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Ryu* - I'm so Happy

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Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月7日 at 下午 07:20:38

Artist: Ryu*
Title: I'm so Happy
Source: jubeat
Tags: darknessangel spboxer3 knit
BPM: 181.02
Filesize: 2880kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (4.88 stars, 201 notes)
  2. Basic (3.25 stars, 120 notes)
  3. D.N.Angel (4.9 stars, 406 notes)
  4. Extreme (4.9 stars, 351 notes)
  5. Sp3's jubiko (4.83 stars, 611 notes)
Download: Ryu* - I'm so Happy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
2012/5/22 - changed BG (Thanks spboxer3)
2012/6/7 - changed mp3 (Thanks Niva)

Basic = Normal 100% - by me
Advanced = Hard 100% - by me
Extreme = Insane 100% - by me
D.N.Angel = Insane 100% - by DarknessAngel
Sp3's Jubiko 100% - by spboxer3
DarknessAngel
沙發的說
做好了
不知道夠不夠難o.o

Download: Ryu - I'm so happy (-HaRuNa-) [D.N.Angel].osu

Download: sound.rar
Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-

DarknessAngel wrote:

沙發的說
做好了
不知道夠不夠難o.o
感謝~~
很難 xD
No_Gu
q.q我巨爽
Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-

No_Gu wrote:

q.q我巨爽
:3
-s u i r e n-
hi

Basic
00:16:005(6)-Add NC?
I think , it's should be changed http://puu.sh/vLAj


这张是神图MOD不能~ 抱歉 Ranked应援!
Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-

suirenn05 wrote:

hi

Basic
00:16:005(6)-Add NC? OK~
I think , it's should be changed http://puu.sh/vLAj why? 0.0 I think it's ok >_>


这张是神图MOD不能~ 抱歉 Ranked应援!
謝謝mod :)
Melophobia
Hi o/

[Genera;]
Artist should be "Ryu*"
http://puu.sh/vLMs


[Basic]
00:01:421 - this volume is too loud. louder than volume in kiai time.i think you should use lower volume. 70% is better to me
00:03:409 ~ 00:03:741 - also for these 2 notes, it'd be better to use lower volume than others, because background music disappaers. so it's really loud
00:04:072 - if you do this ^ increase volume here, maybe 80% is nice
00:16:005 (6) - add newcombo for change of melody? also it's touching HP bar slightly
00:26:611 (1) - add finish here
00:34:566 (5) - touches HP bar. please fix this
00:59:757 - add note
01:05:060 (1,2,3) - consider removing them
you should not use kick slider like these in an easiest diff. because beginner may not be able to expect how long it is.
01:13:015 (1) - add finish
01:16:329 (2) - this is overlapped by (5)'s hitburst. it causes of confusion for beginner. you should fix it
01:20:970 (1) - add finish at the beginning and end both, i can hear clearly finish sounds here
01:21:964 (2) - ^ same reason, add finish
01:22:296 (3) - add finish at the beginning.
01:23:621 (1) - add finish at the beginning because kiai starts here and it match music well
and 00:37:218 (1) - has it as well
01:28:925 (4) - add finish at the beginning and add newcombo for change of melody
01:30:250 (1) - ^ if you add newcombo above, then remove newcombo here
01:31:576 (3) - ^ add newcombo.


[Advanced]
00:01:421 - volume 70%
00:03:409 - 60%
00:04:072 - 80%
00:16:005 (1) - add finish at the beginning, Basic has it.
00:26:611 (1) - add finish
00:35:892 (1,2,3,4) - add finishes to these notes
00:59:425 (6) - add clap
00:59:757 (1) - add finish at the beginning
00:59:757 (1,2,3,4) - no claps for these notes?? i can hear it clearly in the song and it sounds nice to me
01:04:728 - add note with clap please.
01:20:970 (1) - add finish
01:21:632 (5) - ^
01:23:621 (1) - ^

[Extreme]
00:01:421 - volume 70%
00:03:409 - 60%
00:04:072 - 80%
00:15:507 - volume is too low it's really hard to hit. please increase volume at least by 20%
00:16:005 (1) - add finish at the beginning because Basic has it
also i'd suggest to add whistle at the end as well, it matches the piano well
00:18:656 (1) - add whistle at the beginning and end both
00:20:976 (2) - add whistle
00:21:308 (1) - ^ at the beginning
00:23:628 (2) - ^
00:23:959 (1) - ^ at the beginning
00:26:445 (2) - add finish at the end.
00:28:600 (4) - touches HP bar.
00:45:090 (9) - this slider doesnt fit music well, try something like this instead

00:48:819 (3) - add clap
00:59:757 (5) - whistle+finish is too much. because of change of melody, you should lower the volume
01:04:728 - add note with a clap
01:20:970 (1) - add finish
01:23:621 (1) - ^

