 01:39:669 (11) - Moved somewhere else.
· 01:24:026 (1) - Modified this spinner's volume. Did the same with 00:39:455 (1)
· 00:33:133 (3) - Changed repeat's hitsound to a whistle. Did the same to 01:17:383 (5)

Generally speaking:
· I did not change hitsounds. I'm usually way too sure of them, unless there's some inconsistency. I did take a look at all the hitsound changes, but I just grew too used to these ones now. Thanks anyways.
· Minimal grid spacing issues were also not applied to keep safe the "feel" of the map.
· I did change some rhythms, the ones I did not change were both not intuitive enough for me and didnt have enough feedback.
· I didn't touch anything that has to do with Gonz' or Sappaha's diffs, I didn't touch Rena's SB/elements either.

I'm awfully sorry to not be able to answer to every single modposts with more detail due to time, but if you're wondering why I did not change something you really think it's a good idea, please send me a PM and I can tell you my point of view of the map regarding your idea.

Thanks a lot.
Low
Hello!

[General]

• Consider adding "Gonz" to the tags. Here's a map that used this tag.
• "Sappha's Beautiful Normal" has a kiai inconsistency. The kiai starting at 01:53:383 should end at 02:06:991. The next kiai should start at 02:07:098 and end at 02:27:669.

And that's it. Good luck and star!
DaxMasterix

Jacob wrote:

• "Sappha's Beautiful Normal" has a kiai inconsistency. The kiai starting at 01:53:383 should end at 02:06:991. The next kiai should start at 02:07:098 and end at 02:27:669.
The Kiais can be different in Guest Diffs :>
inb4 jacob win 25expoints
Mismagius

DaxMasterix wrote:

The Kiais can be different in Guest Diffs :>
..not at all?


Anyways, gonna mod this after this mod rain stops and you get some time to fix everything. :v
SapphireGhost
You weren't actually supposed to call it that, silly Krisomg, unless you somehow want to. Don't call it this either.

Download: Owl City - Deer In The Headlights (Krisom) [SG's Completely Normal Normal].osu
Luvdic
Insane:

00:55:098 (11) - Delete, and then add a circle at 00:55:312 -
02:27:669 (11) - Same as above

Just didn't liked that little part when I played this

/me runs away
Charles445

Might wanna fix that. Happens a lot in the beginning
Gonzvlo
Thanks for all the mods guys! (I'm still modding all of your maps, please forgive me if I haven't got to your map yet, there are many requests D:)

Download: Owl City - Deer In The Headlights (Krisom) [Gonz' Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Krisom
Updated. I dont know how to fix that SB mistake, I might need some help about it.
And I didn't add "gonz" because Gonz said it wasnt necesary since that isnt his name.

Thanks!
Charles445
You could always cover it up with an image to blend them together. It'll add to the load a teeny bit but it'll work well.
Topic Starter
Krisom
Ok, I think it should be fixed now, apparently it was just a fade issue :x
Katsuri
Where is Gonzvlo?
Kiddo-Kun
I still think this would be much better as the moon, but I guess your one is okay :U

Anywho:

BUBBLED~
Mismagius
Ugh... I'm sorry for being late D:
Kuma-san
Good job
Star~
Andrea
Awesome map, loved it.

Ranked~
Kryptogram
Love the song the Mapset its just perfect

Congratz !
mancuso_JM_
YAY!! Felicitaciones Krisom
Y bienvenido de vuelta :D
Cyril Scarlet
Gratz :P ~
Bittersweet
nice map, gratz :3
Mercurial
Too fast I guess.
Low
:D
BeatofIke
Haha, nice it's ranked!
Mismagius
I love you, Krisom <3
Rena-chan
Oh hey, it's ranked. How wonderful.
JauiPlaY

iMercurial wrote:

Too fast I guess.

Not exactly.
And congrats Krisom!
Bobo_old

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

I still think this would be much better as the moon, but I guess your one is okay :U

Brilliant mapset Krisom \:D/
Akemi_Homura
Congratz~~!
ByTalo
Amazing song! Congratz :D
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