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Dark PHOENiX - Ryokugan no Jealousy [Taiko]

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Kith190
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 16 dicembre 2017 at 18:21:23

Artist: Dark PHOENiX
Title: Ryokugan no Jealousy
Source: 東方Project
Tags: 水橋 パルスィ Parsee Mizuhashi Touhou 東方地霊殿 ~ Subterranean Animism Chireiden Earth Spirit Palace Green-Eyed 地殻の下の嫉妬心 Metal ゆう Yuu 姫川紫音 Shion Himekawa Arrow Revolver C74 Comiket 74 DPCD-0802
BPM: 218
Filesize: 8340kb
Play Time: 05:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Inner Oni (6,06 stars, 2317 notes)
Download: Dark PHOENiX - Ryokugan no Jealousy
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I made this map focusing on the actual sound of the map trying as much as I could not to make it boring even tho there were many similar parts.
I placed some unusual 1/6 since to me they reflect the proper sound, btw I lately even found it quite easy to play. I hope you all enjoy this map cause I worked hard on it! Thanks to each modder!

Thanks to all the modders ♥
Raytoly
Hi M4M test and chack nice map I'm sure this short mod
Inner oni
00:09:208 change to k? this high sound
00:41:135 - 00:42:236 - 00:42:649 - 00:43:337 - add finish effect
00:43:612 - change to k D
01:32:328 - and orter point this feel boring change pattern? - 02:07:557 - too try d kkd?
02:59:163 - 04:25:034 - long stream this strange delete some note?
and 03:00:401 - 04:26:273 I hear sound,please add note
0453864 - 04:54:277 - 04:54:690 - I hear drum sound
my feel now lazy Xd
good luck
Topic Starter
Kith190

Cocoaaa wrote:

Hi M4M test and chack nice map I'm sure this short mod
Inner oni
00:09:208 change to k? this high sound this sound 00:09:208 is a tone lower than 00:09:346
00:41:135 - 00:42:236 - 00:42:649 - 00:43:337 - add finish effect Ok
00:43:612 - change to k D I think it is right in that way
01:32:328 - and orter point this feel boring change pattern? - 02:07:557 - too try d kkd? Fixed somehow
02:59:163 - 04:25:034 - long stream this strange delete some note?
and 03:00:401 - 04:26:273 I hear sound,please add note Fixed both
0453864 - 04:54:277 - 04:54:690 - I hear drum sound Cool, I didn't notice it
my feel now lazy Xd
good luck
Thanks for your help ♥
Nao Tomori
[inner oni]
00:03:979 (19,20) - k k works nicely since the piano varied to have a strng note on the offbeat.

00:19:392 (117) - same, k here

00:31:594 (203,204) - i doubt you should do it, but you can do a variation here for the 1/12 piano lol

00:37:419 (225,226) - ctrl g to duplicate previous pattern

i feel that you kind of drown out the more subtle nature of the song in the kiai, since it's all the same 1/2 d k d k d k d k with sometimes ddk. you should try to vary it more, following only the top layer is kinda superficial imo.

01:29:988 - seems weird to leave this unfilled

01:34:529 (572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583) - you can hear the melody of the song is doing something different, but it is still only kdk spam... please add variation

01:48:979 (691,692) - fill in the 1/4? then it replicates your structure in the kiai with triples on the guitar chords

02:00:676 (760,761,762) - the melody goes onto the red tick, offbeat, but you didnt reflect that =(

02:59:713 (1245,1246,1247,1248,1249,1250,1251,1252,1253) - you don't use this much 1/4 filling anywhere else in kiai, you should break it up

03:33:085 - filling in here could be nice for extra differentiation for 03:33:291 (10) -

04:33:979 (424) - shouldn't it be k to follow the higher piano? like 04:34:346 (428,431,433) -

good luck~
Protonori
From my modding queue~
These are mostly suggestions, so feel free to ignore them.

I felt like I was repeating myself a lot, so I put "first kiai" suggestions in a separate box.

[General]
There are 23 unsnapped objects, so you'll probably want to check AiMod first.

[Inner Oni]
First Kiai
00:48:291 - I like the idea of increasing difficulty as the map progresses, but this seems a bit too easy for kiai. Maybe add some triples:
00:48:497 - Add k
00:49:048 - ^
00:49:598 - ^
00:50:149 - Add d?
00:50:218 (294) - Change to k? It emphasizes the lower-pitch note at 00:50:355.

