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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 октября 2017 г. at 0:22:26

Artist: tomppabeats
Title: And You Disappeared
Tags: chill Harbor LP Helsinki Finland lo-fi
BPM: 76
Filesize: 1019kb
Play Time: 00:31
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Download: tomppabeats - And You Disappeared
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Metadata : https://tomppabeats.bandcamp.com/album/harbor-lp
https://tomppabeats.bandcamp.com/track/ ... isappeared

thanks ezek for metadata
thanks ezek and pishifat for timing check
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quick random NM :)

Simple
00:16:593 (2,2) - I'm not a fan of this overlap
00:27:646 (1) - Move this circle up so it flows nicely with the sliderend

Because this is such a short and easy map, there isn't really that much to mod. It's very good overall in my opinion! :)


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00:09:488 (1,2,3) - Something feels off about this part but I really can't put my finger on it :thinking:
00:22:120 (3,3) - Slight overlap


I hope this (somewhat) helped you :p
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danielexus wrote:
quick random NM :)

Simple
00:16:593 (2,2) - I'm not a fan of this overlap fix
00:27:646 (1) - Move this circle up so it flows nicely with the sliderend fix

Because this is such a short and easy map, there isn't really that much to mod. It's very good overall in my opinion! :) ty


Average
00:09:488 (1,2,3) - Something feels off about this part but I really can't put my finger on it :thinking: idk i like it x)
00:22:120 (3,3) - Slight overlap ok,fix


I hope this (somewhat) helped you :p sure

Thank you for mod danielexus ;)
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00:11:857 (2) - i would copy previous slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271555 to make it more aesthetic
00:14:225 (1) - would place it higher like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271565
00:16:593 (2) - i thinking copying previous slider here would be cool too http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271591
00:23:699 (1) - would be cool if you will place this like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271594


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00:01:593 (2) - place this higher http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271607
00:04:751 (1) - there is pretty strong sound in middle of slider maybe 1/1 slider with reverse arrow
00:12:646 (3) - cte + j this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271629
00:15:804 (2) - sound on red tick maybe 1/2 slider with reverse arrow here
00:25:278 (3,1) - there is sound between these maybe something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271652
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PeterEU wrote:
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00:11:857 (2) - i would copy previous slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271555 to make it more aesthetic oke,why no
00:14:225 (1) - would place it higher like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271565 +
00:16:593 (2) - i thinking copying previous slider here would be cool too http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271591 no,because I want it to be a repetition 00:18:962 (1,2) -
00:23:699 (1) - would be cool if you will place this like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271594 it does not make sense really


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00:01:593 (2) - place this higher http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271607 not good idea,sry
00:04:751 (1) - there is pretty strong sound in middle of slider maybe 1/1 slider with reverse arrow I did it on purpose
00:12:646 (3) - cte + j this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271629 sure
00:15:804 (2) - sound on red tick maybe 1/2 slider with reverse arrow here sure,why not
00:25:278 (3,1) - there is sound between these maybe something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9271652 sure,but i make a small slider

Thank you for mod PeterEU ;)
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анозер микромод

spl

00:03:172 (3) - сделай клап потише процентов на 10. Тут самое начало, так что по громкости он выбивается в отличие от остальных.
00:03:172 (3) - может на 00:03:567 красноточку поставить? На круглом слайдере удар не чувствуется.
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vrg

00:03:172 (2) - то же с клапом, что и на симпле. Потише его.
00:04:751 (1) - красноточку совмести со слайдертиком.
00:15:804 (2) - единственный реверс, немного не вписывается. Такие же моменты есть на 00:06:725 и 00:25:679, но замапаны по-другому. Ну, да, разнообразие. Но в то же время слегка такое себе.
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2zz wrote:
анозер микромод

spl

00:03:172 (3) - сделай клап потише процентов на 10. Тут самое начало, так что по громкости он выбивается в отличие от остальных. хз,как по мне всё нормально
00:03:172 (3) - может на 00:03:567 красноточку поставить? На круглом слайдере удар не чувствуется. и вправду есть там удар,ток прислушиваться надо,но вот для дт юзеров такая фича не канает,но ок,я сделаю
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00:03:172 (2) - то же с клапом, что и на симпле. Потише его. тоже самое
00:04:751 (1) - красноточку совмести со слайдертиком. этот момент переделан в связи с последним предложением
00:15:804 (2) - единственный реверс, немного не вписывается. Такие же моменты есть на 00:06:725 и 00:25:679, но замапаны по-другому. Ну, да, разнообразие. Но в то же время слегка такое себе. Да,так оно и есть,но там в двух моментах кроме 00:06:725 - вот этого ,выделен этот звук,по этому я 00:06:725 - добавлю сюда,так что спс

