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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年10月20日 at 21:00:13

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: Sparkling * Traveler
Source: 変態王子と笑わない猫。
Tags: Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko. The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat. PSP C-Territory game 螺旋の果実 rasen no kajitsu opening
BPM: 174
Filesize: 3178kb
Play Time: 01:25
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My Angel Azusa

Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love
Sharlo - Fantastic Future
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ahh nice it's not modding v2
also im first yay
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http://puu.sh/xTMWr/d204c75414.zip you can edit or something if u feel something isn't right on my hitsounds or don't use it if it's rly bad w

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Azusa's Wedding

goodluck uwu
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Is this ending? I think opening. official site of Tamura Yukari / image
Also, This song is included in the "螺旋の果実" album CD. So, It's good to put "螺旋の果実" and "rasen no kajitsu" in the tag. image
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i rly sad azusa shows just a part in the bg woahhhhhhhhhh
i seem hitsound stuffs had gone somewhere far away... oh well...

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  • 01:25:173 (1) - can you imitate the slider a bit more like a cat...? i seem it deforms from cats shape

Azusa



somehow i suck at not only mapping and also modding then i cant totally expect the result of bn exam :cry:
yea i couldnt find any issues since it's rly gud enuf!
Good Luck☆ and hope you have a special day~ (*´ω`*)
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Fixed everything, thanks guys!!!
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16:24 Komore: 00:10:691 (2) - finish of the end sounds really off 
16:25 sahuang: what do you reckon, good if i just remove the finish?
16:25 sahuang: maybe a whistle?
16:25 Komore: keep the whistle i think
16:30 Komore: 00:07:932 (2) - 00:08:277 (4) - 00:08:622 (6) - maybe add whistles for vocals?
16:31 Komore: 00:11:035 (3) - 00:11:380 (5) - or at least here, because it feels kinda empty
16:32 sahuang: yeah
16:34 Komore: 00:20:691 (3,4,5,1) - this is a bit weird, maybe try smth like https://puu.sh/xXV2g/40425fa8a2.png
16:36 sahuang: alright changed to sth similar
16:37 Komore: 00:13:794 (2) - maybe do a smaller spacing here? sound isnt that strong
16:38 sahuang: sure
16:39 Komore: 00:28:277 (1,2,3,4) - ok this is really just personal preference, but i think that something like this https://puu.sh/xXVaS/5394118ba3.png looks better and gives some emphasis on vocals
16:39 Komore: but this is really personal
16:41 sahuang: hmm
16:41 sahuang: its ok
16:41 sahuang: but its hard to fix the rest
16:42 Komore: 00:39:311 (1,2,3,4) - well then u could do smth like a triangle here https://puu.sh/xXVi1/cb1fb0687e.png but its just me xP
16:42 Komore: 00:36:208 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe a curved shape? https://puu.sh/xXVf8/a0a64efeee.png or at least make the spacing here 00:36:208 (1,2) - same
16:43 Komore: 00:44:828 (1) - ,missing a finish
16:44 sahuang: yeah


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00:52:587 (2) - i think it should have some more spacing because sound on is kinda strong and its also the melody you are following. this 00:51:897 (2) - thought just have vocals on it so im pretty sure they should be mapped differenlty
00:58:880 (2,3,1,2,3) - tbh id go for a nc spam since this was really hard to read
01:07:759 (5,6,7,8,1) - a bit nazi, but maybe ull do a right angle here?
01:13:104 (3) - lower the spacing?
01:14:484 (3,4,5) - personally i think something like https://puu.sh/xXWCc/454f4f6afe.png works better with your symmetrical pattern (you could also use grid snap and do smth like https://puu.sh/xXWDE/306e8bd40d.png but i think its yolo xd, so using a little angle is better here)
01:02:759 (1) - whistle on the end
01:05:518 (1) - whistles on repeat and end
01:07:587 (4) - 01:07:242 (2) - 01:07:932 (6) - 01:03:794 (5) - whistles
01:08:449 (2) - whistle on the end
01:10:001 (2) - 01:10:346 (3) - whistle on the head
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Fixed everything else, but 01:14:484 (3,4,5) - is kind of hard to change cuz i need to adjust all future objects zzz

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  • 01:03:277 (3,4) - Should be a 1/1 slider to cover vocal like other sliders you did after.
  • The only major issue here is having too much triplet burst on the diff like 00:22:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - who make the diff super hard. Nerfing them with reverse or the choice you prefer would be nice for the spread.


Azusa's Wedding :


Mukyu~
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00:47:932 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - i dont see blunt angle an issue tbh, its also one challenging part of this map. Spacing is quite low so should be fine.
00:58:622 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - well i dont want to change my snapping because i want to make this map more interesting to play. Would removing NC help? tbh i NC because komore told me its better for readability, now you gave me a completely different view lol

Others all fixed. Metadata is from the above post. Thanks!
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top diff name might just tilt people again like that sample text thing that just got dq'd lol


wedding
00:21:035 (5,1) - when you did these before you continued the movement but here you don't so it felt a bit out of place, wide angle should be nicer
01:08:277 (1,2) - rhythm variation seemed a bit weird here since it puts so much emphasis on the red tick and takes away from guitar. think simply doing https://i.imgur.com/yTiIen6.jpg would be nicer

hard
00:10:863 - finish seems like a mistake considering it's placed on sliderend and you don't have it on top diff
00:12:932 (6) - feels so out of place since song emphasizes the downbeat so much. something like https://i.imgur.com/HVFm73D.jpg could work, or maybe even just a triple
00:42:415 (2,3,4,1) - sudden usage of symmetry seems unfitting since the part doesn't use it anywhere else
00:55:346 - ignores the whole vocal transition, how about https://i.imgur.com/5GAiolH.jpg or https://i.imgur.com/z517hnc.jpg


normal
00:42:587 (2,4) - can you not overlap so much of this? it looks really cluttered and can easily be avoided

easy is fine



should be all
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Fixed all.

Just to say, the origin of top diffname: This is a PSP game of henneko, and if you play the Azuki Azusa character line, you'll eventually have a wedding with her. So this is related to the game content...and since my fav character is Azusa, I just use this ending as top diff name.

It might be a bit 'tricky', I asked about this to okorin and he thought its "not a good idea but still ok since its related to the song/game at least"

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Thank you so much nozhomi and lasse!!
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