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I'd say add about 20 ms to all offsets (so that the first is at 208 ms).
Add a background image to both diffs.
Swim the Lake
02:06:80 - Is this non inherited timing section needed? Make it inherited.
01:08:95 (1) - Start 1/8 earlier (yeah, I know)
01:09:83 (2) - I'm fairly certain the word "there" falls on the yellow tick of 01:10:39, so a repeat slider probably doesn't work when mapping to the lyrics at this point.
01:33:95 (1) - Shorten 1/2.
02:28:06 (1,1), 02:36:06 (1,1), 02:44:06 (1,1), 02:52:06 (1,1) - Hey, does the first spinner end where the second starts? That's not allowed. How about making each spinner pair one spinner in each case, or how I suggest 01:24:08 (1,1) etc. in Swim the Ocean to be?
02:48:80 (2) - 1/4 backward.
Swim the Ocean
00:07:33 (1) - 1/4 forward
01:08:83 (1) - See Swim the Lake for why a repeat slider can't work when mapping to the lyrics at this point.
01:24:08 (1,1), 01:32:08 (1,1), 02:28:08 (1,1), 02:36:08 (1,1)- if those spinners are supposed to be mapped to the lyrics, make the second one start 1/4 later.
02:10:95 (4) - 1/4 shorter
02:15:33 (1) - If you're mapping this to the lyrics, make it 1/4 longer
02:17:33 (1) - 1/4 forward
02:25:95 (1), 02:33:95 (1) - 1/4 shorter
02:45:95 (1) - If you're mapping this to the lyrics, make it 1/2 shorter.
02:53:45 (2) - 1/4 shorter
03:28:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Since there is no longer any beat or music here, I'd suggest deleting this last bit. Besides, the first slider can't be synced with the lyrics, since the singer is "winding down".
Add a background image to both diffs.
Swim the Lake
02:06:80 - Is this non inherited timing section needed? Make it inherited.
01:08:95 (1) - Start 1/8 earlier (yeah, I know)
01:09:83 (2) - I'm fairly certain the word "there" falls on the yellow tick of 01:10:39, so a repeat slider probably doesn't work when mapping to the lyrics at this point.
01:33:95 (1) - Shorten 1/2.
02:28:06 (1,1), 02:36:06 (1,1), 02:44:06 (1,1), 02:52:06 (1,1) - Hey, does the first spinner end where the second starts? That's not allowed. How about making each spinner pair one spinner in each case, or how I suggest 01:24:08 (1,1) etc. in Swim the Ocean to be?
02:48:80 (2) - 1/4 backward.
Swim the Ocean
00:07:33 (1) - 1/4 forward
01:08:83 (1) - See Swim the Lake for why a repeat slider can't work when mapping to the lyrics at this point.
01:24:08 (1,1), 01:32:08 (1,1), 02:28:08 (1,1), 02:36:08 (1,1)- if those spinners are supposed to be mapped to the lyrics, make the second one start 1/4 later.
02:10:95 (4) - 1/4 shorter
02:15:33 (1) - If you're mapping this to the lyrics, make it 1/4 longer
02:17:33 (1) - 1/4 forward
02:25:95 (1), 02:33:95 (1) - 1/4 shorter
02:45:95 (1) - If you're mapping this to the lyrics, make it 1/2 shorter.
02:53:45 (2) - 1/4 shorter
03:28:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Since there is no longer any beat or music here, I'd suggest deleting this last bit. Besides, the first slider can't be synced with the lyrics, since the singer is "winding down".
Fun map EEeee good job 
[Swim the Ocean]
Make the overal difficulty higher, that way the approach circles will be faster
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[Swim the Ocean]
Make the overal difficulty higher, that way the approach circles will be faster
.What's with the ''storyboard'' picture in the beginning? Which is only on for 1 mili second or so? (Check design -> Foreground)
I would change offset to 00:32:208 imo because the offset now is starting on the piano rhytm.