00:50:630 - If you agreed with the above + want more variety, you could change the position of triples here:
00:50:837 - Add d
00:51:387 - ^
00:51:938 - ^
00:52:351 - Add k
00:52:556 (310) - Change to k? It emphasizes the higher-pitch note at 00:52:557.

00:54:483 (327,328,329) - Change to kdk? Emphasizes the lower-pitch note at 00:54:758.

00:56:961 (350) - Use k instead? The pitch is higher here.

00:58:887 (369,370,371) - kdk? Same reasoning as 00:54:483.

01:01:364 (394) - Use k? Same reasoning as 00:56:961.

01:03:429 (417) - k? The following note is lower-pitched.

01:05:767 (442) - k? The previous note is lower-pitched.

01:27:924 - Add more SV points before this? The transition from 0.75 to 1.00 isn't very smooth, so it could give HR players some trouble.

02:58:062 - I can't figure out your reasoning for using 1/3 in this kiai. You didn't use 1/3 at all before this section. (Maybe I'm missing something in the song?)

I tried to avoid changing the structure of your map.
Hopefully this'll be useful. Good luck with ranking your map! :)
Topic Starter
Kith190

Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~
These are mostly suggestions, so feel free to ignore them.

I felt like I was repeating myself a lot, so I put "first kiai" suggestions in a separate box.

[General]
There are 23 unsnapped objects, so you'll probably want to check AiMod first. Thanks a lot, I forgot it

[Inner Oni]
First Kiai
00:48:291 - I like the idea of increasing difficulty as the map progresses, but this seems a bit too easy for kiai. Maybe add some triples:
00:48:497 - Add k
00:49:048 - ^
00:49:598 - ^
00:50:149 - Add d?
00:50:218 (294) - Change to k? It emphasizes the lower-pitch note at 00:50:355.

00:50:630 - If you agreed with the above + want more variety, you could change the position of triples here:
00:50:837 - Add d
00:51:387 - ^
00:51:938 - ^
00:52:351 - Add k
00:52:556 (310) - Change to k? It emphasizes the higher-pitch note at 00:52:557.

00:54:483 (327,328,329) - Change to kdk? Emphasizes the lower-pitch note at 00:54:758.

00:56:961 (350) - Use k instead? The pitch is higher here.

00:58:887 (369,370,371) - kdk? Same reasoning as 00:54:483.

01:01:364 (394) - Use k? Same reasoning as 00:56:961.

01:03:429 (417) - k? The following note is lower-pitched.

01:05:767 (442) - k? The previous note is lower-pitched.
I fixed according to some of your tips here, but I prefeared to keep it simple not to overmap

01:27:924 - Add more SV points before this? The transition from 0.75 to 1.00 isn't very smooth, so it could give HR players some trouble.I will add timing points all over the map

02:58:062 - I can't figure out your reasoning for using 1/3 in this kiai. You didn't use 1/3 at all before this section. (Maybe I'm missing something in the song?)
I used 1/3 3 times within the map

I tried to avoid changing the structure of your map. I noticed it and I appreciated!
Hopefully this'll be useful. Good luck with ranking your map! :)
Thanks a lot!
Tyistiana
Hi, from PM :3
Here is only my opinion, feel free! :)

[ Inner Oni]
00:04:529 - k , I dunno too, seems fitter imo. lmao
00:06:318 - d seems more accurate in order to follow the bg piano pitch.
00:21:731 - d , to make some difference to 00:21:456 (135,136)
01:03:566 - k , to make this note become dominate from 01:03:429
01:03:979 (428) until 01:05:493 (448) - I think that we should make more variation of the pattern here. The pitch here doesn't same at all. Make a little difference would be nice in my opinion.
01:38:245 / 01:42:649 - k sound nice here imo. And it'll be consist. (kk kk kk kk kk)
01:45:401 - Add a note here would be nice imo.
01:52:007 - Add a note here would be nice too , the pitch still dominate here.
02:32:878 / 02:35:080 - k , the pitch change here a little.
03:28:750 moves to 03:29:025. (and add the note on 03:28:750 - 03:28:887 instead) - The main melody still have here , shouldn't be spinner yet imo.

