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Goku Rakujokai - Oato ga Yoroshikutte... Yo! (TV Size)

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Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 7월 25일 수요일 at 오전 12:54:46

Artist: Goku Rakujokai
Title: Oato ga Yoroshikutte... Yo! (TV Size)
Source: Joshiraku
Tags: Vicho-kun Melophobia JoJo climbb65588 kanpakyin opening
BPM: 189
Filesize: 13398kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 562 notes)
  2. JoJo's Easy (2.26 stars, 85 notes)
  3. Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 548 notes)
  4. Melo's Normal (4.11 stars, 119 notes)
  5. Rika (5 stars, 383 notes)
  6. Vicho's Hard (4.99 stars, 253 notes)
Download: Goku Rakujokai - Oato ga Yoroshikutte... Yo! (TV Size)
Download: Goku Rakujokai - Oato ga Yoroshikutte... Yo! (TV Size) (no video)
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My 29th Ranked beat map.

Joshiraku opening,it's fun song,hope you like enjoy <3

Rika(Insane) by me.

Hard by Vicho-kun.

Normal by Melophobia.

Easy by JoJo.

Taiko by climbb65588.

2nd Taiko by kanpakyin.
Last edited by Kawayi Rika , edited 24 times in total.
JoJo
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JoJo
Easy done!

(对了不要删我蓝线/ \ 没那东西我会很不自在T^T)
Nymph
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Nymph
哇啾啾抱
Melophobia
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Melophobia
http://puu.sh/IG8e
done~
Chewin
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Chewin
Hi rika >w<

[General]
What about to add Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:485, ends on 01:20:723 in the easy and normal diff too?

[JoJo's Easy]
00:39:771 (3) - I would remove this note >w<
00:42:311 (3) - ^ the same, also because overlapping this circle with 00:42:628 (1) is very hard to play for beginners
01:03:581 (1) - Remove NC?
Fine, just small suggestions ~

[Melo's Normal]
It's clear and just awesome ~

[Vicho's Hard]
00:05:327 (5) - I think this is better for and hard:

01:19:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - What about to make a triangle here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374643

[Rika]
00:03:739 (4) - I highly suggest you to overlap this circle with 00:03:422 (2). It's much better to play :\
00:15:962 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - AAAH squares çç
00:18:501 (6) - You should to use NC here for consistency with 00:21:041 (1)
00:30:882 (6,1) - Misleading jump since you used a smaller one for 00:30:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) that are anyways 1/2 like it
00:55:009 (3) - To keep consistency in this spacing jump it would be better if you overlap this circle with 00:54:692 (1)
I think there are just some stuff to be reviewed here, but it's good :3

Good luck for rank rika chan >w<
spboxer3
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Joined November 2009
spboxer3
from IRC mod request

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. none

JoJo's Easy


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. [suggestion]其實個人是建議tick用1就可以了 但是用2也可 只是個人習慣問題 用2感覺不怎麼符合Easy的感覺 combo數會太多~
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:52:152 (1) - [nazi]非對稱0.0?? 不知道這是不是故意的 但是我看到這個 說出來看你要不要改掉?
  2. 01:02:311 (2) - ^

Melo's Normal



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:52:628 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure what do you want. If you want to make square. please check this. I just move (2,3)to stack on the (1)'s tail
    photo

Vicho's Hard


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. It's should add lead in:1500 (like Rika's diff)
  2. try to used AR 8?
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:59:930 - [suggestion] add clap?
  2. 01:10:089 - ^
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:52:628 (2,3) - strange rhythm [imo]. ↓this rhythm is a possible solution.
    photo