Thank you for mod 2zz ;)
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спид ранкинг говоришь??
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Чекал только тайминг
Я сосу в изиках

Avarage
00:06:725 - тут нота, слайдер убери
00:25:672 - ^
00:12:646 (3) - может ноту вместо слайдера??(конец слайдера не обозначает ни какой звук )
00:22:120 (3) - ^
00:15:804 (2) - начало без звука вообще


Sipmle
00:03:962 - звука окончания нет(ноту? 00:03:172 - )
00:13:436 (3) - тут звук есть, но он ОООоооООоооООООооооочень слабыый, уберешь?
00:22:909 (3) - ^^


Люблю кудосу
Удачи!!
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-Alcaida wrote:
спид ранкинг говоришь?? да я ж пошутил,не умею я спидранкать,да и никто не позволит


Avarage
00:06:725 - тут нота, слайдер убери так там на голове удар есть,да и не хочу просто так на красный тик ставить ноту
00:25:672 - ^ ^ двойной удар тиков
00:12:646 (3) - может ноту вместо слайдера??(конец слайдера не обозначает ни какой звук ) удар же
00:22:120 (3) - ^
00:15:804 (2) - начало без звука вообще суть в том что при уменьшении скорости на 50% ты там услышишь кучу звуков


Sipmle
00:03:962 - звука окончания нет(ноту? 00:03:172 - ) там по середине есть звук,да и не думаю что это что то изменит,а так пусть будет слайдер
00:13:436 (3) - тут звук есть, но он ОООоооООоооООООооооочень слабыый, уберешь? не,норм тут
00:22:909 (3) - ^^
Исправлен 00:23:699 (1) - вот этот слайдер,так как на середине есть удар,если бы не ты,я бы даже и не заметил,так что спс.

Люблю кудосу а кто не любит? :^)
Удачи!!

Thank you for mod -Alcaida ;)
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А я даже не знаю что тут модить
Карта хорошая и с отсутствием изъянов
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А я даже не знаю что тут модить
Карта хорошая и с отсутствием изъянов
Удачи тебе с ней

Лол, спасибо ;3
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Hi! Im here since we made a deal about a m4m (thanks for your mod uwu)

General
1. Disable the "Enable Countdown" option
2. Disable the "Widescreen Support" since youre not using a storyboard


Simple
1. 00:01:593 (2,3) - why not trying to do a blanket with 00:03:172 (3) - like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9307190 (moving slider "3" to x392-y312) (it would mean you have to move 00:04:751 (1) - a bit more down)
2. 00:07:120 (2) - move this to x300-y144, this way it will follow the overall distance of the combo (distance x1,00)
3. I have a problem with 00:09:488 (1) and 00:18:962 (1) - since both objects are places almost in the same place, it makes it look kinda "ugly" i would say https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9307350 why not putting 00:18:962 (1) in the same place 00:09:488 (1) is? or trying something else?
4. 00:13:436 (3,1) - you should give this objects a little bit more spacing between them


Average
1. 00:08:699 (4) - move to x264-y24?
2. 00:18:962 (4) - move the head of the slider (the first gray dot) to x464-y136, to make 00:17:383 (3,1,2) - have the same distance between each other


Nothing else to tell, its pretty good :) good luck buddy!
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Joe Castle wrote:
Hi! Im here since we made a deal about a m4m (thanks for your mod uwu)

General
1. Disable the "Enable Countdown" option +
2. Disable the "Widescreen Support" since youre not using a storyboard +


Simple
1. 00:01:593 (2,3) - why not trying to do a blanket with 00:03:172 (3) - like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9307190 (moving slider "3" to x392-y312) (it would mean you have to move 00:04:751 (1) - a bit more down) I dont see here the meaning of making a blanket
2. 00:07:120 (2) - move this to x300-y144, this way it will follow the overall distance of the combo (distance x1,00) yeah,my bad,fixed distance
3. I have a problem with 00:09:488 (1) and 00:18:962 (1) - since both objects are places almost in the same place, it makes it look kinda "ugly" i would say https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9307350 why not putting 00:18:962 (1) in the same place 00:09:488 (1) is? or trying something else? I also thought a lot about it,fixed
4. 00:13:436 (3,1) - you should give this objects a little bit more spacing between them +


Average
1. 00:08:699 (4) - move to x264-y24? what for? it doesn't make sense >.>
2. 00:18:962 (4) - move the head of the slider (the first gray dot) to x464-y136, to make 00:17:383 (3,1,2) - have the same distance between each other fix a bit


Nothing else to tell, its pretty good :) good luck buddy!

Thank you for mod Joe Castle ;)
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