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Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ame

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Asuka_-
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Asuka_-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月14日 at 16:01:35

Artist: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
Title: Crying Heart
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-
Tags: eroge to oujo noraneko noratoto Yasaija 714 Sekaii Sekai-nyan Momochikun
BPM: 178
Filesize: 3418kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.76 stars, 409 notes)
  2. Mochi's Hard (3.45 stars, 285 notes)
  3. Sekai's Normal (2.25 stars, 232 notes)
  4. Yasai's Easy (1.49 stars, 128 notes)
Download: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa) - Crying Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6
Easy Yasaija 714
Normal Sekaii
Hard Momochikun
Insane me


Homura-'s set
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Asuka_-
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Asuka_-
meta
https://i.gyazo.com/278c05a0b36ac86811c ... a0b640.png (from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP-OG3vm9h8)
http://harukaze-soft.com/nora2/
http://harukaze-soft.com/product/

Title: クライングハート
Romanised Title: Crying Heart
Artist: アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Romanied Artist: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-

edit: added this link t/653303/start=31
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makisokk
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Joined August 2013
makisokk
Easy pp
  • 2017-10-15 19:59 makisokk: 00:12:870 (3,1) - fix blanket
    2017-10-15 20:00 makisokk: 00:21:972 (3) - move the note a little lower
    2017-10-15 20:00 makisokk: 000:25:679 (1,2) - can blanket this
    2017-10-15 20:01 makisokk: 00:32:421 (1,3) - pls unstack
    2017-10-15 20:02 makisokk: 00:39:837 (4,1) - do blanket?
    2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: 00:58:039 (1,3) - i think better unstack
    2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: 01:02:253 (2,4) - blanke
    2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: t
    2017-10-15 20:05 makisokk: 01:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard srteam, [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9323802 somehow it's better]
    2017-10-15 20:05 makisokk: 01:08:826 (1,3) - pls unstackXD
    2017-10-15 20:06 makisokk: the rest looks good
Asuka_-
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Asuka_-

makisokk wrote:

Easy pp
  • 2017-10-15 19:59 makisokk: 00:12:870 (3,1) - fix blanket yess
    2017-10-15 20:00 makisokk: 00:21:972 (3) - move the note a little lower yse
    2017-10-15 20:00 makisokk: 000:25:679 (1,2) - can blanket this yes
    2017-10-15 20:01 makisokk: 00:32:421 (1,3) - pls unstack keep for now because i consistent with 00:21:635 (1,2,3) -
    2017-10-15 20:02 makisokk: 00:39:837 (4,1) - do blanket? yes
    2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: 00:58:039 (1,3) - i think better unstack i wanna keep lol iit's fun to me
    2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: 01:02:253 (2,4) - blanke yes
    2017-10-15 20:03 makisokk: t
    2017-10-15 20:05 makisokk: 01:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard srteam, [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9323802 somehow it's better] not hard!! you could play here !!
    2017-10-15 20:05 makisokk: 01:08:826 (1,3) - pls unstackXD uhehe
    2017-10-15 20:06 makisokk: the rest looks good
thanks checking!!
Suimya
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Suimya
Finished my Normal with 2.25 ></

Also I think this bg is kinda nsfw, maybe try to find better one? safer one at least o.o/

