1. Andrea's Easy (2,76 stars, 106 notes)
2. Hard (4,65 stars, 201 notes)
3. Insane (4,98 stars, 298 notes)
4. Normal (3,8 stars, 130 notes)

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Faust wrote:

Making a post so I don't forget about this.

Here I am.

Andrea's Normal:

I think for what this is worth, it's probably better to rename this to "Easy"
Doesn't pose that level of competentness like a standard Normal difficulty.
Renamed to easy on Andrea's request.

Just maybe perhaps there are a handful of notes that do actually belong in a "Normal" eg. - 00:39:288 (2,3) -

- 01:25:051 (1) - Here's a suggestion:

SPOILER

Don't see any issues to address. Moving on.

Normal:

- 01:02:678 (4) - Just shift this 3 grids left.Fixed in another way. It was positioned like that because I wanted angled symmetry on the pattern which is even better now due to moving (away from distance snap but nothing critical) http://puu.sh/hnwV.

Hard:

Probably the difficulty that I think embodies this track the best.
Mapping structure is pretty suited to the difficulty standard, and it feels quite in-place.

There's nothing here to pick, but then..

- 01:01:152 (1) - Grub slider ⊙﹏⊙

These are so adorable.

Insane:

To my checking, I don't find anything to be out of place.

- 01:07:890 (6,7) - Little suggestion to have 6 at x:292 y:228 & 7 at x:456 y:320
Actually this combo still follows the guitar. I can see what you're trying to do here, but I am gonna keep this as it is because of http://puu.sh/hnvR. That was the idea of the pattern.

I think this spacing is more intuitive than the consistent one you currently have. I feel her vocals paired up with the tension at that part really go well with this edgy spacing.

That's it.
Feels like I merely delayed an inevitable bubble. lol
Don't give me kudosu.

I await your response.

• Hi hi~ Just take a look ~　 XD
  　
  General :
  　

1. AudioLeadIn: 2007 . Why don't you use 2000 ?
2. Delete .osb file in the folder ( Full Submit )
3. spinnerspin.wav and spinnerbonus.wav is 0 Bit, I think you should replace to the 44 Bits wav ( like normal-sliderslide.wav )
4. Kiai time hm.... I think the first kiai time 00:53:017 ~ 01:08:398 , the second kiai time 01:09:288 ~ 01:27:466 First kiai time is suggetion, But second kiai time I think you should fix because the music end there
   　
   
5. Andrea's Easy :
   　
   Unused or Excess timing section :
   　
6. 00:02:169 (T) -
7. 00:32:165 (T) - unsnap timing section
   　
   Normal :
   　
8. Looks good for me
   　
   Hard :
   　
   Unused or Excess timing section :
   　
9. 00:05:220 (T) -
10. 00:08:271 (T) -
11. 00:12:339 (T) -
12. 00:14:373 (T) - You have 2 timing sections here, remove one. ( The same as your mod on my map )
13. 00:16:025 (T) -
14. 00:48:949 (T) -
15. 00:50:983 (T) -
16. 01:16:915 (T) -
    　
    Insane :
    　
    Unused or Excess timing section :
    　
17. 00:08:271 (T) -
18. 00:15:135 (T) -
19. 00:12:339 (T) -
20. 00:14:373 (T) - You have 2 timing sections here, remove one.
21. 00:16:025 (T) -
22. 00:48:949 (T) -
    　
    
    You must to read~!

    red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.

bossandy wrote:

General :
　
[*]AudioLeadIn: 2007 . Why don't you use 2000 ?Because this makes absolutely no difference.
[*]Delete .osb file in the folder ( Full Submit ) This also makes no difference.
[*]spinnerspin.wav and spinnerbonus.wav is 0 Bit, I think you should replace to the 44 Bits wav ( like normal-sliderslide.wav ) That file is fine. The 44byte one was a guideline because someone apparently had some issues with another file. This file works so everything should be fine.
[*]Kiai time hm.... I think the first kiai time 00:53:017 ~ 01:08:398 , the second kiai time 01:09:288 ~ 01:27:466 First kiai time is suggetion, But second kiai time I think you should fix because the music end there The kiai is fine, because it ends when the spinner comes, which was my intention.
　
[*]Andrea's Easy :
　
Unused or Excess timing section :
　
[*]00:02:169 (T) -
[*]00:32:165 (T) - unsnap timing section This changes nothing though, if it was unsnapped on the other side (having +4 instead of -4), then it could be a problem, like this it's perfectly fine.
　
Normal :
　
[*]Looks good for me
　
Hard :
　
Unused or Excess timing section :
They won't hurt anyone so I'll let them be.
[*]00:05:220 (T) -
[*]00:08:271 (T) -
[*]00:12:339 (T) -
[*]00:14:373 (T) - You have 2 timing sections here, remove one. ( The same as your mod on my map ) Hm, well they both have same values (in your map they had different volume so it sounded wrong btw ), but yeah this should be fixed.
[*]00:16:025 (T) -
[*]00:48:949 (T) -
[*]00:50:983 (T) -
[*]01:16:915 (T) -
　
Insane :
　
Unused or Excess timing section :
　
[*]00:08:271 (T) - No timing section is useless, pay attention to the SV changes.
[*]00:15:135 (T) -
[*]00:12:339 (T) -
[*]00:14:373 (T) - You have 2 timing sections here, remove one. Yeah ok whatever.
[*]00:16:025 (T) -
[*]00:48:949 (T) -