Hey there, since I modded your other Beatmap aswell and I liked what you did, I guess you won't be mad if i mod this one, too.
There will be spoilerboxes for each difficulty, including my first try results when playing the current map, along with the replay for you to check out my mistakes and a comment on how i felt while/after playing the map. Please make sure to check those boxes so you can understand what I am trying to focus on in my mod!General
Your timing is definitely off, I found 652 as offset sounded quiet good, but since I'm not a pro-timer, I would let this be re-checked by a better timer. Take 652 however, 'till someone found the really-right one. (If you change the offset, make sure to resnap all notes and greenlines)
It also feels like BPM should be half. This would erase all those SV-problems along all diffs. So maybe BPM 78? (If you do change the BPM, please ignore all SV-changes I recomment on the diffs. You must reshape all sliders after you changed the BPM. If you change the BPM, be aware of the fact that the timeline changes, so if I mention "the next white tick" in my mod, it won't be the same tick at half BPM.)
I guess this is the ending theme of the anime and not the opening, isn't it? If I'm right, remove "opening" from the tags and add "ending".
I'm quiet sure that you must remove "(TV Size)" from the title (as this is not the real title but a shorter version of the whole song, used in TV), read
this on how to change the title. If you did that, you can add "TV Size" as a tag or mention it in the description.
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:59:140 - snap to 00:59:151
01:16:065 - snap to 01:16:074
in all diffs.
SliderTickRate = 1 in all diffs
Easy
Firsttry results, replay and a short commentI played Mouse-only to get the feel of a new player for this difficulty.
Download the Replay here!This diff was quiet irritateing. The rhythm was not suiting for an Easy and that bugs me alot. There also were some hidden Notes and overlaps that doesn't look good, disturbing the authentic style of "regular" Easymaps. I couldn't focus on much more while playing, since I was distracted by those striking mistakes too much. This map still needs a lot of work. I will focus on the rhythm, since if i would focus on everything, you would get a remap. q__q
00:38:959 - remove this greenline, it's useless to take lower vol. here. Also remove the following one.
I would greatly encourage you to reduce the SV. 0,8 is quiet high and your sliders all look quiet short with this SV, maybe go for 0,6 or 0,7?
AR-1
00:05:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Imagine yourself as you first saw Osu! and played your very first Easymap. Now think if this would be the very first thing you should play. I - personally - would uninstall Osu!, because of unfitting difficulties for new players. Keep in mind that Easy-maps are mostly to show new players all the gameelements in a catchy, good-looking way. Keep your beat mostly on 1/1! I would suggest you to do something like this:
00:12:420 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - As you can see here, your current focus lies on the vocals, but that is just too hard for a beginner to play. Stay to 1/1 and try this:
00:19:151 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I'll just continue with better fitting beats
00:24:536 (1,2,1,2,3) - Just all moved on 1/1 here:
00:31:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I prefer this:
00:37:228 (1,2,1,2,3) - If you take the below suggestion, you can make a nice mirrorpattern with the 2 repeating sliders! Just shape the first one and then copy/paste it for the next one and flip it (ctrl+h/j) or rotate it (ctrl+shift+r) for a nice-looking pattern!
00:43:766 (1,2,3) - Uhm..easy stuff here:
00:46:459 (1,2,3) - ehm..I'm lacking enthusiastic phrases q__q
00:49:536 (1) - remove repeat, increase duration to next white tick
00:51:074 (1,2,3,4) - Take the rhythm below, plus a sidenote: the heartslider is a really good idea, however, as you might see in my replay, it's not clear which way the slider is going. Check out
this map's heartslider (It's on Lunatic at 03:13:780 !) and go for similar-shaped hearts on all your diffs (make sure the start- and endpoint of your heartsliders do not touch and the path is visible
)
00:56:843 (1) - Please move it somewhere else as it gets covered by the previouse slider's path and hitburst.
00:57:613 (1,1) - The pattern is nice, but please make sure that they only touch in the middle of the sliders (in other words: sliderhead and tail should not touch the other slider)
01:00:497 (3) - start one tick later, end on same spot as atm.
01:02:613 (2,1) - Make this:
01:05:113 (3) - start one tick later, end on same spot as atm. ;D
01:10:690 (1) - Increase length by one tick.