anyways my diff: http://puu.sh/xZoR1/7e43494f07.zip
Asuka_-
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Asuka_-
@Sekaii updated~ really thanks!!
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Dubturt
508 posts
Joined March 2015
Dubturt
unko
21:45 Asuka_-: hi can i ask for quick irc?
21:46 Dubturt: ye
21:46 *Asuka_- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1439840 Hanazono Mei, Ameba Tsukasa - Crying Heart]
21:46 Asuka_-: pls psl psl
21:46 Dubturt: wait lol
21:47 Asuka_-: ok lol
21:47 *Dubturt is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1439840 Hanazono Mei, Ameba Tsukasa - Crying Heart [Insane]]
21:47 Dubturt: noraneko 
21:47 Asuka_-: insane only pls-
21:47 Asuka_-: yes
21:48 Dubturt: it would be nice if this 00:10:005 (1,2,3) - had slighty bigger spacing than this 00:09:500 (1,2,3) - 
21:48 Dubturt: i mean like
21:49 Dubturt: the spacing gets gradually bigger for 00:09:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the the 3 triangles
21:50 Dubturt: nice if it were blanketed 00:23:657 (3,1) - imo
21:52 Dubturt: idk 00:39:163 (1,2) - maybe your style lol
21:52 Dubturt: its ok if you dont do anything to it
21:52 Asuka_-: ok thanks! pls post to forum ><
21:53 Dubturt: ye
21:53 Dubturt: lol wait hehe
21:53 Dubturt: maybe a little too hard? 01:08:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
21:54 Asuka_-: hm....
21:54 Asuka_-: i passed it,,,   hm... test play ok?
21:54 Dubturt: tomorrow lol
21:54 Dubturt: exams w
21:54 Asuka_-: okay
21:54 Asuka_-: ah
Asuka_-
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Asuka_-
@Dubturt all fixed! thanks
Asuka_-
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Asuka_-
meta updated
re-dl please!!
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Affirmation
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Affirmation
As you requeste, m4m :D

[Easy]
well.. I suggest cs3, cause 2.5 is too big, so circles are too close for seeing, not so good to seeing for me.
01:13:039 (3) - unnecessary beat, drum is too weak, so playing can be weird imo.
for me, 1/1 was too many so playing was little bit boring and 2/3 makes hard reading for beginners, As you know, this is lowest diff in this set, so I suggest thinking about easier rhythm.

[Normal]
00:18:095 - I suggest adding a beat here since you added at 00:28:882 - , and you followed vocal at previous, I mean 00:13:208 (3,4) - here, but felt weird you followed drum at here.
00:44:387 - Unnecessary beat imo. deleting this beat can be easier rhythm for newbies.
00:57:702 - if you followed drum, this beat should be clickable, if you followed vocal. 00:57:365 - should be added. current beat looks just weird beats imo.
00:58:713 - I think strong beat is here, not 00:59:050 - , I sgueest ctrl G 00:58:545 (3,4) -
01:00:736 (1,4) - symmetrical pattern?
I think symmetrical pattern and downbeat notees made not so good rhythm. Just felt 1/1 map imo.

[Hard]
00:25:342 (1) - how about adding clickable beats at 00:25:679 - ? looks good for music and consistency with 00:14:556 (4,1) -
00:57:365 (4,5) - stacking made bad DS. check it ingame.
01:00:399 (3,2) - this linear overlap looks not so good imo.

[Insane]
00:31:073 (1,2,3,4) - How about make similar flow with 00:20:286 (1,2,3,4) - ? can be good for consistency.
00:58:039 (1,3) - stacking can be hard to read, I suggest overlapping. can be good for reading and emphasizing,
01:08:826 (1,3) - ^
01:18:769 (4,5) - well,, this stack looks little bit hard?

Really good mapset, GL with rank :D
Affirmation
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take 2 stars
Okay 12spBN when
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Neoskylove wrote:

As you requeste, m4m :D

[Easy]
well.. I suggest cs3, cause 2.5 is too big, so circles are too close for seeing, not so good to seeing for me. ok
01:13:039 (3) - unnecessary beat, drum is too weak, so playing can be weird imo. I am taking rhythm according to vocals
for me, 1/1 was too many so playing was little bit boring and 2/3 makes hard reading for beginners, As you know, this is lowest diff in this set, so I suggest thinking about easier rhythm. However, since there are many 1/2 sounds in this song, there are many uncomfortable feeling if it is 1/1 slider


Really good mapset, GL with rank :D
Thank you~

@Asuka_-さん CS3にしてください >:(
Asuka_-
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Asuka_-
@Sekaii talked with Doyak about BG and i decided to change~ thanks!!
@Neoskylove thanks star~ i'll reply!
@Yasaija 714 ok~ updated

Mochi's Hard updated, so spread is fine.
BG changed. (i could not find good one, so i chose it randomly. but it's fine lul)
_DT3
1,403 posts
Joined October 2015
_DT3
As requested suuper quick mod ^^

Easy
00:43:882 (3) - This slidershape feels really underwhelming for the loud drumroll in the background, maybe change it to a edgy slider (with red anchors)?

