This is a BSS beatmap submission. Click here to view full beatmap information.
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
2,834 posts
Offline
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 12 octobre 2017 at 00:52:18

Artist: fhana
Title: Songs Compilation
Tags: what a wonderful world line lantis junichi sato yuxuki waga kevin mitsunaga towana ソライロピクチャー Sorairo Picture little secret magic ケセラセラ Outside of Melancholy 君という特異点 [singular you] Kimi to Iu Tokuiten divine intervention ウィッチクラフトワークス Witch Craft Works opening ending いつかの、いくつかのきみとのせかい Itsuka no, Ikutsuka no Kimi to no Sekai Bokura wa minna kawaisou 僕らはみんな河合荘 marathon
BPM: 182
Filesize: 12372kb
Play Time: 06:17
Difficulties Available:

Download: fhana - Songs Compilation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Image


#45

Credits ♪♫ | Checkout fhána!

► fhána - Facebook Official http://www.facebook.com/fhanamusic/
► fhána_info (@fhana_info) | Twitter https://twitter.com/fhana_info?lang=fr
► towana /とわな (@_towana) | Twitter https://twitter.com/_towana
► fhána | Website http://www.fhana.jp/
► fhána | Lantis http://www.lantis.jp/artist/fhana/
► fhána | Wikipedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fh%C3%A1na


Sotarks' fhána osu! Beatmaps


fhána - Kimi to Iu Tokuiten [singular you]
fhána - What a Wonderful World Line
fhána - little secret magic (edit ver.)
fhána - calling
fhána - The Color to Gray World
fhána - RHAPSODY OF BLUE SKY
fhána - Outside of Melancholy -Yuuutsu no Mukougawa- (edit ver.)
fhána - Genzaichi (edit ver.)
fhána - moon river
fhána - tiny lamp
fhána - Rebuilt world
fhána - Niji o Ametara
fhána - Hello!MyWorld!! (TV size)
fhána - Hello!MyWorld!!(edit ver.)
fhána - Comet Lucifer ~The Seed and the Sower~ (edit ver.)
fhána - Cosmos no Youni (edit ver.)
fhána - Wonder Stella
fhána - Songs Compilation (edit ver.)

*edit ver. = songs that i edit personnaly because some songs are somehow repetitive.
Last edited by Sotarks on , edited 12 times in total.
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
1,903 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.

mod
  • 00:19:761 (1,2,3) - Je pense qu'ici, ça aurait été mieux de faire l'inverse en termes de spacing, vu que dans la musique tu entends clairement que le son va en crescendo. Donc techniquement, le dernier son devrait être plus espacé qu'avant, et aussi, tu as mis un son de (je sais plus le mot mais tu vois ce que je veux dire) qui est assez puissant, donc ça serait plus logique de l'espacer plus que tu l'as fais maintenant.
  • 00:55:695 (2,3,4) - Je suis pas trop fan du flow de ce pattern, peut-être qu'un truc dans ce genre la fonctionnerait mieux https://puu.sh/xMyc3/0ea4ba72aa.png et ça donnerait un meilleur flow.
  • 01:17:783 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Comparé a l'intensité de la musique, le spacing ici est vachement élevé, surtout vers la fin, faudrait peut-être réduire un petit peu, pour pas que la partie d'aprés 01:19:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - paraissent plus facile alors qu'elle est plus intense.
  • 02:35:975 (8) - Ca n'aurait pas été mieux de stack ce cercle sur le début de ce slider: 02:36:281 (1) - ?
  • 03:36:059 (3,4,5) - Je sais pas si c'est voulu l'effet de spacing? Ca fait bizarre je trouve. Essaie de fix ça si jamais c'est pas voulu :(
  • 05:06:132 (2,1) - Le spacing ici, il est pas assez élevé comparé aux autres strong beat, ou la tu as mis le paquet sur le spacing. Espace le un peu plus, et ce sera bon
  • Tu feras gaffe aussi dans la SB, le titre de la musique: Sorairo Picture, n'est pas aligné avec les autres noms de musiques. Et aussi, ça aurait été chouette que tu change de BG sur chaque musique, pour que ça rajoute un peu plus de diversité.
  • Fix les blankets aussi. jkjkjkjkjkjk prank

pas mal pas mal les 2 dans les settings xD
Image

gl hf ez
Last edited by Pachiru on , edited 2 times in total.
User avatar
Combo Commander
353 posts
Offline
No kudosu yet.
sounds like something sotarks would map!