[D.N.Angel]
00:18:656 (3) - i think whistle at the end doesnt fit here, because it follows nothing
also i'd suggest to mute the end of this slider or end this at 00:19:982 - instead
00:59:757 - normal finish is too loud imo, soft one is better
01:09:037 (1,2,3) - add finishes? just suggestion
01:10:032 (4) - make this clap louder?
01:27:267 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i always filed to get 300 here lol just complaint xD
01:29:919 (11) - add clap
01:31:079 (6) - ^ same, add clap at the end

awesome hitsound and jumps as always :3

ok that's all i think, good luck!
DarknessAngel

Melophobia wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:18:656 (3) - i think whistle at the end doesnt fit here, because it follows nothing //fixed ! (end this at 00:19:982)
also i'd suggest to mute the end of this slider or end this at 00:19:982 - instead
00:59:757 - normal finish is too loud imo, soft one is better //fixed
01:09:037 (1,2,3) - add finishes? just suggestion well,I considered that when I was mapping,but I was afraid it cause the part noisy.no change for this
01:10:032 (4) - make this clap louder? //hmm...why ? :O
01:27:267 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i always filed to get 300 here lol just complaint xD < /o/
01:29:919 (11) - add clap //!! I forgot that ! thank for checking ><
01:31:079 (6) - ^ same, add clap at the end ^

awesome hitsound and jumps as always :3

ok that's all i think, good luck!
Thank you for modding and star ~ >3<

Download: Ryu - I'm so happy (-HaRuNa-) [D.N.Angel].osu
Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-

Melophobia wrote:

Hi o/

[Genera;]
Artist should be "Ryu*"
http://puu.sh/vLMs


[Basic]
00:01:421 - this volume is too loud. louder than volume in kiai time.i think you should use lower volume. 70% is better to me
00:03:409 ~ 00:03:741 - also for these 2 notes, it'd be better to use lower volume than others, because background music disappaers. so it's really loud
00:04:072 - if you do this ^ increase volume here, maybe 80% is nice
00:16:005 (6) - add newcombo for change of melody? also it's touching HP bar slightly
00:26:611 (1) - add finish here
00:34:566 (5) - touches HP bar. please fix this
00:59:757 - add note
01:05:060 (1,2,3) - consider removing them
you should not use kick slider like these in an easiest diff. because beginner may not be able to expect how long it is.
01:13:015 (1) - add finish
01:16:329 (2) - this is overlapped by (5)'s hitburst. it causes of confusion for beginner. you should fix it
01:20:970 (1) - add finish at the beginning and end both, i can hear clearly finish sounds here
01:21:964 (2) - ^ same reason, add finish
01:22:296 (3) - add finish at the beginning.
01:23:621 (1) - add finish at the beginning because kiai starts here and it match music well
and 00:37:218 (1) - has it as well
01:28:925 (4) - add finish at the beginning and add newcombo for change of melody
01:30:250 (1) - ^ if you add newcombo above, then remove newcombo here
01:31:576 (3) - ^ add newcombo.


[Advanced]
00:01:421 - volume 70%
00:03:409 - 60%
00:04:072 - 80%
00:16:005 (1) - add finish at the beginning, Basic has it.
00:26:611 (1) - add finish
00:35:892 (1,2,3,4) - add finishes to these notes
00:59:425 (6) - add clap
00:59:757 (1) - add finish at the beginning
00:59:757 (1,2,3,4) - no claps for these notes?? i can hear it clearly in the song and it sounds nice to me
01:04:728 - add note with clap please.
01:20:970 (1) - add finish
01:21:632 (5) - ^
01:23:621 (1) - ^

[Extreme]
00:01:421 - volume 70%
00:03:409 - 60%
00:04:072 - 80%
00:15:507 - volume is too low it's really hard to hit. please increase volume at least by 20%
00:16:005 (1) - add finish at the beginning because Basic has it
also i'd suggest to add whistle at the end as well, it matches the piano well
00:18:656 (1) - add whistle at the beginning and end both
00:20:976 (2) - add whistle
00:21:308 (1) - ^ at the beginning
00:23:628 (2) - ^
00:23:959 (1) - ^ at the beginning
00:26:445 (2) - add finish at the end.
00:28:600 (4) - touches HP bar.
00:45:090 (9) - this slider doesnt fit music well, try something like this instead

00:48:819 (3) - add clap
00:59:757 (5) - whistle+finish is too much. because of change of melody, you should lower the volume
01:04:728 - add note with a clap
01:20:970 (1) - add finish
01:23:621 (1) - ^

awesome hitsound and jumps as always :3

ok that's all i think, good luck!
Thank you for modding :)
all fixed~
Sonico Makaron
Hello :3