Clean ^^

Normal
Just noticed the jump in SV from Easy to Normal is pretty big compared to the rest. Something noteworthy but probably not that bad
00:01:410 (1,4) - Why not make them have the same slidershape? The edgy slider kinda sticks out in this part unnecessarily so making it have a curve would feel more
00:12:196 - This part seems to be a bit inconsistent in the rhythms used imo, for example:
  1. 00:15:567 (2,3,4) vs. - 00:26:354 (2,3,4,5) - Here 00:26:354 (2,3) - you could maybe add a 1/2 slider for (2) because you did so in the previous part. Even if it's more intense a 1/2 slider would feel more appropriate and consistent to represent the different intensity
  2. 00:17:590 (1,2,3) - vs. 00:28:376 (1,2,3,4) - Here again rhythm varies a lot despite not being so different at all next to the different lyrics. I think both can have the same rhythm as 00:28:376 (1,2,3,4) - since that follows the vocals more appropriate
  3. 00:20:286 (7,1) - NC switch here maybe because you do every second downbeat? Even if 00:21:635 (1) - is stronger you stayed consistent here too 00:31:073 (1,4) -
00:59:387 (1) - Why the NC? I thought it was only used every second downbeat

Really don't like how it uses rhythm like that in general, but I guess it's fine

Hard
AIMod problems? At least on my side
00:17:253 (5,1) - 00:18:601 (3,1) - Tbh, the first one feels stronger in the song but the second one is emphasized noticeably more, maybe reduce spacing on the second one?
00:25:342 (1) - Kinda confused about why the rather strong vocal is on the repeat, 00:14:556 (4,1) - is essentially the same, yet it has the vocal clickable
00:26:859 (1) - It feels like it deserves more emphasis but it's fine I guess, you choose
00:57:028 (2,3,4,5) - Really don't like the fact that the continuous 1/2 hitcircles kinda overshadow how the instruments go away here 00:57:365 (4) - but again, up to you
01:20:286 (3) - No emphasis? Again, it's your choice but the ways of emphasis feel kinda weird to me
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - Really nazi but it triggers me that 01:39:163 (3) - kinda ruins the pentagon a bit xd

Fun diff

Insane
00:03:264 (1,2,3,4) - Rather nazi but maybe for tidiness make these overlap more like 00:00:904 (1,2,3) - or the other way around , your choice though xd
00:58:039 (1,3) - 01:08:826 (1,3) - Don't know if this is allowed because: (RC outtake)
"When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in."
But might wanna ask for more opinions

Haven't looked closer, but looks really clean, gj!

Sorry for the bad mod, don't have much time though uwu
GL!
niyuji
529 posts
Joined November 2014
niyuji
Hello. So here I am. Super quick mod.
Insane
00:23:657 (3,1) - blanket looks weird, try moving 00:23:657 (3) - closer or just correcting the slider a little
00:36:129 (4) - my personal look, however, I think you could make this slider longer like 00:44:219 (10,1) - because the vocal is not changing a would make sense to emphasize it like that
00:46:915 (5,1) - same here ^ (or just ignore these two suggestions)
00:47:253 (1,2) - also weird blankets again
00:56:522 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part could have some more emphasis e.g increase spacing 00:56:859 (2,3,4) -
01:04:612 (1,2,3) - hmm check this out http://puu.sh/y1cBw/7eb09e9eaa.jpg small details but worth fixing them
01:15:399 (1,2) - blanket ?
01:22:140 (5,4) - check stacks here
01:30:736 (2,3,4) - same as above ^^^
01:35:792 (1,2,3,4) - spacing a little off
01:41:017 - would love to see a circle here

Mochi's Hard
00:08:826 (2) - i think i would be better to rotate this slider https://puu.sh/y1cOK/bb20db0bb1.jpg
00:08:657 (1,1) - too close
00:35:455 (5,1) - and 00:36:466 (1,2,3) - spacing between 5th and 1st - fix it
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - you should use something ctrl+shift+d to create a perfect shaped pentagon
01:39:837 (1,2) - and 01:40:679 (3,4) - spacing could be better like put 01:41:017 (4) - a little closer