Melancholy
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
946 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
ultimate melancholy
00:11:519 (6,7) - not enough emphasized imo, try to reduce 00:11:684 (7,8) - instead a bit as u did on 00:12:673 (10,11,12,1) -
02:31:996 (3) - why not nc here as u did 02:31:536 (1) - for vocals emphasize
02:50:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same here better to keep ur nc pattern on 02:31:077 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
03:17:202 (5,6) - maybe add whistle sounds?
03:36:059 (3,4,5) - linear flow feels a bit awkward imo
05:40:638 (2,3,4,1) - aaaa, i think following this bell sound at 05:41:490 (1) - will make the player confused since you didnt map them at 05:40:638 (2,3,4) -. so i think it would be better if you could rather map them at 05:40:638 (2,3,4) -


how to mod
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
1,672 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
Image
song search : ultimate sotarks xdxd


Ultimate Reverberant Gonkanau
unused file : sb/blank2
00:28:580 (9) - i hope you can move right a bit
01:02:948 (11,12) - http://puu.sh/xMAD2/e148a725a6.jpg can adjust this?
01:39:706 (9,11) - ^
02:36:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - i think it's sudden difficulty spike nerf like before kudasai
03:36:059 (3,4,5) - i want same DS here
05:10:188 (1) - volume set fix it or DQ
05:21:758 (3,4,5) - this pattern use gives emphasis on 05:22:014 (4,5) - , quite uncomfortable with 1/1 beatsound. at least delete kick slider pls
04:58:632 (4,5,6) - need to adjust DS of this triplet


good luck!
User avatar
Spinner Sage
147 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
  • 00:27:014 (4) - i'd rather place it closer to the sliderend, like here 00:36:574 (8,1) - . Looks cleaner.
  • 00:54:624 (9,10) - equal spacing broke.
  • 01:19:596 (2,3,4) - circles dont go in a very smooth curve with a slider
  • 01:21:739 (1) - cute series of jumps right here ! feels nice
  • 02:34:904 (1) - i think it represents the sound better if the slider is 3/4. But then drum on white tick is ignored... You decide.
  • 03:00:006 (1) - try moving it closer to the next slider, it will have a better effect imo. In general about this part (03:00:006 (1) - to 03:02:920 (1) - ) in my opinion its too short to add because it doesnt show its potential at all in such small period of time.
  • 04:58:632 (4,5,6) - spacing again
  • 05:08:859 (2) - this circle is a bit too late, by ~7-8ms, and the next circle as well, so fixing this timing point will fix them both
And thats all i guess. I didnt write things that i wasnt sure, plus to that i later found out they are fine. Nice jump movement on the last song.
Good luck!

EDIT
oooo while i was writing it, you recieved few mods too so some of my points may be not relevant anymore
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
1,288 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
Mod~

