This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月10日 at 15:43:40

Artist: Barbarian On The Groove feat. Kotomitama
Title: Over The Rainbow
Source: Otomimi Infinity
Tags: Applique Sister
BPM: 173
Filesize: 4709kb
Play Time: 02:46
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.6 stars, 334 notes)
2. Normal (2.77 stars, 194 notes)
3. Rainbow (5 stars, 593 notes)

Download: Barbarian On The Groove feat. Kotomitama - Over The Rainbow
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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9th Map.
Status
Normal by me : Finished.
Hard by me : Finished.
Rainbow (Insane) by me : Finished.

Special Thanks
-Gamu-(Mod)
BeatHopper(Mod)
Byakugan249(Mod)
S o r d a(Mod)
Samah(Mod)
ykcarrot(Mod)
Kawayi Rika(Mod)
Ryafuka(Mod)
Suzully(Mod)
banvi(Mod)
NewRulerNA(Mod)
Leorda(Mod)
Faust(Mod)
Kenezz(Mod)
Beuchi-chan(Mod)
Garven(Mod)
Breeze(Mod)

Insane
02:26:346 - 3grid right?
02:26:519 (6) - ^

Ganbare!!

Exronds wrote:

Insane
02:26:346 - 3grid right?
02:26:519 (6) - ^

ありがとう
またいつかcwしよう！

hi-

[General]

1. 始まるのが速いです・・・orz　１秒から２秒にしてみはどうですか（Lead-in)

All suggestions

[Normal]

1. 00:54:439 (6) - これはちょっと、変えたほうがいいんじゃないですかね・・　あまり長いスライダーの繰り返しは避けたい
2. 01:12:820 (7) - ここかな、ニューコンボ　追加
3. 02:01:375 (1) - 短いかもしれない。なので、消してnoteを追加する
4. 02:27:387 (1) - スピナーの中心から離れすぎかも、スピナーの中心近くに移動

[Hard]

1. Slider Tick Rate は１でいいと思います
2. OD+1
3. 00:14:207 (x) - circle add
4. 00:25:306 (5) - 繰り返しをもう一つ
5. 00:50:624 (x) - circle add
6. 01:01:722 (8) - ^
7. 02:18:022~02:18:369 (x) - slider add
8. 02:20:450~02:20:797 (x) - slider add して、さらに繰り返す　[urlhttp://puu.sh/7EW8[/url]
9. 02:46:635 (6) - finish add

[Rainbow]

1. Slider Tick Rate は１でいいと思います
2. 00:07:444 (6) - ニューコンボ　追加
3. 00:10:219 (5) - ^
4. 00:21:317 (6) - ^
5. 00:48:022 (8) - ^
6. 01:03:976 (9) - ^
7. 01:30:508 (4) - ^

Good map!!!!!!

-Gamu- wrote:

[General]

1. 始まるのが速いです・・・orz　１秒から２秒にしてみはどうですか（Lead-in)

All suggestions

[Normal]

1. 00:54:439 (6) - これはちょっと、変えたほうがいいんじゃないですかね・・　あまり長いスライダーの繰り返しは避けたい
2. 01:12:820 (7) - ここかな、ニューコンボ　追加
3. 02:01:375 (1) - 短いかもしれない。なので、消してnoteを追加する
4. 02:27:387 (1) - スピナーの中心から離れすぎかも、スピナーの中心近くに移動

[Hard]

1. Slider Tick Rate は１でいいと思います
2. OD+1
3. 00:14:207 (x) - circle add
4. 00:25:306 (5) - 繰り返しをもう一つ
5. 00:50:624 (x) - circle add
6. 01:01:722 (8) - ^
7. 02:18:022~02:18:369 (x) - slider add
8. 02:20:450~02:20:797 (x) - slider add して、さらに繰り返す　[urlhttp://puu.sh/7EW8[/url]
9. 02:46:635 (6) - finish add

[Rainbow]

1. Slider Tick Rate は１でいいと思います
2. 00:07:444 (6) - ニューコンボ　追加
3. 00:10:219 (5) - ^
4. 00:21:317 (6) - ^
5. 00:48:022 (8) - ^
6. 01:03:976 (9) - ^
7. 01:30:508 (4) - ^

All Fixed!!

