1. Easy - 4Key (1.43 stars, 166 notes)
2. Normal - 4Key (2.09 stars, 283 notes)
3. White - 4Key (2.91 stars, 431 notes)

ExNeko wrote:

M4M
来了

Easy

00:23:793 (23793|0) - 不用面吧，这里星数需要压到e标/好的
00:34:459 (34459|0) - ^

Normal

00:05:126 (5126|2) - 改一下位置，这里00:04:459 (4459|2,4793|2,5126|2,5459|2) - 梗了/改了
00:13:126 (13126|3) - 这个移到col1吧，单左拍简单点也好看点/改了

Life

00:32:959 (32959|1) - 移到col4/行
00:33:293 (33293|2,33293|0) - 改成左右拍吧

是不是很水摸

ExInyf wrote:

那我也来水个摸

Life

00:07:793 (7793|3,7959|3) - 在col4不太好看（？？？/re了一下
00:09:793 (9793|1,11126|2) - 这两节col4都有点空/我觉得还行啊？
00:15:459 (15459|2,15626|3,15793|2) - 放中间吧/好
00:19:959 (19959|3,20126|2,20293|3) - 同上
00:36:459 (36459|2,36626|3,36793|2,37126|2) - 不太美观/emmm
00:43:626 (43626|1,43709|2) - miss/好的

Normal

00:43:626 (43626|1,43709|2) - miss

Easy

00:06:459 (6459|3,6793|0) - 移到col3和2/行
00:16:126 (16126|0,16626|2) - ^
00:21:959 (21959|2,22126|1) - ctrl+h
00:43:626 (43626|1,43709|2) - miss，不过这个难度是加sample音效/确实，这个我都没注意到

还行，加油！

Umo- wrote:

hi
1234

[Easy]

00:33:793 (33793|2) - move to 00:33:626 - so that it continues following snare sound like at 00:33:126 (33126|1) -
00:34:126 - add a note on 2

[Normal]

00:11:793 (11793|1) - what does this LN follow? I dont hear any perticular sound that it should follow. I'd suggest that you change it to double note/Follow the piano hitsound
00:22:459 (22459|1) - ^
00:25:959 (25959|2,26126|3) - ctrl+j, feels better while playing/No
00:33:793 (33793|1) - shorten it to 00:34:126 - and add a LN at 00:34:126 - for that "tinggg" sound/No, I think it's too light here, dont need noted

[Life]

00:02:459 (2459|1,2459|3,2459|0,2626|1) - 00:05:126 (5126|1,5126|3,5126|0,5293|1) - 00:07:793 (7793|3,7793|1,7793|0,7959|1) - 00:10:459 (10459|3,10459|0,10459|1,10626|1) - this feels really repetitive, why dont you rearange some notes/ok
00:33:293 (33293|0,33293|1,33459|1,33459|0,33793|1,33793|0,33959|1,33959|0,34293|1,34293|0) - these feel really weird while playing since their sound is really dence and doubles dont really support that sound really well/..

soz for short mod, map is alredy good imo and I'm really tierd while modding it lol

good luck

Airon 9th wrote:

围观水摸现场

Life

00:09:959 (9959|3,10126|3,10459|2,10626|2) - 两个纵都在一只手上不好吧
00:15:293 (15293|0,15459|0,15793|1,15959|1) - 同上/这里不
00:24:459 (24459|2) - 这里加个note
00:25:793 (25793|2) - 00:27:126 (27126|1,28459|0) - ^感觉很好

Normal

00:11:793 (11793|1,12126|3,12459|0,12793|2) - 不如就只用note吧，或者再移几个sample音效过来，这里感觉很空/就note吧
00:13:293 (13293|3,13459|2,13793|2) - 不太好看
00:22:459 (22459|1,22793|2,23126|0,23459|3) - ^^/^
00:33:126 (33126|3,33793|1) - ^
00:43:793 (43793|0,44459|3) - ^

Easy

00:09:459 (9459|0,9793|1,10126|0,10459|1) - 再拆一下吧
00:18:459 (18459|3,18793|2) - 换一下位置
00:20:126 (20126|0,20459|1,20793|0,21126|1) - ^^
00:43:793 (43793|2,44126|3,44793|1) - 移sample音效来/好