[General]
Add in Tags darknessangel

[Basic]
Maybe this place 00:01:421 - 10% volume? and not use green line this place 01:10:363 delete it
00:01:421 (1) - add finish beginer slider
00:05:398 (2) - ^ end slider
00:06:724 (3) - ^ beginer slider
00:08:050 (4) - ^ beginer and this place http://puu.sh/vLtG
00:09:375 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:10:370 (2) - ^
00:10:701 (3) - ^
00:12:027 (1) - ^ beginer and end slider
00:12:690 (2) - ^
00:13:353 (3) - ^ beginer slider
00:14:016 (4) - ^ end slider and add NC?
00:15:010 (5) - ^ beginer and end slider
00:23:959 (1) - add whistle beginer slider
00:26:611 (1) - add finish
00:43:184 (3) - ^ end slider
00:48:156 (6) - ^
00:49:150 (1) - ^
00:59:094 (3) - remove finish
00:59:757 (x) - maybe add spinner and finish this spiner 01:01:082? if you add it add whistle this spiner
01:05:060 (1) - add finish beginer slider
01:06:386 (2) - ^
01:07:712 (3) - ^ white tick this slider
01:10:363 (1) - ^ beginer slider
01:13:015 (1) - ^
01:18:318 (1) - ^
01:20:970 (1) - ^ beginer and end slider
01:21:964 (2) - add finish
01:22:296 (3) - ^ beginer slider
01:23:290 (4) - add finish
01:23:621 (1) - ^ beginer slider
01:28:925 (4) - add NC and finish beginer slider
01:30:250 (1) - remove NC and add fininsh beginer slider
01:31:576 (5) - add NC and add finish white tick this slider?
01:32:902 (6) - add finish white tick this slider?

[Advanced]
00:01:421 same as in Easy and not use green line this place 01:10:363 delete it
00:01:421 (1) - add finish
00:01:586 (2) - ^
00:02:083 (1) - ^
00:02:249 (2) - ^
00:02:746 (1) - add finish white tick this slider
00:04:072 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:04:901 (3) - ^
00:05:398 (1) - ^
00:06:061 (2) - ^
00:06:724 (1) - ^
00:08:050 (1) - ^
00:08:713 (1) - ^ end slider and remove NC?
00:09:375 (1) - add finish beginer slider
00:10:701 (3) - ^ and add NC?
00:12:027 (1) - finish beginer slider
00:12:359 (2) - ^
00:12:690 (1) - ^ and remove NC?
00:13:353 (2) - ^ and add NC?
00:15:342 (3) - remove finish
00:16:005 (1) - add finish beginer slider and add whistle end slider? and unsnapped end slider
00:18:159 (2) - add whistle beginer slider
00:18:656 (1) - ^ and end slider and unsnapped end slider
00:20:976 (2) - whistle
00:21:308 (1) - ^ beginer slider and unsnaped end slider
00:23:628 (2) - whistle
00:23:959 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:26:611 (1) - add finish
00:27:937 (5) - add whistle
00:29:760 (3) - ^
00:30:257 (5) - ^ end slider
00:31:583 (9) - ^ beginer slider
00:34:566 (3) - add finish and this place too 00:35:229
00:35:892 (1,2,3,4) - add finish
00:37:383 (2) - add clap?
00:43:847 (1) - add finish beginer slider
00:46:498 (1) - ^
00:46:913 (3) - move note this time 00:46:996
00:47:161 (1) - add fnish
00:47:576 (3) - same as 00:46:913 (3)
00:47:824 (1) - add finish
00:48:239 (3) - same as 00:46:913 (3)
00:48:487 (1) - add clap this place 00:48:819 and finish too and end slider too
00:49:150 (1) - finish begienr slider
00:57:768 (2) - miss finish?
00:58:431 (3,4) - add finish?
00:59:425 (6) - add finish and clap?
00:59:757 (1) - finish beginer slider
01:01:082 (3) - add whistle
01:01:745 (4) - add whistle this place 01:01:911 and add clap and whistle this place 01:02:077
01:05:060 (1) - finish beginer slider
01:06:386 (2) - ^
01:07:712 (3) - add finish white tick this slider
01:10:032 (4) - add clap?
01:10:363 (1) - add finish beginer slider
01:13:015 (1) - ^
01:20:970 (1) - finish
01:21:632 (5) - ^
01:21:798 (6) - ^ end slider
01:22:130 (7) - add finish white tick this slider
01:22:627 (8) - ^ and this place 01:22:793 (8) - ?
01:23:124 (9) - add whistle and clap white tick this slider
01:23:621 (1) - finish
01:23:621 (1) - add NC?
01:27:599 (9) - add NC?
01:28:925 (1) - finish beginer slider
01:30:250 (2) - ^
01:31:576 (3) - add finish white tick this slider
01:33:234 (1,2) - add finish
01:33:896 (3) - finish end slider