Thanks mod~

[Normal]
00:56:173 (1) - 00:54:785 (7,8,9,10) ここと重なってるからちょっと配置変えた方がいいかも

02:46:462 (4) - なんか途中で止まってる感あるから　　http://puu.sh/7HRy　スライダー入れるとかで切りよく終わらせた方がいいかも！

自分MODとかよくわからないんでNormalだけさせてもらいました。
自己判断でお願いします！

いい譜面だ(´∀｀)

BeatHopper wrote:

[Normal]
00:56:173 (1) - 00:54:785 (7,8,9,10) ここと重なってるからちょっと配置変えた方がいいかも Fixed?

02:46:462 (4) - なんか途中で止まってる感あるから　　http://puu.sh/7HRy　スライダー入れるとかで切りよく終わらせた方がいいかも！ Fixed

Thanks Mod!!

BeatHopper wrote:

いい譜面だ(´∀｀)

ありがとう！！

Yo modding this song because of ur request

Normal:
00:03:149(1) - put this slider below the circle. beginners/amateurs may stop after hitting the circle.
00:33:629(5) - x:304 y:168
00:33:976(1) - Stack this on the end of (4) at 00:33:282
00:53:051(4) - NC
01:01:722(1) - move it somewhere else. beginners may hit this too early
01:09:699(3) - NC
01:17:329(6) - ^
01:34:670(5) - ^
02:08:311(4) - x:432 y:120 for the end point(no distance or grid snap)
02:09:699(1) - x:432 y:123(^)
02:16:982(5) - get rid of the repeat and replace it for a circle

Hard:
00:25:306(5) - NC
00:48:543(4) - ^
01:00:681(5) - ^
01:43:340(5) - ^
02:08:311 - Add a circle here

Rainbow:
00:06:404(2) - x:271 y:186 in other words the same spot as (11)
00:15:421(6) - NC
00:42:300(8) - Straighten this slider
00:50:277(5) - NC
00:57:040(4) - ^
01:01:028(3) - im not completely sure but i think this is a hidden repeat slider.

This is the best i can do. GL

hi~
Random mod~

[overall]:

1. 1つ目のKIAITIMEは00:55:826ここからだと思います
2. 2つ目のKIAITIMEのstart02:02:415

[Rainbow]:

1. 01:01:028 (3) -
   SS

   
   unrankですスライダーのリピードが見えないから直しましょうー
2. 01:03:282 (6) - Repeat削除して01:03:282 ~ 01:03:456までのスライダーにした方が曲にあってると思います
3. 01:40:566 ~ 02:00:855 - クラップは曲にあってないと思いますホイッスルとフィニッシュだけでいいと思います

[Hard]:

1. 00:12:820 - Add note
2. 00:15:595 - ^
3. 00:46:462 - Add note 00:46:635 (5) - 重ねた方が好きです
4. 01:17:849 - ^
   

[Normal]:

1. nice diff!

応援してます！がんばってください～

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this song because of ur request

Normal:
00:03:149(1) - put this slider below the circle. beginners/amateurs may stop after hitting the circle. Fixed.
00:33:629(5) - x:304 y:168 Fixed.
00:33:976(1) - Stack this on the end of (4) at 00:33:282 Fixed.
00:53:051(4) - NC Fixed.
01:01:722(1) - move it somewhere else. beginners may hit this too early Fixed?
01:09:699(3) - NC Fixed.
01:17:329(6) - ^ Fixed.
01:34:670(5) - ^ Fixed.
02:08:311(4) - x:432 y:120 for the end point(no distance or grid snap) Fixed.
02:09:699(1) - x:432 y:123(^) Fixed.
02:16:982(5) - get rid of the repeat and replace it for a circle Fixed.

Hard:
00:25:306(5) - NC Fixed.
00:48:543(4) - ^ Fixed.
01:00:681(5) - ^ Fixed.
01:43:340(5) - ^ Fixed.
02:08:311 - Add a circle here Fixed.

Rainbow:
00:06:404(2) - x:271 y:186 in other words the same spot as (11) Fixed.
00:15:421(6) - NC Fixed.
00:42:300(8) - Straighten this slider Sorry,not fixed.
00:50:277(5) - NC Fixed.
00:57:040(4) - ^ Fixed.
01:01:028(3) - im not completely sure but i think this is a hidden repeat slider. Fixed.

This is the best i can do. GL

Thanks!! Mod!!

