1. Easy (1.58 stars, 124 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 511 notes)
3. mochi's Hard (4.93 stars, 377 notes)
4. Sakuya's Normal (3.1 stars, 173 notes)

shojimeguro wrote:

Easy
try to revert your wallpaper to 800x600 not 1024x768 the current size is allowed
well beats seems to be in place so i have nothing to say

Normal
try to change slider tick rate to 3 it will boost your slider sound to the song anyway waiting on lunarsakuya
well beats seems to be in place so i have nothing to say (you are good beatapper aren't you?) lol ty

that's all i can mod ok ><
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon ty!

1. Why the Easy and Normal begin at 00:17:687 and not 00:15:973? I think I know the reason, but is there really nothing you two can do here?

1. 00:35:687 (2,3) - I don't really like how these two objects overlap (because (3) is slightly overlapped by the slider's path), but I guess it's fine.
2. 00:48:544 (3,4,5) - Uh... Personally, I would space them normally instead of stacking them. Don't think the new players (remember, this diff is supposed to be played by them) would be able to react to the stacking well, especially considering each note is only ~400ms apart.
3. 01:42:116 (4,5,1) - ^
4. 01:43:830 (2,3) - You should definitely avoid the overlapping here. Simply placing them linearly should do.
5. 01:50:687 (1,2,3) - This one looks messy, IMO. Maybe try a pattern similar to what I have suggested to you in the past, but with a little tweaking? (If you don't get it, I'm talking about that (9,10,11) pattern.)
6. 02:16:615 (1) - Use the code below to make the blanket look (somewhat) better?
   

   256,64,136615,6,0,B|184:72|184:152,1,120

7. 02:17:472 (2,3) - Same as 01:43:830 (2,3). Also, make sure that (2) points to (3)'s head? It looks weird now, IMO.
8. 02:39:758 (2,3) - This overlap also doesn't look good, but still pretty fine.

1. 01:14:687 (5) - NC? I think the combo is too long and it's just weird not to do that.
2. 01:27:973 (3) - Move to (328,184) so 01:26:687 (2,3) can form a blanket(-ish; not really sure actually, but it sure looks neater) pattern?
3. 01:45:544 (5,1) - Looks weird because (5)'s end seems to be randomly placed. I recommend to rearrange stuff here so (5) can point (1). Not really important though.

1. 00:26:259 (1,2,3,4) - I can't see any definite pattern here. It looks somewhat messy. Feel free to leave it as is, though, although I recommend to make some nice patterns out of this (maybe squares or diamonds).
2. 00:29:687 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (This also applies to the patterns at the beginning of the kiai time.)

1. 00:16:401 (1) - There is no need of this NC since we're not on a new stanza yet.
2. 00:16:937 (1) - ^
3. 00:55:401 (6) - Wow, this combo is pretty long. NC this, please, as I don't see any reason to continue the combo.
4. 01:44:259 (4) - Same case with that Twin Blades (I hope you understand what I'm talking about here, but if not... the position of (4) looks out of place, so try to make sure 01:42:973 (1,2,3,4) is placed properly so they'll make a good-looking pattern?)

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi.

Randomly modding from Teru21's modding team queue here

Yeah, this is the third time. lol np, i appreciate the mods

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>General

1. Why the Easy and Normal begin at 00:17:687 and not 00:15:973? I think I know the reason, but is there really nothing you two can do here? hmm they don't all necessary have to start at the same place as the rest, & the beat at the beginning is rather complicated for beginners

