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Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...

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Kotone
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 14 December, 2011 at 21:50:13

Artist: Mitani Nana
Title: Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...
Source: Noboru-P
Tags: noboru vocaloid vocaloid2 hatsune miku bakabaka
BPM: 200
Filesize: 7321kb
Play Time: 04:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (5 stars, 821 notes)
Download: Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...
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FOR APPROVAL

Collab with awesome mapper bakabaka
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JoJo
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JoJo
沙了个发=A=

小莹妹妹赛高=A=//

EDIT:鬼畜图真不适合我这种叒B来mod啊...=//=

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. hit300g.png位置偏高了，微调一下? ._.
  2. pause-back.png图片上写的是"back to meun"????? lol~~~
[bakaying]
  1. HD-2吧...不减分...至少-1吧喂..(恳求状
  2. Try slider tick rate 2 ? ._. 到变速的地方会容易读些..
  3. 00:06:478 (x) - 本来想吐槽礼花时间点的，结果发现效果不错呢..=//=
  4. 00:20:128 (3) - Useless Timing Section.
  5. 00:51:328 (3,4) - 这是要毁灭人类啊..
  6. 00:58:828 (10,1) - 喏~这里用了STR2的话就会很容易读哦~ =。=
  7. 01:44:128 (2) - 没叠好..
  8. 04:03:178 (2,3) - .......
[bakabaka]
  1. 01:01:828 (1) - 这里有2根线？删掉一根..
  2. 02:57:028 (3,1,3,1) - 真心无法接受啊...
  3. 03:06:928 (2,1) - 增大DS?
做为一个叒B我有很多无法接受的DS想吐槽...
算了..神组合神图无雾...=//= 再扔颗星..
逃..
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bakabaka
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bakabaka
:3
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Kotone

JoJo wrote:

沙了个发=A=

小莹妹妹赛高=A=//

EDIT:鬼畜图真不适合我这种叒B来mod啊...=//=

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. hit300g.png位置偏高了，微调一下? ._.
  2. pause-back.png图片上写的是"back to meun"????? lol~~~
這樣的._. skin我刪了...因為很花

[bakaying]
  1. HD-2吧...不减分...至少-1吧喂..(恳求状 好
  2. Try slider tick rate 2 ? ._. 到变速的地方会容易读些.. 好
  3. 00:06:478 (x) - 本来想吐槽礼花时间点的，结果发现效果不错呢..=//=
  4. 00:20:128 (3) - Useless Timing Section. deleted
  5. 00:51:328 (3,4) - 这是要毁灭人类啊..哈哈哈哈哈
  6. 00:58:828 (10,1) - 喏~这里用了STR2的话就会很容易读哦~ =。=
  7. 01:44:128 (2) - 没叠好..ok~
  8. 04:03:178 (2,3) - ....... XDDDD
做为一个叒B我有很多无法接受的DS想吐槽...嘛ds的存在也是為了讀圖,能讀就行了XD
算了..神组合神图无雾...=//= 再扔颗星..
逃..
謝謝JoJo哥哥>//<
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
僕のKaren >~<

[Storyboard]
  1. 00:000:028~00:06:028 - 用white把整個畫面?如果在00:06:478才開是白色得話有點怪怪的.
  2. 01:00:628 - 我覺得這裏太快變回正常..因為01:00:628 - 01:01:528 的音樂都很弱,所以我建議在01:01:528 - 才變回正常
  3. 03:00:628 - 03:01:828 - 在每一個重音上都加上white的effect?
[collab]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 03:07:378 (1) - (bad gameplay)間距!因為整張MAP都是跳來跳去的,而且在這裏也不適合突然縮短間距,所以造成了誤到的情況,強烈建議把間距放大.
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:08:428 (6) - (design)把這個作成00:07:678 (4) - 這樣的slider?用2個折點,會好看一點.
  2. 00:14:428 (4) - 這個沒和(1)-的尾重疊好!
  3. 00:39:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - (design)感覺在這裏放一個和之前相似的星形會比較好?像下面的差不多
    Example
    code就不給你..星我自己也作不漂亮 :<
  4. 00:51:328 (3,4) - (design)這個slider的形狀拉成(1.2)-的樣子?
  5. 00:53:878 (5) - (design)因為你00:53:428 (4) - 是用2個折點的,所以我建議這個也用2個,看起來會平衡一點
  6. 01:11:428 (4) - 換著是我,我寧願放一個正規的正方形也不要疊在01:10:828 (7) - 上面
  7. 01:39:028 (1) - (design)噗,略醜了,直接用彎的/直的slider就好了
  8. 02:00:328 (1) - 放在(124,116)? grid lv.4 那就剛好和(3.4)-成了個很好看的3角形 :3
  9. 02:05:128 (x) - 為了平衡難度,在這裡加note?不要忘記在了note之後要加clap喔!
  10. 03:11:203 (x) - 加note?為了和音樂對上
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
  1. 00:52:678 (2) - 這裏加個whistle?在slider的開頭和結尾,千萬不要直接加在slider上面,不然會多加了一層噪音
  2. 01:03:628 (2) - 加whistle?因為在高音位.
  3. 01:06:328 (2) - ^同.
  4. 02:15:928 (2) - 強烈建議刪了clap之後在加上whistle.不知道為甚麼加了clap有一股詭異感
  5. 02:51:628 (3) - 加whistle.
  6. 03:04:828 (1) - 在slider的中間加上whistle?
  7. 03:07:978 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 為甚麼不直接用Normal sound?反正你都是全用clap.而且normal clap也比較有爆發力
  8. 04:03:178 (2) - 加whistle?
Pretty good at all!Star'd
Kotone
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kanpakyin wrote:

僕のKaren >~< 哼=A=...笨蛋

[Storyboard]
  1. 00:000:028~00:06:028 - 用white把整個畫面?如果在00:06:478才開是白色得話有點怪怪的. //不覺得._.
  2. 01:00:628 - 我覺得這裏太快變回正常..因為01:00:628 - 01:01:528 的音樂都很弱,所以我建議在01:01:528 - 才變回正常//先保留
  3. 03:00:628 - 03:01:828 - 在每一個重音上都加上white的effect?//閃死了
[collab]
Issue/unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 03:07:378 (1) - (bad gameplay)間距!因為整張MAP都是跳來跳去的,而且在這裏也不適合突然縮短間距,所以造成了誤到的情況,強烈建議把間距放大.// leave to baka
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:08:428 (6) - (design)把這個作成00:07:678 (4) - 這樣的slider?用2個折點,會好看一點.//不要
  2. 00:14:428 (4) - 這個沒和(1)-的尾重疊好!好吧...雖然不重疊也沒什麼的
  3. 00:39:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - (design)感覺在這裏放一個和之前相似的星形會比較好?像下面的差不多// leave to baka,不過我覺得原本的比較好
    Example
    code就不給你..星我自己也作不漂亮 :<
  4. 00:51:328 (3,4) - (design)這個slider的形狀拉成(1.2)-的樣子?//不要
  5. 00:53:878 (5) - (design)因為你00:53:428 (4) - 是用2個折點的,所以我建議這個也用2個,看起來會平衡一點//不要
  6. 01:11:428 (4) - 換著是我,我寧願放一個正規的正方形也不要疊在01:10:828 (7) - 上面// leave to baka,btw我還是覺得原本的比較好
  7. 01:39:028 (1) - (design)噗,略醜了,直接用彎的/直的slider就好了好吧fixed...雖然我不覺得醜
  8. 02:00:328 (1) - 放在(124,116)? grid lv.4 那就剛好和(3.4)-成了個很好看的3角形 :3// leave to baka
  9. 02:05:128 (x) - 為了平衡難度,在這裡加note?不要忘記在了note之後要加clap喔!// leave to baka,btw我覺得不加好
  10. 03:11:203 (x) - 加note?為了和音樂對上//fixed
Hitsound
(These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
  1. 00:52:678 (2) - 這裏加個whistle?在slider的開頭和結尾,千萬不要直接加在slider上面,不然會多加了一層噪音頭加了,别當我笨蛋!
  2. 01:03:628 (2) - 加whistle?因為在高音位.//fixed
  3. 01:06:328 (2) - ^同.//不要
  4. 02:15:928 (2) - 強烈建議刪了clap之後在加上whistle.不知道為甚麼加了clap有一股詭異感//fixed
  5. 02:51:628 (3) - 加whistle.//fixed
  6. 03:04:828 (1) - 在slider的中間加上whistle?//fixed
  7. 03:07:978 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 為甚麼不直接用Normal sound?反正你都是全用clap.而且normal clap也比較有爆發力//fixed
  8. 04:03:178 (2) - 加whistle?//不要
Pretty good at all!Star'd
謝謝~
EDIT:baka fixed something of his part~updated~
Nymph
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BAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KanaRin
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karenying wrote:

我是公主(喂
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btw gd song
S h i o n
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S h i o n
karenying 俺の嫁~~~


Collab
01:10:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里的加速很棒! 但是给我的感觉是后面应该不再空出1/2的停顿的，01:12:628 (1,2,3) - 这里1/2补满?
01:15:628 (1,1) - 感觉这里不应该拖慢节奏 , vocal是明显加强的, 试试： 在01:15:478加个note 然后01:15:628这里开始来串连打~？
01:30:478 (1,2) - 休息过后的第一个音我个人总是很难找准的,后面倒可以多一些1/4的3连打，所以考虑下去掉这2个1/4 ?
01:52:153 (7) - 加一个note ?
02:29:278 (4) - 去掉这个 , 再在02:29:053加一个stack? 像原来那样最后来一下jump的话感觉有点不太适合
03:25:828 (10) - 这串10里面加个new combo ?
瞎了 音效什么的完全不会mod 写了些没什么用的东西 T.T


你的选歌都超赞啊~!!
Good luck~~
XD
bubble #1
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ranked
yay~!
Kotone
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S h i o n wrote:

karenying 俺の嫁~~~ >///<


Collab
01:10:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里的加速很棒! 但是给我的感觉是后面应该不再空出1/2的停顿的，01:12:628 (1,2,3) - 这里1/2补满?
01:15:628 (1,1) - 感觉这里不应该拖慢节奏 , vocal是明显加强的, 试试： 在01:15:478加个note 然后01:15:628这里开始来串连打~？
//lalala leave to baka
01:30:478 (1,2) - 休息过后的第一个音我个人总是很难找准的,后面倒可以多一些1/4的3连打，所以考虑下去掉这2个1/4 ?//好
01:52:153 (7) - 加一个note ?//好
02:29:278 (4) - 去掉这个 , 再在02:29:053加一个stack? 像原来那样最后来一下jump的话感觉有点不太适合//啦啦啦把JUMP改掉了
03:25:828 (10) - 这串10里面加个new combo ?//好好
瞎了 音效什么的完全不会mod 写了些没什么用的东西 T.T


你的选歌都超赞啊~!!
Good luck~~
XD
bubble #1
bubble #2
ranked
yay~!
lol~thanks~ :oops:
bakabaka
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bakabaka
:)

Download: Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa ... (karenying) [Collab].rar
wmfchris
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wmfchris
bakaying + bakabaka = triple baka!

- N:C1 is useless.

OD+1也可以

Some SB sections are covered by the notes like 0:53. Considering there's only one diff here try to switch the position of SB?

00:18:778 (1) - soft whistle here?
00:47:428 (1,3) - stack properly
01:08:878 (7) - 考慮到前後 (7,1)中間都是空的 放(392,208)會更好看
02:10:078 (5) - [Nazi] down 1 grid lv4
02:24:478 (1,2,3,4) - odd spacing: (1,2) 0.8x, (3,4) 1.0x
02:45:628 (1) - 向左移一點 使(1)正好在(2,3)中點

nice already.
某狼可以含笑九泉了, star.
Kotone
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wmfchris wrote:

bakaying + bakabaka = triple baka!
//you are 9999999999
- N:C1 is useless.
//added normal-sliderslide.wav

OD+1也可以
//no baka

Some SB sections are covered by the notes like 0:53. Considering there's only one diff here try to switch the position of SB?
//先保留

00:18:778 (1) - soft whistle here? //ok
00:47:428 (1,3) - stack properly //fixed
01:08:878 (7) - 考慮到前後 (7,1)中間都是空的 放(392,208)會更好看//不覺得
02:10:078 (5) - [Nazi] down 1 grid lv4 // leave to baka
02:24:478 (1,2,3,4) - odd spacing: (1,2) 0.8x, (3,4) 1.0x //fixed by shion's mod~
02:45:628 (1) - 向左移一點 使(1)正好在(2,3)中點 // leave to baka

nice already.
某狼可以含笑九泉了, star.我幫他完成遺願 :P
Kawayi Rika
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Hi ~ Karen 姐姐 ~ :)

MAP不能做的太好，会遭天神罚 ~_~

[Collab]

OD+1
AR9我也在做APP的时候用过，可是被好多人喷T_T.
01:28:228 - 第1个Break time 这里开始放NOTE怎么样？
02:01:528 (5,1) - 试下这样的节奏.
SPOILER
02:05:128 (2) - 我觉得这是多余的，建议删掉.
02:55:828 (3) - 这里应该加NC，后面删掉.
03:10:528 - 这里可以加1/2 NOTE 啊 为什么空掉呢？
03:53:578 (2) - 这个重叠到(3).
04:14:803 (1) - 加几条绿线降低音量吧,会好听 >_<