gl!~
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
1,666 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
yes
22:44 Sotarks: gratz on bn
22:45 Kalibe: thank
22:45 Sotarks: test
22:45 Sotarks: pls
22:50 Kalibe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9212765
22:50 Kalibe: ez relax
22:50 Sotarks: gg
22:50 Kalibe: ok but i'll play on relax
22:50 Sotarks: why relax
22:50 Sotarks: ah
22:50 Sotarks: why relax tho
22:50 Kalibe: kinda tired
22:50 *Sotarks is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1428543 fhana - Songs Compilation]
22:51 Kalibe: and can't really click atm xd
22:51 Sotarks: tmr then np
22:51 Sotarks: xD
22:51 Kalibe: nah
22:51 Kalibe: i prefer relax tho
22:51 Kalibe: fuck rank
22:51 Kalibe: oh my gosh
22:51 Sotarks: wat
22:51 Kalibe: ultimate melancholy
22:52 Sotarks: u l t i m a t e
22:52 *Kalibe is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1428543 fhana - Songs Compilation [Ultimate Melancholy]] ~Relax~
22:53 Sotarks: zzz
22:53 Sotarks: Relax
22:53 Sotarks: i don't need relax testplays
22:54 Kalibe: then imagine im clicking the circles
22:54 Sotarks: l o l
22:54 Sotarks: like relax is just testing flow
22:59 Kalibe: hmm
22:59 Kalibe: ar 9 is killer dud
22:59 Sotarks: hmmm
22:59 Sotarks: i forgot to change
22:59 Kalibe: 05:20:404 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
22:59 Sotarks: settings
22:59 Kalibe: k i l l e r
22:59 Kalibe: ok
22:59 Kalibe: 05:08:670 (1,2,1) -
22:59 Kalibe: what is this flow
22:59 Kalibe: UR NOT XEXXAR
23:00 Sotarks: yeah
23:01 Sotarks: i failed
23:01 Sotarks: that pattern
23:01 Sotarks: 05:08:518 (3,1) -
23:01 Sotarks: to be stacked
23:01 Sotarks: this is not supposed
23:01 Sotarks: 05:08:859 (2) - and this is out of place
23:01 Sotarks: xD
23:01 Kalibe: YEAH
23:01 Kalibe: xdd
23:01 Kalibe: sorairo picture is pretty neat
23:02 Sotarks: neat
23:03 Kalibe: 03:36:402 (5) - what are u following
23:03 Kalibe: ??
23:03 Sotarks: idk
23:03 Sotarks: will fix
23:03 Kalibe: 03:36:059 (3,4) - and spacing ??
23:05 Kalibe: rest is fine i guess
23:05 Sotarks: drunk
23:05 Sotarks: fixed
23:05 Sotarks: post
23:05 Sotarks: need sp
23:05 Sotarks: xD
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
2,834 posts
Offline
thx guys for mod fixed some stuff!!
sry don't have time to reply to mods propelly, i'm really busy irl atm... zzz if anyone of u has concern about some stuff pls pm me ;)
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
1,518 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
a
17:13 Sotarks: apl
17:13 Sotarks: can u mod my original map
17:14 Sotarks: or just irc mod (i prefer)
17:14 appleeaterx: what map
17:14 *Sotarks is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1428543 fhana - Songs Compilation]
17:21 appleeaterx: wow i really suck at this game
17:21 appleeaterx: sorry for the bad play, havent really been active lately
17:21 Sotarks: i see that
17:22 Sotarks: npnp
17:22 Sotarks: i suck too
17:22 appleeaterx: 6 min is pretty short for a songs compilation tho? hmm
17:22 Sotarks: i'll make 3
17:22 Sotarks: it's a project of 3 compilation
17:22 appleeaterx: also the cut on little secret magic is poorly done..
17:22 Sotarks: :(
17:22 appleeaterx: that fade out is really sudden right in the middle of a measure
17:23 appleeaterx: that SAO font in sb tho
17:23 Sotarks: wat
17:24 appleeaterx: http://puu.sh/xNq6l/ef7dd73429.jpg isnt this the sao font
17:24 appleeaterx: 00:59:981 (9,10,11) - really cramped for intense part, might wanna change that
17:25 Sotarks: idk
17:25 Sotarks: it's a font i found on dafont
17:26 appleeaterx: 01:47:041 (3,4) - the highest 1/4 spacing (to a note) in this entire map. i dont think this part is that significantly different from the rest. would reduce spacing
17:26 Sotarks: yeah will fix
17:26 appleeaterx: 02:11:179 (11) - since these have snares idk maybe you can make this one a different rhythm
17:26 Sotarks: fix
17:28 appleeaterx: 02:50:363 (1,2,3,4,1) - low spacing was pretty noticeable in-game. idk i think the spacing you used in other streams was higher (?) up to you tho
17:28 appleeaterx: bc it could go well for contrast
17:29 appleeaterx: aside from the bad cut i really like how little secret magic was done
17:31 appleeaterx: 05:20:916 (1,2,3,4) - no
17:31 Sotarks: o thx
17:31 Sotarks: i knew that
17:32 Sotarks: pl
17:32 Sotarks: ok
17:32 Sotarks: fix
17:32 appleeaterx: 05:46:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i like the buildup, but they way these are positioned make it so that (3,4,5,6) have pretty low spacing
17:32 appleeaterx: if you consider how high your spacing is most of the times
17:33 Sotarks: yeah
17:33 Sotarks: hmm
17:33 Sotarks: it was bigger before
17:33 Sotarks: but i nerfed
17:35 appleeaterx: compared to stuff like 03:51:145 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it just feels super easy lol
17:36 appleeaterx: those were the main points that were bugging me tbh
17:36 appleeaterx: rest seems fine
17:36 appleeaterx: 04:08:825 (6) - finally something harder that umi's map for this song lol
17:37 Sotarks: yeah
17:37 Sotarks: that's why i did that
17:37 Sotarks: so good rhythms
17:37 Sotarks: this song
17:37 Sotarks: i wanted to make a set
17:37 Sotarks: of this
17:37 appleeaterx: i love the piano part at 04:39:279 (1) -
17:37 appleeaterx: the anime was kinda boring tho
17:38 appleeaterx: anyways, good luck!
User avatar
Combo Commander
360 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
as requested
  • I heavily suggest moving the song names from SB at break times because the rare players that won’t just dim it away won’t be paying attention to it because they’re focused on the map itself

  • 01:38:717 (5,6) - should be an acute angle to be consistent with other iterations of this rhythm is sections of similar intensity ( ie 01:01:629 (5,6,7) )

  • 01:53:470 (1) - maybe silence that spinner ? since it represents a sound that’s fading out even 5% seems out of place

  • 02:04:751 (3,4,5) - stacking ruined the blanket rip

  • 02:11:179 (11) - this is sooo underwhelming, given the hitsounding I’m assuming you’re interpreting this part as being more intense than the rest of the measure so putting a 5 note stream would be more fitting imo

  • 05:29:407 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like this could use a bit more variation given it’s mostly filler rhythm ; a series of jumps here feels kind of gold dust-like, if that makes sense

