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Faylan - Dead END (TV Size)

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Andrea
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Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 26 febbraio 2012 at 21:09:00

Artist: Faylan
Title: Dead END (TV Size)
Source: Mirai Nikki
Tags: xxheroxx spboxer3 future diary gasai yuno opening
BPM: 183
Filesize: 9006kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,51 stars, 98 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 263 notes)
  3. Sp3's Taiko Oni (4,94 stars, 564 notes)
  4. xxheroxx's Normal (4,21 stars, 140 notes)
Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size)
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My 146th Beatmap.

The 2nd Opening from the anime Mirai Nikki <3

Special thanks to lolcubes for the video and the mp3!

I hope you will like it >w<

Mapset:

Sp3's Taiko - Done.
Hard - Done.
xxheroxx's Normal - Done.
Easy - Done.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 17 times in total.
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
>< Dead END

Fight Andrea ~ ★
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
nice map :D
like this song
Yuno~ my love>3< :)
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
I really want make a easy lol
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Sorry but I don't take any extra guest difficulty ><
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
yo

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (osuplayer111) [xxheroxx].osu

Non farti nessun problema a modificare ciò che ritieni necessario. Divertiti con gli hitsounds~
(Ho modificato le Tags e le sezioni Kiai, poi dimmi che ne pensi.)
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
yeah~Taiko diff and BG \:D/
Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (osuplayer111) [Sp3's Taiko].osu
Taiko BG

Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Moved to Pending, please mod :3
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
[General]
mp3 is 320 kbps , this is unrankble , make it 128~192 plz
video size should below 800x600 , now it is 848x480 , it's better to fix the size

[Easy]
01:16:694 - add finish? hitsound here is too quiet imo
01:19:153 - 01:20:464 - use normal hitsound here? maybe volume down a bit , sound better imo
01:21:284 - add finish?
pattern is really good , I just think somewhere need a bit more hitsounds o.o

[xxheroxx]
00:20:464 (3,5) - I strongly suggest not to do this , it is really hard to read..
00:24:399 - add clap here? or something else

[Sp3's Taiko]
should to center the setting , you always told me to do this lol

[Hard]
00:04:399 (6,7) - stack better?
00:07:841 - add whistle? sound better
00:31:284 - volume down this finish a bit? here sound kinda odd imo
00:58:005 (1,2,3) - here should add more whistle imo , rhyme is fast here , and comes kiai time after it
01:25:874 (4,5) - ctrl+h , flow much better
01:28:497 (1) - this spinner is really too short imo , too suddenly when first play..
Last edited by wcx19911123 , edited 1 time in total.
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
General:
MP3 is 320kbps...so

any chance to add some tags?

Easy:
Issues
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 in the osu file, maybe try to make it 1.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:45:710 (1) - this slider doesn't feel quite good imo... especially for the finish on the slider tail.
00:58:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think these didn't feel very comfortable when playing.... didn't follow the vocal and the drum quite nicely? maybe consider change to another pattern? just I personally don't think the slider starts at the perfect place. if it was me I may delete the repeat of the slider 1, then start a slider at 00:58:989 cuz the vocal just give me a feeling to do that...orz


Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:28:497 (2) - new combo for slider speed change maybe?


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:21:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't this these are following the music very well... and didn't give the feeling of hitting.
01:28:497 (1) - wow very short spinner..

Hitsound
01:24:891 (2) - clap sounds a little weird in this slider for me.
Last edited by Nymph , edited 1 time in total.
Melophobia
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Joined September 2011
Melophobia
hi~

Easy
00:08:989 (3,4) - spacing is kinda close
00:17:514 (5) - 1gird right looks better
00:24:071 (3) - clap
00:28:005 (3,1) - spasing is kinda close
00:37:186 (4) - remove clap from the beginning because of SB hitsound
00:41:120 (3) - same reason as above. remove clap from the end
00:49:317 (2) - ^ from the tick
00:56:202 (2,3) - spacing is kinda close
01:16:038 (3) - finish to the end
01:18:661 (3) - finish to the beginning
01:24:727 (3) - remove clap from the end

