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paraoka - Manima ni (Short Ver.)

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Mixagji
625 posts
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Mixagji
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月13日 at 15:21:43

Artist: paraoka
Title: Manima ni (Short Ver.)
Tags: haru*nya val0108
BPM: 185
Filesize: 4711kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. 0108 (5 stars, 595 notes)
  2. Hard (4.84 stars, 375 notes)
  3. Insane (4.87 stars, 515 notes)
  4. Normal (2.98 stars, 166 notes)
Download: paraoka - Manima ni (Short Ver.)
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Last edited by Mixagji , edited 62 times in total.
theMikeAG
308 posts
Joined September 2010
theMikeAG
And so, theMikeAG's adventures into the realm of Japanese Music continue.

~General~
Your hitsounds are really quiet. Maybe make them a tiny bit louder?
Also, maybe you should place whistles on the chimes in the song.

~Normal~
00:14:089 (2,3) - Maybe unstack these notes?
00:26:414 (2,3,4) - Move either (3) or (4) to create a nice, neat triangle pattern.
01:49:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Center these?

~Hard~
Personally, I think the triplets here are little tough for this difficulty. Maybe replace them with repeaters?
02:25:603 (2,3) - Move these notes so that (3) can be centered.

~Insane~
...I don't really have anything to say.

Nice Map. My fingers are really cold, so I wasn't very good at it. :lol:
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>thaMikeAG
thx mod ~ fixed
volume +5% up
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
Hello~ :)

from phonic & Laurier's Modding Queue


[General]

  1. Kiai Time : 01:06:954 ~ 01:27:387　
    01:28:035 ~ 01:29:981 必要ですか？
[Insane]

  1. HP-1?
  2. 00:44:089 (7) - add new combo
    01:07:116 (2) - 最後にfinish
  3. 01:16:522 (6) - add new combo
  4. 01:24:144 (5) - ^
  5. 01:26:738 (5) - add new combo?
  6. 01:47:981 (7) - ^
  7. 02:09:387 (1) - 最後にfinish
  8. 02:14:252 (5) - add new combo
  9. 02:23:819 (5) - ^
[Hard]

  1. AR-1
  2. 00:43:927 (6) - add new combo?
  3. 00:58:198 (4) - BPM変化は合ってないと思います！
  4. 01:00:792 (4) - ^
  5. 01:03:387 (4) - ^
  6. 01:07:116 (2) - 最後にfinish
  7. 01:08:414 (6) - add new combo?
  8. 01:16:522 (5) - ^
  9. 01:26:738 (3) - ^
  10. 02:00:468 (4) - BPM変化は合ってないと思います！
  11. 02:03:062 (4) - ^
  12. 02:05:657 (4) - ^
  13. 02:09:549 (2) - add finish
  14. 02:28:684 (3) - add new combo
[Normal]

  1. HP+1? OD+1?
  2. 00:12:792 (4) - add new combo
  3. 00:13:441 (1) - remove new combo
  4. 00:18:225 (x) - Break必要ないと思います！
  5. 00:54:306 (5) - add new combo
  6. 01:07:279 (1) - 最初にfinish
  7. 01:56:252 (4) - add new combo?
  8. 02:09:549 (1) - 最初にfinish
  9. もったいない空きが多く見られました><
That's all~
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>phonic
modありがとうございます
Normalはこれ以上ノートを増やすとstarratingが3を超えてしまいます...
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
Hitcircleを消してSliderを増やすのも案の一つです！

頑張ってください！ ;)
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
Hard:
00:13:603 (1) - 00:13:765でスタート？
02:24:306 - noteをプレイスする
いいマップでした、頑張れ～
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Mixagji

soulfear wrote:

Hard:
00:13:603 (1) - 00:13:765でスタート？
02:24:306 - noteをプレイスする
いいマップでした、頑張れ～
thx!
fixed~
Hika
1,553 posts
Joined February 2010
Hika
Here goes your mod request. ~

[Overall]
Offset: 1,133.
I THINK when I downloaded this, the file was 14mb, consider lowering down to 10mb IF I'm right about the filesize.

[Normal]
Change HP1 to HP2.
Change AR3 to AR4.
Change OD1 to OD3.
00:28:374 (5) - Add new combo.
00:33:563 (5) - ^
01:06:968 (4) - ^

[Hard]
Change HP5 to HP4.
00:17:981 (1) - Add a note before this on the timeline, 1 tick earlier (blue tick).
00:23:171 (1) - ^
00:28:360 (1) - ^
00:33:549 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Change HP8 to HP7.
00:33:549 (7) - Add new combo.
00:16:360 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:008 (1) - ^
00:56:576 (1) - Replace with a 1/8 slider that repeats twice.
01:07:116 (1) - Add new combo.

