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KOTOKO - Yumemiboshi * boom!boom! (Short Ver.)

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R a i n
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R a i n
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年4月19日 at 18:02:54

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: Yumemiboshi * boom!boom! (Short Ver.)
Source: Twinkle Crusaders
Tags: lillian darknessangel gamu milu
BPM: 165
Filesize: 19832kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. D.N.Angel (5 stars, 321 notes)
  2. Easy (2.29 stars, 102 notes)
  3. Gamu (4.82 stars, 235 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 305 notes)
  5. MiLu (3.22 stars, 119 notes)
Download: KOTOKO - Yumemiboshi * boom!boom! (Short Ver.)
Download: KOTOKO - Yumemiboshi * boom!boom! (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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僕等は翔けるユメミボシ
2nd
Easy by me 100%
Normal by MiLu 100%
Hard by -Gamu- 100%
Insane by me 100%
D.N.Angel=Insane by DarknessAngel 100%

Skin by M i a
Last edited by R a i n , edited 73 times in total.
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
MiLu
こんばんわ :) :) :)

適当modな上に音付け見てないしkdsはけっこうです
Normal作っておきますxD

[General]
  1. 全体的に音量もうちょっと下げてもいいかもしれません
  2. コンボカラーを変えたほうがいいかも？
[Easy]
  1. スペーシングは一つに統一したほうがいい（らしい）です
    　00:25:756 (1) - 細かいところだけどこことか
  2. 00:23:938 (5) - NC?
  3. 00:34:847 (5) - スペーシング広いです
  4. 00:35:574 (1) - スピンの終わりと次のnoteの間隔が短すぎて初心者には叩けないと思う
    スタートを00:35:210 (1) - にするとか
  5. 00:58:483 (1) - ここも
  6. 01:21:756 (1) - ここも
  7. 00:41:756 (1) - RNC?
  8. 01:02:120 (x) - add note
  9. 01:05:029 (x) - ^
  10. 01:07:938 (x) - ^
[Insane]
  1. HP-1
  2. OD-1?
  3. 01:37:756 (1) - 気合いタイムはここまででもいいかも？かも、です
  1. 00:23:938 (1) - ここのnew comboに合わせるなら
    00:27:210 (2) - と 00:30:120 (2) - と 00:33:029 (2) - にnew combo
    もしくは00:23:938 (1) - をRemove
    一番最後のところに揃えるならRemoveですね
  2. 00:52:301 (3) - 1と完全に被ってるからたしかダメです　形変えるなりちょっとズラすなりしてください
  3. 00:57:029 (11) - NC
  4. 00:59:938 (1) - このnoteを消してここまでスピンでもいいかも？
  5. 01:10:120 (8) - NC?
  6. 01:11:574 (1,2) - 形をそろえたほうが綺麗に見えます
  7. 01:13:574 (8) - NC?
序盤が後半よりnew combo少なくて若干違和感が
00:38:301 (1) - とか 00:41:756 (7) - とか 00:47:574 (5) - とかにNC入れてもいいかも、と思いました
Last edited by MiLu , edited 1 time in total.
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu

MiLu wrote:

こんばんわ :) :) :)

[General]
  1. 全体的に音量もうちょっと下げてもいいかもしれません

    [Insane]
    1. 01:37:756 (1) - 気合いタイムはここまででもいいかも？かも、です
音量の件なんですが　私は６０％でやりますねｗ

あと、　気合いタイムなんですが　MiLuさんが言ってるので私もいいと思います
R a i n
191 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
R a i n

MiLu wrote:

こんばんわ :) :) :)