other diffs are cool

good luck! :D
Pulse
257 posts
Joined April 2015
Pulse
[Yasai's Easy]
  1. 00:05:286 (3) - Sliderend probably whould use whistle + clap since you still represents the same sound as 00:02:590 (3) - which was whistle'd
  2. 00:07:646 (2) - Should be used clap + finish as 00:06:803 (1). Same sound which was represented before
  3. 00:09:500 (1) - + Finish on start
  4. 00:32:421 (2) - Finish on start
  5. 00:53:826 (2) - Finish
  6. 00:55:174 (1) - Finish
  7. 01:15:399 (3) - Finish
  8. 01:24:163 (4) - Finish
[Sekai's Normal]
  1. 00:06:297 (6) - Check DS
  2. 01:12:702 (4) - Check DS
  3. 00:05:960 (5) - Clap on sliderend
  4. 00:07:814 (3) - Whistle on sliderend
  5. 00:09:500 (1) - NC and clap
  6. 00:11:522 (2) - Whistle on reverse and finish on end
  7. 00:57:533 (1) - Whistle on reverse
  8. 01:27:702 (1) - Clap
  9. 01:38:488 (1) - Clap
[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:09:500 (1) - Clap
  2. 00:11:859 (6) - Clap
  3. 00:38:826 (7) - This blanket could be better. Tail could be curved as on head
  4. 00:58:713 (3) - I get different DS's on 00:55:174 (1,2,3) - and near on music start but I'm not sure if this one is ok
  5. 01:09:500 (3) - Could be clean as 00:58:713 (3,4)
  6. 01:27:702 (1) - Clap
  7. 01:30:061 (5) - Clap
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:983 (3) - Imo a 5% vol should exist on sliderend since the sound that made you make 00:07:309 (4) - as a 1/2 is clearly different of this one
  2. 00:10:005 (1,2,3) - Are claps instead whistles
  3. 00:10:848 (3) - Finish
  4. 00:30:230 (3) - Why DS changing? Should keep it consistent
  5. 00:31:073 (1) - Finish
  6. 00:32:421 (1) - Finish
  7. 00:43:713 (4,5) - and 00:44:051 (8,9) - Should be whistles
  8. 00:55:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - There's no sound on (5), remove it or remove hitsounding
  9. 00:58:713 (3) - Look's great if ctrl+g'd for differentiate phrases
  10. 01:06:129 (1) - Finish
  11. 01:07:309 (1) - Finish
  12. 01:09:500 (3) - Look's great if ctrl+g'd for differentiate phrases
  13. 01:12:533 (4) - Looks off if you don't overlap it like 01:11:017 (4,1)
  14. 01:12:702 (1) - Finish
  15. 01:15:399 (1) - Finish
  16. 01:18:264 (1) - Finish
  17. 01:19:275 (6,7,8,9) - Whistles instead claps
  18. 01:23:488 (1) - Finish
  19. 01:24:163 (4) - Finish
  20. 01:27:702 (1) - Finish
  21. 01:28:545 (7,8) - Whistles instead claps
  22. 01:28:713 (9) - No hitsound on sliderend and + finish on start
  23. 01:28:882 (10) - Whistles instead
  24. 01:38:151 (10) - Finish
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Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Fixed everything, thanks for the mod :3

Sekai's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1410,22983,101775
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Crying Heart
TitleUnicode:クライングハート
Artist:Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
ArtistUnicode:アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Sekai's Normal
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-
Tags:eroge to oujo noraneko noratoto Yasaija 714 Sekaii Sekai-nyan Momochikun
BeatmapID:1442884
BeatmapSetID:681010

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg(1366x768).jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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105146,-100,4,2,2,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 255,128,64

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Momochikun
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Joined October 2012
Momochikun

Neoskylove wrote:

As you requeste, m4m :D

[Hard]
00:25:342 (1) - how about adding clickable beats at 00:25:679 - ? looks good for music and consistency with 00:14:556 (4,1) - nope
00:57:365 (4,5) - stacking made bad DS. check it ingame. keep stack but change some ds
01:00:399 (3,2) - this linear overlap looks not so good imo. fine i think


Really good mapset, GL with rank :D

_DT3 wrote:

As requested suuper quick mod ^^

Hard
AIMod problems? At least on my side
00:17:253 (5,1) - 00:18:601 (3,1) - Tbh, the first one feels stronger in the song but the second one is emphasized noticeably more, maybe reduce spacing on the second one? i dont see it as a problem
00:25:342 (1) - Kinda confused about why the rather strong vocal is on the repeat, 00:14:556 (4,1) - is essentially the same, yet it has the vocal clickable nah
00:26:859 (1) - It feels like it deserves more emphasis but it's fine I guess, you choose
00:57:028 (2,3,4,5) - Really don't like the fact that the continuous 1/2 hitcircles kinda overshadow how the instruments go away here 00:57:365 (4) - but again, up to you
01:20:286 (3) - No emphasis? Again, it's your choice but the ways of emphasis feel kinda weird to me i already add a lot of jumps, idk why people ask for more jumps lol
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - Really nazi but it triggers me that 01:39:163 (3) - kinda ruins the pentagon a bit xd ahh yeah fixed

Fun diff thanks !

GL!

niyuji wrote:

Hello. So here I am. Super quick mod.


Mochi's Hard
00:08:826 (2) - i think i would be better to rotate this slider https://puu.sh/y1cOK/bb20db0bb1.jpg nope
00:08:657 (1,1) - too close nah
00:35:455 (5,1) - and 00:36:466 (1,2,3) - spacing between 5th and 1st - fix it its fine
01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - you should use something ctrl+shift+d to create a perfect shaped pentagon fixed
01:39:837 (1,2) - and 01:40:679 (3,4) - spacing could be better like put 01:41:017 (4) - a little closer

other diffs are cool

good luck! :D

Pulse wrote:

[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:09:500 (1) - Clap i dislike finish + clap, it sounds bad
  2. 00:11:859 (6) - Clap
  3. 00:38:826 (7) - This blanket could be better. Tail could be curved as on head ok
  4. 00:58:713 (3) - I get different DS's on 00:55:174 (1,2,3) - and near on music start but I'm not sure if this one is ok its fine
  5. 01:09:500 (3) - Could be clean as 00:58:713 (3,4) nah
  6. 01:27:702 (1) - Clap
  7. 01:30:061 (5) - Clap
thanks

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Title:Crying Heart
TitleUnicode:クライングハート
Artist:Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
ArtistUnicode:アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Creator:Asuka_-
Version:Mochi's Hard
Source:ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-
Tags:eroge to oujo noraneko noratoto Yasaija 714 Sekaii Sekai-nyan Momochikun
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374,260,82814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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252,154,84837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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141,74,85511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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117,144,89556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,89893,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,34,89977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,20,90061,1,4,0:0:0:0:
375,37,90230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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363,74,92758,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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-Atri-
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m4m return
Map for mod: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/683020
CEにアップロードするの際は強制的にmoddingv2したのでそのthreadで： p/6307153/

[野菜]
  1. 01:40:511 (4) - circleしませんか？Easyにおすすめしないから、しかもあんなに今更1/2を使うのは良くないかも
    なにもありませんでした～

[Sekai]
  1. 00:08:657 (1,2,3) - I don't think using 1/1 would be a great choice here, it seems it follows the drum but it's better to follow the main melody (which is landed on 3/4) as it was more louder, especially since it's an easier diff, so in this case, a 3/4 return slider will work better
  2. 00:09:500 (4,5,6,7) - I feel it's quite overdone to use so many amount of 1/2 here as it might be hard for normal.... so maybe simplify this rhythm a bit?
    :::
  3. 00:11:522 (2) - imo I think making 00:11:859 - clickable will be better to emphasize the note
  4. 00:20:286 (7) - NC
  5. 00:43:376 (1,2,3,4) - same here, simplifying it will be better
    :::
  6. 01:16:915 (1,2,3,4) - same here, 4 circles will be better
  7. 01:27:702 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  8. 01:38:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Mochi]
  1. 00:51:129 (1) - 00:52:646 (1) - both have finish on head, but only 00:51:129 (1) - have jumps to emphasize it]
    Fine diff

[Insane]
  1. 00:31:073 (1) - Finish on head
  2. 00:58:039 (1,3) - 判断する時間があまりないのでunstackの方はいいかも
  3. 01:08:826 (1,3) - ^
  4. 01:08:151 (4) - ここに　01:08:151 (4,1) - と流れが悪いからそんなに飛ばないならいいかもね
    いいね

