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Taka A.K.A Otokaze - Saigetsu (Short Ver.)

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LKs
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LKs
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月4日 at 22:25:15

Artist: Taka A.K.A Otokaze
Title: Saigetsu (Short Ver.)
Tags: Jazz HipHop Pokie karenying spboxer3
BPM: 102
Filesize: 9673kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.48 stars, 217 notes)
  2. Insane (4.9 stars, 355 notes)
  3. Normal (2.82 stars, 141 notes)
  4. Sp3's Taiko (4.83 stars, 500 notes)
Download: Taka A.K.A Otokaze - Saigetsu (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[彩る四季、风と音色]

[- Full Ver. -]

[Taiko by Spboxer3]

[Normal by Pokie]

[Hard by karenying]

[CtB skin by 2nnt]

[SB by TTTTTTTTTTTT]

[Unusual diff]

[Original Insane diff]
Last edited by LKs , edited 64 times in total.
Pokie
osu! Alumni
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Pokie
　
[Ye]
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
[前排]
Gasaiyuno-chan
77 posts
Joined January 2012
Gasaiyuno-chan
hello.
Ibuki Suika
1,254 posts
Joined March 2010
Ibuki Suika
umm......
Saigetsu_old
Saigetsu_old
hi
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Hi here I am =D Thank you for helping and modding in advance ^^

Nice song and good Luck =D
Mik-ey
91 posts
Joined April 2010
Mik-ey
Insane is kinda overmapped or I'm just not good enough lol.
I like the song :D.
Regou
1,927 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
啊不好 Flower Dance v2啊...(歌明明就很慢啊!圖卻2x速)
不過挺好玩的
[Insane]
HP drain+1, AR-1

Unusual diff的note很奇怪 O___o
pimp
1,417 posts
Joined April 2010
pimp
nice map
Kotek-
Kotek-
Wow~ Nice SB, song and hitsounds :3

I favourited this~

Good luck with rank :3
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
LKs

Kotek- wrote:

Wow~ Nice SB, song and hitsounds :3

I favourited this~

Good luck with rank :3
thank you ;)
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
GamerX4life
nice map!
I really like the triangles :)
SuperMIC
420 posts
Joined July 2011
SuperMIC
A very nice map, but I'm finding the jumps and spacing in Unusual to be very unreadable. Can you properly space those please? :O The Normal diff looked fine, and the Insane diff was cool, but the triangles, although pretty neat, may be unreadable to some.

Anyway, nice map!
LKs
3,119 posts
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Topic Starter
LKs

SuperMICrophone wrote:

A very nice map, but I'm finding the jumps and spacing in Unusual to be very unreadable. Can you properly space those please? :O The Normal diff looked fine, and the Insane diff was cool, but the triangles, although pretty neat, may be unreadable to some.

Anyway, nice map!
thanks for long comment. I'll find many ppl to testplay this once this is pending, if they all think so, sadly, Unusual might be pulled down.

But I still believe this kind of spacing is much easier than 1/4 streams
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
Have a star
Urlangce
98 posts
Joined October 2010
Urlangce
歌很好听~~
SB做的很好~~
Hitsounds也很不错~~

可能是我技术不够的原因吗？我觉得Unusual我找不到节奏。。。 :(
Insane 好快！！！这么缓和的曲子居然这么快，有点出乎意料，虽然目前还打不过，但是感觉很好啊~
个人觉得00:37:006(2)(3)这里2个删除 在00:37:153加一个不是感觉更好点么？
01:17:153这里删掉后面的(4)加一个Slider怎么样？感觉要好点
01:21:858^
新手Mapper，可能间接错误 勿怪~~
confeito14
confeito14
hi~
Good map it heels my heart :D

[Normal]
more use curved sliders?
01:15:976 there slow part was difficult to play for me.=3=
reduce circles and use sliders? but i have no knowledge about Easy, Normal diff, so ignore pls
I'm not FL pro,It was my limit ;_;
SPOILER
HRDTFL
[Insane]
01:44:947 (3,5) - delete them?