Insane



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:41:279 (5) - 這clap下的位置聽起來有些獵奇... 00:41:358 (1) - 感覺會好些
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:11:200 (4,5,6) - 就這個part而言 感覺直線上下移動並沒有挺好看的 或許把(5)向左移動一些會比較好看
  2. 00:12:946 (7,8,9,1) - 額...不是問題 就是建議轉點角度...說實話的 這樣方方正正的排列看起來比較沒有那麼好看
  3. 00:15:962 (1) - 這個點沒有NC~嗯...應該補上會比較適合
  4. 00:25:803 (6) - 建議加個NC(後面的節奏間距變短了 可是物件的間距還是挺遠的 打起來不容易讀懂)
  5. 01:02:946 (1,2,3,4) - 恩...這個不是正方形 看你要不要改吧 反正這也不是什麼大問題
Done.
congaan
163 posts
Joined July 2011
congaan
Artist: "Goku Rakujokai" or Gokurakujokai
極落女会(formal: 極♨落女会) ゴク・ラクジョカイ

Joshiraku Cast is not wrong. But it is not appropriate.

~
Quilt
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Joined May 2010
Quilt
hi

jojo's easy
SPOILER
00:17:231 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/JI6L like this?

00:46:438 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/JIcV like this?

Melo's Normal
SPOILER
指摘するとこ見つかりませんでした（土下座

Vicho's Hard
SPOILER
00:14:533 (4) - move x108 y148?

00:52:787 (3) - slider start clap remove

01:24:374 (4) - move x404 y236

Rika
SPOILER
00:21:517 (4,5) - more widd spacing?

00:26:438 (1) - delete slider and add note → make jump?

01:04:057 (8,1) - http://puu.sh/JPKj like this?

that's all

good luck!></
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Here we go.

http://puu.sh/JPXV

Taiko Oni 8*
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
Some fixed~ http://puu.sh/JQ54
JoJo
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Joined July 2010
JoJo
Picked some~ Thanks to all modders~

http://puu.sh/JRoN
Kawayi Rika
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Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Chewin

Chewin wrote:

Hi rika >w<

[Rika]
00:03:739 (4) - I highly suggest you to overlap this circle with 00:03:422 (2). It's much better to play :\ :arrow: hmm,no change,because fun imo:3
00:15:962 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - AAAH squares çç :arrow: lol
00:18:501 (6) - You should to use NC here for consistency with 00:21:041 (1) :arrow: I think no need NC to here.
00:30:882 (6,1) - Misleading jump since you used a smaller one for 00:30:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) that are anyways 1/2 like it :arrow: not huge jump
00:55:009 (3) - To keep consistency in this spacing jump it would be better if you overlap this circle with 00:54:692 (1) :arrow: i'll think this later
I think there are just some stuff to be reviewed here, but it's good :3

Good luck for rank rika chan >w<

Thanks mod ~ :)

spboxer3

spboxer3 wrote:

from IRC mod request

Insane



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:41:279 (5) - 這clap下的位置聽起來有些獵奇... 00:41:358 (1) - 感覺會好些
:arrow: 确实 改了

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:11:200 (4,5,6) - 就這個part而言 感覺直線上下移動並沒有挺好看的 或許把(5)向左移動一些會比較好看 :arrow: 对称了 就这样吧
  2. 00:12:946 (7,8,9,1) - 額...不是問題 就是建議轉點角度...說實話的 這樣方方正正的排列看起來比較沒有那麼好看 :arrow: ^
  3. 00:15:962 (1) - 這個點沒有NC~嗯...應該補上會比較適合 :arrow: ok fixed
  4. 00:25:803 (6) - 建議加個NC(後面的節奏間距變短了 可是物件的間距還是挺遠的 打起來不容易讀懂) :arrow: 这里应该不需要 后面太短了
  5. 01:02:946 (1,2,3,4) - 恩...這個不是正方形 看你要不要改吧 反正這也不是什麼大問題 :arrow: 就这样好了
Done.