[Swim the Ocean]
00:50:958 - Increase the slider with 1/4.
00:52:958 - Extra note.
00:58:208 - 1/4 earliër.
01:09:083 - Extra note here or increase slider length with 1/4.
01:25:958 - Increase spinner length with 1/4.
01:33:958 - ^
01:51:083 - 1/4 earliër. (if vocals)
01:51:208 - Extra note. (if vocals)
02:00:958 - 1/4 earliër.
02:03:083 - 1/4 earliër, and increase it with 1/4.
02:04:583 - Extra note.
02:04:833 - 1/4 later.
[Swim Larto Lake]
Change it to Swim the Larto Lake (?)
00:53:208 - There are 2 notes on the same tick.
00:56:833 - Extra note.
And that last slider... Oo really change it.
Will check the other diff later.
I would change offset to 00:32:208 imo because the offset now is starting on the piano rhytm.
[Swim the Ocean]
00:50:958 - Increase the slider with 1/4.
00:52:958 - Extra note.
00:58:208 - 1/4 earliër.
01:09:083 - Extra note here or increase slider length with 1/4.
01:25:958 - Increase spinner length with 1/4.
01:33:958 - ^
01:51:083 - 1/4 earliër. (if vocals)
01:51:208 - Extra note. (if vocals)
02:00:958 - 1/4 earliër.
02:03:083 - 1/4 earliër, and increase it with 1/4.
02:04:583 - Extra note.
02:04:833 - 1/4 later.
[Swim Larto Lake]
Change it to Swim the Larto Lake (?)
00:53:208 - There are 2 notes on the same tick.
00:56:833 - Extra note.
And that last slider... Oo really change it.
Will check the other diff later.
[Swim The Lake]
2:48:829 (2)- Sounds strange. I can't get a 300 on here. move 1/4 beat backward(make 1/4 beat slower) then unlock the grid snap. and make closer from (3)
3:10:208 (4)- Move up a bit.
[Swim The Larto Lake]
20:959(1)- Extend 1/8 beat.
53:954(3)- Move left a bit.
2:49:204(7)-Move down a bit.
[Swim The Ocean]
1:09:454(3)-Unlock the grid snap, click the distance snap(1.0). Then Move down a bit.
1:09:833(4)-Same as above
1:54:704(1)-Unlock the gird snap and move right a bit.
There is a limit when you use a grid snap only.
EDIT:Feed a Kudosu to Larto, gladi, maxwell, sin and me.
2:48:829 (2)- Sounds strange. I can't get a 300 on here. move 1/4 beat backward(make 1/4 beat slower) then unlock the grid snap. and make closer from (3)
3:10:208 (4)- Move up a bit.
[Swim The Larto Lake]
20:959(1)- Extend 1/8 beat.
53:954(3)- Move left a bit.
2:49:204(7)-Move down a bit.
[Swim The Ocean]
1:09:454(3)-Unlock the grid snap, click the distance snap(1.0). Then Move down a bit.
1:09:833(4)-Same as above
1:54:704(1)-Unlock the gird snap and move right a bit.
There is a limit when you use a grid snap only.
EDIT:Feed a Kudosu to Larto, gladi, maxwell, sin and me.
I keep thinking an offset of 202... but, eh... I don't know. XD
Swim the Lake
01:08:82 (1) - Start 1/4th later
01:10:32 (3) - 1/8th later. Hahahaha.
01:19:32 (1) - Start 1/4th later, end 1/4th earlier
02:25:70 (1) - Slider sounds odd, I say it could start one repeat later.
02:37:83 (1) - Could really start 1/4th later.
02:45:83 (1) - ^
02:45:83 (1) - ^
02:53:83 (1) - ^ Okay, you get my drift, really.
Don't find much problem with Larto's difficulty...
Swim the Ocean
02:29:83 (1) - Refer to Swim the Lake, and other spinners of similarity and "Kelsey"
Other than that... there seems to be some 1/8th notes in this song, but I can't really pinpoint it. Sinistro had made some previous notes about it... but yeah, Metro Station's singer needs to go get shot.