01:12:997 (4) - start one tick later, end on same spot as atm~
01:20:267 (2) - Increase duration by one tick.
01:21:036 (1) - Since the spinner doesn't end on anything important, I would like to see the ending silenced. Just add a greenline at the spinners endingpoint and decrease vol. to 5%.
That's it so far. If you remap those sliders, make sure to take perfect shapes! Easy's must be good-looking and sliders can achieve that! Just make sure you don't take weird shapes. Also make sure that DistanceSpacing is always enabled and that you only take 1 spacing! You can also - if you want - fill out all those breaks and pseudo-breaks to get more flow in the whole map. Just set some more single beats or sliders on white ticks.
Normal
Firsttry results, replay and a short commentI played Mouse-only to get the feel of a new player for this difficulty.
Download the Replay here!First of all, the small circlesize striked me like a train, directly followed by the super-high SV. This, combined with the other - relatively high - difficultysettings made it quiet hard to play. The wrong offset was really getting clear in this map. The pattern itself are ok, however, the spacing was just terrible. Same as Easy: this needs more work.
HP -1
CS -1 !!!
OD -2
SV = 0,8?
Apply distancespacing on all notes, only use one distancesnap!
00:00:690 (1,3) - They are not perfectly curved. Make sure that the 2cnd waypoint is at the heigh of the slidertick!
00:06:843 (1) - This was very confusing, due to the fact that I wasn't able to see the 2cnd and 3rd repeat on that short slider
00:07:997 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's very hard to catch for a new player. Make sure you use distancesnap and replace half of them by sliders of the same length
00:15:690 (4,5) - replace by a slider, not able to catch the rhythm for a new player
00:20:305 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as mentioned above
00:24:536 (1,2) - replace by slider and adjust spacing to the following slider (no stack here please)
00:26:651 (1,2) - unstack
00:32:420 (4,5) - ^
00:35:497 (4,5) - ^
00:37:420 (2) - move up 2grids and left 2 grids to create a curved connection from (1) to (3)
00:46:459 (6) - NC here, this combo is getting too long for a normal
00:47:805 (9,10) - line them up with (7,8)
00:49:536 (1,2,3) - replace by slider with reverse?
00:52:613 (3) - unstack
00:52:805 (4) - same as mentioned in Easy
01:02:613 (4,5,1,2) - either replace (4,5) or (1,2) by a slider
01:04:920 (5,6) - unstack
01:07:997 (3) - urgh..work on that shape again pls
01:13:766 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - make sure all touch or none touch :<
01:21:074 (1) - same as Easy
Hard
Firsttry results, replay and a short commentI played Mouse + Keyboard corrosponding to a medium-experienced player's playstyle.
Download the Replay here!This diff was quiet fun, the offset still hurts my acc but that's ok. It however feels like most streams are more or less forced, and that's hearable. Overall, the best map of this set, but it needs some work, too
HP-1~2
SV = 1,2?
Apply distancespacing on all notes, you may vary the snap, but only rarely for certain patterns. (I think it works better if you increase the "general" snap by 0,1-0,2 to make the map a bit harder, this would make up for all the breaks)
00:01:074 (3,3) - those were unreadable to read, due to the high SV.
00:05:690 (2,3,4,5) - This just feels forced. Replace by a long slider?
00:07:036 (1) - Remove? There is nothing in the music that tells me that there should be a note. Remember to set NC on (2)!
00:12:228 (1) - Remove, follow the vocals here pls.
00:12:420 (2,3,4,5) - I prefer it if the streams or the slider would "carry on" the curve, meaning that either the slider "flows" from the stream or the stream "flows" into the slider.
00:18:382 (5) - remove whistle
00:41:843 (2,3,4) - remove whistle on (2,4), if you like you can also remove the whislte on (3)
00:52:805 (4) - same as Easy
00:55:497 (5) - Shape this one, it looks a bit random this way. Maybe "carry on" the shape from the heartslider?
01:21:074 (1) - Okay, why do you do this only in this diff? Ignore the silencing I suggested for Easy and Normal and copy this for both difficulties.
I'd like to recheck the whole mapset once it's - more or less - remapped. Please contact me via forum-PM or catch me ingame after you applied my mods and found at least 4 other modders!
Good luck on your way to ranked, hope my mod was helpful.
by mancusojuanmattos
by -kevincela-
by Byakugan249
