1. Kappa (4.03 stars, 125 notes)
2. Kubinashi (4.38 stars, 120 notes)
3. Nurarihyon (4.95 stars, 230 notes)
4. Zen (1.84 stars, 86 notes)

Kei wrote:

Hi! ^u^

[Zen]

Nothing special to say about this difficulty. It's really nice mapped~

[Kappa]

00:14:333 (2,3,4) - This part sounds weird. Maybe u should make shorter those sliders. Something like this: http://puu.sh/a1v4 fixed
00:49:333 (1,2,3) - Again. Try this: http://puu.sh/a1vS fixed
00:54:333 (1,2,3) - And again. Try this: http://puu.sh/a1wL ? I'll keep this

[Nurarihyon]

00:16:064 (4,5,6,7) - Ugly note placement imo. They're overlapped. I think you should try a better spacing. I think it's ok
00:16:832 (x) - Add a note? ^
00:22:025 (6,7) - First., make slider (6) 1 tick larger (End: 00:22:409). After that, move slider (7) to 00:22:602, and then make it end at the white tick (00:22:794) deleting some of his repeats.hmm current seems fit vocal better
00:25:487 (x) - Add a note? ok
00:48:948 (3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/a1CN current is fine
00:54:717 (2,3,4) - Try this: http://puu.sh/a1Dh ^
01:02:025 (x) - Maybe add a note? kk
01:16:256 (1) - Move this slider somewhere.. It's being hidden by the previous notes. nope cuz it fits the song and does not influence while playing

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It's a nice beatmap overall. Keep it up~

L_P wrote:

新手的图真是不错敢问你大号叫啥啊我认不认识你，——都给你建议罢了。

INsane
难度好像偏低了一点啊（难道是为了掩饰什么 本来就只是善良图啦<3
00:12:794 (7) - 跳吧http://puu.sh/a2le 我善良啊~
00:14:333 (2,3,4,5) - 觉得这里也挺适合跳的 不跳了~
00:47:794 (6) - 加一个吧，，没有挺空虚的。。。kk
01:02:217 (6) - 这里中间本来应该是要有一个鼓声的。。。但是用了slider，看看能不能拆掉slider。。等等跟vocal就可以了~clap声音的话也还好啦。
01:09:333 (1) - kiai占了整半个歌曲啊。。。我倒觉得在spinner结束的地方结束就够了之前问过似乎不要紧XD

Hard
00:09:140 (3) - 加note吧

快告诉我。。。。跟我说了再给你star haha 跪了，新人啊

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

Modding from my queue

General
The combo colours are a little different in almost every map, normally they would be the same, but if you like it how it is at the moment thats fine. Pointing it out incase it was a mistake or something fixed

Kappa
00:23:755 (1,2,3) -

I think..

It should be something like this, a slider starting at 0:23:775, passing over where the one (1) was, and ending a half beat before (2) with no changes, then a third note added at 00:25:102 (3).
00:28:564 (1) - Make this a little tider?
[box=Tidy~]

This one is also for kubinashi. Kiiwa pay attention lol

00:45:102 (1) - (During Kiai time) I think the claps here are a little loud. You could have a play with the volume to see if you can make them quieter while still sounding alright for normal notes? -- Maybe 65%? decrease clap sound

Kubinashi
01:21:448 - Add an extra timing point here, and end kiai at this time to be the same as all other difficulties. fixed,others I will leave for Kiiwa to decide
00:25:487 (4) - This is a little hard to see that its a slider, but if you like it you could probably get away with it.
00:44:333 (2) - Remove the combo ^^
01:19:333 (2,3,4) - Remove combos.
The spiny sliders here are very nicely done!

Nurarihyon
Didn't see anything of conflict here either. (Although i'm bad at juding insanes ._. )

Zen
I couldn't find anything here either ._.
This is a very nice easy

Sorry I didnt find much xD

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

kiai好像过长- - 之前问过似乎不影响，不过还是删掉了一点

[zen]
00:27:025 (3) - x64 y92如果改了这个的话修一下后面的间距 没懂..好像差好远
00:30:102 (1) - 中间 本来就像放斜的lol

[kappa]
00:54:333 (1,2,3) - 这附近不下clap? fixed

[kiiwa]
fine

[Nurarihyon]
00:02:794 (5,6,1) - 三个的话还是推荐三角形 和前面的放一起不好看:<
00:31:641 (3) - NC 应该没有必要不过看上去不错~fix
01:20:871 (3) - 上一格.如果改了这个的话后面4也往上一格 不需要嗯~本身2354应该看上去就是个有点翘的曲线~

总感觉这歌用普通S的clap就好了- - fixed

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey sorry about the delay

Zen:
00:03:178(3) - make this curved slider nicer fixed
01:04:525(2) - move this to 01:04:909 add a repeat at 01:05:102 and end it at 01:05:294 nah. current is fine.
01:07:025(2) - Ctrl+R if u follow the suggestion above ^

Kappa:
00:02:409(2,3) - spacing fixed

Nurarihyon:
00:22:409(7) - this slider doesnt follow the lyrical part of the song. so add only 1 repeat at 00:22:602 and end it at 00:22:794 nah I dont want to follow vocal
00:45:871(3) - same as above but add a repeat at 00:46:063 and end it at 00:46:255 ^
00:48:948(3) - end it at 00:49:140 ^

this is the best i can do. Star and GL

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

as requested...

不错的歌~ ^^

[Zen]

fine

[Kappa]

00:17:602 (2) - 前面都是1/1 stack 这里1/2略违和... 跟了下vocal啦，不要紧
00:22:987 (3) - ^ 感觉这个地方还不如全放白线上 ^
01:03:948 (2) - 用(4)那个形状? fixed
01:21:448 (5) - 1/1 stack? move spinner +1/4 tick 大丈夫


[Nurarihyon]

打着打着居然FC了orz 不知道是我水平高了还是图太简单了= =

00:06:833 (1,2) - 跳得好纠结......= = 故意的
01:01:256 (3,4) - this is right? 没问题o.o

star~

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[Zen]
Duplicated timing points: 00:41:640, 01:17:025 fixed

[Kappa]
00:50:678 (3,1) - Too far apart.fixed
00:53:948 (4,1) - ^fixed


[Nurarihyon]
00:03:179 (1,2,3) - These are a bit cramped up compared to the previous combo. Space them out a bit? I think it's fine
00:15:679 (2,4,7) - Maybe stack all these on the same point? nah. I want it this way :>
00:22:025 (6,7) - This is a little confusing that (7) has a different number of repeats to (6). :< It sounds good
00:48:179 (1,2) - Too close together. fixed
00:54:717 (2,3,4) - Again, (4) has a different number of repeats to (2) and (3). It's a bit misleading. It is insane. People should have the ability to distinguish :<
Duplicated timing point: 01:27:794 fixed

Nice, star.

SuperMICrophone wrote:

Queue~

[Zen]

Just as a general note, you may want to consider lowering the slider tick rate as it causes some graphic bugs on the sliders - at least for me. nah cuz I need more score :<

[0:23:948] (2) I know that this part is correct in the context of note placement, but distance spacing-wise it should befurther apart from the other two sliders. doesn't matter > <
[0:29:332] (5) I think there should be either a whistle or finish hitsound here, but it would really only sound right if you made the timing point that changes the audio set move to the other notes so we can have a cymbal here. add whistle

[Kappa]

Another general note, you should be careful about those stacked notes. Sometimes I'm not sure whether they're full beats or eighth notes.

[0:29:332] (5) Same thing with the Easy diff, lol. fixed



[Nurarihyon]

[0:06:832] (1,2) Now that's a bit unfair and messes up distance spacing, doesn't it? :3 doesn't matter :> I see lots people tried and they feel ok.
[0:17:025] (1) The ending of the slider agrees technically but musically it's a bit too long. hmmm sounds good for me
[0:25:486] (2) ^ ^
[0:27:313] (1) ^ ^
[0:34:140] (4-7) It looks fine but technically they should be closer together. How far is up to you. It's insane so it's fine :>

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Anyway, the beatmap is timed very well and the sliders were great as well.

Keep it up!

-SMIC