Nice music choice by Kith again. :3
Good luck!! :)
Ellyu
HI
00:48:291 - to 01:05:768 - lack of big notes and it's kinda boring.00:50:355 - 00:52:557 - 00:54:759 - 00:56:961 - 00:59:163 - ...some of them could be a big note to emphasize the downbeat.
01:08:107 (462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472) - kinda weird. cuz if you follow the drums,you will find that there are no sounds on 01:08:589 - 01:09:002 - but there are sound on 01:08:451 - 01:08:727 - and 01:08:864 - which you didn't map.
01:27:924 (526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537,538,539) - nah,this is just a personal issue:if you are a kddk player like me you will find that this d kdk d kdk d kdk pattern is extremely hard to play which require high level of stamina .
02:58:062 - to 03:11:961 - lack of big notes too.
03:11:961 (1367,1368,1369,1370) - the speed changing plays weird for me. I understand that you may set this as a transition from the kiai part. but it's still looks like weird cuz there are too many streams here and the mood of the music hardly change.
03:42:374 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) - this pattern uhh. tbh i am not a big fans of it. it's visually perfect because it shows a transition from d to k but it plays really weird. especially the dkk and the kdd.
03:50:906 (135) - 03:59:713 (194) - D please. 04:03:016 (213) - K there are too many special sound in this song need some big note to emphasize but you ignore them ;w;
04:54:759 (604,605,606) - the stream should be stopped at 04:54:759 - cuz it's the heaviest beat here.
yes the last kiai part still lack of big notes.
Vulkin
Welp, since youre replying to these mods, ill just point out about the other things, PM me back when these are answered

-General-
1)-Its really something minor, but BG is not from touhou Lancer Karna doesnt fit quite well here :P, and resolution (1001x800) is not rankable. Maybe try this bg? Or maybe This one

2)-Why are the Samples in "N:C1" if theres no custom hitsound? Might want to change that to just "N"

3)-File->Open .osu in Notepad->SliderMultiplier:1.40399990653992 - Change that to 1.4, its a bug.

4)Title should be: 緑眼のジェラシー
Roamanized Title should be: Ryokugan no Jealousy
Tags: 水橋 パルスィ Parsee Mizuhashi Touhou 東方地霊殿 ~ Subterranean Animism Chireiden Earth Spirit Palace Green-Eyed 地殻の下の嫉妬心 Metal ゆう Yuu 姫川紫音 Shion Himekawa Arrow Revolver C74 Comiket 74 DPCD-0802

Metadata
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Parsee_Mizuhashi
https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Arrow_Revolver
(Just in case anyone asks)

-SV (Optional)-
1)-00:00:952 - Volume here could be 50%, as the piano is too calm for a 80%
2)-01:10:172 - this one is not doing anything, not changing the speed, nor volume, nor sample, nor even kiai, so delete (01:10:309 - this one changes kiai status)
3)-01:10:309 - to 01:27:786 - These could have a volume of 60, as its not as soft as the intro, but not as soft as the kiai previous to it
4)-02:58:062 - IMO Kiai could have a speed of 1,1x since its the epic part :P
5)-03:11:961 - You placed two Inherited points here
6)-03:12:097 - ...and here
7)-03:12:235 - ...and finally here, Just one is enough :P
8)-And said kiai could end at 03:33:291 - , where the volume could be back to 60% and the speed is 0.9x
9)-03:37:695 - and here you could put the volume back to 80% and speed of 1x to follow that guitar
10)-04:04:254 - the speed could return to 0,9x since the guitar solo ended and maybe have volume in 70%?
11)-04:13:062 - Set the speed to 1x because soon...
12)-04:22:969 (339,340,341,342,343) - these notes could be increasing by 0.02 to reach the speed of 1,1x at 04:23:933 - to show the intensity of the kiai
13)-04:54:896 - I think kiai end should be on this note, instead of blue snap
14)-05:16:502 - This one isnt needed imo, you could add a small speedup though so it reaches like the pinnacle of the ending

Good luck with the map!
yes general is 100% recommended to be accepted, so its more rankable
Topic Starter
Kith190
I'm sorry to all of you but today i don't have much time so i can't ecplain all my modifies but I am thankful for your mods Tyistiana Ellyu Vulkin
davidminh0111
Hello Kith190, from my queue:

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:48:291 till 01:05:768: Kinda boring you know, maybe change some notes into dkd or kkd, make variation.
  2. 01:03:429: Melody's pitch is high so change to k
  3. 01:45:401: Maybe add a note here would be nice imo.
  4. 02:42:649: Change to k, pitch isn't setting down yet
  5. 02:49:254: ^
  6. 03:42:374: Not a really big fan about this pattern, transition is very weird imo. Considering change some colors
  7. 05:16:640: How about a slider at the last
Good luck
DukeDukeDura
Hi, for your mod request
(i'm not good at modding so i just tried to mod with my feeling(?) of the pattern)

modding(0:00-0:33)
00:02:878 (11) - d -> k
00:03:429 (15) - k -> d
00:03:566 (16) - d -> k
00:03:704 (17) - k -> d
00:03:841 (18) - del
00:04:117 (19) - k -> d
00:04:392 (21) - d -> k
00:04:942 (25) - k -> d
00:05:080 (26) - k -> d
00:07:419 (37) - k -> d
00:08:933 (44) - k -> d
00:15:814 (96) - d-> k
00:15:951 (97) - k -> d
00:16:502 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - ddkdddk -> dkdkddk
00:16:915 (102) - d -> k
00:17:603 (106,107,108,109,110) - dkkdk -> dddkd
00:19:254 (116) - d -> k
00:19:392 (117) - k -> d
00:21:594 (135) - d -> k
00:22:007 (138) - d -> k
00:22:557 (141) - k -> d
00:22:970 (144) - k -> d
00:23:107 (145) - d -> k
00:23:245 (147) - del
00:25:034 (154) - k -> d
00:26:410 (160,161) - d k -> k d
00:27:511 (167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - dddkddk -> dkkd[del]dk
00:28:612 (172) - k -> d
00:28:750 (173) - d -> k
00:29:025 (175) - k -> d
00:30:309 (189) - k -> d
please tell me your thought of this modding and i will learn from it and see if i'm available to mod the whole song.

nice map, good luck:D
P.S. if you can change the bg that a person with green eyes or photoshop it would be very nice :P
Topic Starter
Kith190

DukeDukeDura wrote:

Hi, for your mod request
(i'm not good at modding so i just tried to mod with my feeling(?) of the pattern)

modding(0:00-0:33)
00:02:878 (11) - d -> k
00:03:429 (15) - k -> d
00:03:566 (16) - d -> k
00:03:704 (17) - k -> d
00:03:841 (18) - del
00:04:117 (19) - k -> d
00:04:392 (21) - d -> k
00:04:942 (25) - k -> d
00:05:080 (26) - k -> d
00:07:419 (37) - k -> d
00:08:933 (44) - k -> d
00:15:814 (96) - d-> k
00:15:951 (97) - k -> d
00:16:502 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - ddkdddk -> dkdkddk
00:16:915 (102) - d -> k
00:17:603 (106,107,108,109,110) - dkkdk -> dddkd
00:19:254 (116) - d -> k
00:19:392 (117) - k -> d
00:21:594 (135) - d -> k
00:22:007 (138) - d -> k
00:22:557 (141) - k -> d
00:22:970 (144) - k -> d
00:23:107 (145) - d -> k
00:23:245 (147) - del
00:25:034 (154) - k -> d
00:26:410 (160,161) - d k -> k d
00:27:511 (167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - dddkddk -> dkkd[del]dk
00:28:612 (172) - k -> d
00:28:750 (173) - d -> k
00:29:025 (175) - k -> d
00:30:309 (189) - k -> d
please tell me your thought of this modding and i will learn from it and see if i'm available to mod the whole song.

nice map, good luck:D
P.S. if you can change the bg that a person with green eyes or photoshop it would be very nice :PHahaha ok I will
Thanks so much for the mod, it was helpful. I couldn't apply different your tips since ther didn't follow the proper sound of the song. I mean you said all cool modifies but some of them did not respect the song. Thanks again for the mod ;D
zLeSshuhn
Hi NM!
Inner Oni
00:08:520 - K
00:09:896 - d
00:12:029 - d
00:13:887 - k
00:15:814 - k
00:16:915 - d
00:18:291 - place a d
00:19:805 - delete
00:20:424 - k
00:21:456 - d
same things in the other parts similar to this one, I hope you'll like this
GL <3
-Kazu-
mod req from my queue :000
00000000000000000000:::

General
  1. First of all, your background doesn't need your name at all because it isnt related to the song other than you being the mapper, we aren't on 2011 where everybody was using taiko template backgrounds with their name. Here is the version without your name and in higher resolution , though its still out of the ranking criteria being a vertical image and not a 1920x1080 resolution image. Also, as Vulkin already stated, the background uses an offtopic character from Fate/Grand Order (I guess?) instead of Touhou which is the song's inspiration. Maybe use what he suggested or find another background related to Mizuhashi Parsee.
  2. change the green line at 04:13:062 - to 04:13:044 - (1/16 snap) to avoid the white line go at different speed that the note at this place in-game
Inner Oni
  1. 00:20:447 (125,126,127) - these notes are actually not following anything. change them to 1/4 snap dkd starting from 00:20:493 -
  2. ...nothing else, really ._. the map is really clean and does a very good job at following the song perfectly, you should probably ask a BN to check your map now, after dealing with the issues at General, there's nothing really they can point out not to rank your map...
Sorry for the short mod, it's not my fault that you did it so well >:I have a star instead ~
Topic Starter
Kith190

-Anhedonia- wrote:

mod req from my queue :000
00000000000000000000:::

General
  1. First of all, your background doesn't need your name at all because it isnt related to the song other than you being the mapper, we aren't on 2011 where everybody was using taiko template backgrounds with their name. Here is the version without your name and in higher resolution , though its still out of the ranking criteria being a vertical image and not a 1920x1080 resolution image. Also, as Vulkin already stated, the background uses an offtopic character from Fate/Grand Order (I guess?) instead of Touhou which is the song's inspiration. Maybe use what he suggested or find another background related to Mizuhashi Parsee.
    Ok sorry I forgot fixing the BG according to the Vulkin's mod
  2. change the green line at 04:13:062 - to 04:13:044 - (1/16 snap) to avoid the white line go at different speed that the note at this place in-game
Inner Oni
  1. 00:20:447 (125,126,127) - these notes are actually not following anything. change them to 1/4 snap dkd starting from 00:20:493 - If you set the speed to 25% you will notice that d kdk doesn't follow properly the timing of those sounds, in facts the gap between notes si 1/3Btw I'll chech better that part.
  2. ...nothing else, really ._. the map is really clean and does a very good job at following the song perfectly, you should probably ask a BN to check your map now, after dealing with the issues at General, there's nothing really they can point out not to rank your map...
Sorry for the short mod, it's not my fault that you did it so well >:I have a star instead ~ Thanks a lot ♥
Rossi
Hi~!
M4M confirmed
sorry late post for M4M, but I'll never forget to mod this

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Actually I not good mod Inner Oni diff, but I will try my best xD
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[Inner Oni]
01:11:410 - I think add d at this ? to balance not at 01:11:685 (483,484,485,486) -
01:17:465 - here too

02:16:433 (919,921) - delete this? you can put triplet at 02:16:777 (921,922) - . Add d at 02:16:846 -
If you apply that^ change 02:16:914 (923) - to k

02:21:318 (970) - change to d? Just variation triplet not with kkk only
02:23:520 (990) - ^
02:25:722 (1010) - ^
02:27:923 (1030) - ^
02:30:607 (1056) - ^ ?

02:35:493 (1102,1103,1104,1105,1106) - dkkdk I think its better

03:07:144 (1326,1327) - Ctrl + G? 03:07:282 (1327) - was high beat
If you apply that^ change 03:07:420 (1328) - to d

03:15:952 (1402,1403,1404,1405,1406,1407,1408,1409,1410,1411,1412,1413,1414,1415,1416,1417,1418,1419,1420) - hmm,, why you made 1/6 at here? I think this pattern same with 02:58:337 (1256,1257,1258,1259,1260,1261,1262,1263,1264,1265,1266,1267,1268,1269,1270,1271,1272,1273,1274,1275,1276,1277,1278) -

03:17:741 (1419) - change to d maybe?

03:33:291 (11) - finisher
03:35:493 (16) - ^

Pattern from 03:42:374 - to 03:44:438 - :
03:42:718 (4) - change to k
03:42:993 (7,8) - Ctrl + G
03:44:025 (18) - change to k

04:00:263 - add d?
If you apply that^ delete 04:00:951 -

04:41:824 (435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453) - same case^
04:32:052 (352) - change to k

05:16:640 - add a spinner? end at 05:17:465 -

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Actually I want to mod some long stream, but I dont know a better pattern for that xD.
Good luck with that :)
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