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:

1. 1つ目のKIAITIMEは00:55:826ここからだと思います
2. 2つ目のKIAITIMEのstart02:02:415

[Rainbow]:

1. 01:01:028 (3) -
   SS

   
   unrankですスライダーのリピードが見えないから直しましょう
2. 01:03:282 (6) - Repeat削除して01:03:282 ~ 01:03:456までのスライダーにした方が曲にあってると思います
3. 01:40:566 ~ 02:00:855 - クラップは曲にあってないと思いますホイッスルとフィニッシュだけでいいと思います

[Hard]:

1. 00:12:820 - Add note
2. 00:15:595 - ^
3. 00:46:462 - Add note 00:46:635 (5) - 重ねた方が好きです
4. 01:17:849 - ^

[Normal]:

1. nice diff!

応援してます！がんばってください～

All Fixed.
Thanks Mod!!

応援ありがとう!!

From queue:

[Normal]
00:54:439 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is very bad for beginners. Anything less than 3 stars should be considered "easyish".
01:40:566 to 02:01:028 - You're using a distance spacing of about 1.6x here, and it doesn't match the slider velocity.
02:09:352 (4,1) - These aren't quite snapped on the end of the previous slider. Set distance spacing to 0.0x, hold down shift, then drag each of the objects so they snap to it.
02:19:063 (2,3) - This plays weird having a different number of repeats.
Remove these duplicated timing points: 00:22:714, 00:55:652, 02:02:242, 02:08:658.

[Hard]
00:25:306 (1,2) - Too close.
00:33:976 (1,2,3) - Also too close. Same spacing as 00:33:282 (5,6,7) but double the time difference.
01:02:762 (3,4) - Too close.
01:13:167 (3,4) - ^
01:14:554 (6,1) - ^
01:15:941 (3,4) - ^
01:54:785 (1,2,3) - Spacing isn't even here, (2,3) looks cramped.
02:10:739 (1,2) - Too close. Notice that it's the same spacing as 02:11:433 (2,3) but double the time difference.
02:13:514 (1,2,3) - Too close again. It should be the same as the spacing between (3,4).
02:16:288 (1,2) - ^
Remove this duplicated timing point: 02:08:658.

[Rainbow]
You need to work on your spacing with this map. Although the jumps do look like jumps, the rest of the notes seem a little uneven in places. I'd suggest going through the whole map with distance snap on, and shuffle things around a bit. Keep the jumps as they are, but make sure the rest of the spacing is even. It'll be easier to read and a lot more fun!
00:04:670 (6,7,8,9,10) - This is awful to read... D:
00:20:797 (5,1) - Too close.
00:39:352 (4) - You could move this a bit so it lines up better with 00:40:219 (1).
01:08:658 (7) - Snap this on top of 01:07:618 (3).
01:30:855 (2) - This is hard to see under 01:29:988 (2).
02:14:034 (2,3) - Hard to see these under the stream.
02:26:519 (6) - Not quite snapped under (5).
02:27:040 (8) - Not quite snapped under (7).
02:30:855 (2) - Hidden under the stream.
Remove these duplicated timing points: 00:55:652, 02:02:242.

Very nice.

Samah wrote:

[Normal]
00:54:439 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is very bad for beginners. Anything less than 3 stars should be considered "easyish".　Fixed.
01:40:566 to 02:01:028 - You're using a distance spacing of about 1.6x here, and it doesn't match the slider velocity. Fixed.
02:09:352 (4,1) - These aren't quite snapped on the end of the previous slider. Set distance spacing to 0.0x, hold down shift, then drag each of the objects so they snap to it. Fixed?
02:19:063 (2,3) - This plays weird having a different number of repeats. Fixed.
Remove these duplicated timing points: 00:22:714, 00:55:652, 02:02:242, 02:08:658. Fixed.

[Hard]
00:25:306 (1,2) - Too close. Fixed.
00:33:976 (1,2,3) - Also too close. Same spacing as 00:33:282 (5,6,7) but double the time difference. Fixed?
01:02:762 (3,4) - Too close. Sorry,not fixed.
01:13:167 (3,4) - ^ Sorry,not fixed.
01:14:554 (6,1) - ^ Sorry,not fixed.
01:15:941 (3,4) - ^ Sorry,not fixed.
01:54:785 (1,2,3) - Spacing isn't even here, (2,3) looks cramped. Sorry,not fixed.
02:10:739 (1,2) - Too close. Notice that it's the same spacing as 02:11:433 (2,3) but double the time difference. Fixed.
02:13:514 (1,2,3) - Too close again. It should be the same as the spacing between (3,4). Sorry,not fixed.
02:16:288 (1,2) - ^ Sorry,not fixed.
Remove this duplicated timing point: 02:08:658. Fixed.