適当modな上に音付け見てないしkdsはけっこうです
Normal作っておきますxD

[General]
  1. 全体的に音量もうちょっと下げてもいいかもしれません
  2. コンボカラーを変えたほうがいいかも？
[Easy]
  1. スペーシングは一つに統一したほうがいい（らしい）です
    　00:25:756 (1) - 細かいところだけどこことか
  2. 00:23:938 (5) - NC?
  3. 00:34:847 (5) - スペーシング広いです
  4. 00:35:574 (1) - スピンの終わりと次のnoteの間隔が短すぎて初心者には叩けないと思う
    スタートを00:35:210 (1) - にするとか
  5. 00:58:483 (1) - ここも
  6. 01:21:756 (1) - ここも
  7. 00:41:756 (1) - RNC?
  8. 01:02:120 (x) - add note
  9. 01:05:029 (x) - ^
  10. 01:07:938 (x) - ^
[Insane]
  1. HP-1
  2. OD-1?
  3. 01:37:756 (1) - 気合いタイムはここまででもいいかも？かも、です
  1. 00:23:938 (1) - ここのnew comboに合わせるなら
    00:27:210 (2) - と 00:30:120 (2) - と 00:33:029 (2) - にnew combo
    もしくは00:23:938 (1) - をRemove
    一番最後のところに揃えるならRemoveですね
  2. 00:52:301 (3) - 1と完全に被ってるからたしかダメです　形変えるなりちょっとズラすなりしてください
  3. 00:57:029 (11) - NC
  4. 00:59:938 (1) - このnoteを消してここまでスピンでもいいかも？
  5. 01:10:120 (8) - NC?
  6. 01:11:574 (1,2) - 形をそろえたほうが綺麗に見えます
  7. 01:13:574 (8) - NC?
序盤が後半よりnew combo少なくて若干違和感が
00:38:301 (1) - とか 00:41:756 (7) - とか 00:47:574 (5) - とかにNC入れてもいいかも、と思いました
大体修正しました、ありがとー！
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
Hi~ I'm this song's lover~
Maybe you can write "D.N.Angel=Insane by DarknessAngel" to your massage :D
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
Done~
Please add these hitsound and full submission

Download: KOTOKO - Yumemiboshi boom!boom! (Short Ver.) (R a i n) [D.N.Angel].osu

Download: hitsound.rar
Starry_old
Starry_old
Request from mod queue.

[Easy]

01:38:120 (1,2,3,4) - orz you repeat this pattern too much, Put some variation!
01:17:392 (4) - New combo here?
01:21:756 (1) - This spinner is too fast for an easy
01:36:665 (1) - ^

[MiLu]

01:31:938 (1) - No need for new combo
00:51:210 (6) - New combo here

[Gamu]

00:34:483 (6) - I think there should be only 2 repeats for this.
01:22:847 (6) - New combo here?
01:25:210 (2) - ^

This diff is nice, Couldn't find anything wrong :o

[Insane]

00:22:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Must you split these into three combo. If you don't put all in 1 combo its alright, But I like it all in 1 combo
00:23:938 (1) - No need for new combo
00:26:847 (1) - ^
00:29:756 (1) - ^
00:32:665 (1) - ^
01:46:847 (1) - ^
00:50:847 (8,9,10,11) - I think 11 should stack too.

[D.N Angel]

00:51:029 (5) - I don't think this note should be here because Its kinda blocked
00:26:120 (2) - Spacing problem? Big Jump 0.0

Done!
Hope I helped!
Good Luck~
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
手抜きModです

General
EasyとD.N.AngelだけTagsが違います～

Easy
00:41:756 (4,1) - spacing
00:55:574 (2) - 1/2短くしてRepeat追加
01:05:756 (1) - 1grid上
01:10:120 (3) - 1/2短くしてRepeat
01:11:574 (1,2,3) - ここはStackさせない方がベター
01:21:756 (1) - Easyにしては短すぎる
01:25:392 (4) - 1/2短くしてRepeat追加～
01:36:665 (1) - これも相当短い


MiLu
このDiffだけCombocolorが違う
00:39:938 - こういう部分にNoteが無い所為で
音が寂しくて欲求不満になっちゃう
Ratingも余裕あるしNote入れてみるとイイと思います

あとは特になし(手抜き)

Gamu
00:26:120 (6) - 終点にfinish
00:46:483 - add note
00:51:210 (7) - finish
00:51:574 (1) - 始点にclap
00:53:574 (7) - 終点finish
00:54:847 (2) - (1)に形揃えましょう～
00:57:938 (4) - 終点finish
01:05:392 (3) - 1grid 左～
01:34:483 (7) - remove whistle


Insane
00:26:483 - add note
00:29:392 - ^
00:32:120 - 00:32:301 - 音欲しいです～
00:30:120 (1) - remove clap
00:30:483 (3) - add clap
00:32:301 - ここ音欲しいです
00:34:301 (6) - newcombo
00:37:756 (6) - newcombo
01:09:756 (6) - stack~
01:17:756 (4) - ^
01:19:210 (3) - ここだけspacing狭くて美しくないです
01:22:301 (5) - newcombo
01:27:938 (5) - ^
01:29:029 (1) - remove newcombo
01:29:392 (2) - newcombo
01:30:301 (1) - remove newcombo
01:36:847 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing狭すぎて叩きにくかったんで広くしてみるのはどうでしょ
01:38:301 (2) - 1.3xで置いちゃいましょう～
01:40:665 - add note
01:41:029 (1) - 次のNoteに近すぎる気もする
01:41:937 (2,3) - spacing~
01:50:847 (7) - finish


D.N.Angel
00:31:392 (3) - remove newcombo
00:31:574 (1) - add newcombo
01:49:136 - unsnapped timing point~

頑張って！
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu

Starry wrote:

Request from mod queue.