[SB]
Very good
one point, I thought ... It is Racing cloud :?
Song tittle is "Saigetsu". "Time and tide wait for no man" It's true, but I hope that this is lazy white clouds.

nice map, Good Luck~
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
LKs

confeito14 wrote:

hi~
Good map it heels my heart :D

[Normal]
more use curved sliders?
01:15:976 there slow part was difficult to play for me.=3= you're so pro=.=
reduce circles and use sliders? but i have no knowledge about Easy, Normal diff, so ignore pls
I'm not FL pro,It was my limit ;_;
SPOILER
HRDTFL
[Insane]
01:44:947 (3,5) - delete them?

[SB]
Very good
one point, I thought ... It is Racing cloud :?
Song tittle is "Saigetsu". "Time and tide wait for no man" It's true, but I hope that this is lazy white clouds. may changing in some degree

nice map, Good Luck~

thanks you two
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Um I think the cursor here is great but I don't like it cause I am near-sighted【滚
so....
unusual:
00:19:502 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I cannot catch it all ~ try only use 3 1/3 notes at a time. (i am just noob so don't beat me)
00:56:564 (1,2,3,4) - do you agree it's hard here? or just awkward

Insane:
00:57:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) and many sections after - I would rather it divided into several colors. or you can choose keep.
00:57:006 (2,3) and 01:53:476 (2,3) - add a note between each pair?
etc
84 posts
Joined March 2012
etc
很好听的歌
insane
总体版面排列感觉有点不够紧凑,有点太远了感觉.
00:53:917 (2) - 方向和1保持一致比较好点?
00:57:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 之类,个人不太喜欢这种排列 4次一样的这种排列打完以后脑袋会晕掉OAQ
01:47:741 (1,2) - 重叠在一起会比较好看?

01:47:741 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 和第一次的排列完全一样会不会单调 >_>

非常好听的一首歌 图也很好 加油>_>
Dino99
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Joined May 2011
Dino99
Yo~ 稍微看了下~

[Normal]
  1. 00:50:094 (1,2) - 我覺得這樣比較好:3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288372
  2. 00:56:270 (3) - 沒對稱.. 往右一格再往上一格 (Grid Level 4) (3)跟(2)好像不同形狀?...
  3. 01:36:123 - 無用綠線
  4. 01:40:829 - ^
[Unusual]
  1. 00:56:270 (5,6) - 位置對調? 我覺得打起來比較順~
  2. 01:42:888 - 加個圈?
  3. 01:52:300 - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:47:741 (1) - 弧度條一下使其變成一個六角形吧~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288412
  2. 01:51:270 (1,2,3) - 做個anti-jump??
star~
LKs
3,119 posts
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Topic Starter
LKs
thanks all
Shino
1,319 posts
Joined April 2010
Shino
FREE Storyboard suggestion time. (sometimes it needs to do)
I just checked storyboard code in notepad, not in osu!, so maybe I can do a wrong suggestion.
If it causes, just ignore it! As I said, this is not a mod, but a suggestion.

*I'll recheck this SB in May 5th. (and you don't need to give kds in that time)

[General]
Red line = Remove it please.
Blue line = Change it please.

.osb file
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\B01.jpg",320,240
F,0,94947,,0
F,0,94947,95388,0

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\B2.png",320,240
M,0,43035,,320,240

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\white ball.png",320,240
F,0,38329,,0.45
M,0,76564,,320,240 I don't understand why this line exists.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\black.jpg",320,240
M,0,90,,320,240

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"sb\whitedo.png",320,240
M,0,24211,,320,240
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
SkyDevil
Rururu~

Small mod4mod Mod X3

First of all: EPIC SB
Second: Euh, One diff is normal, other is insane, and one is unusual? O_O?
Third: Relaxing song~~

Normal
00:15:973 (1,2) - I'm almost sure the Distance spacing is too small
00:18:914 (2,3,1) - Distance Spacing isn't the same, fix it C:
01:17:447 (2,3,1) - ^
01:19:800 (2,3,1) - DS too small :3
01:22:153 (2,3,1) - ^
01:51:858 (2,3,4,5) - Make maybe a square figure of it? :3

Unusual
00:04:208 (1,2,1) - DS isn't the same :c
00:04:796 (1) - NC?
00:09:502 (1) - ^
00:27:888 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This part is totally unpredictable :c Change it :c