好的

Murasame wrote:

水摸
|1|2|3|4|

Normal

00:11:793 - 到 00:13:126 - 我觉得把鼓点抓上会好点/变通了一下

Life

00:10:626 (10626|0,10793|1) - 我觉得ctrl+G一下打起来更舒服/好

就这些

Ayachi- wrote:

life
00:34:459 (34459|1) - separate into 3 LN at 00:35:793 - and 00:36:459 -
00:39:793 (39793|0) - same 00:40:793 - 00:41:793 -

1. OD和HP可以上调一点，mania的EZ一般都有6.5了
2. 这个cymbal的keysound感觉跟音乐不太合得上，建议换一个

• 
  没啥问题，有个建议

1. 00:22:459 - 到00:23:793 - ，以及00:43:793 - 到00:44:459 - 因为有连续1/2的snare，可以把单键换成LN

1. 00:11:793 - 00:12:293 - 00:12:793 - 为什么不用double呢，是为了保持这个楼梯的形状吗，其实我觉得像这样 https://puu.sh/ypeh6/47ccedba47.png 也可以，注意几个double的位置最好不一样，感觉好一点
2. 00:22:459 - 从这里后面这一块可以放4个double，你可以理解为另一个note抓的钢琴
3. 00:26:793 (26793|0,26793|3,28126|3,28126|0,28793|0,28793|3) - 其实我觉得这些double位置可以多变一变更diverse，后面也是
4. 00:33:126 - 后面也是可以用用double，建议抓鼓点，钢琴就算了，没必要连续double，前面连续double一般是因为鼓点
5. 00:43:793 - emmmm这个地方又是连续的1/2，钢琴只有2/1。。。我是想做成1/2对拍来着，难度也不大，没超2.25星。不过BN可能会提难度跨度过大。So it's up to you.注意我前面还提了几条建议，注意风格一致，如果你拒绝的话我估计基本上是全拒了23333

1. 00:03:126 - 00:04:459 - 这些地方我觉得有鼓点，可以用double，后面类似
2. 00:23:793 (23793|0) - 这一段的LN为啥不是跟着钢琴走的，你下一段都是每一个钢琴音就对应一个LN的，可能是因为这里你加的keysound是cymbal，我个人感觉不太合适，这个一般还是在单键note上吧
3. 00:24:459 (24459|2,25793|2) - 这几个note说明你应该知道这个鼓点？如果你确实是抓的鼓点，那前面我说的也有，那里放double。这里的话，有个问题就是你没加drum的keysound

Madoka2574 wrote:

水摸（其实我觉得不水了）

1丨2丨3丨4

General
OD和HP可以上调一点，mania的EZ一般都有6.5了/这个bn没意见的话我也没意见，简单点好
另外这个cymbal的keysound感觉跟音乐不太合得上，建议换一个/行，那我再找找

EZ
没啥问题，有个建议
00:22:459 - 到00:23:793 - ，以及00:43:793 - 到00:44:459 - 因为有连续1/2的snare，可以把单键换成LN/不了，我之前摆过ln觉得不适合

NM
00:11:793 - 00:12:293 - 00:12:793 - 为什么不用double呢，是为了保持这个楼梯的形状吗，其实我觉得像这样 /double可 https://puu.sh/ypeh6/47ccedba47.png 也可以，注意几个double的位置最好不一样，感觉好一点/这就算了，不太好看
00:22:459 - 从这里后面这一块可以放4个double，你可以理解为另一个note抓的钢琴
00:26:793 (26793|0,26793|3,28126|3,28126|0,28793|0,28793|3) - 其实我觉得这些double位置可以多变一变更diverse，后面也是
00:33:126 - 后面也是可以用用double，建议抓鼓点，钢琴就算了，没必要连续double，前面连续double一般是因为鼓点
00:43:793 - emmmm这个地方又是连续的1/2，钢琴只有2/1。。。我是想做成1/2对拍来着，难度也不大，没超2.25星。不过BN可能会提难度跨度过大。So it's up to you.注意我前面还提了几条建议，注意风格一致，如果你拒绝的话我估计基本上是全拒了23333/差不多改了点，但不都是像你说的那样