[Extreme]
00:01:421 (1) - add finish
00:01:586 (3) - ^
00:02:083 (1) - ^
00:02:248 (3) - ^
00:02:746 (1) - ^
00:02:912 (3) - ^
00:03:078 (1) - ^
00:04:072 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:04:901 (5) - ^
00:06:061 (2) - add finish white and red tick this slider
00:06:558 (3) - ^
00:06:724 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:08:050 (1) - ^
00:08:713 (1) - ^ end slider
00:09:375 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:10:204 (4) - ^ white tick this slider
00:10:701 (5) - finish
00:12:027 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:12:359 (3) - finish
00:12:690 (5) - ^
00:13:021 (3) - ^
00:13:187 (4) - ^ end slider
00:14:679 (1,2) - finish
00:15:507 (1) - whistle
00:15:673 (3) - finish
00:15:839 (5) - whistle
00:16:005 (1) - ^ end slider
00:18:159 (2,3) - whistle
00:23:959 (1) - ^ end slider and 1 grid left?
00:26:280 (1) - whistle
00:27:937 (2) - ^ beginer slider
00:28:600 (4) - ^ end slider
00:28:931 (5) - ^ beginer slider
00:29:263 (1) - whistle
00:30:589 (5) - ^ and add NC?
00:31:417 (4) - whistle end slider?
00:33:241 (9) - add NC
00:34:566 (1) - add finish this place 00:35:229
00:37:549 (3) - finish beginer slider
00:38:543 (1) - ^
00:43:847 (1) - finish
00:46:498 (1) - ^
00:47:161 (5) - ^
00:47:493 (7) - ^
00:48:156 (12) - ^ beginer slider
00:48:819 (3) - finish
00:49:150 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:58:431 (1) - finish
00:58:762 (3) - ^
00:59:425 (3) - ^
01:00:420 (1) - maybe use soft hitsound?
01:05:060 (1) - finish
01:06:386 (1) - ^
01:07:712 (1) - ^
01:08:043 (5) - ^
01:08:374 (9) - add NC?
01:08:706 (13) - finish
01:10:032 (3) - ^
01:10:363 (1) - ^
01:13:015 (1) - ^
01:21:467 (3) - add finish end slider
01:21:798 (4) - ^
01:22:130 (5) - ^
01:22:461 (6) - add finish this 01:22:627 and this place 01:22:793
01:28:925 (1) - finish beginer slider
01:30:250 (1) - ^
01:31:576 (1) - ^
01:31:908 (3) - ^
01:32:239 (5) - ^
01:32:571 (7) - ^
01:32:902 (1) - ^
01:33:234 (3) - ^
01:33:565 (4) - ^
01:33:896 (5) - ^

[D.N.Angel]
HP+1?
looks fine

thats all
good luck
Dark Fang
Hi
from Fang Team's queue
Let's mod

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[General]

Add DarknessAngel at tags
You have .osb file. if you don't use SB. can you remove it?
Can you add KIAI time at 01:13:015 - this?

[Basic]

SPOILER
00:18:656 (1) - add Finish?
00:21:308 (1) - ^
00:23:959 (1) - add Finish at head?
00:34:566 (5) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz
00:47:493 - add a note?
00:50:476 (3) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz
01:13:015 - not enough hitsound. sound is boring
01:23:621 (1) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz

[Advanced]

SPOILER
00:07:387 (1) - why don't you change this pattern's timing like this?
00:16:005 (1) - adjust slider's shape. more pretty
00:18:656 (1) - ^
00:21:308 (1) - ^
00:34:566 (3) - NC
00:46:498 (1) - same as 00:07:387 -
00:59:757 (1) - add Clap at head
01:00:420 (2) - remove Clap at body. and add Clap at head
01:01:082 (3) - ^
01:01:745 (4) - ^
01:24:947 (1) - NC?
01:27:599 (1) - ^

[Extreme]

SPOILER
OD-1?

00:02:083 (1) - don't stack because some players confusion this pattern
00:07:055 (2) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz
00:07:387 (3) - why don't you change this pattern's timing like thisor this?
00:08:050 (1) - ^
00:15:507 (1) - some players confusion this notes. add hitsound or volume up
00:23:959 (1) - it looks bad.. why don't you try make looks more pretty?
00:28:600 (4) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz
00:31:417 (8) - ^
01:12:186 - add a note?
01:12:352 (1,2,3) - can you remove this?
01:15:501 (6) - don't stack some players confusion this note
01:17:821 - add a note?
01:18:152 - ^

[D.N.Angel]

SPOILER
Circle Size -1?
00:20:811 (1) - why don't you change pattern like this?
01:29:753 (10) - too far from 01:29:588 -

This diif is so difficult..
but if you Circle Size -1 more easier

this is good song
I like jubeat

Have a good time :D
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from ingame.

General
Tags need to be the same so check out o.o put the guest mappers id into tags of every diff.

and seems no video or something so maybe turn on the letterbox during breaks.


[Basic]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:206 (X) - I suggest to add a note here, really weird that if it is empty here.

Hitsound
00:31:914 (1) - hitsound like this I think normal hitsounds may fit more, soft ones with volumn 20 30 really hard to be heard....