頑張って～
Asuka_-
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Neoskylove wrote:

[Insane]
00:31:073 (1,2,3,4) - How about make similar flow with 00:20:286 (1,2,3,4) - ? can be good for consistency. keep for now
00:58:039 (1,3) - stacking can be hard to read, I suggest overlapping. can be good for reading and emphasizing, okay overlapped
01:08:826 (1,3) - ^ ^
01:18:769 (4,5) - well,, this stack looks little bit hard? it's fine plabably lol

_DT3 wrote:

Insane
00:03:264 (1,2,3,4) - Rather nazi but maybe for tidiness make these overlap more like 00:00:904 (1,2,3) - or the other way around , your choice though xd
ok done~
00:58:039 (1,3) - 01:08:826 (1,3) - Don't know if this is allowed because: (RC outtake)
"When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in."
But might wanna ask for more opinions
ok olverlapped

!

niyuji wrote:

Hello. So here I am. Super quick mod.
Insane
00:23:657 (3,1) - blanket looks weird, try moving 00:23:657 (3) - closer or just correcting the slider a little little changed
00:36:129 (4) - my personal look, however, I think you could make this slider longer like 00:44:219 (10,1) - because the vocal is not changing a would make sense to emphasize it like that keep for now, 3/4slider doesnt empasize vocal
00:46:915 (5,1) - same here ^ (or just ignore these two suggestions)
00:47:253 (1,2) - also weird blankets again little changed
00:56:522 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this part could have some more emphasis e.g increase spacing 00:56:859 (2,3,4) -
01:04:612 (1,2,3) - hmm check this out http://puu.sh/y1cBw/7eb09e9eaa.jpg small details but worth fixing them little changed
01:15:399 (1,2) - blanket ? ye
01:22:140 (5,4) - check stacks here nice
01:30:736 (2,3,4) - same as above ^^^ little changed
01:35:792 (1,2,3,4) - spacing a little off little changed
01:41:017 - would love to see a circle here okay

Pulse wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:07:983 (3) - Imo a 5% vol should exist on sliderend since the sound that made you make 00:07:309 (4) - as a 1/2 is clearly different of this one
    keep
  2. 00:10:005 (1,2,3) - Are claps instead whistles claps dont suit the music to me
  3. 00:10:848 (3) - Finish nice
  4. 00:30:230 (3) - Why DS changing? Should keep it consistent empasize next (3)
  5. 00:31:073 (1) - Finish
  6. 00:32:421 (1) - Finish
  7. 00:43:713 (4,5) - and 00:44:051 (8,9) - Should be whistles
  8. 00:55:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - There's no sound on (5), remove it or remove hitsounding
  9. 00:58:713 (3) - Look's great if ctrl+g'd for differentiate phrases no
  10. 01:06:129 (1) - Finish
  11. 01:07:309 (1) - Finish
  12. 01:09:500 (3) - Look's great if ctrl+g'd for differentiate phrases nono
  13. 01:12:533 (4) - Looks off if you don't overlap it like 01:11:017 (4,1) stacked
  14. 01:12:702 (1) - Finish
  15. 01:15:399 (1) - Finish
  16. 01:18:264 (1) - Finish
  17. 01:19:275 (6,7,8,9) - Whistles instead claps
  18. 01:23:488 (1) - Finish
  19. 01:24:163 (4) - Finish
  20. 01:27:702 (1) - Finish
  21. 01:28:545 (7,8) - Whistles instead claps
  22. 01:28:713 (9) - No hitsound on sliderend and + finish on start
  23. 01:28:882 (10) - Whistles instead
  24. 01:38:151 (10) - Finish
applied almost hs (but i dont like clap+finish.. keep it.) thanks!

Firis Mistlud wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:31:073 (1) - Finish on head ok
  2. 00:58:039 (1,3) - 判断する時間があまりないのでunstackの方はいいかも ok
  3. 01:08:826 (1,3) - ^ ok
  4. 01:08:151 (4) - ここに　01:08:151 (4,1) - と流れが悪いからそんなに飛ばないならいいかもね 悪いかなー。。？　bnに言われたら変えるわ
    いいね
[]
@Sekai, Momochikun:
Firis's mod came before i upload GDs sorry><
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