APP GO GO ~

送姐姐星星 >///<
Kotone
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Kotone
OD+1了 AR9沒問題因為BPM高
我的部分沒東西要改 谢mod谢star~
Nymph
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Nymph
BAKA莹俺の馬鹿 =A=

BG不弄成1024 768么
……代码里面有空着的we.png代码……但是没那个文件 虽然感觉没什么大问题 不过还是删了好？

00:11:728 (2) - finish有点多余
01:05:128 (3) - newcombo一个？跳满大的
01:10:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 玩起来感觉太近了 总感觉jump更好
01:36:478 (1) - nc同上
02:18:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - jump同上
02:42:328 (3,4) - 这里叠起来我1pc觉得超不爽 4往左放玩起来就舒服的多 2pc又没所谓了 囧……
04:09:928 (5) - nc？

都是1PC的感想=A= 不NAZI了（话说不删SB完全没法打……SB又杯具了
safawu
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safawu
好图,AR9 200bpm打起来很带感,赞一个O(∩_∩)O

----------------------
一些note的建议(原来的已经很好了)

[karenying part]
00:47:053 (5) - 这个去掉可能比较好?
00:58:528 (9,10,11) - AR9中这里会不会有点难读
00:59:728 - 从这开始垫3拍怎么样?感觉有点空
01:32:278 (3) - 3改成单向,在01:32:728放个circle,然后在1:32:878放个2分拍slider试试看? 原来那个也挺好的就是下句话的第一个词落在那个slider上面有那么点不适应..大概是个人的关系,无视吧...._.
01:35:428 - 垫个circle怎么样?
01:43:828 (1,2) - 合成一个slider呢?
02:25:828 (1) - 去掉NC改在后面的2或者3?
03:17:428 (3,4,5) - 3长度减小1/3,到3:18:028,在原来的4上面叠上一个circle(3:18:478)试试看?
03:12:628 (6,7) - 6,7之间,7之后各垫一拍?
03:13:828 (8) - 这里感觉没必要拉1.5拍,前后都没呼应的样子..
03:20:428 (1) - 同样,剪短到3:20:428然后在21478和21628还有22078放上circle怎么样?同前面呼应 :3

[bakabaka part]
00:22:228 (1) - 变成折返slider试试?
00:27:853 (3) - 这个去掉可能比较好?
01:06:628 (1,2,3) - 2感觉放上来点比较好,前面慢后面突然跳会被坑大概...._.
01:08:503 (4) - 同27853手感打起来可能有点别..
01:58:078 (4) - 为什么不在这起个NC?
02:04:828 (1,2) - 同上面的1:43:828,这个后面还有跳,感觉略别扭
02:42:778 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - (纯吐槽)好恐怖/.\
02:47:428 (stream) - (纯吐槽)爽,瞬挂._.
03:07:228 - 垫个circle怎么样,和后面的蓝3呼应?
03:10:528 - 垫2个一分拍circle怎么样?
03:49:678 (4) - NC提到这儿试试
-----------------------
ps:有些跳突然DS差的很多的感觉容易被坑,跳起来略有些不适,总体来说跳的还是很爽
ps2:有些note藏得好坑爹,不过挺好玩:3
ps3:连打好鬼畜/.\
psp:三连五连连续出手会断掉的 QAQ
psv:好图一只,作为新人表示KD只有一个射不起星星 :(
ps998(好吃吗?):没有了._.
Kotone
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Kotone
fixed some
Updated
JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
HI~ :)
一些建議:

[General]
Perfect for me~

[Collab]
00:10:978 (2) - clap.
00:22:678 (2) - 尾加clap.
00:58:528 (9,10,11) - 有點太吵了...
01:20:128 (2) - 頭finish?
01:20:878 (4) - 換成spinner比較好,在01:20:878結束.
01:39:778 (x) - 加個帶clap的note在01:40:528 (2)的尾巴上?
01:39:928 (x) - ^
01:50:428 (3) - 沒被覆蓋好,挺難看的...
02:08:578 (6) - clap.
02:24:028 (4) - 頭finish.
02:59:428 (1) - 誒...在02:59:878結束不好嗎?

我的Bakaying不可能這麼鬼畜
Nice map, good luck! :lol:
Kotone
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fixed some
thank you JPY~love you ♥
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