[Advanced]
Issues
00:16:005 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:18:656 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:21:308 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:01:752 (3) - I don't think here should use a slider, just a note is perfect. 00:01:918 is better to be empty because there isn't and sound there in the music and it is really werid to have a hit there.
00:02:415 (3) - ^
00:04:735 (2,3) - this rhythm pattern really don't fit the music... consider change to something else?
00:07:801 (3) - I feel this note is really offf. the note should be on the red tick, just like how you map those sliders after here. and for a second easist diff like this a slider maybe more safe to map imo
00:08:464 (3) - ^
00:46:913 (3) - ^ just all like that. I think maybe try to use 25% speed to listen to the music carefully and you can find out why.
00:47:576 (3) - ^
00:48:239 (3) - ^
01:07:712 (3) - the drum sound didn't stop until: 01:09:037 (1), so why don't just make the slider stops at 01:09:037 (1)? seems better and fit the music more.

Hitsound
00:37:383 (2) - I think add a clap here is better.
01:00:420 (2,3,4) - why so many claps here TAT really loud.
01:20:970 (1) - I don't really understand why you decrease the volumn here, because it seems unnecessary for me.
01:23:621 (1) - I suggest you add some 24 white ticks claps after here, because it is almost the same rhythm, better to make some changes so the player won't get bored, just suggestion though.
01:31:576 (3) - finish is better than clap here, because it fit the music better.


[Extreme]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:01:421 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ...very hugh jump for me to play.
00:07:387 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - just like I already said in advanced diff #_#
00:15:342 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - even though you got a new combo at there I still can't really read it well I thought it is just a normal stream.... because the distance seems just tell me that, maybe make it more clear?
00:47:741 (9) - this slider doesn't feel right....really weird to play for the rhythm seems really wrong...consider change to another pattern?
00:49:150 (1) - maybe try something else, these sliders start to get boring imo.

Hitsound
yeah just maybe use more claps.


[D.N.Angel]
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:29:588 (9,10,11) - 我去这是要逆天吗TAT 我无论如何都打不到……
打起来没什么问题 就是很难很凹手……
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Artist should be Ryu* not Ryu.

  2. Please add DarknessAngel as a Tag in all your difficulties.

  3. Not sure about your Diff Spread. It feels like Basic is so Easy. You might want to map a Normal Diff to make things better.

  • Basic
  1. 00:34:566 (5) - This note has already crossed the corner. Please move this away from it.

  2. 00:39:206 - Add a note?

  3. 01:03:734 - Why is there a break on this part? Please map it.

  • Advanced
  1. 00:16:005 (1) - Unsnapped Slider End

  2. 00:18:656 (1) - Unsnapped Slider End

  3. 00:21:308 (1) - Unsnapped Slider End

  4. 01:10:363 (1,3) - Making these two sliders a blanket for (2) would be better.

  • Extreme
  1. 00:02:746 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ctrl + H.

  2. 00:15:922 - Add a note.

  3. 00:16:005 (1) - If you followed my suggestion about note adding, Ctrl + R this slider.

  4. 00:33:240 (9) - New combo.

  5. 00:45:504 (11,12,13) - Weird spacing. Please make it consistent.

  6. 00:48:487 (1,2,3,4) - No, just no. Please make the spacing consistent.

  • D.N.Angel
  1. 00:43:681 (4) - One grid up.

  2. 01:17:655 (5) - Ctrl + H.

  3. 01:18:650 (4,6) - One grid down.

  4. 01:21:964 (6) - Four grids left.

  5. 01:29:256 (5) - What a jump. I suggest turn (3,4) into a slider instead.

  6. Add a spinner on the end to make it consistent with the other diffs.
No_Gu
request from in-game PM

title:I'm so Happy
DNA的名没tag

[B]
00:02:746 (3,4) - 可以调成S
00:48:156 (6,2) - 说真的easy别overlap,就算是为了对称

[A]
00:04:735 (2) - 还是这个节奏吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/322175
00:07:387 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这样的其实我推荐你把1和2连成slider更好读一些
00:08:464 (3) - 这个要往后1/4
00:18:656 (1) - ctrl+h来点新鲜感
00:31:914 (1,2,3) - 我觉得不如clap去掉然后直接用N的hitnormal
00:38:543 (1,2,3) - 这whistle太薄了啊。。
00:46:498 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这和前面节奏是一样的,3要往后1/4
01:00:420 (2,3,4) - 难听死。。。
01:07:712 (3) - 每条白线加finish
01:12:186 (4) - 不需要折返
01:16:992 (5,7,2,4,5) - 这边设计我觉得蛮不好的。。一般来说现在一个slider打4下很少,你这里又惨杂一个打3下的slider,有点难读
俩kiai的节奏不是很喜欢,太固定了,第一个kiai基本都一样的节奏,第二个基本全都是1/2

[E]
00:08:464 (3) - 这个要往后1/4
00:15:342 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - 坑爹
00:41:195 (1,2,3) - 我觉得可以再飘逸点像这样。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/322182
00:45:173 (10,11,12,13) - 结尾不够细,关了网格
00:47:658 (8,9,10,11) - 你确定没下错节奏么。。
01:31:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 前面那俩设计的不错,这个相比之下略不顺手
总感觉你总爱往一个slider里放3折返。。不过我觉得是不太好。。。