Swim the Lake
01:08:82 (1) - Start 1/4th later
01:10:32 (3) - 1/8th later. Hahahaha.
01:19:32 (1) - Start 1/4th later, end 1/4th earlier
02:25:70 (1) - Slider sounds odd, I say it could start one repeat later.
02:37:83 (1) - Could really start 1/4th later.
02:45:83 (1) - ^
02:45:83 (1) - ^
02:53:83 (1) - ^ Okay, you get my drift, really.
Don't find much problem with Larto's difficulty...
Swim the Ocean
02:29:83 (1) - Refer to Swim the Lake, and other spinners of similarity and "Kelsey"
Other than that... there seems to be some 1/8th notes in this song, but I can't really pinpoint it. Sinistro had made some previous notes about it... but yeah, Metro Station's singer needs to go get shot.
seems slightly early, but only very slightly. 3-4 ms tops.
[Swim the Ocean]
A lot bothers me, but i think it's just because of the weird rhythms in the song.
02:00:58 (1,2,3,4) - I just don't like this. Either make the slider a non-repeating slider(making it only a 1/2 beat slider) or try this (This is just how i would have personally done it)
02:19:45 (1) - Also shorten this for same reasons as above.
02:29:95 (1) - 1/4 longer.
02:37:95 (1) - ^
02:45:95 (1) - Too short in my opinion.
03:01:70 (1,2,3) - These kinda come out of nowhere. This is the only spot you included jumps, and it seems like a weird place to decide to do that.
03:28:20 - Timing section needs to go here for 124 BPM.
Anyways, i have to go for now. What i've posted includes my opinions as well as modding. If you disagree with what i've posted, just let me know.
[Swim the Ocean]
A lot bothers me, but i think it's just because of the weird rhythms in the song.
02:00:58 (1,2,3,4) - I just don't like this. Either make the slider a non-repeating slider(making it only a 1/2 beat slider) or try this (This is just how i would have personally done it)
02:00:45 - Circle02:17:45 (1) - I'd say move this onto the red tick. It may not follow the vocals exactly, but it feels better to me. (and shorten accordingly.)
02:00:70 - Circle
02:00:83 - Circle
02:01:08 - Slider (1/2 beat long, no repeat)
02:01:45 - Circle
02:01:70 - Circle
02:19:45 (1) - Also shorten this for same reasons as above.
02:29:95 (1) - 1/4 longer.
02:37:95 (1) - ^
02:45:95 (1) - Too short in my opinion.
03:01:70 (1,2,3) - These kinda come out of nowhere. This is the only spot you included jumps, and it seems like a weird place to decide to do that.
03:28:20 - Timing section needs to go here for 124 BPM.
Anyways, i have to go for now. What i've posted includes my opinions as well as modding. If you disagree with what i've posted, just let me know.
[Swim the Lake]
01:08:95 (1,2,3) - This sounds bad. Move (1) 1/4 back, remove (3), and repeat (2).
01:19:45 (1) - Extend 1/4.
02:47:45 (1) - Too far from (2).
02:50:20 (4) - Too far from (3).
02:53:95 (1) - End 1/4 earlier.
03:28:20 (1) - This isn't so important but IMO I think it sounds better ending 1 beat earlier.
[Swim the Larto Lake]
Name should definitely be Larto Swims the Lake
00:57:95 (1) - Extend 1/8.
00:58:33 (2) - Extend 1/8.
01:57:08 (1) - Extend 1/4, remove whistle.
01:58:95 (1) - Remove whistle.
03:21:70 (1) - Add whistle to slider track.
03:23:70 (3) - Replace with just one hitcircle.
[Swim the Ocean]
00:13:51 (5) - Too close to (4).
00:14:76 (8,9,10) - Sounds bad, no suggestions other than ditch it.
00:39:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move 1/4 earlier (I know it's earlier than the beat, but it sounds much better this way).
00:41:25 (9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3) - Same as above.
01:05:14 (1) - Same as above.
01:31:51 (5,6,7) - Move 1/4 earlier.
02:25:00 (2) - Add a note 1/4 earlier.
02:25:25 (3) - Move 1/4 later.
02:25:50 (4,6) - Remove these two.
02:48:76 (5) - Move 1/4 later, stack this with (4,6).
01:08:95 (1,2,3) - This sounds bad. Move (1) 1/4 back, remove (3), and repeat (2).
01:19:45 (1) - Extend 1/4.
02:47:45 (1) - Too far from (2).
02:50:20 (4) - Too far from (3).
02:53:95 (1) - End 1/4 earlier.
03:28:20 (1) - This isn't so important but IMO I think it sounds better ending 1 beat earlier.
[Swim the Larto Lake]
00:57:95 (1) - Extend 1/8.
00:58:33 (2) - Extend 1/8.
01:57:08 (1) - Extend 1/4, remove whistle.
01:58:95 (1) - Remove whistle.
03:21:70 (1) - Add whistle to slider track.
03:23:70 (3) - Replace with just one hitcircle.
[Swim the Ocean]
00:13:51 (5) - Too close to (4).
00:14:76 (8,9,10) - Sounds bad, no suggestions other than ditch it.
00:39:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move 1/4 earlier (I know it's earlier than the beat, but it sounds much better this way).
00:41:25 (9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3) - Same as above.
01:05:14 (1) - Same as above.
01:31:51 (5,6,7) - Move 1/4 earlier.
02:25:00 (2) - Add a note 1/4 earlier.
02:25:25 (3) - Move 1/4 later.
02:25:50 (4,6) - Remove these two.
02:48:76 (5) - Move 1/4 later, stack this with (4,6).
Topic Starter
DAWNII U thanks a lot but something seems way off with my map, never touched it in a while, and wow
GOD THIS GUY Won't stop singing to 1/8(Maxwell pointed it out)
so kudosu for u
Larto said something was wrong with his hitsounds, So I mine was messed up too.GOD thats what happens when I don't touch a map in a while
huh
GOD THIS GUY Won't stop singing to 1/8(Maxwell pointed it out)
so kudosu for u
Larto said something was wrong with his hitsounds, So I mine was messed up too.GOD thats what happens when I don't touch a map in a while
huh
Download: Metro Station - Kelsey (EEeee) [Swim the Larto Lake].osu
And I swim the ocean for you~
The ocean for you~
WOOOOOooooooooOOOOOOOoooooooOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooOOOOOOAH
KELSEY!
Btw, fixed everything, also Dawn's problems.
And I swim the ocean for you~
The ocean for you~
WOOOOOooooooooOOOOOOOoooooooOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooOOOOOOAH
KELSEY!
Btw, fixed everything, also Dawn's problems.
:Q__
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<Swim the Lake>
00:22:70 (1) a bit too far from the slider
hmm too many spinners imo
try to use sliders or something to replace those spinners
<Larto>
Hey you are so evil XDDDD
I like those whistle sliders
Good job
03:00:70 (5)~(11) ugly XD
<Swim the Ocean>
00:13:45 (5) down a bit
00:41:20 (1) can you move more far from 00:40:76 (8)
Spinners.... too much imo
I like most of hitsounds. but some parts have too many finish sounds XD
I am sorry took so long time to give you a short post
This song is really hard for me to mod XD (i don`t want to be nazi )
overall is a good map
stared
00:22:70 (1) a bit too far from the slider
hmm too many spinners imo
try to use sliders or something to replace those spinners
<Larto>
Hey you are so evil XDDDD
I like those whistle sliders
Good job
03:00:70 (5)~(11) ugly XD
<Swim the Ocean>
00:13:45 (5) down a bit
00:41:20 (1) can you move more far from 00:40:76 (8)
Spinners.... too much imo
I like most of hitsounds. but some parts have too many finish sounds XD
I am sorry took so long time to give you a short post
This song is really hard for me to mod XD (i don`t want to be nazi )
overall is a good map
stared
Swim the Lake~
00:13:45 (1) - Move right on top of 1's endpoint
01:04:46 (1) - Make the endpoint right on top of 2.
