Hi everyone! I have been mapping on and off for some time now trying to learn the ropes and I feel like I'm just totally stuck at this point, I'm noticing that mapping is taking me way too long for undesirable results, I'm making this post in hope that someone can help identify what I'm doing wrong and why It's taking me so much time to map a matter of seconds. I've watched all of Pishi's videos and I feel that I have a decent enough understanding of the basics of mapping, but maybe I don't, don't know anymore! 
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1542619 - This is the latest map that I've been working on and It's taken me about 8 hours to map 42 seconds, and I am not at all happy with the outcome of it, I feel like I'm getting better with flow and angles but I don't know, It just doesn't look or feel right to me and this happens with everything that I try mapping. Hopefully someone can help identify what I'm doing wrong, It would be highly appreciated as I love Osu! and mapping is what's going to keep my interest in the game at this point. Thanks for taking the time to read! <3
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1542619 - This is the latest map that I've been working on and It's taken me about 8 hours to map 42 seconds, and I am not at all happy with the outcome of it, I feel like I'm getting better with flow and angles but I don't know, It just doesn't look or feel right to me and this happens with everything that I try mapping. Hopefully someone can help identify what I'm doing wrong, It would be highly appreciated as I love Osu! and mapping is what's going to keep my interest in the game at this point. Thanks for taking the time to read! <3