[D]
第一段Kiai我觉得可以向后面一样用whistle。。clap随意用对这首歌感觉不是很好,但是whistle蛮有感的
00:50:476 (8,4) - 其实我觉得还不如换成前面一样的节奏,突然降下来不舒服,毕竟最高难度
这段break还是map完吧
01:05:060 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这些不开normal真的很不带感啊。。
01:12:186 其实这里不该空啊,我觉得把后面的删掉更好
01:28:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 惨无人道
01:34:228 (3) - finish更好
Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-

AcceleratorRUS wrote:

Hello :3

[General]
Add in Tags darknessangel

[Basic]
Maybe this place 00:01:421 - 10% volume? and not use green line this place 01:10:363 delete it
00:01:421 (1) - add finish beginer slider
00:05:398 (2) - ^ end slider
00:06:724 (3) - ^ beginer slider
00:08:050 (4) - ^ beginer and this place http://puu.sh/vLtG
00:09:375 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:10:370 (2) - ^
00:10:701 (3) - ^
00:12:027 (1) - ^ beginer and end slider
00:12:690 (2) - ^
00:13:353 (3) - ^ beginer slider
00:14:016 (4) - ^ end slider and add NC?
00:15:010 (5) - ^ beginer and end slider
00:23:959 (1) - add whistle beginer slider
00:26:611 (1) - add finish
00:43:184 (3) - ^ end slider
00:48:156 (6) - ^
00:49:150 (1) - ^
00:59:094 (3) - remove finish
00:59:757 (x) - maybe add spinner and finish this spiner 01:01:082? if you add it add whistle this spinerNo >_>
01:05:060 (1) - add finish beginer slider
01:06:386 (2) - ^
01:07:712 (3) - ^ white tick this slider
01:10:363 (1) - ^ beginer slider
01:13:015 (1) - ^
01:18:318 (1) - ^
01:20:970 (1) - ^ beginer and end slider
01:21:964 (2) - add finish
01:22:296 (3) - ^ beginer slider
01:23:290 (4) - add finish
01:23:621 (1) - ^ beginer slider
01:28:925 (4) - add NC and finish beginer slider
01:30:250 (1) - remove NC and add fininsh beginer slider
01:31:576 (5) - add NC and add finish white tick this slider?
01:32:902 (6) - add finish white tick this slider?

[Advanced]
00:01:421 same as in Easy and not use green line this place 01:10:363 delete it
00:01:421 (1) - add finish
00:01:586 (2) - ^
00:02:083 (1) - ^
00:02:249 (2) - ^
00:02:746 (1) - add finish white tick this slider
00:04:072 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:04:901 (3) - ^
00:05:398 (1) - ^
00:06:061 (2) - ^
00:06:724 (1) - ^
00:08:050 (1) - ^
00:08:713 (1) - ^ end slider and remove NC?
00:09:375 (1) - add finish beginer slider
00:10:701 (3) - ^ and add NC?
00:12:027 (1) - finish beginer slider
00:12:359 (2) - ^
00:12:690 (1) - ^ and remove NC?
00:13:353 (2) - ^ and add NC?
00:15:342 (3) - remove finish
00:16:005 (1) - add finish beginer slider and add whistle end slider? and unsnapped end slider
00:18:159 (2) - add whistle beginer slider
00:18:656 (1) - ^ and end slider and unsnapped end slider
00:20:976 (2) - whistle
00:21:308 (1) - ^ beginer slider and unsnaped end slider
00:23:628 (2) - whistle
00:23:959 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:26:611 (1) - add finish
00:27:937 (5) - add whistle
00:29:760 (3) - ^
00:30:257 (5) - ^ end slider
00:31:583 (9) - ^ beginer slider
00:34:566 (3) - add finish and this place too 00:35:229
00:35:892 (1,2,3,4) - add finish
00:37:383 (2) - add clap?
00:43:847 (1) - add finish beginer slider
00:46:498 (1) - ^
00:46:913 (3) - move note this time 00:46:996
00:47:161 (1) - add fnish
00:47:576 (3) - same as 00:46:913 (3)
00:47:824 (1) - add finish
00:48:239 (3) - same as 00:46:913 (3)
00:48:487 (1) - add clap this place 00:48:819 and finish too and end slider too
00:49:150 (1) - finish begienr slider
00:57:768 (2) - miss finish?
00:58:431 (3,4) - add finish?
00:59:425 (6) - add finish and clap?
00:59:757 (1) - finish beginer slider
01:01:082 (3) - add whistle
01:01:745 (4) - add whistle this place 01:01:911 and add clap and whistle this place 01:02:077
01:05:060 (1) - finish beginer slider
01:06:386 (2) - ^
01:07:712 (3) - add finish white tick this slider
01:10:032 (4) - add clap?
01:10:363 (1) - add finish beginer slider
01:13:015 (1) - ^
01:20:970 (1) - finish
01:21:632 (5) - ^
01:21:798 (6) - ^ end slider
01:22:130 (7) - add finish white tick this slider
01:22:627 (8) - ^ and this place 01:22:793 (8) - ?
01:23:124 (9) - add whistle and clap white tick this slider
01:23:621 (1) - finish
01:23:621 (1) - add NC?
01:27:599 (9) - add NC?
01:28:925 (1) - finish beginer slider
01:30:250 (2) - ^
01:31:576 (3) - add finish white tick this slider
01:33:234 (1,2) - add finish
01:33:896 (3) - finish end slider