>Easy

1. 00:35:687 (2,3) - I don't really like how these two objects overlap (because (3) is slightly overlapped by the slider's path), but I guess it's fine. its distanced snapped so its alright i guess
2. 00:48:544 (3,4,5) - Uh... Personally, I would space them normally instead of stacking them. Don't think the new players (remember, this diff is supposed to be played by them) would be able to react to the stacking well, especially considering each note is only ~400ms apart. k i changed to slider
3. 01:42:116 (4,5,1) - ^ changed to slider
4. 01:43:830 (2,3) - You should definitely avoid the overlapping here. Simply placing them linearly should do. i think just about every note you see is overlapping or "touching" the next note. its part of the spacing >< but i will make the pattern more square if thats any eaiser..
5. 01:50:687 (1,2,3) - This one looks messy, IMO. Maybe try a pattern similar to [http://puu.sh/OaVA]what I have suggested to you in the past, but with a little tweaking?[/url] (If you don't get it, I'm talking about that (9,10,11) pattern.) i wish to keep this pattern b/c it leads in smoothly to the next combo, which is a symmetry pattern and i dont want to break it
6. 02:16:615 (1) - Use the code below to make the blanket look (somewhat) better? ok i used, thank u
   

   256,64,136615,6,0,B|184:72|184:152,1,120

7. 02:17:472 (2,3) - Same as 01:43:830 (2,3). Also, make sure that (2) points to (3)'s head? It looks weird now, IMO. okay i flipped 2 so it faces 3
8. 02:39:758 (2,3) - This overlap also doesn't look good, but still pretty fine. yea not a big deal to me

>Sakuya's Normal

1. 01:14:687 (5) - NC? I think the combo is too long and it's just weird not to do that. yay nice catch
2. 01:27:973 (3) - Move to (328,184) so 01:26:687 (2,3) can form a blanket(-ish; not really sure actually, but it sure looks neater) pattern? lol did it anyway
3. 01:45:544 (5,1) - Looks weird because (5)'s end seems to be randomly placed. I recommend to rearrange stuff here so (5) can point (1). Not really important though. no change

>Insane

1. 00:16:401 (1) - There is no need of this NC since we're not on a new stanza yet. alright fine
2. 00:16:937 (1) - ^ no b/c beat slightly shifts
3. 00:55:401 (6) - Wow, this combo is pretty long. NC this, please, as I don't see any reason to continue the combo. okay
4. 01:44:259 (4) - Same case with that Twin Blades (I hope you understand what I'm talking about here, but if not... the position of (4) looks out of place, so try to make sure 01:42:973 (1,2,3,4) is placed properly so they'll make a good-looking pattern?)hm..ill think about it

...This should be enough

Good luck on the way

23:33 Roddie: : oh hey
23:33 Roddie: : i was going to ask you if we can do an in-game mod
23:34 meiikyuu: : oh
23:35 meiikyuu: : okay
23:37 Roddie: :  let me know when you're ready
23:38 meiikyuu: : alright one sec
23:38 meiikyuu: : lol just submitted something new
23:38 meiikyuu: : and yes i am ready now
23:38 Roddie: : okay
23:40 Roddie: : could you put in a little more effort with the claps for Easy?
23:40 Roddie: : same goes with Normal
23:40 Roddie: : its quite lacking no offense
23:40 meiikyuu: : oh wait, uh..dont worry about the hitsounds
23:41 Roddie: : why is that?
23:41 meiikyuu: : i actually forgot to put them on lol
23:41 Roddie: : okay
23:44 Roddie: : 00:37:401 (4)-
23:44 Roddie: : shape this to have a proper curve l
23:44 Roddie: : like this
23:45 Roddie: : http://puu.sh/Yz8H
23:45 meiikyuu: : i see
23:46 meiikyuu: : alright i fxed it up
23:50 Roddie: : 02:04:401 (1, 2)-
23:51 Roddie: : I suggest unstacking those
23:51 meiikyuu: : yes
23:51 Roddie: : because when beginners go through that part, they'll chase after the 2nd note early, if you get what I mean
23:52 meiikyuu: : okay, i fixed it
23:53 Roddie: : we're all see with Easy
23:53 Roddie: : since sakuya isn't here, i guess i could post in my mod in a post
23:54 meiikyuu: : sure you can post the chat and type up the mod for sakuya
23:54 Roddie: : okay
23:56 meiikyuu: : let me know when you are going to do insane
23:56 Roddie: : i'm ready
23:57 meiikyuu: : kk
23:58 Roddie: : just wanted to say there are claps missing on key notes
23:59 Roddie: : on insane
23:59 meiikyuu: : yeah u can ignore those too lol
23:59 meiikyuu: : ill finish all hitsounds like tomorrow
23:59 Roddie: : okay (:
23:59 meiikyuu: : :>
00:04 Roddie: : 02:23:901 (5)-
00:04 Roddie: : this isn't properly stacked
00:05 meiikyuu: : ok
00:07 Roddie: : 02:46:615 (1)-
00:07 Roddie: : this sounds better on 1/8
00:07 Roddie: : not 1/6 imo
00:08 meiikyuu: : oh i see :o
00:09 Roddie: : oh goodie!
00:09 Roddie: : we're done
00:09 meiikyuu: : :o
00:09 meiikyuu: : thanks :)
00:09 Roddie: : for insane
00:09 Roddie: : lol
00:10 meiikyuu: : xD

