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yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size)

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phonic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月18日 at 21:50:31

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)
Source: Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags: Ending Yanagi Nagi Summer Natsumachi Sorda S_o_r_d_a KanaRin
BPM: 131
Filesize: 13804kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.94 stars, 110 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 285 notes)
  3. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 441 notes)
  4. Normal (4.15 stars, 145 notes)
  5. S o r d a's Hard (4.83 stars, 211 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6


「その夏の思い出が、僕達の永遠になる」
OP | ED

Mapset:

[Easy] - 100% by Me
[Normal] - 100% by Me
[S o r d a's Hard] - 100% by S o r d a
[Kana's Taiko Oni] - 100% by KanaRin
[Insane] - 100 by Me
suzutsukikanade
<3
Love so much this
I can make a Hard or Easy?
Topic Starter
phonic

suzutsukikanade wrote:

<3
Love so much this
I can make a Hard or Easy?
oh.. :o
You don't have the Ranked map

sorry... :(
Kawayi Rika
Moe Ichiban <3
Topic Starter
phonic

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Moe Ichiban <3
baka Rika Arigato <3
spboxer3

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime
  2. Inconsistency in Tags
  3. video offset: 200ms I think~

[Easy]


  • mapping
  1. 00:40:578 (1) - left 1 grid?

[Normal]



  • mapping
  1. none~

[S o r d a's Hard]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:48:364 (2,3) -
mapping
  1. 00:11:265 (1) - finish at slider head?
  2. 00:18:593 (1,2) - I think you can try to let it much better↓
    photo

    412,228,18593,6,0,B|332:176|348:76,1,160,2|0
    440,136,19280,2,0,B|292:200,1,160,2|0
  3. 01:27:524 (1) - Bug. you must be add NC here

[Insane]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:44:242 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:42:868 (2,3) -
mapping
  1. none~

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
Topic Starter
phonic

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]


  • Settings
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime Fixed
  2. Inconsistency in Tags Fixed
  3. video offset: 200ms I think~ Fixed

[Easy]


  • mapping
  1. 00:40:578 (1) - left 1 grid? Fixed

[Normal]



  • mapping
  1. none~

[Insane]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:44:242 -
    Fixed
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:42:868 (2,3) -
    mapping
    1. none~

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

Thank you >w<!
S o r d a

spboxer3 wrote:

[S o r d a's Hard]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:48:364 (2,3) -
nope

mapping
  1. 00:11:265 (1) - finish at slider head?Fixed
  2. 00:18:593 (1,2) - I think you can try to let it much better↓Fixed
    photo

    412,228,18593,6,0,B|332:176|348:76,1,160,2|0
    440,136,19280,2,0,B|292:200,1,160,2|0
  3. 01:27:524 (1) - Bug. you must be add NC hereFixed
thanks~

Edit:hitsound少し変えました、何度もすみません><

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size) (phonic) [S o r d a's Hard].osu
riffy
eh..
let's try to mod

Insane
00:56:150 (1) - x324 y252
00:56:608 (2) - x476 y92
01:07:601 (4,5) - are you sure? maybe like this http://puu.sh/jN0h
01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/jN0s looks better.. or not?
01:20:654 (4,1) - looks bad :<
01:24:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8....) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/jN1k
01:28:211 (5) - maybe spinner/slider?

Hard
00:13:097 (5) - new combo~
00:13:097 (5) - circle here?
00:55:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/jN2Y

Normal
00:49:738 (1,2,3) - maybe like this http://puu.sh/jN3J

Easy
Looks good :3

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sorry, my mod is too short.
Hope it will be usefull :3
Topic Starter
phonic

-Bakari- wrote:

eh..
let's try to mod

Insane
00:56:150 (1) - x324 y252
00:56:608 (2) - x476 y92
01:07:601 (4,5) - are you sure? maybe like this http://puu.sh/jN0h
01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/jN0s looks better.. or not?
01:20:654 (4,1) - looks bad :<
01:24:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8....) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/jN1k
01:28:211 (5) - maybe spinner/slider?

Normal
00:49:738 (1,2,3) - maybe like this http://puu.sh/jN3J Fixed

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sorry, my mod is too short.
Hope it will be usefull :3
Thank you >3<
senaya
pew~
looks nice already.

[Easy]
My personal opinion: too many straight sliders.
just some thoughts:
00:00:273 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/jNqt
00:02:105 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/jNqG
00:24:089 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/jNs3
00:25:921 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/jNsa
etc, it's up to you to decide which and how.

