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Ono Ryoko - POP STEP LOVE

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Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Gamu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月18日 at 18:43:09

Artist: Ono Ryoko
Title: POP STEP LOVE
Source: Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags: character song sena airi mythol byakugan249 palette visual novel
BPM: 180
Filesize: 4140kb
Play Time: 03:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. 249's Normal (2.72 stars, 199 notes)
  2. Collab (5 stars, 574 notes)
  3. Hard (4.92 stars, 369 notes)
Download: Ono Ryoko - POP STEP LOVE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
My 9th Ranked map.


249's Normal : Byakugan249
Hard : -Gamu-
Collab : -Gamu- & Mythol
SB : -Gamu-
I'm a beginner of SB

Sakuno Uryuu - http://osu.ppy.sh/s/58717
Sana Inui - http://osu.ppy.sh/b/196280
Last edited by Gamu , edited 78 times in total.
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
:D
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
hehe :p
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
NiceMap♥
Cute SB!!
qoot8123
1,500 posts
Joined March 2011
qoot8123
Could I make taiko diff? :)
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Gamu

qoot8123 wrote:

Could I make taiko diff? :)
ah..sorry

taiko diff is not needed..
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Gamu-chan~ i'm done :D. you need to use this file for the sliderticks and this file for the clap because i added custom hitsounds for my diff. i added "2" beside the file to avoid the confusion on which hitsounds you're using.

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Gamu

Byakugan249 wrote:

Gamu-chan~ i'm done :D. you need to use this file for the sliderticks and this file for the clap because i added custom hitsounds for my diff. i added "2" beside the file to avoid the confusion on which hitsounds you're using.

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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thank you~ :3
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
はろーはろー

[249's Normal]
hi 249~~<33

00:02:337 (2) - Add whistle at the slider's reverse arrow? I understand you're mapping by lyrics, but I think whistle is fit.
00:03:837 (1) - Add whistle at the slider's start. same reason with 00:02:337.
00:04:837 (2) - ^
01:27:837 (1) - How about this? Seem to me to be a little better :3
SPOILER
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01:53:004 (3) - This is good for me, but to change the speed slider in the same combo should be cautious. I suggest to change to another pattern :3
02:09:170 (1) - Add finish at the slider's start. You forget to put perhaps?

[Hard]
00:01:837 (3) - スライダーの開始をclapに変更、スライダーの終わりのwhistleを削除　clapは提案ですが、終わりのwhistleは少しうるさく感じます。
00:03:170 (3) - スライダーの開始をclapに変更
00:04:337 (2) - スライダーの終わりをclapに変更
00:07:170 (2) - スライダーの開始をclapに変更、スライダーの終わりのwhistleを削除
00:24:504 (2) - (1)~(3)の間隔が少し汚く見えるので、僕は(2)を1grid左にずらしたほうが好きです!
00:37:837 (3) - 00:35:337 (3) - で赤線を使っているので、00:38:004に移動した方が自然だと思います。配置は(4)にスタックでいいと思います!
00:44:837 (2,3,4) - (2),(3),(4)の見た目の間隔が揃ってた方が僕はやりやすいです!
00:52:337 (2) - パッと見で分かりやすいほうがいいと思います。こんな感じはどうでしょうか!!
SPOILER
00:55:170 (1) - りむーぶにゅーこんぼ
00:58:837 (2) - こういう配置のジャンプを使っている譜面が今は多いので、ジャンプと勘違いされるかも。(2)を単発2個にして、こんな感じはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
01:07:670 (1) - 汚いでおじゃる!!!!!!
01:30:504 (6) - でりーとのーと
01:30:670 (x) - add note　こんな音取りはどうですか!
SPOILER
02:11:004 (3) - りむーぶにゅーこんぼ
02:48:337 (2) - りむーぶにゅーこんぼ

[collab]
Finish sound is conform to this song, so I want it more in KIAI part :3

00:01:837 (3) - スライダーの終わりのwhistleを削除
00:54:671 (1,2) - 次の(1)への流れが悪い気がします。　(1)に(2)をスタックさせるか、Ctrl+hするか、別なパターンにした方がいいと思います
01:02:004 (7,8,9) - こんな感じはどうでしょうか!
SPOILER
01:04:837 (7,8) - <3
01:34:337 (1) - I think better to remove Newcombo. I feel good to play :3
01:41:504 (1) - ^
01:41:837 (1) - ^
01:42:170 (1) - ^
02:38:504 (1) - くっついてないほうがちょっと見栄えがいいきがします
SPOILER

Ranked期待してます！！！
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

terametis wrote:

[249's Normal]
hi 249~~<33 Tera-san~ <3

00:02:337 (2) - Add whistle at the slider's reverse arrow? I understand you're mapping by lyrics, but I think whistle is fit. i agree. fixed.
00:03:837 (1) - Add whistle at the slider's start. same reason with 00:02:337. ^
00:04:837 (2) - ^ ^
01:27:837 (1) - How about this? Seem to me to be a little better :3
SPOILER
160,276,87837,6,0,B|92:204|92:204|92:100,2,200
fixed it manually.
01:53:004 (3) - This is good for me, but to change the speed slider in the same combo should be cautious. I suggest to change to another pattern :3 i'm sorry this is the easiest pattern i can come up with.
02:09:170 (1) - Add finish at the slider's start. You forget to put perhaps? orz fixed ><.
ty for the mod :D. also made a self change. also Gamu, add "249's" in normal from the folder. it says so right here

SPOILER
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Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249

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170504,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
170837,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
172504,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
172837,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
179170,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
179504,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 0,0,255
Combo3 : 170,170,255

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woduq414
235 posts
Joined November 2011
woduq414
This song is so good
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hi -Gamu-, mod requested by Byakugan from my modding queue ;3

[General]

There is a problem o.o You must full submit your mapset because downloading the map I get just the Hard and Collab diff without 249's one :\
I'll skip the normal diff and I will mod it when you have fixed this problem ;3

[Hard]

00:01:171 (1,2) - I think that these 2 sliders would flow better if curved like you did for 00:01:837 (3) so that you can blanket every slider's curve with the next one. I mean:
SPOILER

120,256,1171,2,0,B|148:268|192:268,1,52.5000020027161,4|0
132,176,1504,2,0,B|160:188|204:188,1,52.5000020027161,2|0
136,96,1837,2,0,B|184:112|240:112,1,105.000004005432,8|0
00:06:004 (2) - This blanket could be improved with a fluider curve to have a better flow, I don't like as it is now:
SPOILER

0,212,6004,2,2,B|20:268|80:276,1,105.000004005432,0|0
00:23:337 (5) - You should add new combo here to keep consistency with 00:26:004 (1) and 00:28:670 (1). Or maybe you could remove new combo from them that personally I think it'd be better
00:25:670 (3) - Move this circle to have a 1,19x spacing like you did for the previous element 00:25:170 (1)
01:00:670 (3,1,2) - Are you trying to make 2 blankets here? The sliders 01:00:670 (3,2) should be more curved and further from each other so that you can blanket better with 01:01:170 (1):
SPOILER

376,104,60670,2,0,B|380:144|360:172,2,70,0|8|0
296,120,61170,5,4
288,200,61337,2,0,B|248:196|232:164,2,70,0|8|0
01:34:004 (1) - Remove new combo? It's useless in my opinion s:
01:37:004 I'd add a circle here, better if overlapped with 01:36:337 (2) to don't create some spacing issues
01:53:004 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern could be confusing because you used 1,20x spacing for 01:53:004 (1,2) and the same for 01:53:504 (2,3,4) that are 1/1 :\ You could fix this using a larger spacing between (1,2) or just reduce the (2,3,4)'s one
01:55:837 (1) - Move this slider to x:52 y:160 to have a better blanket with 01:55:170 (3) and a spacing consistency between 01:55:170 (3,2)
02:00:504 (1) - Remove new combo? Actually is useless since the rhythm is still the same of 02:00:004 (1)
02:51:837 (1) - This blanket could be more accurated and flowing. I don't know why so much mappers just use 3 slider's points to make blankets çç Too lazy xD
SPOILER

304,96,171837,6,0,B|268:96|228:136|232:168|240:208,1,140,4|8

Good map >w<

[Collab]

00:04:670 (4) - 1 grid down would make the jump more enjoyable to play and also because to have the (5) perfecly centered with the triangle
00:52:837 (1,2,3,4) - What about to change this jump to this? It flows really much better during gameplay:
SPOILER

64,192,52837,5,4
208,192,53004,1,0
40,224,53171,1,0
232,160,53337,1,4
01:34:337 (1) - Remove new combo? It's useless because you are following the same vocal's sound during this combo..
01:42:504 (1) - Add clap on this slider's end. I guess you forgot it
01:58:670 (1) - Extend this slider by 1/4? It should end on the long white tick infact..
02:02:337 (1) - This blanket can be improved to have a better flow:
SPOILER

192,340,122337,6,0,B|252:380|336:340|324:256,1,180,0|0
02:04:337 (3) - Move the 3rd slider's point to x:328 y:240 for the same reason
02:18:504 (1) - Make it more flowing? Something like this for example:
SPOILER

306,231,138504,6,0,B|352:288|448:216|400:152,2,180,0|8|0
02:39:671 (4) - Whistle on this slider's start? It would fit the vocal's rhythm
02:48:837 (5) - Move this slider to x:392 y:304 so that you can blanket it with 02:48:337 (3) and to have the 02:48:671 (4) equidistant from (3) and (5) http://puu.sh/10G2F
Nice >w<

Call me back when you have full submitted again the mapset so I can mod the normal diff too :3
See you soon ~ I hope it's helpful, have my star btw :3
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
(in my parts)
>tera all fixed
>Chewin only first mod not fixed, since there shouldn't be a clap there :o
ty~~
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Ok I'm here again to mod the byaku's diff >w<

[249's Normal]

There are so much unsnapped green lines including the kiai times' ones.
It isn't just for kiai times but for hitsounds patterns too, so you really should provide to fix it :3

00:01:837 (2) - I guess you are following the vocal here but I think it'd be better if you extend this slider by 1/2 removing the 00:03:170 (3). I think so because there should be a circle with a whistle that accentuates the sound on 00:02:504

00:06:502 (1) - Don't you think that increasing this finish's volume till 70% here would fit much better ?
00:41:158 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how you placed this elements. The slider (1) can be centered together with (2) on the grid and the slider 00:45:157 (3) could be blanketted better with 00:41:158 (1). I mean something like this that improve the map's flow IMO:
SPOILER


356,144,41158,6,0,B|232:184|204:132|204:48|260:24|316:48|316:140|280:184|148:144,2,400,4|0|4
256,292,44491,1,2
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164,276,46823,2,0,B|204:288|240:272,1,75.0000028610231,0|2
00:51:822 (1) - Make it more curved to create a blanket with 00:50:822 (2)
SPOILER


104,296,51822,6,0,B|168:356|264:304,3,150.000005722046,4|4|4|4
00:54:021 - Remove this break time because it's too short. The arrows appear during the player is still playing the map
01:17:148 (1) - Finish on this slider's head to match that clash in the cymbals?
01:27:811 (1) - ^
01:49:138 (1) - What.. extend by 1/4 to fit the vocal's sound
01:52:970 (3) - Reduce by 1/2.. for the same reason
02:41:122 (1) - I'd make this slider more curved to blanket it with 02:39:623 (3) and to have a better flow:
SPOILER


320,240,161122,6,0,B|240:272|192:264|128:220|128:136,2,262.500010013581,0|2|0

Okay that's it..
I think this map is a bit weird and.. confusing <.<
To fit the vocal's rhythm you mapped the easiest diff using more 1/2 snap divisor than the 1/1 one and sometimes you have mixed the vocal's rhythm with the hitsounds' one. This is pretty confusing to play for beginners since this is the easiest map of your mapset
Just a small comment >w<

Good luck then guys :3
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

Chewin wrote:

Ok I'm here again to mod the byaku's diff >w<

[249's Normal]

There are so much unsnapped green lines including the kiai times' ones.
It isn't just for kiai times but for hitsounds patterns too, so you really should provide to fix it :3

i did this intentionally because i don't want to see a glow on the notes.
00:01:837 (2) - I guess you are following the vocal here but I think it'd be better if you extend this slider by 1/2 removing the 00:03:170 (3). I think so because there should be a circle with a whistle that accentuates the sound on 00:02:504
alright fixed.
00:06:502 (1) - Don't you think that increasing this finish's volume till 70% here would fit much better ? whoops i thought i did that. fixed ><
00:41:158 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how you placed this elements. The slider (1) can be centered together with (2) on the grid and the slider 00:45:157 (3) could be blanketted better with 00:41:158 (1). I mean something like this that improve the map's flow IMO: no but i extended (1), removed (2) and moved some notes around.
00:51:822 (1) - Make it more curved to create a blanket with 00:50:822 (2) i made a blanket, but i curved it myself.
00:54:021 - Remove this break time because it's too short. The arrows appear during the player is still playing the map no they don't. this break appears at 00:53:670.
01:17:148 (1) - Finish on this slider's head to match that clash in the cymbals? orz i thought i added this. fixed ><
01:27:811 (1) - ^ ^
01:49:138 (1) - What.. extend by 1/4 to fit the vocal's sound no i find that unfitting and it breaks the flow in this part.
01:52:970 (3) - Reduce by 1/2.. for the same reason ^
02:41:122 (1) - I'd make this slider more curved to blanket it with 02:39:623 (3) and to have a better flow:
SPOILER


320,240,161122,6,0,B|240:272|192:264|128:220|128:136,2,262.500010013581,0|2|0
fixed it up a bit, but i'm keeping it at the same spot. i did this so that it'd be stacked on (2).

Okay that's it..
I think this map is a bit weird and.. confusing <.<
To fit the vocal's rhythm you mapped the easiest diff using more 1/2 snap divisor than the 1/1 one and sometimes you have mixed the vocal's rhythm with the hitsounds' one. This is pretty confusing to play for beginners since this is the easiest map of your mapset
Just a small comment >w< i mapped this to mainly send a message to beginners. i want them to know that you can't get good right away. you need to keep practicing until you can get it right. that's why the diff is played like this.

Good luck then guys :3
ty for the mod :D

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Gamu
terametis and Chewin

thank you for modding~ :3

I fixed almost.



woduq414

thank you~ :3
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
M4M~
all suggestions
Modding
General
249's Normalだけ終わる時間が違います。
different from end time 249's Normal only.

249's Normal
00:01:837 (2) - more curve slider?
00:09:170 (5) - I prefer to no stack here.
00:28:170 (1,2,3,4) - how about this pattern? http://puu.sh/12Q9S
01:43:837 (1) - change to slider then end this at 01:44:170 -
02:22:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - let's try create polygon circle ~ http://puu.sh/12QgD
02:40:837 (5,1,1) - spacing?

Hard
00:27:170 (2,3,1,2) - 全体を四角形ぽくしてみると綺麗かな http://puu.sh/12Ss4
00:38:170 (4) - 1/2スライダーにすると流れが綺麗になると思う
00:49:837 (3) - 1の末尾にスタックし直したほうがいいかも
00:51:837 (1,2) - ボーカルカバーならこっちのがいいかなあ http://puu.sh/12SvV
00:57:004 (1) - このほうが次の配置に繋ぎやすい? http://puu.sh/12Sya
01:05:504 (2) - add note
02:06:004 (1) - remove new combo

Collab
Gamu
00:24:504 (4,5) - もっとスライダーが曲がりたがってる
00:27:170 (2,3,4) - サビ前でここだけ白線で特に背景の音に連打の音がないと思うので 00:27:420 - ここらへんにノート追加してみて
00:29:004 (6) - 少しだけ右にずらして全体的に綺麗に http://puu.sh/12SKo
00:43:837 - 変速を使ってもスペーシングは全体の見た目に合わせると綺麗にできるのでスペーシングは1.2~1.3xくらいで調整してみて
01:03:004 - add note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/425481
01:03:670 - 上と同じ位置にadd note

Mythol
01:31:170 (4,6) - how about? http://puu.sh/12SWV
02:12:587 (5) - I think don't need this note. not fit the music.
02:53:504 (5,6,7) - let's try this http://puu.sh/12T1g

神曲だ！！
Ranked頑張ってね ;)
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi:3 As requested

[General]
●fine


[249's Normal]
●00:09:170 (5) - These notes could be stacked better. so spacing too close (0.01x)
●00:28:170 (1) - it doesn't follow the music well.
I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.try this?
●00:33:170 (3,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern?
●00:44:491 (2) - add New combo ? from here it is a slow melody
●00:51:170 (3) - hidden at 00:49:170 (1) - slider end >.< confusing many beginners
●00:51:837 (1) - hmm , do you really want to use this slider here.
it feels inconsistent here and also two-repeats-sliders are confusing for beginners .
try this ?
●01:09:170 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●01:41:170 (5,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern?
●01:39:837 (4) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:42:504 (2) - ^ same , here
●01:57:170 (1) - same here ~ 00:51:837 (1) -
●02:41:170 (1,1) - it is better to use DS1.20x

[Hard]
●00:40:837 (4,5) - ④と⑤の位置を交代してみてはどうでしょうか
●00:52:337 (2) - 00:52:837 (1) - と揃えて曲げてみる？
●02:12:504 (3) - スライダーの終点を02:13:004 (1) - の始点に向かうように曲げてみてはどうでしょう
●02:43:337 (1) - 歌詞をフォローしてもいいかもです
[Collab]
☆がむさん☆
●00:37:004 (6) - y :112に移動？00:36:504 (3,4) - で296→288となっているのでここも120→112に
●00:43:171 (2) - ここからNew combo?
●00:51:504 (5) - 00:51:837 (1) - にむけてsliderを曲げてみてはどうでしょうか
●01:13:171 (1) - New combo追加

☆Mythooool☆
●02:15:504 (3) - slider end ~ Aim for the here . 02:16:004 (4) -

配置ばかりの提案でごめんなさい・・・
hitsound の指摘するところがほとんどありませんでした><

good luck (ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ ~ ♪
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu

R a r e wrote:

249's Normal
00:01:837 (2) - more curve slider? any more and the flow would break in this part.
00:09:170 (5) - I prefer to no stack here. no because i want this stack to emphasize the instrumental. this part is like a sneak peek of what players are gonna see.
00:28:170 (1,2,3,4) - how about this pattern? http://puu.sh/12Q9S alright~. i was trying to avoid the 1/1 rhythm here.
01:43:837 (1) - change to slider then end this at 01:44:170 - no. i did this to test the players reaction on their timing. they have to know when to hit the next slider here.
02:22:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - let's try create polygon circle ~ http://puu.sh/12QgD if you notice, i did this so that the blue (4) blankets the (5) here. if i change it to that, it'll be gone.
02:40:837 (5,1,1) - spacing? oh whoops~. fixed ><

alacat wrote:

Hi:3 As requested

[249's Normal]
●00:09:170 (5) - These notes could be stacked better. so spacing too close (0.01x) ooh...i promised myself that i won't fix something like this. fixed.
●00:28:170 (1) - it doesn't follow the music well.
I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.try this?
no that kind of rhythm won't flow to the vocals. (3,4,5) is where the parts change in the vocals, and (1,2) emphasizes the vocals here.
●00:33:170 (3,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? no because (1) is where the vocals start. the instrumental is still going from (3).
●00:44:491 (2) - add New combo ? from here it is a slow melody sure. i was thinking about this after all.
●00:51:170 (3) - hidden at 00:49:170 (1) - slider end >.< confusing many beginners this is a normal diff, not an easy. just because it's the easiest diff, doesn't mean i can do easy patterns in a normal diff.
●00:51:837 (1) - hmm , do you really want to use this slider here.
it feels inconsistent here and also two-repeats-sliders are confusing for beginners .
try this ?
no that rhythm makes me feel uncomfortable. i did this as a challenge for players.
●01:09:170 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ? orz fixed.
●01:41:170 (5,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? same as 00:33:170 but, (5) follows up in the vocals from the previous although it has stopped.
●01:39:837 (4) - add whistle on the slider's head ? no it'll sound unfitting. yes it follows the dinging noise, but remember that there's claps in this part, and that'll break the flow in the hitsounding.
●01:42:504 (2) - ^ same , here ^
●01:57:170 (1) - same here ~ 00:51:837 (1) - same reply.
●02:41:170 (1,1) - it is better to use DS1.20x i fixed that in the last mod orz.

good luck (ﾉ･ˇ∀ˇ･)ﾉ ~ ♪
ty for the mods everyone :D

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: POP STEP LOVE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55837
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:POP STEP LOVE
Artist:Ono Ryoko
Creator:-Gamu-
Version:249's Normal
Source:Mashiro Iro Symphony - The color of lovers -
Tags:character song sena airi mythol byakugan249

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Airi.jpg"
//Break Periods
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2,118871,119971
2,145371,154637
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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maaagic
433 posts
Joined October 2011
maaagic
遅くなって申し訳ありません >:(
すべて提案なので気に入らなかったら無視してください・・・

[Hard]
00:01:837 (3) - -3°ほど回転させた方が綺麗になると思いました。
00:57:504 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 星形にした方が綺麗になるかなと思いました。 http://puu.sh/15apM 一応codeを
432,109,57504,1,8
332,244,57837,1,0
332,75,58170,1,8
430,212,58504,5,4
272,160,58837,1,8
272,160,59004,1,0
01:02:337 (4,1) - NC入れ替え？こっちのほうが歌に合うかなと思いました。
01:38:670 (4,1) - ＾
01:58:670 - ここにサークルがないのは少し違和感があると思います。スピナーは01:58:754 - か01:58:837 - から始めてもいいと思います。

[Collab]
00:43:004 (1,2,3,4,5) - すこし汚い感じがしました。


あまり指摘できなくて申し訳ありません...
sorry my noooob mod
nice song & map!! :)

star!! ;)
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