  • 06:10:884 (1) - cmon bruh where the sliderart


please don’t kd until you answer thxdad
User avatar
Spinner Sage
122 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
IRC mod :D

lemod
19:17 *Sotarks is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1428543 fhana - Songs Compilation [Ultimate Melancholy]]
19:19 Xenok: 00:26:849 (3) - overmapped sliderhead?
19:19 Xenok: j'aurais plutôt fait une double
19:19 Sotarks: ouai j'sais
19:19 Sotarks: mais j'aime pas les double aaa
19:20 Xenok: :c
19:21 Xenok: 01:18:772 (10) - j'laurais plutôt vu ici vu le flow: https://i.imgur.com/2Tsx0i3.png
19:21 Xenok: 01:19:102 (1) - en changeant celui-la par la suite bien évidemment
19:22 Sotarks: hmm ouai
19:22 Sotarks: mais j'voulais un changement de flow 01:18:442 (8,9) - ici
19:22 Sotarks: donc j'verrais
19:22 Xenok: ok c:
19:23 Xenok: 02:18:220 (1,2,3) - très swag
19:23 Sotarks: thx
19:24 Xenok: 03:17:030 (4) - vraiment minime mais il faudrait pas qu'il soit un poil plus haut?
19:25 Sotarks: okk
19:28 Xenok: bon bah rien d'autre à dire, y'a pas mal d'endroits qui sont vachement stylés, surtout juste avant les kiais :D
19:28 Xenok: gl pour la map!
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
2,834 posts
Offline
thx ayano, fixed some stuff, i'll just don't fix sb and i need slider art yeaaa
updated
User avatar
Star Shooter
252 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
I R C
Code:
2017-10-01 19:16 Sotarks: tveux pas m'faire un irc
2017-10-01 19:16 Sotarks: vite fait
2017-10-01 19:16 Sharu: envoi
2017-10-01 19:16 Sharu: map
2017-10-01 19:17 Sotarks: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1428543 fhana - Songs Compilation]
2017-10-01 19:21 Sharu: 02:35:975 (4,1) - le spacing peut porter à confusion je pense
2017-10-01 19:22 Sharu: 02:35:516 (1,4,1) - ptetre faire un triple avec ça
2017-10-01 19:22 Sotarks: spacing c'fait expres
2017-10-01 19:23 Sotarks: j'vais voir
2017-10-01 19:24 Sharu: https://puu.sh/xNuTS/549311fe5e.jpg c cool comme ça je trouve
2017-10-01 19:24 Sotarks: ouai
2017-10-01 19:24 Sotarks: javou
2017-10-01 19:25 Sotarks: fix
2017-10-01 19:25 Sharu: 03:16:687 (2,3,4) - flow pa ouf
2017-10-01 19:26 Sotarks: linear
2017-10-01 19:26 Sotarks: :(:
2017-10-01 19:28 Sharu: 03:56:630 (2,3,4,5,6) - tu trouves pas que ça serait plus cool et plus facile comme ça ?https://puu.sh/xNv4D/e5a34df363.jpg
2017-10-01 19:29 Sotarks: ouai
2017-10-01 19:29 Sharu: 04:41:400 (9,10) - stack ça ?
2017-10-01 19:29 Sharu: 04:46:249 (10,11) - 
2017-10-01 19:29 Sharu: ché pa
2017-10-01 19:30 Sotarks: nahhh
2017-10-01 19:30 Sotarks: :/
2017-10-01 19:30 Sharu: c cool comme ça aussi
2017-10-01 19:31 Sharu: 05:52:876 (3) - c bizar les reverse qui finissent sur tic bleu tic bleu
2017-10-01 19:31 Sharu: c pas intuitif
2017-10-01 19:32 Sharu: quoi que
2017-10-01 19:32 Sharu: ché pas
2017-10-01 19:33 Sotarks: bah nan?
2017-10-01 19:36 Sharu: 03:34:687 (2,3,4) - c chelou un peu
2017-10-01 19:37 Sharu: met le stack plus en face du slider
2017-10-01 19:37 Sotarks: okok
2017-10-01 19:39 Sharu: c tout ce que j'ai à dire
2017-10-01 19:39 Sharu: c cool
2017-10-01 19:41 Sharu: tu veux que je post sur le thread?
2017-10-01 19:47 Sotarks: ouai
2017-10-01 19:47 Sotarks: stp
2017-10-01 19:47 Sotarks: thx
User avatar
Rhythm Incarnate
912 posts
Offline
Earned 1 kudosu.
ok mod



idk your aesthetics are becoming worse and worse :c
This is a BSS beatmap submission. Click here to view full beatmap information.
Reply 25 posts jump | 1, 2  next

Users browsing this forum: None


Jump to: