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Linkin Park - What I've Done

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pw384
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月25日 at 18:38:55

Artist: Linkin Park
Title: What I've Done
Tags: flask transformers minutes to midnight Chester Bennington Rob Bourdon Brad Delson Dave Farrel Joe Hahn Mike Shinoda
BPM: 120.05
Filesize: 4835kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Flask's Easy (0.75 stars, 105 notes)
  2. Hard (4.6 stars, 288 notes)
  3. Normal (2.53 stars, 183 notes)
Download: Linkin Park - What I've Done
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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https://osu.ppy.sh/s/857987
Flask
好吧先佔沙發~~~
Topic Starter
pw384

Flask wrote:

好吧先佔沙發~~~
OWO
sunshy_old
前排围观
ray851107
围观围观~
riffy
OH WOW! Shooting star? Can you see it? Make a wish! :3

~
Topic Starter
pw384

-Bakari- wrote:

OH WOW! Shooting star? Can you see it? Make a wish! :3

~
OwO :3 baka bakari <333
mintong89
#modhelp

Timing Check

BPM: 120.05
florrat
This is my first mod, so it might not be that useful. Feel free to ignore any of my suggestions!

Overall: I found the black combo color annoying (not so distinctive on the black parts) on the black-and-white background, maybe change it to dark gray?

Easy:
01:32:463 (2,3) - Maybe change these two into 1 slider (starting at the time position of 2). Now it sounds (to me) like the slider starts to late (w.r.t. the lyrics)
01:34:462 (4,1) - ^

Hard:
02:39:934 (5,6,7) - maybe unstack these? I read it as if there was a quarter beat between them.

Insane:
00:55:478 (4) - I fail to spot this note until the last moment (more than once). Maybe it is resolved when you adjust the black combo color.
01:16:969 (1,2) - I find these sliders awkward w.r.t. the lyrics. Although maybe it's just me.
02:31:938 (1) - remove new combo(?)

That's it. Good map btw!
Topic Starter
pw384

florrat wrote:

This is my first mod, so it might not be that useful. Feel free to ignore any of my suggestions!

Overall: I found the black combo color annoying (not so distinctive on the black parts) on the black-and-white background, maybe change it to dark gray? :arrow: fixed~

Easy:
01:32:463 (2,3) - Maybe change these two into 1 slider (starting at the time position of 2). Now it sounds (to me) like the slider starts to late (w.r.t. the lyrics) :arrow: disagree._.
01:34:462 (4,1) - ^ :arrow: ^

Hard:
02:39:934 (5,6,7) - maybe unstack these? I read it as if there was a quarter beat between them. :arrow: good>w<

Insane:
00:55:478 (4) - I fail to spot this note until the last moment (more than once). Maybe it is resolved when you adjust the black combo color. :arrow: hmm..fix the color
01:16:969 (1,2) - I find these sliders awkward w.r.t. the lyrics. Although maybe it's just me. :arrow: fix
02:31:938 (1) - remove new combo(?) :arrow: no._.

That's it. Good map btw!
:) thx for modding~
Poggo
Hi~ moe mod from #modreqs :3

Insane

00:26:490 -this stream better replace on slider 1/2 better follow the music
00:42:983 - put here volume 65% bcz music quiet here
00:45:482(2) - I think better put this note in centre http://puu.sh/17MtA
00:56:353 - better remove this note, sounds better
00:58:977 - here volume 65%
01:07:973 - here better put slider 1/1 It's better folow for *done* or http://puu.sh/17MwT this sounds good too (and the same moments too)
01:14:970 - ^ 01:15:345 -this beat not follow fot anything~ http://puu.sh/17Mzu This better variant (and the same moment too)
01:20:218 - replace on slider 1/2
02:00:951 - this spins better remove and add notes here http://puu.sh/17MCI It's better follow the music and put spin 02:04:949 - 02:10:447
02:22:942 - Put here volume 55%
02:30:938 - 65%
02:46:307 - remove this note, not sound here
03:03:425 - this notes better replace on notes http://puu.sh/17MFA
03:13:046 - 03:16:919 - add spin here,It will be logic end~

Hard

00:24:991(1,2,3) - stack better
01:00:726(5) - better put this note in onother place bcz repeat hides http://puu.sh/17MJs
01:03:475(3,5) - make this sliders more roundish http://puu.sh/17MJZ
01:15:470 - maybe ctrl+J ? looks better
01:17:469 - ctrl+R

so many straight sliders looks very boring ;w; make some sliders more roundish~

Good luck~
Topic Starter
pw384

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi~ moe mod from #modreqs :3

Insane

00:26:490 -this stream better replace on slider 1/2 better follow the music
00:42:983 - put here volume 65% bcz music quiet here
00:45:482(2) - I think better put this note in centre http://puu.sh/17MtA
00:56:353 - better remove this note, sounds better
00:58:977 - here volume 65%
01:07:973 - here better put slider 1/1 It's better folow for *done* or http://puu.sh/17MwT this sounds good too (and the same moments too)
01:14:970 - ^ 01:15:345 -this beat not follow fot anything~ http://puu.sh/17Mzu This better variant (and the same moment too) :arrow: i want to maintain this ._.
01:20:218 - replace on slider 1/2
02:00:951 - this spins better remove and add notes here http://puu.sh/17MCI It's better follow the music and put spin 02:04:949 - 02:10:447 :arrow: fixed~ but the spinner is tooooo long cuz some long spinners at the end ._.
02:22:942 - Put here volume 55%
02:30:938 - 65%
02:46:307 - remove this note, not sound here
03:03:425 - this notes better replace on notes http://puu.sh/17MFA
03:13:046 - 03:16:919 - add spin here,It will be logic end~