[Normal]
00:41:494 (2) - add 2 sliders for drums? http://puu.sh/jNtn
00:44:929 (2) - remove, move 00:45:158 (3) here instead and add circle at 00:45:616 to follow lyrics better?
00:54:089 (2) - remove, move 00:54:318 (3) here instead and add circle at 00:54:776 to follow lyrics/music better?

[S o r d a's Hard]
01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - more rounded shape, something like this http://puu.sh/jNx6 ?
01:10:807 (3) - change like http://puu.sh/jNxS to follow lyrics and music better?
01:19:967 (2) - remove clap, add clap at 01:20:425 (3) ?
Topic Starter
phonic

senaya wrote:

pew~
looks nice already.

[Easy]
My personal opinion: too many straight sliders.
just some thoughts:
00:00:273 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/jNqt
00:02:105 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/jNqG
00:24:089 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/jNs3
00:25:921 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/jNsa
etc, it's up to you to decide which and how.

[Normal]
00:41:494 (2) - add 2 sliders for drums? http://puu.sh/jNtn Fixed
00:44:929 (2) - remove, move 00:45:158 (3) here instead and add circle at 00:45:616 to follow lyrics better? Fixed
00:54:089 (2) - remove, move 00:54:318 (3) here instead and add circle at 00:54:776 to follow lyrics/music better? Fixed

thank you~
S o r d a

-Bakari- wrote:

Hard
00:13:097 (5) - new combo~Fixed
00:13:097 (5) - circle here?eh,already put a circle
00:55:692 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/jN2YNope

senaya wrote:

[S o r d a's Hard]
01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - more rounded shape, something like this http://puu.sh/jNx6 ?Nope
01:10:807 (3) - change like http://puu.sh/jNxS to follow lyrics and music better?^
01:19:967 (2) - remove clap, add clap at 01:20:425 (3) ?Fixed
thanks for mod~

Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size) (phonic) [S o r d a's Hard].osu
-s u i r e n-
hi phonic~MODリクエストから:D


※大体は提案です、気に入らなければ無視してもらっても構いません



Easy
01:20:883(1)-提案:最後の部分はジグザグ配置とかどうかな?

最後の単発はジグザグのほうがいいかも!って思っただけでした いい譜面~




Normal
00:12:410(3)-提案:ここの単発を↓にしてミッキーみたくしてみたりとか

ちょっとミッキーは危ないかなって思ったけど。まあいいかwいい譜面だった!頑張って!



phonic~Ranked目指して頑張ってね~応援してます:0


とぅっ(ノ*´д`*)ノ~[star]
Kawayi Rika
Moe Moe phonic chan <3

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 01:24:547 (1) - This spinner maybe end to here 01:28:135(1/6),sound much better with me.

[Insane]


  1. 00:47:906 - Add finish.

[Baka' Hard]


  1. OD+1
  2. This part need more hitsound,not simple sound for here 00:29:585 - 00:58:669.
    Try add some whistle or clap.
  3. 00:44:242 - Add finish.
  4. 00:47:906 - ^

[Normal]


  1. I think AR+1 will be much better play.
  2. 00:47:906 - Add finish.
  3. 01:04:853 (2) - Add new combo to here,Vocal start to here.
  4. and Remove 01:04:395 (1) and 01:06:227 (1).
  5. 01:06:914 (2) - Add new combo^.
  6. 01:07:830 (1,2) - Try like this rhythm.

[Easy]


  1. 00:47:906 - Add finish.

Moe nice map ganbare <3
Topic Starter
phonic

suirenn05 wrote:

hi phonic~MODリクエストから:D


※大体は提案です、気に入らなければ無視してもらっても構いません



Easy
01:20:883(1)-提案:最後の部分はジグザグ配置とかどうかな? Fixed

最後の単発はジグザグのほうがいいかも!って思っただけでした いい譜面~




Normal
00:12:410(3)-提案:ここの単発を↓にしてミッキーみたくしてみたりとか

ちょっとミッキーは危ないかなって思ったけど。まあいいかwいい譜面だった!頑張って!



phonic~Ranked目指して頑張ってね~応援してます:0


とぅっ(ノ*´д`*)ノ~[star]
ありがとおおお!


