I LOVE this song, so I'm going to try my best to make its beatmap as pretty as possible.
Beginner
00:08:785 Spinner is too short for the difficulty. Consider putting in a slider, a circle, or removing the spinner entirely.
00:15:832 ^
00:24:087 (6) Remove this circle.
00:30:530 (6) ^
00:39:792 (6) Make this a circle instead of a slider.
01:26:906 (6) Remove this circle.
Hyper
00:05:966 (4) The rhythm of the beats don't match the song's. Try putting in four 16th-note beats from 00:05:966 to 00:06:268, then two 16th-note beats from 00:06:470 to 00:06:570.
00:08:382 (1) Make this a slider instead of a circle.
00:15:631 (9) Extend the repetition until 00:16:436.
00:56:705 Insert a spinner here until 00:57:510
01:03:953 (9) Keep the beats until 01:04:758 in one slider.
01:13:215 (8) Remove the slider from the stack. Place it elsewhere.
Another
00:02:946 (5) Remove the circle and subsequent slider from the stack. Place it elsewhere.
00:05:966 (4) The rhythm of the beats don't match the song's. Try putting in four 16th-note beats from 00:05:966 to 00:06:268, then two 16th-note beats from 00:06:470 to 00:06:570.
00:06:772 Adjust the beat snap divisor to 1/3. Put beats in every division until 00:07:174.
00:07:376 Remove this circle
00:07:577 Adjust the beat snap divisor to 1/3. Put beats in every division until 00:08:382.
00:16:436 Add another object here, either a circle or make the slider return.
00:23:886 (9) Remove this circle from the stack. Place it elsewhere.
01:01:134 Add another object here and to its subsequent quarter beat, either a circle or a slider.