01:24:03 (1,1) - End these on the white ticks.
02:32:73 (2) - Align this with 1.
03:02:49 (1,2,3,4) - Move all these a tick to the right on Grid Level 3.
Swim the Larto Lake~
Okay, I'm seeing a few sliders that aren't quite synced, or ends too early. So...
So choose the option "Recalculate Slider Length" while on the 1/6 divisor. Then check your whole map for sliders that end up being too late or too early from recalculating.
Swim the Ocean~
00:44:45 (2) - Check distance spacing again
00:56:70 (1) - Maybe put on top of the endpoint of the slider?
01:19:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too early.
01:23:97 (1,1) - ^
01:40:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Some real weird timing of the beats there.
02:00:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:15:26 (1) - Move to 02:15:37.
02:54:89 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - To early.
03:07:42 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - ^
Using 1/6 notes mixed in with 1/8 notes makes me sad
00:13:45 (1) - Move right on top of 1's endpoint
01:04:46 (1) - Make the endpoint right on top of 2.
01:24:03 (1,1) - End these on the white ticks.
02:32:73 (2) - Align this with 1.
03:02:49 (1,2,3,4) - Move all these a tick to the right on Grid Level 3.
Swim the Larto Lake~
Okay, I'm seeing a few sliders that aren't quite synced, or ends too early. So...
So choose the option "Recalculate Slider Length" while on the 1/6 divisor. Then check your whole map for sliders that end up being too late or too early from recalculating.
Swim the Ocean~
00:44:45 (2) - Check distance spacing again
00:56:70 (1) - Maybe put on top of the endpoint of the slider?
01:19:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too early.
01:23:97 (1,1) - ^
01:40:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Some real weird timing of the beats there.
02:00:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:15:26 (1) - Move to 02:15:37.
02:54:89 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - To early.
03:07:42 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - ^
Using 1/6 notes mixed in with 1/8 notes makes me sad
Fixed mine.Download: Metro Station - Kelsey (EEeee) [Swim the Larto Lake].osu
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Topic Starter
Just wanna say thanks for all the mods, it really helps
Anyways..... Larto Hurry up, U could just edit ur old post and add a new attachment:P
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Anyways..... Larto Hurry up, U could just edit ur old post and add a new attachment:P
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Download: Metro Station - Kelsey (EEeee) [Swim the Larto Lake].osuAn64fan wrote:
Swim the Larto Lake
This is assuming I'm dealing with the most recent version...
00:11:20 (8) - Weird timing is weird. Shorten to the full beat and adjust spacing as needed. Done
00:20:95 (1) - I'd say to lengthen a 1/4 beat. Done
00:22:95 (1) - ^ Done
00:33:70 (6) - Lengthen to the 1/4. Done
00:33:95 (7,8,1,2) - Adjust spacing around here (kinda uneven). Seemed fine with me.
00:58:33 (2) - Lengthen 1/4 and adjust spacing as needed. Done
01:08:83 (1) - 1/4 back and adjust as needed. Changed pattern entirely.
01:09:83 (1) - Same. Changed pattern entirely.
01:10:39 (2) - Move to the 1/2.Changed pattern entirely.
02:21:45 (4) - Would personally say to shorten it by 1/2 beat, though it works as it is now if that's how you prefer it.Killed anyways :O
02:57:20 (2,3,4,5) - Your spacing looks a bit sloppy here, Larto.
03:12:20 (1,1) - Shorten both to the 1/2s.Done
03:23:20 (1,2,3) - Why is it that all of your guest diffs I've been seeing recently have something like this? ): Tbh, it feels quite out of place. Lolfixed.
EDIT: Added Kiai
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