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Tsukinose Vignette April - Gabriel no Kazoe Uta

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iPhong
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Can someone mod/check my map? Thanks in advanced! I'm aiming it for RANKED!!! All suggestion are welcomed, I'm all ears!

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 23, 2018 at 2:35:12 AM

Artist: Tsukinose Vignette April (CV: Onoshi Saori)
Title: Gabriel no Kazoe Uta
Source: ガヴリールドロップアウト
Tags: tsukinose vignette april onoshi saori iphong1999 gabriel no kazoe uta
BPM: 124
Filesize: 11924kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
Advanced (1.89 stars, 63 notes)
Hard (3.11 stars, 124 notes)
Hyper (3.13 stars, 117 notes)
Normal (1.52 stars, 42 notes)
Oyasuminasai! (4.64 stars, 137 notes)

Information: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/835110
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Oyasuminasai, Vignette-chan~~~

Normal by me
Advanced by me
Hard by me
Hyper by me
Oyasuminasai! by me

Timing by Serenity Story. Check him out: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/11087003

HOPE FOR MY FIRST RANKED MAP!....AND PRAY....
pandaxmania
pandaxmania

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DISCLAIMER: FIRST TIME MODDING.

Sure - there are some common errors on the "Normal" song.

Title Error
First I wouldn't title it Normal since it's a very simple map, call it Easy, because of the approach rate, and how many sliders there are.


Sound Effects
If you could add some nice, soft, calming hitsounds throughout the song to make it interesting?


Copying Parts?/Need variety!!!
There are unfortunately a lot of the same parts with the circles that I do not like, and are repetitive.

  1. 00:26:999 (3) - Circle goes to the same place at 00:29:419.
  2. 00:32:322 (3) -> 00:35:225 (1) Again, move around the sliders and the circles to give the hits a smooth variety.
  3. 00:38:480 (3) -> 00:40:690 (1) ^
  4. 00:40:690 (1,2) -> 00:45:675 (1) ^^
  5. 00:48:051 (3) -> 00:50:320 (1) ^^^
  6. 00:52:885 (3) -> 00:54:662 (1) ^^^^


You should keep one of these and then just move the rest, but keep them near their original place was. The variety of having the same ending places for the hits is plain out boring. I'm sorry but it kinda is a little lazy. I would keep the one at 00:26:999 then move the rest since they're irrelevant owo.


Slider Errors
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  1. 00:18:290 (2) - Slider starts on edge. Move it away from the border.
  2. 00:32:322 (3) - Try not to have the sliders at the edge of the map since it makes the player have to go to such a different side and it's uncomfortable. Rather you should move the slider so it has enough room for the start of the circle/slider to click.


Those were optional, I recommend moving them.



Off Beat Parts
  1. 00:52:885 (3) - Make another circle at 00:52: as a combo if you can. I noticed how they said "Huttene" (Idk how to spell it sry xD) then move the second circle at 00:52:885 to 00:52:900
  2. 01:19:112 (3) - Sounds quite off? Move the slider about 00:00:010 or so and extend it just a little.


Slider Shapes
I liked how you made the cool custom shapes with the slider. I do recommend how this is a normal song you should make the angles more smooth like instead of a zig-zag type of pattern.
  1. 00:24:096 (2) - I don't like the angles of the slider, make it like a cursive e, like the shape of this -> "𝓔"
  2. 00:29:903 (2) - Same thing again - don't make it the shape of "NV" <-(look at the letters not how they're an abbreviation)
  3. 00:35:690 (2) - Could you make this triangle slider somehow into a small circle?
  4. 00:46:069 (2) - Notice how speed goes up, same with bpm, you should make the check mark looking thing turn into an "S" shape. Beginners cannot do sharp angles that fast, and it is uncomfortable especially how it's a 1.52* map
  5. 00:50:690 (2) - I'm sorry but how tf can u do that if you're a beginner.. like I tried that, and I am a pretty successful osu! player yet I still had to restart and get that one part since it's SOO fast!! It's a great idea to add on if you are making a 3+* map! Actually if I can I will take a look tomorrow and and see if I can add that idea to your Oyasuminasai, or the Hyper maps! :)
  6. 00:54:979 (2) - Same thing, just make it a different shape, it's REALLY fast, so if you can slow that part down?
  7. 00:57:902 (2) - This is really good for your Oyasuminasai map at the end! It's a great way for pros to finish, remove this and replace it with an easier slider.


Ending
01:26:200 - End song here


note to self owo
  1. 00:57:902 (2) - This is really good for your Oyasuminasai map at the end! It's a great way for pros to finish, remove this and replace it with an easier slider.
  2. 00:50:690 (2) - I'm sorry but how tf can u do that if you're a beginner.. like I tried that, and I am a pretty successful osu! player yet I still had to restart and get that one part since it's SOO fast!! It's a great idea to add on if you are making a 3+* map! Actually if I can I will take a look tomorrow and and see if I can add that idea to your Oyasuminasai, or the Hyper maps! :)



You did a very nice job otherwise. I can add more to this tomorrow but for now have a good day!

Add me on discord to pm me and I can help you out on the other songs. My discord is 👻 🕸Panda. 🕸🎃#4556 (copy and paste with the emojis, the URL is a screenshot of my profile for discord if you need any other help.) http://prntscr.com/l39r9u
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