[Gamu]

00:34:483 (6) - I think there should be only 2 repeats for this. no
01:22:847 (6) - New combo here? no
01:25:210 (2) - ^ ok

This diff is nice, Couldn't find anything wrong :o thanks :3

Done!
Hope I helped!
Good Luck~

Melophobia wrote:

手抜きModです


[b]Gamu
00:26:120 (6) - 終点にfinish
00:46:483 - add note
00:51:210 (7) - finish
00:51:574 (1) - 始点にclap
00:53:574 (7) - 終点finish
00:54:847 (2) - (1)に形揃えましょう～ (2)の形に揃えました　
00:57:938 (4) - 終点finish　うーん
01:05:392 (3) - 1grid 左～
01:34:483 (7) - remove whistle

頑張って！
ほかは修正しますた

thanks :3

Download: KOTOKO - Yumemiboshi boom!boom! (Short Ver.) (R a i n) [Gamu].osu
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Starry wrote:

[D.N Angel]

00:51:029 (5) - I don't think this note should be here because Its kinda blocked
00:26:120 (2) - Spacing problem? Big Jump 0.0

Sorry,no fixed

Edit:

Melophobia wrote:

D.N.Angel
00:31:392 (3) - remove newcombo ?
00:31:574 (1) - add newcombo ?
01:49:136 - unsnapped timing point~ fixed
thank you :)

D.N.Angel
...lol

Download: KOTOKO - Yumemiboshi boom!boom! (Short Ver.) (R a i n) [D.N.Angel].osu
Last edited by DarknessAngel , edited 2 times in total.
R a i n
191 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
R a i n

Starry wrote:

[Easy]

01:38:120 (1,2,3,4) - orz you repeat this pattern too much, Put some variation!　No chenged
01:17:392 (4) - New combo here? fixed
01:21:756 (1) - This spinner is too fast for an easy fixed?
01:36:665 (1) - ^ fixed?

[Insane]

00:22:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Must you split these into three combo. If you don't put all in 1 combo its alright, But I like it all in 1 combo fixed
00:23:938 (1) - No need for new combo fixed
00:26:847 (1) - ^ fixed
00:29:756 (1) - ^ fixed
00:32:665 (1) - ^ fixed
01:46:847 (1) - ^ fixed
00:50:847 (8,9,10,11) - I think 11 should stack too. No chenged

Melophobia wrote:

手抜きModです

General
EasyとD.N.AngelだけTagsが違います～

Easy
00:41:756 (4,1) - spacing
00:55:574 (2) - 1/2短くしてRepeat追加
01:05:756 (1) - 1grid上
01:10:120 (3) - 1/2短くしてRepeat
01:11:574 (1,2,3) - ここはStackさせない方がベター
01:21:756 (1) - Easyにしては短すぎる
01:25:392 (4) - 1/2短くしてRepeat追加～
01:36:665 (1) - これも相当短い
All fixed
Insane
00:26:483 - add note
00:29:392 - ^
00:32:120 - 00:32:301 - 音欲しいです～
00:30:120 (1) - remove clap
00:30:483 (3) - add clap
00:32:301 - ここ音欲しいです
00:34:301 (6) - newcombo
00:37:756 (6) - newcombo
01:09:756 (6) - stack~
01:17:756 (4) - ^
01:19:210 (3) - ここだけspacing狭くて美しくないです
01:22:301 (5) - newcombo
01:27:938 (5) - ^
01:29:029 (1) - remove newcombo
01:29:392 (2) - newcombo
01:30:301 (1) - remove newcombo
01:36:847 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing狭すぎて叩きにくかったんで広くしてみるのはどうでしょ
01:38:301 (2) - 1.3xで置いちゃいましょう～
01:40:665 - add note
01:41:029 (1) - 次のNoteに近すぎる気もする
01:41:937 (2,3) - spacing~
01:50:847 (7) - finish
All fixed

thanks MOD! :)
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
こんにちは

[general]
  1. Tags:gamu > -Gamu- ? このほうが検索正しいから、まあもし本人の意思なら-Gamu-とgamu一緒に加えてほうがいいだと思っています
  2. use same combo color at DNA's diff?
[D.N.Angel]
00:29:756 (2) - 可以稍微移下面一点 让123的开始的地方看起来是个等边三角形
00:31:938 (3) - 感觉这个位置有点不太好读...
01:25:756 (1) - 其实没有NC的必要
01:35:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 216这边明显不对劲...
01:50:301 (3,4) - 3和4尾部朝外这和前面配合起来不是很好看...把尾部朝中间放怎么样