Hard

00:24:991(1,2,3) - stack better
01:00:726(5) - better put this note in onother place bcz repeat hides http://puu.sh/17MJs :arrow: oh i forgot this..fixed~
01:03:475(3,5) - make this sliders more roundish http://puu.sh/17MJZ
01:15:470 - maybe ctrl+J ? looks better
01:17:469 - ctrl+R

so many straight sliders looks very boring ;w; make some sliders more roundish~

Good luck~
others all fixed :3 thx~
Poggo
Maybe spinners long, but it good follow the music~
Topic Starter
pw384

Katty Pie wrote:

Maybe spinners long, but it good follow the music~
:) hmm..ok~
Reyden
Hi o/

[General]
- maybe use this hitsound: http://puu.sh/17Q4T sounds cool with this map ;D

[Easy]
- You used too many new combos; remove a few or maybe add a new combo color
- 00:48:481 (2) - doesn`t fit the beat; double the sliders lenght or add a repeat
- 03:00:926 (4,1) - add a note between them
- 03:09:422 (1,2) - replace the finish-hitsounds with claps
- 03:10:922 (1) - replace the clap at the repeat with a finish

[Normal]

not finished ~

[Hard]
- don`t that much notes:
- 00:54:728 (6) - too hard to see for hard
- 01:16:469 (5) - same here
- 01:34:462 (5) - ^
- 01:36:711 (5) - ^
- 01:50:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is confusing with that low AR
- 02:54:928 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this one too

[Insane]
- 00:30:488 (4) - remove clap
- 00:45:982 (5,6) - try make them round
- 01:11:846 (3,4) - maybe remove them and add a repeat at the previous slider instead
- 01:34:962 (1,2,3) - maybe rotate them 60° anti-clockwise; looks better I think :D
- 02:52:554 (4) - remove this one and resnap 02:52:679 (5)

Awesome song of an awesome band \:D/
Good luck for getting ranked ;D
riffy
poke me when it's okay to mod it
Topic Starter
pw384

Reyden wrote:

Hi o/

[General]
- maybe use this hitsound: http://puu.sh/17Q4T sounds cool with this map ;D :arrow: :idea: i'll try :D

[Easy]
- You used too many new combos; remove a few or maybe add a new combo color :arrow: this is ok
- 00:48:481 (2) - doesn`t fit the beat; double the sliders lenght or add a repeat :arrow: ok
- 03:00:926 (4,1) - add a note between them :arrow: ~
- 03:09:422 (1,2) - replace the finish-hitsounds with claps :arrow: ~
- 03:10:922 (1) - replace the clap at the repeat with a finish :arrow: ~

[Normal]

not finished ~

[Hard]
- don`t that much notes: :arrow: i think this is such easy stacks that they are readable
- 00:54:728 (6) - too hard to see for hard
- 01:16:469 (5) - same here
- 01:34:462 (5) - ^ :arrow: fix
- 01:36:711 (5) - ^
- 01:50:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is confusing with that low AR
- 02:54:928 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this one too

[Insane]
- 00:30:488 (4) - remove clap :arrow: fix
- 00:45:982 (5,6) - try make them round :arrow: i use so many round slider that i wanna have a try ._.
- 01:11:846 (3,4) - maybe remove them and add a repeat at the previous slider instead :arrow: no._.
- 01:34:962 (1,2,3) - maybe rotate them 60° anti-clockwise; looks better I think :D :arrow: good~
- 02:52:554 (4) - remove this one and resnap 02:52:679 (5) :arrow: ~

Awesome song of an awesome band \:D/
Good luck for getting ranked ;D
:) thx~~
riffy
hey!

as promised <3

[General]
o.o add more tags: Chester Bennington Rob Bourdon Brad Delson Dave Farrel Joe Hahn Mike Shinoda
colours are really odd. try something close to default colours but add some shades of gray example note: bright colours may hurt players' eyes
hitsounds are too loud for me (-5%-10% volume)
no breaks during kiai time. it's unrankable
some claps feels off vocals/music. please check them all! o3o

rename diffs? (Based on your Slider Velocity)
Easy => Actually this diff is Normal.
Make AR , OD and HP Drain higher (about 4-5) and feels free to rename this diff to normal

Normal+ => this kind of diff names is outdated. It's better to rename Normal+ to Hard
Make AR , OD and HP Drain higher (about 5-6) and feels free to rename this diff to Hard.