1. Could you put in more effort with the claps. It's a bit lacking no offense.
2. 01:13:401 (4)-A finish on the end would sound nice.
3. 01:35:259 (4)-^

1. 00:15:973 (1,2,3,4,1) - add some finish sounds here :3
2. 00:38:473 (1) - clap at the end?
3. 00:40:401 (2,2) - clap at the head?
4. 01:08:901 (1) - do the slider like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416514 I think it fits better to the music :3
5. 01:33:437 - rhythm is like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416519
6. 02:05:259 (1) - Good :3
7. 02:09:758 (1,2) - symmetrical o.o?

1. 01:43:401 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416522 move here so the end triangle looks better.?
2. 01:45:758 (1,2,3) - I think may be a bit hard for a Hard diff when there are notes after it. put the end near the next slider head? :3
3. 02:04:187 (2) - ^
4. 02:14:044 (3) - move here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416526 o.o?
5. 02:37:187 (1,2,3,4) - better 1.41x www http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416528

1. 00:18:544 (2,4) - make it symmetrical
2. 00:21:973 (6) - finish, you know
3. 01:15:973 (3) - symmetrical ..?
4. 01:26:687 (2) - blanket wwwwww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416530
5. 01:47:687 (2) - don't put it too near the circle, it looks like blanket is wrong, try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416532
6. better to reduce the acceleration as it's only a Normal diff, about 1.25x imo

1. 00:39:973 (1) - make one line with (6), like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416535. you can move (2) up a little, then symmetry for (3).

• 
  Couldn't really find that much in this diff, the things I listed are just opinions.
  00:46:830 (2,3) - I don't like how this goes in the same direction
  01:43:830 (2,3) - Overlapping too much imo
  02:04:401 (1) - 2 grids to the right *Tiny grid?
  02:11:472 (3) - Might just be me, but I really dislike the form of this slider in general
  02:39:758 (2,3) - Overlapping too much imo

• 
  00:20:259 (4) - How about making this a blanket over the end of 00:18:544 (2) -
  00:21:973 (6) - ^ @ 00:21:544 (5) -
  00:27:116 (4) - Putting this a little lower and a bit more straight would play better: http://puu.sh/10m22
  00:37:401 (1) - This curve looks a bit weird http://puu.sh/10mmL looks better imo, Code below:
  

  136,120,37401,6,0,B|72:120|72:120|32:120|8:152|8:200|32:232|72:232|72:232|136:232,1,300,0|4

  00:39:116 (3) - ^ Copy that one if you fix it
  02:44:044 (6) - 2 grids down, 1 grid right with *Small grid
  02:45:758 (2) - This one looks a bit weird too

• 
  HP drain -1? It's a pretty tough hard so might be necessary
  00:22:830 (1) - Unnecessary overlap
  00:24:544 (1) - Untill 00:30:973 (4) - Is a bit too much of the same imo, how about adding some curve to some of the sliders?
  02:06:330 (1) - ^ 02:12:758 (4) -
  
  Really nice diff, enjoyed playing this

• 
  01:05:259 (8) - I usually like weird sliders, but this just looks too random.
  01:22:187 (9) - Should be 1/8, not 1/6
  01:58:830 (8) - Why won't you make this a stream, a slider feels awkward as you're making streams out of it on the other spots
  02:20:044 (1) - Would be better if this were symmetrical, or otherwise wake it more obvious that it's not meant to me symmetric, this looks like an attempt of making it symmetric
  02:20:901 (3) - ^

SPOILER

340,264,26259,2,0,B|332:340|256:344|180:340|172:264,2,240

Byakugan249 wrote:

ahh so it's done~...alright let's get started. mod requested my mochi on #modreqs.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
CLEAR!