Thanks mod :)

Quilt

Quilt wrote:

hi

Rika
00:21:517 (4,5) - more widd spacing? :arrow: I guess it's fine

00:26:438 (1) - delete slider and add note → make jump? :arrow: oh, i don't like jump here sorry

01:04:057 (8,1) - http://puu.sh/JPKj like this? :arrow: what mean ??

that's all

good luck!></

congaan

congaan wrote:

Artist: "Goku Rakujokai" or Gokurakujokai
極落女会(formal: 極♨落女会) ゴク・ラクジョカイ

Joshiraku Cast is not wrong. But it is not appropriate.

~
:arrow: You're right ~ thanks

Update ~ ;)
Last edited by Kawayi Rika , edited 1 time in total.
Scorpiour
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Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request~~
怎么diff都这么多Q.Q

[General]
  1. Comboburst换个方向吧…………默认应该面朝右侧不是么？
    点击这里下载翻转过方向的comboburst
  2. Audio Lead-in有的是1500ms有些是2000。。。嗯，这张图的话因为bpm的缘故我建议是统一用2000ms的lead-in
  3. Taiko难度的话建议把video移除掉吧直接删了osu里面的video代码就好……这条是薯片告诉我的出了问题找他去（匿～～～
[JoJo's Easy]
  1. SliderTickRate 2会不会显得slider上面的点点太多了？…………有点拥挤……像00:07:390 (2) - Tickpoint都和circle蹭上了感觉很不好
  2. 00:17:231 (1) - 感觉上直线的slider就可以。。。折返有一点点奇怪……
[Melo's Normal]
  1. Also suggested to choose SliderTickRate 1....
  2. 00:01:993 (2) - it's not heard as well as (1) because vocal start at 00:01:835 - ..maybe u can move this slider to 00:01:835 - and add a repeat?
[Vicho's Hard]
  1. 00:05:327 (5) - i'd like to reduce 2 repeats for better beat :>
  2. 00:10:723 (9) - highly recommend to remove it, i suppose a blank here is more suitable
  3. 00:37:390 (2) - remove the finish at end or reduce its volumn due to the low volumn of vocal
  4. 01:13:422 - blank here and 01:13:581 - 01:14:057 - are weird a bit....
[Rika]
  1. 00:01:200 - 这里不考虑加个note么？
  2. 00:01:835 (5,6,7) - 这个三连虽然在红线上，但是vocal的重音也是红线起的导致了三连不是很舒服，建议把(6)拿到做2连就好了=v=
  3. 00:14:533 (6) - 这也是可以考虑删的~~
  4. 00:35:962 (3) - 真的要做这么长的直线嘛。。我觉得拉个曲线会更舒服点吧～～～比如
  5. 00:45:168 (1,2,3,4) - 这种slider跳其实先跳的近一些再跳的远一些会打起来更舒服，而且节奏感也会更好的~
  6. 00:59:295 (2,3) - 这俩不要换下位置么…………
嗯就这些了～～～GL with rank~
aabc271
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aabc271
As requested by Kawayi Rika, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

-----------------------

[Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni]

Only the 1st part ( 00:00:724 ~ 00:05:882 ) is using 80% volume ? Consider using that to kiai too ?

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:22:311 ( 122 ) - Add finish ? ( Be consistent with 110 )

00:35:485 ( 63 ~ 65 ) - All add finish ? Seems that the vocal is emphasizing 61 ~ 65 ~

00:46:438 ( 117 ~ 119 ) - ooo ?

00:54:057 ( 63 ) - Add finish ? Drum sounds can be heard both here & 1 ~

00:54:850 ( 3 ) - ^, Drum sounds on 2 & 3 ~

01:17:708 ( 80 ~ 84 ) - ooooo ? kkkdk seems odd for me ~

01:20:247 ( 101 ~ 104 ) - o o o o ? ( To fit the rising vocal )

The map is nice overall ~

Hitsounds fit the music quite well :3

Rating : 9/10 ( +1 : Hitsounds, +0.5 : Note arrangements )

-----------------------

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]

As usual, no issues found ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

01:05:009 ( 404 ~ 409 ) - ooooo ? Seems that 406 has a higher pitch because of the instrument

Well, I can't really find good suggestions because as I know, you're mapping based on drums .__.