[Extreme]
00:01:421 (1) - add finish
00:01:586 (3) - ^
00:02:083 (1) - ^
00:02:248 (3) - ^
00:02:746 (1) - ^
00:02:912 (3) - ^
00:03:078 (1) - ^
00:04:072 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:04:901 (5) - ^
00:06:061 (2) - add finish white and red tick this slider
00:06:558 (3) - ^
00:06:724 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:08:050 (1) - ^
00:08:713 (1) - ^ end slider
00:09:375 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:10:204 (4) - ^ white tick this slider
00:10:701 (5) - finish
00:12:027 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:12:359 (3) - finish
00:12:690 (5) - ^
00:13:021 (3) - ^
00:13:187 (4) - ^ end slider
00:14:679 (1,2) - finish
00:15:507 (1) - whistle
00:15:673 (3) - finish
00:15:839 (5) - whistle
00:16:005 (1) - ^ end slider
00:18:159 (2,3) - whistle
00:23:959 (1) - ^ end slider and 1 grid left?
00:26:280 (1) - whistle
00:27:937 (2) - ^ beginer slider
00:28:600 (4) - ^ end slider
00:28:931 (5) - ^ beginer slider
00:29:263 (1) - whistle
00:30:589 (5) - ^ and add NC?
00:31:417 (4) - whistle end slider?
00:33:241 (9) - add NC
00:34:566 (1) - add finish this place 00:35:229
00:37:549 (3) - finish beginer slider
00:38:543 (1) - ^
00:43:847 (1) - finish
00:46:498 (1) - ^
00:47:161 (5) - ^
00:47:493 (7) - ^
00:48:156 (12) - ^ beginer slider
00:48:819 (3) - finish
00:49:150 (1) - ^ beginer slider
00:58:431 (1) - finish
00:58:762 (3) - ^
00:59:425 (3) - ^
01:00:420 (1) - maybe use soft hitsound?
01:05:060 (1) - finish
01:06:386 (1) - ^
01:07:712 (1) - ^
01:08:043 (5) - ^
01:08:374 (9) - add NC?
01:08:706 (13) - finish
01:10:032 (3) - ^
01:10:363 (1) - ^
01:13:015 (1) - ^
01:21:467 (3) - add finish end slider
01:21:798 (4) - ^
01:22:130 (5) - ^
01:22:461 (6) - add finish this 01:22:627 and this place 01:22:793
01:28:925 (1) - finish beginer slider
01:30:250 (1) - ^
01:31:576 (1) - ^
01:31:908 (3) - ^
01:32:239 (5) - ^
01:32:571 (7) - ^
01:32:902 (1) - ^
01:33:234 (3) - ^
01:33:565 (4) - ^
01:33:896 (5) - ^

thats all
good luck
Thank you for modding :)
Fixed a lot~
Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi
from Fang Team's queue
Let's mod

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[General]

Add DarknessAngel at tags
You have .osb file. if you don't use SB. can you remove it?
Can you add KIAI time at 01:13:015 - this?

[Basic]

SPOILER
00:18:656 (1) - add Finish? NO >_>
00:21:308 (1) - ^ ^
00:23:959 (1) - add Finish at head? ^
00:34:566 (5) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz OK~
00:47:493 - add a note? OK~
00:50:476 (3) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz OK~
01:13:015 - not enough hitsound. sound is boring OK~
01:23:621 (1) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz I think it doesn't touch touch HP / Life bar 0.0

[Advanced]

SPOILER
00:07:387 (1) - why don't you change this pattern's timing like this? Follow the rhythm :3
00:16:005 (1) - adjust slider's shape. more pretty These slider are same as BG's circle w
00:18:656 (1) - ^
00:21:308 (1) - ^
00:34:566 (3) - NC NO
00:46:498 (1) - same as 00:07:387 -
00:59:757 (1) - add Clap at head OK~
01:00:420 (2) - remove Clap at body. and add Clap at head OK~
01:01:082 (3) - ^
01:01:745 (4) - ^
01:24:947 (1) - NC? OK~
01:27:599 (1) - ^

[Extreme]