HD
00:03:126 - 00:04:459 - 这些地方我觉得有鼓点，可以用double，后面类似/没有
00:23:793 (23793|0) - 这一段的LN为啥不是跟着钢琴走的，你下一段都是每一个钢琴音就对应一个LN的，可能是因为这里你加的keysound是cymbal，我个人感觉不太合适，这个一般还是在单键note上吧/？前一段跟长音后一段跟钢琴，这样既简单又抓音，跟我keysound是什么没关系
00:24:459 (24459|2,25793|2) - 这几个note说明你应该知道这个鼓点？如果你确实是抓的鼓点，那前面我说的也有，那里放double。这里的话，有个问题就是你没加drum的keysound/没，这是意识流产物，我不认为那里是drum

error_exe777 wrote:

hello from queue

General

Difficulties: done
Spread: good
Hitsounds: ooo keysounds
Metadata: good
AiMod: nothing
Other: nothing

Life

00:05:459 (5459|1,5626|1) - there shouldnt be a jack here since you only jacked the notes after the cymbal right?/No

00:11:793 (11793|3,11793|0,11959|1,11959|2,12126|1,12126|2,12293|3,12293|0,12459|2,12459|1,12626|2,12626|1,12793|0,12793|3,12959|1,12959|2) - repeating the same pattern is fine i guess but changing the pattern halfway through could make it more interesting

00:33:126 (33126|2,33126|3,33293|0,33293|1,33459|0,33459|1,33626|3,33626|2,33793|1,33793|0,33959|0,33959|1,34126|2,34126|3,34293|0,34293|1,34459|3,34459|2) - same as above/No, I want to make the map look neater

00:35:126 (35126|3,35293|2,35459|3) - this trill is avoidable

Normal

00:12:459 (12459|1,12626|2) - maybe CTRL+H this to represent the drums a bit better/Nice

00:33:793 (33793|1,33959|2) - ^^/No here, because 00:32:459 (32459|2,32793|2,33126|2,33459|2,33793|2) -

00:44:126 - 00:44:793 - add notes here because you did so at 00:22:459 -/ok

Easy

this diff is reALLy empty compared to normal. in terms of difficulty and density the gap is far too wide and you'll need to close it

ontop of that, the map feels lazy and if you remap it to make it more dense these problems will rule themselves out. i wont mod this diff, because you'll need to change alot anyway and it feels useless tbh/I think so too, but I can only do that in order to control the SR in the Easy icon range

other than the concerns i listed in Easy, this map is great. just the spread issues here and there, but are easily fixable.

good luck! o/

[B A D] wrote:

M4M as requested in here
0|1|2|3

EZ

So I see that in 00:03:459 (3459|3,3459|0) , it is a snare than you mapped it as double but snares like 00:04:126 (4126|2,4793|3) are mapped as single notes. They all sound the same so if you decided to map one snare as double, map all snares double (I'd suggest changing all of them to single notes because this is an easy diff). You can't just randomly map snare double like this 00:08:793 (8793|0,8793|3)
00:11:959 - Missing notes
00:12:793 (12793|3,12793|1) - If you decided to change all the unorganized snare that I mentioned before to single, add 2 notes at 00:12:626 and 00:12:959
/I mapped drum and clap as single notes, But pianohitsound needs an extra note

00:11:959 (11959|2,34459|3) - You may want to change this one hitsound. It doesn't sync with the song, the same goes to the other 2 diffs/lol, But idk what it should be, I just added them with the feeling

NM

00:11:626 (11626|2) - I'd suggest changing this to double/no
00:22:293 (22293|2) - ^/^
Owo nice diff

Life

00:26:126 (26126|1,26459|1,26793|1,27126|1,27459|1) - This is avoidable

Hope this help and gl for ranking ^w^)b
Also sorry for short mod, the song itself is short and repetitive and it has been well-modded so...