Nice overall ~

And again I don't have much to say about the issues www

Rating : 9/10 ( +0.75 : Hitsounds, note arrangements )

-----------------------

Both Taiko maps seem good :3

Star and good luck ~ ;)
Melophobia
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Melophobia
@spboxer3
fixed, thanks

@Scorpiour
i changed STR, but didnt touch the slider, it'll sound weird to me.

thanks for mods
http://puu.sh/KbRh
wmfchris
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wmfchris
baka 傻逼 大混蛋

[kpy's oni]
00:03:263 - +finish
00:35:485 (63,64,65) - ^
01:17:708 - kkddk / kdkdk
01:18:977 - streams 3 in a group does not fit well with 1/4 based song, try kkddddk
有d stream略混亂 <_<

[cbb's]
ok

-since both diffs used 1/6, it's suggested to change the SV to 1.6.
JoJo
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Joined July 2010
JoJo

Scorpiour wrote:

[JoJo's Easy]
  1. SliderTickRate 2会不会显得slider上面的点点太多了？…………有点拥挤……像00:07:390 (2) - Tickpoint都和circle蹭上了感觉很不好 //其实没关系~玩的时候会自动隐藏的. 嘛, 再有人让我用1我就改 :>
  2. 00:17:231 (1) - 感觉上直线的slider就可以。。。折返有一点点奇怪……//我觉得挺好的呀... ;w;
谢谢蝎子 :>
arien666
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Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
Why don't you make all diffs' lead-in same :3? (Some are 1500 and others are 2000)
(Already fixed before posting) Yeah, お後 is 'Oato' but where's the 'ga' between Oato and Yoroshikutte ...? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377444

[JoJo's Easy]
00:42:311 (3) - I recommend to move that note like this :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377436 Following over slider during [Easy] might not be good imo.
00:55:962 (2,3) - I don't recommend adding 1/2 timing distance of notes on [Easy] :3 Try to make (2) into circle?

[Vicho's Hard]
00:39:454 (1,2) - Swap new combo? Since 00:39:454 (1) ends on 4/4 signature But it doesn't be harmony with positions of notes ;___;
01:01:993 (5) - This touches HP bar but it can't be moved I think ;___; orz

[Rika]
(Suggestion) I wonder but showing difficulty of this map on diff name might be good imo.
00:03:422 (2,3) - Move like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378532
00:05:168 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - [Nazi] Some spacings are different from others ;___;
00:17:231 (1,2) - Swap new combo? Vocal starts from 00:17:390 (2)'s return point.
00:21:358 (3,4) - If this is not intended wrong spacing, swap each notes' position.

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
BG's song title+artist is wrong :3
01:05:406 - I wonder... DO NOT CUT KIAI TIME with short term on Taiko diff ;_______;
00:38:713 (241,242) - Change into 1/4 please ;___; Not actual melody on them orz
00:41:253 (250,251) - ^
00:43:792 (262,263) - ^

[Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni]
BG's song title+artist is wrong :3
01:25:644 - Add don :3?



meow :3
climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588
Fixed issue posted by aabc.

arken1015 wrote:

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
BG's song title+artist is wrong :3
01:05:406 - I wonder... DO NOT CUT KIAI TIME with short term on Taiko diff ;_______;
Fixed.
00:38:713 (241,242) - Change into 1/4 please ;___; Not actual melody on them orz
actually there's no melody fitting 1/4 neither... There're similar drum rhythm, so I think no changing is better ...
00:41:253 (250,251) - ^
00:43:792 (262,263) - ^
Fixed BG: http://puu.sh/KIq8
Fixed diff: http://puu.sh/KIqn
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin

arken1015 wrote:

[Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni]
BG's song title+artist is wrong :3
01:25:644 - Add don :3 //Sorry no because there are no drum sounds.
http://puu.sh/KIBc
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