Kawayi Rika wrote:

Moe Moe phonic chan <3 I'm Moe boy >w<

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 01:24:547 (1) - This spinner maybe end to here 01:28:135(1/6),sound much better with me. Fixed

[Insane]


  1. 00:47:906 - Add finish. No, I think that it does not match a sound to add finish here

[Normal]


  1. I think AR+1 will be much better play. Fixed
  2. 00:47:906 - Add finish. same as Insane
  3. 01:04:853 (2) - Add new combo to here,Vocal start to here. Fixed
  4. and Remove 01:04:395 (1) and 01:06:227 (1). ^
  5. 01:06:914 (2) - Add new combo^. ^
  6. 01:07:830 (1,2) - Try like this rhythm. ^

[Easy]


  1. 00:47:906 - Add finish. same as Insane

Moe nice map ganbare <3

Arigato <3
S o r d a

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Baka' Hard]

I'm not bakaT_T

  1. OD+1 OD,HP+1
  2. This part need more hitsound,not simple sound for here 00:29:585 - 00:58:669.Hmm already some Added Custom whistle keep it now
    Try add some whistle or clap. huh already some hitsound if have problem you can tell me
  3. 00:44:242 - Add finish.Fixed
  4. 00:47:906 - ^ doesn't fit Nope
thanks for mod Rika~

@phonic HPとOD+1しましたー譜面自体簡単だと思うので恐らく問題ないかとー

Edit:

Thite wrote:

[S o r d a's Hard]
00:48:364 (2) - こういう風にしてみては?Fixed
01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - 綺麗な5角形にしたらもっと見栄えいいかなぁって思いましたFixed 多分綺麗になったはず>_<
01:21:341 (2,6) - 2と6だけスペーシングが違って少しだけ気になりましたスペーシング同じにしました
Download: Yanagi Nagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size) (phonic) [S o r d a's Hard].osu
Thite
すべて提案ですー!


[Easy]
00:00:273 (1) - スライダーの最初にfinish追加?
00:30:043 (1) - スピンの後すぐにノートあると初心者には難しいかなぁって思うから消してみては?


[Normal]
00:00:273 (1) - スライダーの最初にfinish追加?
01:22:257 (2) - 01:22:028 - ここからスタートにしてみては?


[S o r d a's Hard]
00:48:364 (2) - こういう風にしてみては?
01:08:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - 綺麗な5角形にしたらもっと見栄えいいかなぁって思いました
01:21:341 (2,6) - 2と6だけスペーシングが違って少しだけ気になりました

[Insane]
00:00:158 (1) - このノートはいらないような気がします
01:27:982 (4) - りむーぶfinish?
01:28:211 (5) - でこっちにfinish追加?

good map :)
Topic Starter
phonic

S o r d a wrote:

@phonic HPとOD+1しましたー譜面自体簡単だと思うので恐らく問題ないかとー
問題ないですb

Thite wrote:

すべて提案ですー!


[Easy]
00:00:273 (1) - スライダーの最初にfinish追加? Fixed
00:30:043 (1) - スピンの後すぐにノートあると初心者には難しいかなぁって思うから消してみては? ^


[Normal]
00:00:273 (1) - スライダーの最初にfinish追加?Fixed
01:22:257 (2) - 01:22:028 - ここからスタートにしてみては? スライダーの代わりにノート置いてみました


[Insane]
00:00:158 (1) - このノートはいらないような気がします
01:27:982 (4) - りむーぶfinish? Fixed
01:28:211 (5) - でこっちにfinish追加? ^

good map :)
ありがとうございます!
Cilvery
[Easy]

01:03:479 (3) - whistle

01:19:051 (1) - ^

01:24:547 (1) - 01:28:211までのばした方がいいと思いますw (Hard,Insaneの終わりが01:28:211なのでそろえた方が統一感あるかな~って感じがします)



                                   ↓





[Normal]

00:56:608 (2) - 1grid上

01:06:227 (3) - finish

01:24:547 (1) - 01:28:211までのばした方がいいと思いますw (Easy同様)



[S o r d a's Hard]

00:13:555 (3) - whistle

01:04:166 (5) - ^

01:04:395 (6) - 始点whistle

01:12:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - 綺麗な5角形にすると良い思いますw



01:18:593 (5) - 終点whistle

01:19:051 (6) - 始点whistle



[Insane]

00:03:479 (5) - 1grid左

00:03:937 (1) - ^

00:15:387 (2) - 1grid下

00:16:532 (6,7,1) - ^

00:21:570 (5,6,7,1) - 綺麗なひし形?になるといいかな~って思いますw



00:22:715 (2) - 00:22:257 (1)の下に置く(上のイメージ)

01:06:227 (1) - 始点finish

01:11:265 (4) - 2grid左

01:11:952 (2) - 01:11:265 (4)の終点にstack

01:24:547 (1) - finish
________________________

初心者なので変なmodがあるかもしれません・・・( ̄∀ ̄;)

良い曲ですね!

頑張ってください(´ω `*)
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