[Rainbow]
You need to work on your spacing with this map. Although the jumps do look like jumps, the rest of the notes seem a little uneven in places. I'd suggest going through the whole map with distance snap on, and shuffle things around a bit. Keep the jumps as they are, but make sure the rest of the spacing is even. It'll be easier to read and a lot more fun!
00:04:670 (6,7,8,9,10) - This is awful to read... D: XD
00:20:797 (5,1) - Too close. Fixed.
00:39:352 (4) - You could move this a bit so it lines up better with 00:40:219 (1). Fixed?
01:08:658 (7) - Snap this on top of 01:07:618 (3). Fixed.
01:30:855 (2) - This is hard to see under 01:29:988 (2). Fixed.
02:14:034 (2,3) - Hard to see these under the stream. Fixed?
02:26:519 (6) - Not quite snapped under (5). Fixed?
02:27:040 (8) - Not quite snapped under (7). Fixed?
02:30:855 (2) - Hidden under the stream. Fixed?
Remove these duplicated timing points: 00:55:652, 02:02:242. Fixed.

Thank you~ mod!

Hi


[Insane]
I suggest an actual hitsound pattern of snare drum for intro part.(from begin to 00:11:433)
This part is uninspiring due to there is no hitsound.
00:10:826 - Add a note?
00:17:329 (2) - Put soft-finish instead of clap
01:01:722 (4) - New combo due to spacing has been changed
01:02:069 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - They really bad Slider-stream is the best when it starts from white tick. Try these notes. http://puu.sh/7XU7
01:09:352 (1) - This spacing have not good feeling
01:13:514 (5) - New combo due to spacing is changed from this note
01:30:855 (2) - Hitburst of 01:30:334 (3) covers its reverse arrow too much. http://puu.sh/7XV6
01:32:589 (7) - Divide a slider in half? http://puu.sh/7XW2
02:07:271 (6) - New combo
02:08:658 (1) - Remove new combo
02:12:126 (5) - wow... too long combo number. New combo plz
02:30:855 (2) - Hard to see reverse arrow http://puu.sh/7YL5
02:24:612 ~ 02:46:635 - If you accept hitsound suggestion of mine, those claps are should be changed. This part has same pattern with intro.


[Hard]
00:55:652 - Delete useless timing point
01:03:456 (4) - Spacing
01:10:913, 01:11:433, 01:11:953, 01:12:126 - I think they are usless timing points. They make just weird spinner sound. Remove them.
01:13:861 (4) - New combo
01:16:635 (4) - ^
02:02:242 - Delete useless timing point
02:02:415 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
02:10:739 (1,2,3) - Why half spacing at this time? it's really awkward.
02:13:514 (1,2,3) - ^
02:29:467 (3) - Too close to previous slider


[Normal]
Since you followed snare drum almost, it's a bit hard to beginner. Because snare drum isn't downbeat.
Consider to make Easy diff what mapped of downbeats.

00:20:970 - Delete useless timing point
00:55:826 - Add a note. Starting kiai without note makes weird feeling.
01:20:277 - Adjust break time or insert break time again.
02:01:375 - Delete useless timing point
02:02:415 - Add a note. Starting kiai without note makes weird feeling.


Good luck

ykcarrot wrote:

[Insane]
I suggest an actual hitsound pattern of snare drum for intro part.(from begin to 00:11:433)
This part is uninspiring due to there is no hitsound.

For intro part

00:00:335 (1) - Add clap to start of slider Fixed
00:00:855 (3) - Add clap Fixed
00:01:028 (4) - Add clap to end of slider Fixed
00:01:895 (7) - Add clap to start of slider Fixed
00:02:242 (8) - Add clap to reverse arrow Fixed
00:02:762 (9) - Add claps to every point Fixed
00:03:109 (1) - Add clap to start Fixed
00:03:629 (2) - Add clap Fixed
00:04:150 (5) - Add clap to start Fixed
00:04:670 (6) - Add clap Fixed
00:05:190 (9) - ^ Fixed
00:05:537 (11) - Add claps to every point Fixed
00:05:884 (1) - Add clap to start Fixed
00:06:404 (2) - Add clap Fixed
00:06:924 (5) - Add clap to start Fixed
00:07:444 (1) - Add clap Fixed
00:07:965 (4) - Add clap to start Fixed
00:08:311 (5) - Add claps to every point Fixed
00:08:658 (1) - Add clap to start Fixed
00:09:178 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:09:525 (3) - Add clap to reverse arrow Fixed