[Hard]
meh. Actually you're able to rename this diff to Insane
because it fels as Insane. Maybe not extremly hard insane but still Insane.(AR - 8) (others - 7)

[Easy]
sometimes yourr comboing feels random but it fits with song. i don't know why. ~.~
01:07:973 (1) - vocals apper right in the middle of this slider. it feels quite confusing and looks random. try something closer to vocals? i'd like to suggest you this example
01:15:969 (2) - i guess you forgot to add reverse for this slider :< it fits here and 01:16:469 - feels empty
01:32:962 (3) - according to your pattern there's missed new combo.
01:56:952 (1) - confusing shape for beginners. strongly not recommended for Easiest diff. (if you rename this diff to Normal it probably will be okay)

[Normal+]
looks a bit messy because of low AR :<
sometimes spacing feels inconsistent because of big grid level. agree? 00:27:989 (2,3,4) - x0.06 difference for example. switch to lowwer grid lvl (4) or disable grid snapp to fix it.
00:28:989 (1) - it looks weird to have blanket slider and not using it :/ so.. here's ultra-nazzi example for you orz
01:07:973 (2) - covered by spinner's hitburst highly not recommended fr Normal but it's okay for Hard diff.
01:15:969 (2) - same as above.
01:45:957 - normal section with some LOUD claps to make this part more awesome! >.</

[Hard]
personally i think that spacing changes here are overused and makes your flow hard to understand, anyway, it's just me. feel free to ignore.
note: patterns like this will looks "OMG TOO MESY AND HARD AS HELL TO READ" for players (and with hidden it'll looks terrible, imo (02:25:940 (1,2,3,4) - here for axample)
02:54:928 (4) - new combo to separate this pattern from previous. also fits with vocals.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
conclusion: actually this is a really good beatmap and awesome song. but sme general probleams (tags, diff names, colours) makes this map looks bad. fix it and you'll get a good map. ~

What I've done~
Topic Starter
pw384

-Bakari- wrote:

hey!

as promised <3

[General]
o.o add more tags: Chester Bennington Rob Bourdon Brad Delson Dave Farrel Joe Hahn Mike Shinoda added
colours are really odd. try something close to default colours but add some shades of gray example note: bright colours may hurt players' eyes roddie's in the end......icebean's from the inside......>w<
hitsounds are too loud for me (-5%-10% volume) fixed
no breaks during kiai time. it's unrankable fixed
some claps feels off vocals/music. please check them all! o3o

rename diffs? (Based on your Slider Velocity)
Easy => Actually this diff is Normal.
Make AR , OD and HP Drain higher (about 4-5) and feels free to rename this diff to normal

Normal+ => this kind of diff names is outdated. It's better to rename Normal+ to Hard
Make AR , OD and HP Drain higher (about 5-6) and feels free to rename this diff to Hard.

[Hard]
meh. Actually you're able to rename this diff to Insane
because it fels as Insane. Maybe not extremly hard insane but still Insane.(AR - 8) (others - 7)
i made easy and normal+ hard and renamed ._.

[Easy]
sometimes yourr comboing feels random but it fits with song. i don't know why. ~.~ vocal?no..drum?no..wtf..
01:07:973 (1) - vocals apper right in the middle of this slider. it feels quite confusing and looks random. try something closer to vocals? i'd like to suggest you this example
01:15:969 (2) - i guess you forgot to add reverse for this slider :< it fits here and 01:16:469 - feels empty
01:32:962 (3) - according to your pattern there's missed new combo.
01:56:952 (1) - confusing shape for beginners. strongly not recommended for Easiest diff. (if you rename this diff to Normal it probably will be okay)
fixed~

[Normal+]
looks a bit messy because of low AR :< ar=7 after rename
sometimes spacing feels inconsistent because of big grid level. agree? 00:27:989 (2,3,4) - x0.06 difference for example. switch to lowwer grid lvl (4) or disable grid snapp to fix it. ASH is very pro T.T fixed
00:28:989 (1) - it looks weird to have blanket slider and not using it :/ so.. here's ultra-nazzi example for you orz
01:07:973 (2) - covered by spinner's hitburst highly not recommended fr Normal but it's okay for Hard diff.
01:15:969 (2) - same as above.
01:45:957 - normal section with some LOUD claps to make this part more awesome! >.</
fixed~

[Hard]
personally i think that spacing changes here are overused and makes your flow hard to understand, anyway, it's just me. feel free to ignore.
note: patterns like this will looks "OMG TOO MESY AND HARD AS HELL TO READ" for players (and with hidden it'll looks terrible, imo (02:25:940 (1,2,3,4) - here for axample) >_< i still don't know why i did this orz
02:54:928 (4) - new combo to separate this pattern from previous. also fits with vocals.
fixed~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
conclusion: actually this is a really good beatmap and awesome song. but sme general probleams (tags, diff names, colours) makes this map looks bad. fix it and you'll get a good map. ~
0.0 ok

What I've done~
:) thx for mod~
riffy
"Give kudosu star" button is broken. orz
what i've done D:
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