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Hanazawa Kana - sweets parade (TV Size)

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Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月10日 at 16:17:44

Artist: Hanazawa Kana
Title: sweets parade (TV Size)
Source: Inu x Boku SS
Tags: Opening Scorpiour
BPM: 103
Filesize: 13260kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.35 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Hard (4.59 stars, 183 notes)
  3. Insane (4.89 stars, 308 notes)
  4. Scorpiour's Normal (3.18 stars, 114 notes)
Download: Hanazawa Kana - sweets parade (TV Size)
Download: Hanazawa Kana - sweets parade (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks for Scorpiour's Cake
Video file get from Nymph's ranked version
Last edited by Mura_77 , edited 34 times in total.
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
先占沙发
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
然后Mod for request~~~

General:
  1. 关掉Countdown
  2. Audio Lead-in: 1.5s
  3. Roromiya Karuta从Tags里去掉，和Source重复了
  4. Tags最短至少3个字母，把op改成opening
  5. 加一个无声的sliderslide去掉滚动音吧，不好听
  6. 00:56:729 - - kiai从这里开始？
Candy:
  1. 00:18:282 (4) - clap感觉错位了，去掉吧……
  2. 00:35:175 (2) - 同上。要是Clap放在第2白线的话，可以用clap做个slidertick的音效然后用soft-custom 2来实现
  3. 00:36:923 (4) - 同上。我觉得最好统一一下，是2clap还是2/4clap，这样换来换去很别扭。
  4. 00:49:739 (5,6,1) - 这种节奏和遮挡都很不适合Easy难度，没必要强行跟vocal，改掉吧
  5. 00:50:904 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2连打太长了，改1/1的吧
  6. 00:54:399 (4,5) - 同样是不合适的节奏。其实我觉得spinner从这里开始比较好
  7. 01:06:923 (2) - 删掉
  8. 01:08:088 (4) - 向后挪动到白线
  9. 01:09:253 (5) - ^
  10. 01:09:836 (6,7) - (6)向后移动到白线然后删掉(7)
  11. 01:28:040 (3,4) - 改成slider在前把。
Cream:
  1. 00:28:476 (4) - 考虑删掉？
  2. 00:31:098 (5) - 下一组NC从这里开始？
  3. 00:33:428 (3) - NC
  4. 00:55:418 (1) - (nazi)最好把首尾重叠起来
  5. 01:21:632 (7) - clap吓我一跳。。。后面这段要用clap建议可以用2/4…………
Chocolate:
  1. 00:01:826 (3,4) - 不是很推荐这种造型，很容易被人吐槽什么的
  2. 00:07:797 (1) - 折返完全被分数挡住了，unrankable
  3. 00:08:525 (2) - 应该在后面红线上
  4. 00:18:428 (1,2,3) - 这段保留2/4clap就好。。。前后都没有这么做的就这里特殊有点别扭
  5. 00:37:214 (1,2,3,4) - 同样建议2/4clap
  6. 00:38:088 (4) - NC?
  7. 00:46:535 (5,6,7,8,9) - 2/4clap
  8. 00:57:166 (3) - 删掉？
  9. 01:06:049 (2) - 这组NC从这里开始
  10. 01:15:661 (3) - clap
  11. 01:16:243 (6) - ^
  12. 01:17:991 (8) - ^
  13. 01:18:573 (2) - ^
  14. 01:23:088 (4) - 向后放到红线
  15. 01:28:331 (5) - 加个折返或者延长到蓝线
OK就这些了～～～GL
Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77

Scorpiour wrote:

然后Mod for request~~~

SPOILER
General:
  1. 关掉Countdown
  2. Audio Lead-in: 1.5s
  3. Roromiya Karuta从Tags里去掉，和Source重复了
  4. Tags最短至少3个字母，把op改成opening
  5. 加一个无声的sliderslide去掉滚动音吧，不好听
  6. 00:56:729 - - kiai从这里开始？
Candy:
  1. 00:18:282 (4) - clap感觉错位了，去掉吧……
  2. 00:35:175 (2) - 同上。要是Clap放在第2白线的话，可以用clap做个slidertick的音效然后用soft-custom 2来实现
  3. 00:36:923 (4) - 同上。我觉得最好统一一下，是2clap还是2/4clap，这样换来换去很别扭。
  4. 00:49:739 (5,6,1) - 这种节奏和遮挡都很不适合Easy难度，没必要强行跟vocal，改掉吧
  5. 00:50:904 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2连打太长了，改1/1的吧
  6. 00:54:399 (4,5) - 同样是不合适的节奏。其实我觉得spinner从这里开始比较好
  7. 01:06:923 (2) - 删掉
  8. 01:08:088 (4) - 向后挪动到白线
  9. 01:09:253 (5) - ^
  10. 01:09:836 (6,7) - (6)向后移动到白线然后删掉(7)
  11. 01:28:040 (3,4) - 改成slider在前把。
Cream:
  1. 00:28:476 (4) - 考虑删掉？
  2. 00:31:098 (5) - 下一组NC从这里开始？
  3. 00:33:428 (3) - NC
  4. 00:55:418 (1) - (nazi)最好把首尾重叠起来
  5. 01:21:632 (7) - clap吓我一跳。。。后面这段要用clap建议可以用2/4…………
Chocolate:
  1. 00:01:826 (3,4) - 不是很推荐这种造型，很容易被人吐槽什么的
  2. 00:07:797 (1) - 折返完全被分数挡住了，unrankable
  3. 00:08:525 (2) - 应该在后面红线上
  4. 00:18:428 (1,2,3) - 这段保留2/4clap就好。。。前后都没有这么做的就这里特殊有点别扭
  5. 00:37:214 (1,2,3,4) - 同样建议2/4clap
  6. 00:38:088 (4) - NC?
  7. 00:46:535 (5,6,7,8,9) - 2/4clap
  8. 00:57:166 (3) - 删掉？
  9. 01:06:049 (2) - 这组NC从这里开始
  10. 01:15:661 (3) - clap
  11. 01:16:243 (6) - ^
  12. 01:17:991 (8) - ^
  13. 01:18:573 (2) - ^
  14. 01:23:088 (4) - 向后放到红线
  15. 01:28:331 (5) - 加个折返或者延长到蓝线

OK就这些了～～～GL
超棒，我会慢慢修改的

好，基本上全部都修改完了，Chocolate 某些 personal style 保留了一下，无伤大雅，添加静音滑条音效
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
Hello~~

Candy diff


You should change distance 0.10x (where is sound..?)

00:50:175 (6,1) - : so hard distance.. change

Cream diff


You should change distance 0.10x

00:09:107 (3,4) - : stuck

00:55:418 (1) - : so hard

Chocolate diff


00:36:340 (3,4) - : stuck

It is good map! good luck...

(But Where is normal sound..?)
Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77

W h i t e wrote:

Hello~~

SPOILER

Candy diff


You should change distance 0.10x (where is sound..?)

00:50:175 (6,1) - : so hard distance.. change

Cream diff


You should change distance 0.10x

00:09:107 (3,4) - : stuck

00:55:418 (1) - : so hard

Chocolate diff


00:36:340 (3,4) - : stuck

It is good map! good luck...

(But Where is normal sound..?)

Thank u, Candy diff fixed,,i'll fix the normal hitsound soon
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
一个建议:
当前的normal的clap声音略大 打击起来可能比较吵....
一个比较好的解决方法就是:
整体还是用soft的音色...将normal-hitnormal来当做soft-hitclap来用
这样一来降低了嘈杂 也用到了whistle
这里给你附了一个改好了的可以参考一下 ;)
说明一下附件里的soft-normal和原来的是一样的 就是声音比较小
这样能更好的体现出whistle的作用

其他都没大问题 加油XD

Download: soft.rar

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Sweets Parade(TV Size) (Mura_77) [XD].osu
Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77

Yumeko Yuki wrote:

一个建议:
当前的normal的clap声音略大 打击起来可能比较吵....
一个比较好的解决方法就是:
整体还是用soft的音色...将normal-hitnormal来当做soft-hitclap来用
这样一来降低了嘈杂 也用到了whistle
这里给你附了一个改好了的可以参考一下 ;)
说明一下附件里的soft-normal和原来的是一样的 就是声音比较小
这样能更好的体现出whistle的作用

其他都没大问题 加油XD

棒，我来修改
改了一下，全部变Soft的话感觉层次感和打击感就变低了，于是折中一下我吧Normal音效全部减值50%

soft音量减至70%，采用soft-normalhit音效
Last edited by Mura_77 , edited 2 times in total.
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
moded via qq
some logs:
00:12:457 (1) -
WHISTLE取消
00:09:690 - 这里加一个SLIDER
加到 00:12:894 (2) - 的末尾
00:14:641 (10) - 末尾WHITLE取消
00:15:224 (3) - 末尾加whistle
00:21:923 (1,4) - 4的末尾没叠上去
00:55:418 (5) - 这个啊 建议拉成波浪SLIDER
01:05:612 (10) - 这里加个圈 做成三连
01:28:331 (5,6) - 最后这里建议改成改成跟着歌词一样的五连
Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77