00:10:826 - Add a note? Sorry, not fixed
00:17:329 (2) - Put soft-finish instead of clap Fixed
01:01:722 (4) - New combo due to spacing has been changed Fixed
01:02:069 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
01:03:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - They really bad Slider-stream is the best when it starts from white tick. Try these notes. http://puu.sh/7XU7 Fixed
01:09:352 (1) - This spacing have not good feeling Fixed
01:13:514 (5) - New combo due to spacing is changed from this note Fixed
01:30:855 (2) - Hitburst of 01:30:334 (3) covers its reverse arrow too much. http://puu.sh/7XV6 Fixed
01:32:589 (7) - Divide a slider in half? http://puu.sh/7XW2 Fixed
02:07:271 (6) - New combo Fixed
02:08:658 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
02:12:126 (5) - wow... too long combo number. New combo plz Fixed
02:30:855 (2) - Hard to see reverse arrow http://puu.sh/7YL5 Fixed
02:24:612 ~ 02:46:635 - If you accept hitsound suggestion of mine, those claps are should be changed. This part has same pattern with intro. Fixed


[Hard]
00:55:652 - Delete useless timing point Fixed
01:03:456 (4) - Spacing Fixed
01:10:913, 01:11:433, 01:11:953, 01:12:126 - I think they are usless timing points. They make just weird spinner sound. Remove them. Fixed
01:13:861 (4) - New combo Fixed
01:16:635 (4) - ^ Fixed
02:02:242 - Delete useless timing point Fixed
02:02:415 (1) - Add finish to start of slider Fixed
02:10:739 (1,2,3) - Why half spacing at this time? it's really awkward.
02:13:514 (1,2,3) - ^[/color] Fixed
02:29:467 (3) - Too close to previous slider Fixed


[Normal]
Since you followed snare drum almost, it's a bit hard to beginner. Because snare drum isn't downbeat.
Consider to make Easy diff what mapped of downbeats.

00:20:970 - Delete useless timing point Fixed
00:55:826 - Add a note. Starting kiai without note makes weird feeling. Fixed
01:20:277 - Adjust break time or insert break time again. Fixed
02:01:375 - Delete useless timing point Fixed
02:02:415 - Add a note. Starting kiai without note makes weird feeling. Fixed

Thanks!! mod~

Hi ~ Jupiter ~

My some tips ~

[Insane]

looks good, but I think your Insane diff it's overmapped.


[Hard]

You can do this diff more hard?
00:44:728 (2) - start point add finish.
01:06:404 - add note will be better.
02:12:473 - ^
02:24:092 (5) - Remove note.
02:42:300 (2) - Reverse direction.


[Normal]

00:44:034 (6,7,8) - Overlapped together.
01:10:739 (3) - extension to here 01:11:086.

nice map ~ good luck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Insane]

looks good, but I think your Insane diff it's overmapped.


[Hard]

You can do this diff more hard? Fixed
00:44:728 (2) - start point add finish. Fixed
01:06:404 - add note will be better. Fixed
02:12:473 - ^ Fixed
02:24:092 (5) - Remove note. Fixed
02:42:300 (2) - Reverse direction. Fixed


[Normal]

00:44:034 (6,7,8) - Overlapped together. Fixed
01:10:739 (3) - extension to here 01:11:086. Fixed?

nice map ~ good luck ~

Thanks Mod!!

somewhere over the rainbow

とても遅くなってしまって申し訳ありません


from my modding queue



nice song and mapset
fight~~

Ryafuka wrote:

[General]
･[Hard]以外のdiffのAudioLeadInが2004と半端になっていますので、細かいことですがnotepadで修正しましょう。 Fixed
･なぜだかnotepadで見ると[Normal]のSliderMultiplierが0.99999999になっているので、1に変更？（仕様なのかな・・？）Fixed


[Rainbow]
00:04:670 (6) - new comboを追加 Fixed
01:18:022 (10) - finishいらないかも？ Fixed
00:29:814 (6) - このkickは混乱してしまうかもです。代わりにこんなのはいかがでしょうか？ http://puu.sh/8pqz Fixed
00:44:728 (5) - new comboを追加？ Fixed
00:53:051 (7,1) - new comboをchange？ Fixed
01:18:022 (10) - finishを削除？ Fixed
01:50:624 (5) - new comboを追加？ Fixed
02:23:225 (7) - ^ Fixed


