from in-game pm
[General]
fine
[sb]
sb\yaibaha.png , this is unused image file. I'm not sure it is necessary or not , if not , remove this file and full submit
[0108 style]
00:29:609 (3) - try ctrl+r here? flow better imo
00:30:265 (3,4,5) - move 3 up a bit and 4,5 down a bit to make them on a same level? looks better
00:49:484 (3,4) - here play wired.. cuz slider start not at a heavy beat.. I suggest move 4 to 00:49:484 - , and move 3 to 00:49:765 - stack on the starting of 00:49:859 (5) -
01:09:265 (7) - unsnapped slider end
01:12:546 (8,1,2) - this pattern is kinda confusing.. someone may read 1,2 as one slider..
01:23:234 (1,2,3,4) - here is same as 00:49:484 (3,4) - , I suggest move 2,3,4 to 01:23:234 - and move 1 to 01:23:796 - stack on 5
01:50:234 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is not same here , looks bad imo
01:51:171 (7) - this slider's rhyme is off , cuz vocal is start at 01:51:265 - , I suggset start this slider at 01:51:265 - then add a note at 01:51:171 -
01:54:640 - add a note ? sound better
02:00:359 (1,2,3) - this pattern is kinda confusing.. same as 01:12:546 (8,1,2) - , it make people feel 2,3 is one slider.. cuz the approach circle of 3 is hard to see when playing..
02:05:890 (1) - I think circle at 02:05:890 - then this repeat sldier start at 02:05:984 - is better , sound follow the vocal better to me
02:06:734 (2) - newcombo here , the suddenly anti-jump is kinda confusing
02:13:859 (4,5) - here is kinda odd , I suggest remove 4 and move 5 to 02:13:765 - with repeat
02:17:702 - add note here can follow vocal better , but maybe too hard to play..
02:31:859 (5,6) - slider first then circle later is better imo , slider start at heavy beat plays better
02:54:827 (4,5) - I think here should ctrl+j , need more jump here imo , cuz vocal here is loud
03:06:640 (2) - here is kinda off , if you listen he song carefully , in fact here is 1/3 beats not 1/2. but if follow the song here maybe confusing , cuz there is no 1/3 beats before this.. and I suggest repeat this slider , and spinner start at 03:07:155 -
[My Art]
this is cool :3
lol -3.34 stars
that's all
crazy and awesome map like always :3