_Kiva wrote:

moded via qq
some logs:
00:12:457 (1) -
WHISTLE取消
00:09:690 - 这里加一个SLIDER
加到 00:12:894 (2) - 的末尾
00:14:641 (10) - 末尾WHITLE取消
00:15:224 (3) - 末尾加whistle
00:21:923 (1,4) - 4的末尾没叠上去
00:55:418 (5) - 这个啊 建议拉成波浪SLIDER
01:05:612 (10) - 这里加个圈 做成三连
01:28:331 (5,6) - 最后这里建议改成改成跟着歌词一样的五连
棒，全修
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
虽然normal的音量改小了但是soft也还是很大啊建议降个40%左右
00:55:418 (5) - 5%太小了建议15%至少
01:04:593 (x) - 这里加个note

大体上都是note>sliderx2这样的布局可能有点乏味，不过整体感不错
no kudos.
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Cheese难度……

请尽情吐槽……………………

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Sweets Parade(TV Size) (Mura_77) [Cheese].osu
Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77

Scorpiour wrote:

Cheese难度……

请尽情吐槽……………………

[attachment=0:4a9dd]Hanazawa Kana - Sweets Parade(TV Size) (Mura_77) [Cheese].osu[/attachment:4a9dd]
好, 大体排版上没问题，音效希望更加全面一点
Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77

goodbye wrote:

虽然normal的音量改小了但是soft也还是很大啊建议降个40%左右
00:55:418 (5) - 5%太小了建议15%至少
01:04:593 (x) - 这里加个note

大体上都是note>sliderx2这样的布局可能有点乏味，不过整体感不错
no kudos.
好

soft音量减至70%，采用新音效
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
update~

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Sweets Parade(TV Size) (Mura_77) [Cheese].osu
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
Hi~

[General]

Tag in Cream diff is different from others
normal-hitclap is too loud to me ><

[Candy]

00:15:952 (2) - no need to add 2 repeats for this slider imo
00:50:175 (6) - i think its too hard to read for beginner, since this note is on blue tick
00:54:836 (5,6) - ^
00:56:729 (1) - too early after spinner >_>


[Cheese]
spacing is inconstant, is it on purpose ?
00:22:942 (2,3,1) - spacing
00:45:078 (1) - whistle to the beginning

[Cream]
00:47:408 (1,2,3) - like this?
http://puu.sh/iQ97

01:17:700 (5) - newcombo
01:18:865 (1) - remove newcombo
01:20:030 (3) - add newcombo


[Chocolate]
00:36:340 (3,4) - stack them
00:42:748 (1,4) - ^

good luck ><
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
为防了止蛋疼B扣A我T的裤兜s 几句乱扯先假我mod了装很多

General

offest: +4, make it 811

Chocolate

00:13:622 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里的节奏其实不太对 应该从6开始做slider 而从7开始不仅扰乱了节奏和note/slider感觉 也让你的10的结尾压在了下一小节的开端(长白线) 也就扰乱了NC和初始感觉 所以从6开始做4个slider
Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77

LKs wrote:

为防了止蛋疼B扣A我T的裤兜s 几句乱扯先假我mod了装很多

General

offest: +4, make it 811

Chocolate

00:13:622 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这里的节奏其实不太对 应该从6开始做slider 而从7开始不仅扰乱了节奏和note/slider感觉 也让你的10的结尾压在了下一小节的开端(长白线) 也就扰乱了NC和初始感觉 所以从6开始做4个slider
恩，fixed 3q
Mura_77
108 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Mura_77

Melophobia wrote:

Hi~

[General]

Tag in Cream diff is different from others
normal-hitclap is too loud to me ><

[Candy]

00:15:952 (2) - no need to add 2 repeats for this slider imo
00:50:175 (6) - i think its too hard to read for beginner, since this note is on blue tick
00:54:836 (5,6) - ^
00:56:729 (1) - too early after spinner >_>


[Cheese]
spacing is inconstant, is it on purpose ?
00:22:942 (2,3,1) - spacing
00:45:078 (1) - whistle to the beginning

[Cream]
00:47:408 (1,2,3) - like this?
http://puu.sh/iQ97

01:17:700 (5) - newcombo
01:18:865 (1) - remove newcombo
01:20:030 (3) - add newcombo


[Chocolate]
00:36:340 (3,4) - stack them
00:42:748 (1,4) - ^

good luck ><
All fixed， thank u
Barney Stinson
298 posts
Joined June 2010
Barney Stinson
Hey there!
From my queue

Chocolate:
00:01:822 - Add clap
00:04:152 (3) - ^
00:06:482 (5) - ^
00:08:812 (3) - ^
00:10:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Maybe try to do them like http://puu.sh/j1FG

Nothing more

Cream
00:01:822 (3) - Add clap and at the other 3 like that.
Nothing more.
Nothing in other diffs. Don't give me kudosu if I was not helpful.
Such a cutie map! Hope to see this ranked as soon as possible
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