[Hard]
01:18:022 (6) - [Rainbow]同様、finishいらないかも？ Fixed
00:19:063 (3,4,4,5,1,2) - stackさせているせいかすごく混乱してしまいます。別の配置を考えてみてはどうでしょうか？ Fixed?
00:46:462 (5,6) - spacingがずれています Fixed
01:06:230 (7) - new comboを追加？ Fixed
01:11:086 (1) - spinnerの始点を01:10:913に移動？（もし移動した場合、終点がずれるので伸ばしてください） Fixed
01:17:676 (4) - new comboを追加 Fixed


[Normal]
01:06:924 (6,1) - new comboをchange？ Fixed
01:16:982 (5,1) - ^ Fixed
01:18:022 (3) - [Rainbow]、[Hard]同様、finishいらないかも？ Fixed
02:02:415 (1) - finishを追加 Fixed
02:46:462 (4) - 終端にfinishを追加 Fixed

Thx mod~~

modリクエストありがとうございますー。

[General]

• 
  ちょっとだけオフセットが早い気がします。
  +2~4？
  微妙な差なので修正するかどうかはお好みで～。

[Normal]

1. 00:02:415 (3,4) - 1grid下。(level4で)
2. 00:14:554 (4) - 1grid右。
3. 00:55:826 (7) - finish。
4. 02:23:225 (2) - (4)と対称のスライダーにした方が綺麗に見えます。

[Hard]

1. 00:01:375 (2) - (3,4)との位置が近いです。(1)をそのままコピペして対称に反転させてしまった方が良いと思います。
2. 00:04:150 (2) - 好みですが、シンメトリーの方が綺麗に感じます。↑と同様(1)をコピペして反転させてみては。
3. 00:06:924 (2) - ^
4. 00:09:699 (2) - ^ こちらは間隔が狭いので逆に(1)を(2)の反転コピペにしたほうがいいかも？　サビの後の同様のパターンについても同じくです～。
5. 00:28:080 (4) - Insaneと同様にfinishを。
6. 00:33:629 (7) - ^
7. 00:42:473 (2) - 読みづらいので、スタックさせるなら(3)の始端の方が良いです。
8. 00:48:196 (3) - 00:48:022に移動。
9. 01:37:791 (2) - x:352, y:288に移動。(1,3)の真ん中からずれているのは少し気になります。
10. 01:38:485 (4) - ^ 同様に真ん中へ。
11. 02:17:676 (4) - ちょっとfinishが不自然です。ボーカルに沿ってノートを置いているなら02:17:502 (3)につけるのはありだと思いますが・・・。

[Insane]

1. 00:05:017 (3,4) - (1,2)と不揃いなので合わせましょう。(たぶんlevel4で1grid上でぴったり？)
2. 00:06:751 (4) - 1grid上。(level4で)
3. 00:07:444 (1,3) - それぞれ前の(2,4)と綺麗にスタックさせたほうが見栄えが良いです。
4. 00:08:658 (1,2,3,4) - こういう配置では、(1,2)それぞれの始端の間隔を(2,3,4)の間隔と揃えた方が見た目が綺麗です。
5. 00:10:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ちょっと他のパートに比べてジャンプがきついと思います。
6. 00:21:491 (2) - バックサウンド的に、連打が始まるのはここではなく00:21:664です。そのため少し叩きづらいです。
7. 01:16:462 (5,6) - 次の(10,1)と間隔にギャップがあるので、(10,1)が読みづらいです。もう少し間隔を広めに。
8. 01:32:936 (8,1) - (8)を(6)とずらすなら少し上にもずらしてください。横にずらすだけでは折り返しスライダーが読みづらく、またスタックされている(1)を読むのも難しいです。
9. 01:39:352 (3,4) - 前の(1,2,3)と間隔を揃えた方がプレイしやすいと思います。
10. 02:08:658 (4,5,6,7,8) - 同様のパターンの02:07:271 (1,2,3)で一拍溜めているのに対し、同じ音楽でこちらは溜めが無く、さらにスタックの仕方もやや難しいので別のパターンに変えた方が良いと思います。
11. 02:44:034 (1) - finishの音が浮いてしまっている気がします。このfinishを削除するか、サビが終わってからのパート全体に同様にfinishを加えた方が良いと思います。

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