Insane is making me dizzy because of the high AR @_@
+ star :3
Kuria
1,390 posts
Joined May 2011
Kuria
very nice map with the beautiful SB :D
star'ed
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


M4M~ (Mod for money)
話說試聽第一下，有種Flower Dance的感覺

[Normal]

00:22:741 (2,3) - 00:20:388(2,3)這個節奏比較好，而且Normal也不適合太難的節奏~
00:15:976 (1) - N不適合減速囉lol 老實說我第一眼也看不出是連點還是甚麼；又例如01:24:064，我誤讀成速度改回來= =

[Insane]

00:40:388 (3) - 這個位置有1個挺重要的音0.0 看看要不要縮短Slider或者其他方法；不過看著您後面都是這樣，應該是故意的就算了吧
00:57:741 (1~12,~1,~10,1~5) - 這段真的太超過，這規律也不容易看得清楚orz 感覺這是玩弄玩家而不是給玩家玩= =
01:07:153 (&%@&$%&) - ^ 這裡的話，換著我會做這種 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289331

嗯嗯，有點像FlowerDance那種突然加速移動的感覺
這張圖也讓我想起Nold的Luv Letter lol
加油吧~ :D
Aurele
Global Moderator
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Joined January 2011
Aurele
That's an awesome storyboard. o_o
CSY the corrupt
431 posts
Joined March 2010
CSY the corrupt
[Insane]

没什么问题.中间那两串挺有趣但读图不好的话会晕在那.

[Unusual]

没上音效?
00:21:711 (6,1) - 感觉不换一个比较清晰明了的间距的话会比较坑爹,毕竟这节奏是挺独特
00:23:917 (6,7,1) - ^
00:28:329 (6,7,8,1) - ^

[Normal]

01:24:064 (2) - 这个2虽然是按照一致的间距来摆可是差别太小,第一次打的话有可能会读不懂尤其是新手

新手mod貌似mod不出个啥...
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
LKs

ertyukjh010 wrote:



[Insane]

00:57:741 (1~12,~1,~10,1~5) - 這段真的太超過，這規律也不容易看得清楚orz 感覺這是玩弄玩家而不是給玩家玩= = 我自己做出这段的时候也觉得太难了 但以我的水平打了两三次后也能A 虽然那部分还是miss了5~6个 但不觉得这很难

Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
And hi again to a new comment xD
Thanks for modding last time x3
And hope you will get this beatmaps ranked someday =D

Have a good day and much fun ^-^
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
HI~ I just have a suggestion for you .
you can ignore this :)

00:39:506 (4) - move the slide on this time
00:39:947 (5,6) - add the note

song is beautiful :D good luck~
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
wocao hedeng danteng ._. sb henmei
LKs
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Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
LKs

AngelHoney wrote:

wocao hedeng danteng ._. sb henmei
:)
blackabyss
494 posts
Joined November 2011
blackabyss
Nice map! and the cursor is sun x3
simple song, with beautiful SB, Skin, and map.

Go rank \m/
Kotone
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Kotone
http://puu.sh/qnGT
傳個檔早上繼續
lazur2012
29 posts
Joined November 2010
lazur2012
Pretty nice insane. I even lost a few times ^^.
What do you thing about (insane diff):
00:25:976(3) move to 00:25:829
00:26:123(4) move to 00:25:976

Only my suggests (not important of course) ^^

GL
KanaRin
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Joined April 2010
KanaRin
總體節奏分明 排版美觀
低頻聽上去感到很舒服
所用的音效都很配

可玩性方面 做為一個能玩Insane的玩家
我覺得還不錯 就是有一個位有點辛苦 不過打多幾次就沒問題了

有一點感到可惜是00:57:741 (1) - 這段重複了一次
音樂是一樣的重複 可能你感覺沒問題吧
其實我覺得一樣沒問題 不過只是有點失色

另外有點nazi的是幾個New combo
01:05:388 (1) - Slider去向轉換了 我覺得下個NC沒有問題
01:14:800 (1) - ^
01:17:300 (x) - 這裡沒下一個低音總感覺有點奇怪,特別是玩的時候 原本的(3) 很易100. 下一個notes再加clap.
01:22:006 (x) - ^一樣的

Star.
xsrsbsns
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Joined July 2010
xsrsbsns
I like this map. No sightreading issues here: none in Insane, and Unusual was fine when I raised my guard because of your warning (got a couple of 100s).