SPOILER
OD-1? NO

00:02:083 (1) - don't stack because some players confusion this pattern It's ok~ this is Extreme
00:07:055 (2) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz OK~
00:07:387 (3) - why don't you change this pattern's timing like thisor this? OK~~ good :)
00:08:050 (1) - ^
00:15:507 (1) - some players confusion this notes. add hitsound or volume up hm...
00:23:959 (1) - it looks bad.. why don't you try make looks more pretty? same as Advanced
00:28:600 (4) - This slider touch HP / Life bar. edit plz OK~
00:31:417 (8) - ^ OK~
01:12:186 - add a note? NO
01:12:352 (1,2,3) - can you remove this? why?!
01:15:501 (6) - don't stack some players confusion this note yeah...but I want this diff get harder
01:17:821 - add a note? NO~
01:18:152 - ^

this is good song
I like jubeat

Have a good time :D
Thank you for modding :)
Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from ingame.

General
Tags need to be the same so check out o.o put the guest mappers id into tags of every diff.

and seems no video or something so maybe turn on the letterbox during breaks. OK~


[Basic]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:39:206 (X) - I suggest to add a note here, really weird that if it is empty here. OK~

Hitsound
00:31:914 (1) - hitsound like this I think normal hitsounds may fit more, soft ones with volumn 20 30 really hard to be heard.... OK~


[Advanced]
Issues All fixed~
00:16:005 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:18:656 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:21:308 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:01:752 (3) - I don't think here should use a slider, just a note is perfect. 00:01:918 is better to be empty because there isn't and sound there in the music and it is really werid to have a hit there. OK~
00:02:415 (3) - ^
00:04:735 (2,3) - this rhythm pattern really don't fit the music... consider change to something else? OK~
00:07:801 (3) - I feel this note is really offf. the note should be on the red tick, just like how you map those sliders after here. and for a second easist diff like this a slider maybe more safe to map imo I changed to slider~
00:08:464 (3) - ^
00:46:913 (3) - ^ just all like that. I think maybe try to use 25% speed to listen to the music carefully and you can find out why.
00:47:576 (3) - ^
00:48:239 (3) - ^
01:07:712 (3) - the drum sound didn't stop until: 01:09:037 (1), so why don't just make the slider stops at 01:09:037 (1)? seems better and fit the music more. OK~

Hitsound
00:37:383 (2) - I think add a clap here is better. OK~
01:00:420 (2,3,4) - why so many claps here TAT really loud. Fixed~
01:20:970 (1) - I don't really understand why you decrease the volumn here, because it seems unnecessary for me. Fixed~
01:23:621 (1) - I suggest you add some 24 white ticks claps after here, because it is almost the same rhythm, better to make some changes so the player won't get bored, just suggestion though. OK~
01:31:576 (3) - finish is better than clap here, because it fit the music better. OK~


[Extreme]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:01:421 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ...very hugh jump for me to play. :3
00:07:387 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - just like I already said in advanced diff #_# >_>
00:15:342 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - even though you got a new combo at there I still can't really read it well I thought it is just a normal stream.... because the distance seems just tell me that, maybe make it more clear? OK 0.0
00:47:741 (9) - this slider doesn't feel right....really weird to play for the rhythm seems really wrong...consider change to another pattern? Changed~
00:49:150 (1) - maybe try something else, these sliders start to get boring imo. >_>

Hitsound
yeah just maybe use more claps.
Thank you for modding :)
Topic Starter
-HaRuNa-

Philippines wrote:

  • General
  1. Artist should be Ryu* not Ryu. OK~

  2. Please add DarknessAngel as a Tag in all your difficulties. Fixed~

  3. Not sure about your Diff Spread. It feels like Basic is so Easy. You might want to map a Normal Diff to make things better. I think it's enouth >_>

  • Basic
  1. 00:34:566 (5) - This note has already crossed the corner. Please move this away from it. Fixed

  2. 00:39:206 - Add a note? OK~

  3. 01:03:734 - Why is there a break on this part? Please map it. OK~

  • Advanced
  1. 00:16:005 (1) - Unsnapped Slider End Fixed~

  2. 00:18:656 (1) - Unsnapped Slider End Fixed~

  3. 00:21:308 (1) - Unsnapped Slider End Fixed~

  4. 01:10:363 (1,3) - Making these two sliders a blanket for (2) would be better.

  • Extreme
  1. 00:02:746 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Ctrl + H. Good idea :)

  2. 00:15:922 - Add a note. OK~

  3. 00:16:005 (1) - If you followed my suggestion about note adding, Ctrl + R this slider. yep~

  4. 00:33:240 (9) - New combo. OK~

  5. 00:45:504 (11,12,13) - Weird spacing. Please make it consistent. Fixed~

  6. 00:48:487 (1,2,3,4) - No, just no. Please make the spacing consistent. NoO >_>
Thank you for modding :)
DarknessAngel
Thanks everyone
fixed some

Download: Ryu - I'm so Happy (-HaRuNa-) [D.N.Angel].osu
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