[Easy]
with patterns like this, AR3 would give off a smooth feeling to the song. fixed
00:26:259 (3) - make this slider symmetrical. it'll look like as if the pattern is going around in a circle. like this, and i feel the flow would be smoother since it gives off a nice feeling to this slider IMO. fixed
00:35:687 (2) - make this slider look like the purple (3) instead. i feel that by doing this, the flow would continue from the purple (3). IMO this curved slider breaks the flow in this part of the song (if you do this, you have to move some notes around) got rid of the curve
00:37:401 (4) - *nazi* this slider can look symmetrical. just move the last point around and it'll look symmetrical. okay
00:48:544 (3) - Ctrl+> for this slider. since (1,2) rotate at a 90 degree angle, doing it here would be consistent for this pattern since players might be expecting something like this IMO. fixed stuff around the part
01:06:116 (2) - move this to the left instead of the right side. the flow would be smoother during gameplay if you do this IMO. ok
01:15:973 (2,3) - hmm...perhaps you can adjust these sliders so that it'd blanket (1)? i think its fine for now
01:17:687 (1) - i feel that the spinner should end at 01:20:687 to follow the sound in the instrumental. you can add notes at the next downbeats to follow the bass but leave a 1/1 gap for beginners to recover in time for the next note.
01:42:116 (4) - i'm thinking of making this a curved slider to blanket (3). same reason as 00:35:687, this time from the previous note.
01:55:830 (1) - remove the NC for this. the instrumental after the last few repeat sliders follow the same thing.
01:57:544 (2) - this should be a NC. the difference between this one and the previous note is the bass. this part has the bas while the previous note doesn't have it.
02:05:259 (3) - the slider should look like this. as you see, it looks somewhat symmetrical and it looks nicer to see this compared to the current slider during gameplay.
02:11:472 (3) - you forgot to add a finish at the end. add it to match the cymbals.
02:14:044 (4) - make this a NC. since the cymbals are at the end of (3), it'll show that a new pattern has occurred and the instrumental changes in this part if you listen carefully.
02:17:472 (2) - make this slider look like (1) like this. i feel that doing this should flow smoother to the next note from the previous slider during gameplay IMO.
02:31:187 (4) - NC here because the instrumental's volume slightly rises here.
02:36:330 (2) - i'm hearing cymbals at the beginning of this slider, so add a finish here to emphasize it.

[Insane]
00:23:044 - remove the break here. it'll be consistent with the other diffs (not hard).
00:31:401 (5) - make this a NC. the instrumental changes, and a finish is there, indicating that there's gonna be a new pattern up ahead.
01:08:901 (4,5) - these sliders can look a lot nicer if they're symmetrical. the look of it looks ugly and it doesn't fit to the song IMO.
01:21:116 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ooh stacks after the spinner might be boring for other players. space these notes out to a stream to make it fun and exciting for others players.
01:36:544 (2,3) - make these curved sliders similar to (1). the straight sliders break the flow in this combo during gameplay IMO.
01:43:402 (2) - Ctrl+R to make the flow smoother during gameplay.
01:59:901 (4) - Ctrl+R because the transition to the repeat slider made me feel uncomfortable since there were 1/4 sliders as the last few notes in this combo. it'd be easier to players and i think that it'll make other players feel comfortable about this during gameplay.
02:05:259 (1) - lol i've seen a similar slider compared to this .
02:30:758 (4) - i'm thinking Ctrl+R for consistency with (1,2).
02:36:330 (5) - you forgot a finish at the beginning. add it to emphasize the cymbals.
02:36:972 (8,10) - i'm thinking of spacing these notes out to the point that it should be stacked on (4,5) so that the transition looks smoother and neater during gameplay.

I guess that's it. GL