Go rank!
LKs
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Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
LKs

lazur2012 wrote:

Pretty nice insane. I even lost a few times ^^.
What do you thing about (insane diff):
00:25:976(3) move to 00:25:829
00:26:123(4) move to 00:25:976

Only my suggests (not important of course) ^^

GL
thanks


KanaRin wrote:

總體節奏分明 排版美觀
低頻聽上去感到很舒服
所用的音效都很配

可玩性方面 做為一個能玩Insane的玩家
我覺得還不錯 就是有一個位有點辛苦 不過打多幾次就沒問題了

有一點感到可惜是00:57:741 (1) - 這段重複了一次
音樂是一樣的重複 可能你感覺沒問題吧
其實我覺得一樣沒問題 不過只是有點失色 不知道还有什么排列有一样的效果

另外有點nazi的是幾個New combo
01:05:388 (1) - Slider去向轉換了 我覺得下個NC沒有問題
01:14:800 (1) - ^
01:17:300 (x) - 這裡沒下一個低音總感覺有點奇怪,特別是玩的時候 原本的(3) 很易100. 下一個notes再加clap. 改了
01:22:006 (x) - ^一樣的 改了

Star.
忘记加你好友了..T_T

xsrsbsns wrote:

I like this map. No sightreading issues here: none in Insane, and Unusual was fine when I raised my guard because of your warning (got a couple of 100s).

Go rank!
Thanks :D

your comment for Unusual is really useful as an important feedback :D
Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
来写评价
1、SB skin 效果做的很好 很有感觉 困的时候能提神
2、鼠标是黄的 在黄色的combo内很容易找不到方向 建议把黄色combo换掉 换个深点的 (简单点直接橙色就行
3、AR⑨略高 感觉这图还是AR8舒服点 (insane) (本来就慢歌←感觉上 各种意义上?)
4、note排列设计的还不错 来回的三角那边 感觉有点难但很好玩 (insane)
5、前面几个难度没什么特别的感觉
6、HARD难度没做完？
Gasaiyuno-chan
77 posts
Joined January 2012
Gasaiyuno-chan
Hello.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
LKs

Snowy Dream wrote:

来写评价
1、SB skin 效果做的很好 很有感觉 困的时候能提神 :3
2、鼠标是黄的 在黄色的combo内很容易找不到方向 建议把黄色combo换掉 换个深点的 (简单点直接橙色就行 但鼠标边缘是橘黄色所以我感觉还好 先保留着 如果有更多相关意见我考虑
3、AR⑨略高 感觉这图还是AR8舒服点 (insane) (本来就慢歌←感觉上 各种意义上?) 怕中间那段读图悲剧
4、note排列设计的还不错 来回的三角那边 感觉有点难但很好玩 (insane) :3
5、前面几个难度没什么特别的感觉 对
6、HARD难度没做完？ 对

thx
Kotone
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Joined August 2008
Kotone
http://puu.sh/qJ5I
音效隨便你改了
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
LKs

karenying wrote:

http://puu.sh/qJ5I
音效隨便你改了
arigato karen TvT
Skyrior
24 posts
Joined April 2010
Skyrior
Unusual 略奇怪，不是很容易能够一眼看懂
Hard有些地方Spacing虽然是一样蛮好看的，可是有点容易让人混淆 :)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
wow, that's a really good map.
Great work! And I really like hitsounds.

感觉音效和skin都不错, 不过

ins 00:57:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - what is this I don't even
unusual 00:22:741 (3,4,5,6,7) - 你remix也不能就完全不跟音乐啊...

其他的都不错啊
pikachuv3
4 posts
Joined April 2012
pikachuv3
not bad,it easy to play at normal
Ch1ka
340 posts
Joined May 2010
Ch1ka
Beautiful skin and SB, pretty good Normal and Hard I just can't play it on higher diffs Star.
Maybe this needs more soft hs in Unusual.
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
前面的难度都感觉很舒适~
insane.....果然lks的最后难度不会让人轻易的FC啊.....解图鸭梨。。第一次能FC的都是触。。中间稍稍的感觉有点赶。。不过这种AR打起来居然让人紧张不起来。。。。
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