[Insane]
01:38:301 (2) - Spacing
00:52:301 (3) - stack it under 11
01:41:029 (1) - remove this newcombo
01:44:301 (1) - ^
01:49:029 (8) - spacing

[Gamu]
01:09:938 (1) - I'd like to see you put it anywhere else except stack under 3's end
01:22:665 (6) - add a note here?
01:35:574 (3,5) - add new combo here, It's hard to read
R a i n
191 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
R a i n

goodbye wrote:

[Insane]
01:38:301 (2) - Spacing fixed
00:52:301 (3) - stack it under 11 fixed
01:41:029 (1) - remove this newcombo fixed
01:44:301 (1) - ^ fixed
01:49:029 (8) - spacing fixed
thanks MOD!
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
Hello!

~MiLu~

The hitsounds suppose to be the same as the other diffs...

~Insane~

00:23:938 (13) - Remove new combo and add finish or whitsle?
00:29:756 (11) - Add finish or whitsle?
00:49:210 (3) - Move this a LITTLE bit close to (2).
01:13:938 (2) - Careful with that!!!! You should move this one grid right.
01:20:847 (4) - This gotta be moved to x:356 y:88.
01:45:755 (5) - This gotta be a LITTLE bit close to (4)...

~D.N. Angel~

00:40:665 (3) - New combo?


That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu

goodbye wrote:

こんにちは

[general]
[list][*]Tags:gamu > -Gamu- ? このほうが検索正しいから、まあもし本人の意思なら-Gamu-とgamu一緒に加えてほうがいいだと思っています sorry gomen. Please check the tags ⇒ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35628

[Gamu]
01:09:938 (1) - I'd like to see you put it anywhere else except stack under 3's end
01:22:665 (6) - add a note here?
01:35:574 (3,5) - add new combo here, It's hard to read
All fixed!

Thanks :3

Download: KOTOKO - Yumemiboshi boom!boom! (Short Ver.) (R a i n) [Gamu].osu
R a i n
191 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
R a i n

kokoroanime wrote:

~Insane~

00:23:938 (13) - Remove new combo and add finish or whitsle?　fixed
00:29:756 (11) - Add finish or whitsle? fixed
00:49:210 (3) - Move this a LITTLE bit close to (2). No chenged
01:13:938 (2) - Careful with that!!!! You should move this one grid right.fixed
01:20:847 (4) - This gotta be moved to x:356 y:88. fixed
01:45:755 (5) - This gotta be a LITTLE bit close to (4)... No chenged
thanks MOD!
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

goodbye wrote:

[general]
色彩改好了~


[D.N.Angel]
00:29:756 (2) - 可以稍微移下面一点 让123的开始的地方看起来是个等边三角形 OK
00:31:938 (3) - 感觉这个位置有点不太好读... 還好吧:O
01:25:756 (1) - 其实没有NC的必要 "其實"可以省略- -，改了
01:35:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 216这边明显不对劲... 怎個不對勁？:O
01:50:301 (3,4) - 3和4尾部朝外这和前面配合起来不是很好看...把尾部朝中间放怎么样 不好呢，打起來不順

謝謝MOD啊~ :)

Download: KOTOKO - Yumemiboshi boom!boom! (Short Ver.) (R a i n) [D.N.Angel].osu
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

[easy]
00:54:120 (1) - a little out
00:55:574 (2,3) - ^
the kiai time of this diff is different from other diffs

[normal]
nothing

[hard]
00:34:483 (6) - change a repeat to a circle?

[insane]
00:32:665 (9) - clap
01:25:756 add a circle
01:41:392 (2) - x76 y148
I think you missed many clap hitsounds in this diff..It's intentionally or not?...

[D.N.A]
01:49:938 (2,4) - remove clap
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[hard]
00:34:483 (6) - change a repeat to a circle?
sorry. no fixed.

thanks :3
R a i n
191 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
R a i n

No_Gu wrote:

[easy]
00:54:120 (1) - a little out No
00:55:574 (2,3) - ^ No
the kiai time of this diff is different from other diffs fixed
[insane]
00:32:665 (9) - clapfixed
01:25:756 add a circle No
01:41:392 (2) - x76 y148 fixed
thanks MOD!
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