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Shiirn

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Shiirn 2011-11-08T03:21:49+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 20, 2012 at 9:10:31 AM

Artist: xi
Title: Breakthrough Atmosphere
Tags: Parousia
BPM: 158
Filesize: 5760kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:

Guided Flame (4.95 stars, 777 notes)

Download: xi - Breakthrough Atmosphere
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kill them all
was the order received
so the extermination began -
women, children, men, heroes.
Skies raining the tears of gods on the land
weeping for the lives extinguished.
But their flame went on,
burning all in its path,
to avenge, to fufill the words,
of a whispered voice of fear.

Going for APPROVAL because of the following reasons:
1) Score
2) Awkward measures (1/3 1/6 with 1/2 backbeats)
3) Awkward play (Beginning, end)
4) Way too awesome for the common plebians

Last edited by Shiirn 2012-02-20T17:10:26+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

Zelos

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Zelos 2011-11-08T03:29:47+00:00

I will reach through this computer and hurt you if you dont finish.
Yes I mad.

Nyan

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Nyan 2011-11-18T09:01:35+00:00

may I make taiko diff?

btw, Akasha is also good song of xi

Shiirn

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Shiirn 2011-12-31T23:26:01+00:00

yorick ult time

Sync

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Sync 2011-12-31T23:50:24+00:00

Great map, very few errors (if any)

General
-- Consider adding the album name as a tag (I think it's "Energy -Limitless Space World-", not sure)

Guided Flame
00:50:657 (x) - Unsnapped inherited timing section

no kds

Shiirn

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Shiirn 2012-01-01T00:26:16+00:00

album name is actually Parousia.

Ekaru

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Ekaru 2012-01-02T00:08:08+00:00

General:

I would add "electronic" and whatever its genre is into the tags.

Guided Flame:

02:27:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This is really hard to read. It's all clustered together and it's hard to see that they're all sliders.
02:55:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12, etc.) - Through this and much of the following section, it seems like you could've varied it up a bit more since there are many things you could've mapped to. Still plays good though.

This is a good, relaxing map overall. <3 it. ^_^ There really wasn't much I could find; it's one of the best-made maps I've played in a long time. Have 2 stars!

aston_old

aston_old 2012-01-02T00:48:18+00:00

-00:17:139 (1,2) - make a bigger spread, you used .94x for 00:13:722 (1,2,3), why lower it. while playing, this felt off as the distance was feeling like it was slowly increasing till 00:23:215 (1,2) and that part was the only one that felt off.
-03:19:038 (4) - should be a shorter slider, much closer to 1/6 stream
-03:43:722 (5) - sounds like a note should be here with a finish sound, much like 00:49:038 (1,2,3,4,1), which you made before.

no kds - couldn't find much wrong with it, already starred

Makar

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Makar 2012-01-02T01:00:32+00:00

Awesome song is awesome
Amazing map is amazing

02:27:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - its really really hard to see what this even is, I had no idea they were sliders.
In general I think your streams should be wider but that's all there is to point out for me, this map is really great o.ob

Star~
no kudosu

Zelos

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Zelos 2012-01-02T02:41:26+00:00

Lets do this thang.

Folder:
All clean

General:
Add Trance to tags because that's what this song is.

Guided Flame:
02:27:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - okay honestly this is just too confusing to look at going inwards. it would be easier in my opinion if you had the sliders going outward instead.
03:19:038 (4,1) - it appears you were trying to stack the endings but its just slightly a bit off. so restack them perfectly? in the end it would matter because it doesnt do that downright motion streams have.
03:43:722 (x) - add a note here because that is where is a finish-ish sounding spot in this song. not only that is where the beat ends as well so adding a note would make sense.

Other than that, this map is quite flawless my good sir.

Have some stars for some lovely 1/3rd + i love trance.

Kitsunemimi

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Kitsunemimi 2012-01-02T02:55:32+00:00

I'll see what I can do and try to find as many things that don't fit. That said, most of these suggestions are probably going to end up being very nazi.

[Guided Flame]:
00:30:810 (2,4) - I would really avoid putting notes so far to the side. There's no real harm in doing so, but I think it doesn't look good, and can be awkward for windowed mode/4:3 users and CtB
00:36:886 (4) - Off center.
00:38:025 (6) - ^ (intentional? strange though)
00:39:924 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't start off with such large spacing between the first sliders, and then a really tight stream like this.
01:17:393 (5,2) - The whistles on these notes and the positioning of them on the timeline don't sound off with the main instrument. As you had it in the intro of this map, they belong on the red ticks.
01:20:051 (4,3,4, and so on) - Same as above, except with slider tails.
02:47:772 (2,3,4) - I think this might work better as a slider.

And that's it. Really nice map, I like the jumps a lot; they go really well in combination with the streams. I can almost-FC this map with like 75% accuracy xD

Nakagawa-Kanon

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2012-01-02T03:31:11+00:00

02:27:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - omgomgomg

00:58:152 (1) - add finish sound at start and remove clap and add clap at finish.
02:27:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add whistle?
02:33:468 (5) - add whistle?
02:34:987 (4) - add whistle?
add whistle same rythem

I recommend use coustom hit sound for kick sound.

sorry for noob mod.

Weez

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Weez 2012-01-02T16:38:56+00:00

Me hate modding maps for app >.<

00:50:652 Snap this timing section
that is all.

Shiirn

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Shiirn 2012-01-02T17:30:47+00:00

since it's just a kiai fountain ending i see no point in snapping it to anything /lazy

Mirage

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Mirage 2012-01-02T17:51:41+00:00

Uhm ok, its me.
I pratically found nothing.
the only thing I stated in IRC was the missing beat at the end~
So I'll go with some suggestions:

General
OD -1? Hard rhytm to follow, and VERY slow
Jumps?
02:03:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I think what you did at 01:51:317 (1) can fit more here. it's more intense than the piano

Graphics
01:19:987 (4) - Curve it a bit? ( http://puu.sh/cdoA )
01:34:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remake this stream for a better look
02:15:747 (2) - Curve this note ( http://puu.sh/cdqb )
02:22:709 (2,3,4) - Just stack it on top of the slider, will look better imo
02:25:747 (6,7,8) - ^
02:33:468 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Uhm same as previous ones, but this is ok i think, you decide

<3
02:27:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Love this XD

This song is f*cking epic, keep the good work

DaxMasterix

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DaxMasterix 2012-01-03T16:53:34+00:00

Information: P1 = Point 1 | P2 = Point 2 | P3 = Point 3 - ''Slider Points''.

Suggestions

AR +1
The people Need a Taiko Diff.

Guided Flame

00:17:139 (1,2) - So.. ''Out of place'' Because the part of 00:01:950 to 00:23:595 Is a pattern ''Symmetrical''.. You can change that to This or something like that [00:17:139 (x:196|y:248) - 00:17:519 (x:316|y:248)] Or move in the same place of the note in 00:20:177 and the another put with a Ctrl+h. [Grid level: 4]
00:25:874 (1,2) - The same. Try This. [00:25:874 (x:256|y:80) - 00:26:253 (1P=x:192|y:188 / 2P=x:256|y:224 / 3P=x:316|y:188)] [Grid level: 4]
00:42:962 - Add whistle at the beginning of the slider
00:43:595 - Add whistle
00:44:101 - Add whistle at the beginning of the slider
01:38:025 to 01:40:557 - To Asymmetrical in 01:39:165 (5,6). Follow the pattern. Moving the ''01:39:544 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6)'' to
x:360|y:252.
Revise: For more ''Symmetrical'' move the P2 to x:340|y:200 [Grid level: 4]