Good luck. ; u ; I love paraoka. <3 /star.
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>Hika
thx mod and star ~
fixed~
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
554 posts
Joined March 2010
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
set current position as preview point unsnapped

Normal
01:05:349(2) - one grid up
01:27:403(4) - remove cover.Because of rythem it's confusion to normal
02:29:673(3) - ~

Hard
looks fine

Insane
~

Nice skill map :)
Star
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka
hi~ ></
from my modding queue :)

SPOILER
全て提案程度ですので気に入らないものがあれば無視してくださってかまいません :)


[General]
･"paraoka - Mani mani (Short Ver.) (Mixagji).osb"を削除して、fullsubmissionしてください。
･AudioLeadInを1000にしたほうがいいかも？


[Insane]
00:12:808 (3) - 始端にfinishを追加。
00:15:078 (1) - 終端をここ（00:15:403）に変更したほうが後ろの音に合っている気がします。
00:33:403 (8) - new comboを削除？
00:34:862 (3) - new comboを追加？（01:05:997 (1,2,3,4,5)ここと同じパターンになるので）
00:56:592 (1) - 終端をここまで（00:56:754）伸ばしたほうがいいとおもいます。
01:17:187 (1) - new comboを削除？


[Hard]
HP +1
00:45:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - clapを追加？
01:07:132 (2) - 終端にfinishを追加。
02:12:160 (5,6,7) - スライダーの位置に違和感があるので、こうしたほうがしっくりくるかも？　http://puu.sh/8Arw
02:13:943 - noteを追加。
02:30:322 - [Insane]と同じようなKIAI TIMEの演出ができていません。ここ（02:29:268）にKIAI TIMEを消す緑線を追加？


[Normal]
OD,HP +1
BPM185でSV1.2だと、少々早すぎるかもしれません。
00:56:916 (1) - spacingが開きすぎています。
02:30:322 - Hardと同じく、[Insane]と同じようなKIAI TIMEの演出ができていません。ここ（02:29:268）にKIAI TIMEを消す緑線を追加？

nice song and mapset :)
やっていて楽しかったです～！
star~
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Mixagji

kissfly wrote:

set current position as preview point unsnapped

Normal
01:05:349(2) - one grid up
01:27:403(4) - remove cover.Because of rythem it's confusion to normal
02:29:673(3) - ~
thanks for mod and star
fixed ;)
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>Ryafuka
mod,star、ありがとうございます
ほとんど修正しました ;)

Normalの方は少し作り直してみようと思います finish
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
thx reqs
sorry late modding :?

[General]
KIAI:最初の少しのKIAIと2つ目のKIAIの穴、３つめのKIAI全ては必要ないように感じます。
ex)
1st kiai:1.06.970~1.27.403(もしくは1.29.997)
2nd kiai:2.09.241~2.29.997(もしくは2.32.916)

