As requested,
[
General]
-bubble.png is not used?
[
Normal]
00:27:862 (3) - Whistle at begin and repeat?
00:41:517 (1) - Finish at begin
00:46:482 (4) - Finish/whistle at end
00:47:724 (6) - Finish/whistle at begin
00:54:758 (1) - Finish at begin
01:12:965 (1) - Whistle at end?
01:15:034 (3) - Whistle at begin and end
01:32:827 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
01:47:310 (2) - Finish is better to me than whistle
02:00:965 (1) - Finish
02:04:275 (1) - Finish at begin
02:17:517 (1) - ^
02:35:724 (1,2) - Whistle at end?
02:41:517 (5) - Whistle at begin?
03:10:069 (2) - Finish at end
03:08:827 (1,2,3) - Like this seem better
http://puu.sh/XkOh312,184,188827,6,0,B|272:152|232:216|200:160,1,120,4|4
120,40,190069,2,0,B|144:80,1,40,4|4
56,192,190896,2,0,B|96:168,1,40,4|4
Only finish suggestion are highly recommended. May have miss some place. No problem with placement, there is two places where I think you should try another rhythm, but it's fine. These two imcase you want to know 00:27:448 (2,3) - 00:47:310 (5,6) - but there is nothing else you can really do so it's fine to me.
[
Hard]
- Prefer -1 od for smaller difficulty setting jump from Normal
- Whistle + finish mod will be done with modtrace, incase you agree with all, here is the .osu file with only hitsound change from below.
http://puu.sh/Xl4UModtrace00:06:551 (1) - Add a whistle.
00:06:655 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:06:758 (3) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:07:379 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:08:206 (1) - Add a whistle.
00:08:413 (2) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:08:827 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end.
00:09:862 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:09:965 (4) - Add a whistle.
00:10:069 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:10:689 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:11:103 (4) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:13:379 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:14:000 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:16:689 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:17:310 (2) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end.
00:17:931 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:18:137 (4) - Add a whistle.
00:22:482 (3) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:23:310 (1) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:24:965 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:25:793 (3) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:36:965 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:37:379 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:37:586 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:40:482 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:40:689 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:40:896 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:50:413 (2) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end.
00:50:827 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:53:517 (2) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:53:827 (3) - Add a whistle on the end.
00:54:138 (4) - Add a whistle.
01:19:379 (7) - Add a whistle.
01:19:482 (8) - Add a whistle.
01:37:172 (3) - Add a whistle.
01:38:827 (3) - Add a whistle.
01:59:310 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
02:00:344 (2) - Add a whistle on the start.
02:00:965 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
02:03:241 (2) - Add a whistle.
02:03:448 (3) - Add a whistle.
02:03:655 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
02:13:172 (2) - Add a whistle.
02:13:379 (4) - Add a whistle on the start, add a whistle on the end.
02:16:275 (2) - Add a whistle on the end.
02:16:689 (4) - Add a whistle.
02:16:896 (5) - Add a whistle on the start.
02:54:551 (2) - Add a whistle on the start.
03:05:103 (4) - Add a finish on the end.
00:14:827 (4) - Don't like this jump much and no jump for 00:12:137 (2), consider removing this jump. If not, please reduce this jump spacing to 1.5x-1.8x
00:57:862 (1) - Not fond of this jump, keep to normal distant snap 1.1x feel better to me or put where 00:56:000 (5) is
01:02:000 (2,3) - I prefer jump on (3) rather than on (2), something like this
http://puu.sh/Xl8B01:10:069 (2) - Pattern looks better to me if curved
http://puu.sh/Xlai 88,200,70069,2,0,B|56:224|43:282,2,79.9999952316285,8|0|0
01:49:379 (2) - Prefer soft-finish here.
02:00:344 (2) - I prefer this
http://puu.sh/Xlc002:24:758 (2,3) - Same as 01:02:000, idea
http://puu.sh/XlcU02:31:379 (4,5,6) - Easier to read if stack the stream and stack it on 02:30:758 (1) -
02:50:000 (4,5,6) - You didn't do jump here 01:27:241 (3,4,5) - plus jump doesn't feel right to me so I recommend keeping distant snap
02:59:413 - Add note, then do something like 02:56:517 (4,5) feel better to me.
03:10:896 (2) - Prefer soft-finish at end
Really recommend to follow my hitsound suggestion, hitsound feel empty at some parts. The rest are mainly suggestions, recommend to consider what I mention about jump, I think if you follow my suggestions, It'll play better.
[
Insane]
00:06:137 (6,7,8) - Stack is better to me, idk why but I think this was an anti jump at first.
00:16:689 (1) - Finish at begin
00:37:172 (4,5) - Whistle on (4) and begin + end of (5), sound better than nothing.
00:40:482 (2,3,5) - ^ on (2,3) begin of (5)
00:50:206 (2,3) - ^ at end of (2), begin + end of (3)
00:53:724 (4,5,6) - Whistle on these hit circles
00:57:448 (4) - There is nothing in music that justify the jump here, I think you should snap to normal spacing.
01:03:655 (5,6) - Better as a short slider for me.
01:15:034 (3,4) - Prefer stacked since 01:13:586 (3,4) - is stacked 01:14:103 (5,6) - is stacked
01:48:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't think normal-whistle sound good here, prefer if you remove
01:49:379 (6) - Prefer soft-finish
01:59:931 (4,5,6) - Whistle on (4,5), begin of (6)
02:12:965 (2,3) - ^ end of (2) begin and end of (3)
02:16:482 (3,4) - ^ on (3), begin and end of (4)
02:27:448 (1,2) - Prefer soft finish
02:44:620 (3) - A bit nicer wave slider
http://puu.sh/XlrK364,168,164620,2,0,B|316:220|244:132|196:184,1,179.999990463257,4|0
02:47:310 (4) - Improve blanket a bit, try this code
228,12,167310,2,0,B|168:80|164:176,1,179.999990463257,4|8
02:56:206 (1) - Feel like you should have whistle here.
03:02:206 (1) - Finish at begin sound better to me than whistle
I hope you add those whistle as hitsound feel empty without it at those parts and finish too. The rest is just suggestions.
-Sekai- wrote:
This diff is so moe OAO ! !
Nice clean diff
Map looks good, follow my hitsound suggestions and I'll definitely give a star!
Good luck!