Normal
00:29:973 (1,2) - Spacing

Hard
00:04:399 (6,7) - not stacked
00:13:251 - spinner here? sounds weird
00:30:792 (4) - finish
00:37:186 - i dont know why but this SB hitsound is too loud...
00:38:169 (1) - finish to the beginning?
01:12:923 (4) - ^
01:18:661 (9) - finish
01:28:497 (1) - this spinner is not suitable here imo. i think it would be better to change a circle with a finish
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
ok here's my mod4mod~

Easy~

00:05:382 (4) - move it one grip left~
00:08:989 (3) - grip up~
00:09:645 (4) - remove the clap o.o seems better~
00:12:923 (4) - up one grip~ o.o
00:16:858 (3) - NC~
00:23:579 (2) - make it lined with the (1)
00:24:071 (3) - NC~
00:31:284 (3) - if you add finish, it would be nice if you add new combo too~ o.o
00:53:251 (3) - 1 grip down~
01:00:464 (3) - 1 grip right~


hard~

00:04:399 (6) - NC?
00:07:022 (5) - ^


Nice as always =w=

Edit: =w= have two stars ~
Last edited by Suimya , edited 1 time in total.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there~

General
* Your mp3 bitrate is over 320kbps. Please decrease it into 192kbps or 128kbps (not sure if this right)


Easy
* AR +1?

01:04:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 7 combos are too long for easy diff
01:16:038 (3) - Add finish?


xxheroxx's Normal
00:27:186 (1) - Clap here?
01:28:497 (2) - New combo for slowdown slider?


Hard
00:25:219 (4) - New combo here?
01:28:497 (1) - I know this spinner is too short, but I suggest you to replace it into a slowdown slider. It's a bad gameplay if you using a short spinner


Ganbatte kudasai!
Twice_old
Twice_old
[Hard]

I think you can add a note at 01:01:776 lol ,it will sounds more rhythmist

o.o just a suggestion...!
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Sp3's Taiko]
should to center the setting , you always told me to do this lol
This is not necessary ,this is base on the taiko mapper.Just sayin'
itankn
123 posts
Joined August 2009
itankn
I think it's good enough XD

some suggestions


Normal
00:07:989 Maybe no finish
00:19:481 just like note 3 ..Don't turn back (I dont know the word= =)
00:50:300 the end of slider can move to 00:50:956


Hard

00:13:087 How about adding a spinner?
00:24:645 a new combo
01:22:373 add a clap note
Last edited by itankn , edited 1 time in total.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Fixed some stuff, thanks everyone!
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
[General]

Looks good.

[Easy]

00:34:071 - Finish

[xxheroxx's Normal]

1:25:382 - The slider here touches the health bar just a bit.

[Hard]

00:28:005 - This slider touches the health bar.

No kudosu.
giO-
giO-
General

Alzerei un pò il volume nelle parti con 5%

Easy

00:18:497 - aggiungi una nota?
00:21:776 - ^
01:02:104 (5) - giralo cosi :v sembra meglio http://puu.sh/hzcc , eccoti i punti x:312 y:160 , x:376 y248 . x:488 y: 248
01:19:481 (4,5) - anzichè usare 2 beat cosi metterei 2 minislider come questi http://puu.sh/hzdI , suonano meglio

xxheroxx's Normal

00:09:973 (5) - muovilo su x:32 y:224
00:10:628 (1) - questo su x:60 y:20
00:43:415 (1) - eliminerei una ripetizione da questo slider e aggiungerei un minislider su 00:45:219 - risultato http://puu.sh/hziB

Hard

Perchè non la chiami Insane?
ci starebbe pure AR9 ma questo devi deciderlo tu

00:37:841 (9) - new combo e rimuovi da 00:38:169 (1) - ?

Non trovo altro

Buona fortuna~ :D
Kawayi Rika
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3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi Andrea ><

My some a little Mod ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'opening' in tags.
  2. Easy diff SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999.(Maybe need change 1?)

[Hard]


  1. 01:14:727 - Add finish will be better with me.
  2. 01:16:038 - ^

[xxheroxx's Normal]


  1. 00:17:186 (2) - New combo maybe to here,00:16:858 (1) - Remove this.
  2. 01:14:891 (2) - ^01:14:563 (1) - Remove this.
  3. 00:19:809 - Add finish.
  4. 00:38:169 - ^

That's all ~ Nice song and good mapset ><

Fight ~
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