[Hard & Insane]
0.04.700(1) - 0.04.862スタートの方が入りやすいと思います。
Hard ex)pick

nice~
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:619 (n) - 他の難易度と始まる時間を同じにした方がいいです
    なので00:01:619~00:03:727のspinner入れるとどうでしょう(なぜか☆2.92に下がります)
  2. 01:00:808 (2) - 00:59:511 (1)をコピペ(Ctrl+CとCtrl+V)してCtrl+Jして配置しなおした方がいいかと
  3. 01:04:700 (1) - move 1 grid left
  4. 01:05:349 (2) - move 1 grid up
  5. 01:06:970 (T) - うむむ、私はこのkiaiの入り方はあまり好まないです…
    やはりkiaiはサビに入ってfinish音と一緒に噴き出す方が自然だと思います。個人の価値観もあると思いますがorz
  6. 01:27:484 (T) - このtiming pointを01:27:403にresnapするべきです
  7. 01:29:997 (T) - ここでkiai終了するべきです
  8. 01:50:105 (3) - かすかにまだ左右対称じゃないです。(1)をコピペしてCtrl+HしてCtrl+Rで解決するかと
  9. 01:52:051 (6) - ^ 同様の作業をすれば解決します
  10. 02:03:078 (T) - 01:06:970 (T)と同様
  11. 02:23:835 (4) - ボーカル(音)に合わせて3つのサークルまたはsilderで折り返しにした方が合ってるかと
  12. 02:29:268 (T) - このtiming pointを02:29:673にresnapするべきです
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:619 (1) - うむむ、これはHardにしてはやりすぎな気もするのでspinnerに変えたほうが…
  2. 00:03:727 (T) - 正直このkiaiの演出は合わないです。消した方が無難かと
  3. 00:17:916 (1) - spacingの関係もあるしHardとしてもこのようなリズム罠は…
    それにInsaneにこのリズムがないので消した方が無難かと
  4. 00:18:646 (4) - move 1 grid down
  5. 00:23:105 (1) - 00:17:916 (1)と同様
  6. 00:28:295 (1) - ^
  7. 00:33:484 (1) - ^
  8. 00:58:214 (4,5) - spacing miss? これも(1,2)に重ねるべきでは？
  9. 01:06:970 (T) - [Normal]と同様
  10. 01:17:349 (1) - ちょっとリズムを狂わせる音取り…　繰返しを2回減らして配置しなおした方がいいかと
  11. 01:19:943 (1~) - ちょっとリズムが合ってないです。こうした方がいいと思います
    SPOILER
    [attachment=0:1ed87]1.png[/attachment:1ed87]
  12. 01:27:484 (T) - このtiming pointを01:27:403にresnapするべきです
  13. 01:52:538 (4,5,6,7,8) - この5連打はこのBPMにしてHardにしては不適かと
  14. 02:00:484 (4,5) - spacing miss? これも(1,2)に重ねるべきでは？
  15. 02:09:241 (T) - [Normal]と同様
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:727 (T) - [Hard]と同様
  2. 00:15:078 (1) - 00:15:403で繰返し終了。
    また1/8にした方が合ってるかと思いましたがsilderが短すぎるので倍速を使って長くすれば良いと思います
  3. 00:25:376 (8) - move 1 grid right
  4. 00:25:457 (9) - move 2 grid right。それと00:25:781で繰返し終わらせた方が自然かと
  5. 00:44:024 (6) - 曲に合ってないと思ったので消した方がいいかと。
  6. 00:56:592 (1) - silder短すぎるので倍速使って長くした方がいいかと
  7. 01:06:970 (T) - [Normal]と同様
なんかごちゃごちゃしててすみませんorz
ファイトです！ ;)
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>frost-b-spec,banvi
modありがとうございます
全て修正しました
特にKIAI TIMEの指摘はとても助かりました
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

normal
00:05:024 (1) - add finish at the beginning (Volume:40%)
00:10:214 (1) - ^
00:45:241 (6) - change to a spinner?
01:06:970 (1) - add finish & clap & whistle
01:24:160 (3,4,5) - clap

hard
00:17:997 (6) - NC
00:23:187 (6) - ^
00:28:376 (7) - ^
01:47:997 (6) - ^
02:13:457 (9) - finish at the beginning and NC
02:14:105 (1) - remove NC
02:14:754 (1) - finish at the beginning and NC
02:23:673 (1) - remove NC and next note add NC

insane
01:42:322 (1) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183600
319,264,102322,6,4,B|280:264|256:312|280:368|320:368,2,150
01:53:997 (6) - NC
01:54:646 (1) - remove NC
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Mixagji
>No_Gu
thanks for mod
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

Normal:
00:08:268(3) - can u make it like an S curve slider like this? i can barely see the curves http://puu.sh/8Spz
00:38:754(5) - NC
00:43:943(4) - ^
00:49:132(4) - ^
01:10:062(3) - Stack this on (1)
01:15:078(5) - NC
02:13:132(3) - same as 01:10:062
02:17:349(5) - NC

Hard:
00:10:214(6) - NC
00:10:862(1) - remove NC if u follow the suggestion above
00:17:997(6) - NC
00:23:187(6) - ^
00:28:376(7) - ^
00:33:565(7) - ^
00:49:132(6) - ^
00:58:214(4) - make this horizontal like the slider at 01:00:808
01:03:403(4) - ^
01:40:376(7) - NC
01:42:322(5) - ^
01:44:916(5) - ^
01:47:187(5) - ^
01:52:862(7) - ^
02:00:484(4) - same as 00:58:214 but make it go vertical like at 02:03:078
02:05:673(4) - ^
02:23:187(8) - 1 grid down. the end should stack to the beginning of (6)

Insane:
no problems here

this is the best i can do. GL :D
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