1. Anxiety (3,53 stars, 503 notes)
2. Rumination (2,1 stars, 266 notes)

PeterEU wrote:

Lune Normal

00:00:312 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing of these slider with reverse arrow is weird sometimes its too big and too small also shapes feel random
01:05:978 (4) - fix blanket
01:42:645 (2,3,4) - spacing of these looks weird + i would change look of 01:43:645 (4)
When Kiai starts lot of overlapping happening i would consider changing that
01:52:978 (2) - sharp is weird would make http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9207988
02:03:645 (2) - ^
Yeaah, you've made it clear for me, I'll take this diff down, otherwise I'll spend more time remapping it.

Normal

00:56:312 (2) - weird shape i think you meant that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9208009 - yep
00:57:645 (4) - fix blanket - I didn't mean to make it a blanket, but why not ~

Anxiety

01:47:478 (2,3) - too close - Not a problem

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  AR6 and OD6 is too high for a Normal, consider lowering it to something like AR4, OD4.5
  
  AR8.6 and OD8 is way to high for a Hard, consider lowering to AR7, OD6.5 or something like that.
  
  The diff names seem pretty random, Insomnia to Anxiety doesn't quite make sense. Unless it's from the source or something consider changing.
  
  You have two images in your Song Folder although you only use one, remove the one you aren't using

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  You should always use Distance Snap on a Normal.
  
  Why do you stop using long sliders at 00:17:645 (1) - even though it's the same sound.
  
  00:21:645 (1,2) - Incorrect blanket.
  
  00:28:312 (4,1) - Incorrect blanket.
  
  00:30:978 (4) - This slider really doesn't look good, you can make it smoother without an image.
  
  00:31:978 (1,2,3) - You shouldn't use triple stacks on a Normal.
  
  00:34:978 (3) - This slider doesn't look good, and I don't see a reason to always mention them so just go through the map and fix them.
  
  00:38:645 (3) - Way to hard to read for a Normal, don't stack it on the previous object.
  
  I think I will stop now as you don't use ds for this diff so spacing is random. Also fix blanket throughout the map and sliders.

Waku wrote:

General

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  AR6 and OD6 is too high for a Normal, consider lowering it to something like AR4, OD4.5 - I don't really wanna, but if anyone else will point it out I'll do it
  
  AR8.6 and OD8 is way to high for a Hard, consider lowering to AR7, OD6.5 or something like that. - I probably won't lower the AR , but I'll surely lower the OD
  
  The diff names seem pretty random, Insomnia to Anxiety doesn't quite make sense. Unless it's from the source or something consider changing.- I might rename "Insomnia" diff if I will come up with something more fitting. As for the "Anxiety" the whole song is sort of based around it, so I see no reason to rename it
  
  You have two images in your Song Folder although you only use one, remove the one you aren't using

- I didn't even noticed it, thanks for pointing out.

Insomnia

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  You should always use Distance Snap on a Normal. - Why ?
  
  Why do you stop using long sliders at 00:17:645 (1) - even though it's the same sound. - Yeah, the sound is the same, but I wanted to distinguish(can I even use that word here?) where the map actually begins. (I'm dumb, sry TwT)
  
  00:21:645 (1,2) - Incorrect blanket. - fixed
  
  00:28:312 (4,1) - Incorrect blanket. - fixed
  
  00:30:978 (4) - This slider really doesn't look good, you can make it smoother without an image. - I've changed it a bit
  
  00:31:978 (1,2,3) - You shouldn't use triple stacks on a Normal. - Maybe, maybe not ~
  
  00:34:978 (3) - This slider doesn't look good, and I don't see a reason to always mention them so just go through the map and fix them. - I'll ty to find some of this and fix them
  
  00:38:645 (3) - Way to hard to read for a Normal, don't stack it on the previous object. - As long as the AR is 6 and you're not blind you can read it. I don't really know why mappers treat begginers like a retard that can only play linear flow.
  
  I think I will stop now as you don't use ds for this diff so spacing is random. Also fix blanket throughout the map and sliders.

I won't do the Hard.. spacing is random in both diffs and you I feel you just map the way you feel and don't consider that it's a certain diff, like some jumps in the Anxiety diff make no sense. Good luck.

yep, I rarely give a f*** about what diff I'm making as long as it expresses the song

suryae wrote:

hello there

add to metadata

-add ''アサヒ'' and ''Asahi'', he's the arranger
-add ''夕月椿'' and ''Tsubaki''
-add Halozy ( It's already in the title, why do I have to put it in tags ? )
-add ambient electronica experimental, those are this music's genre
-add ''犬猫的電子座曲'' and ''Dog and Cat-Like Electronic Song Compilation'', it's the album the song came from - (I've actually put it as a source)
-add ''砕月'' and ''Broken Moon'', it's the original song by ZUN
-add ''Touhou'' and ''東方''

Thanks for that ~

Anxiety

-this map has some large jumps. instead of making this map a hard diff, consider making this one insane or lunatic diff
-I recommend checking out this map for reference https://osu.ppy.sh/s/221954 it's a debatably pp farming map, but it's a good slow jump map. or this one that is not a jump map, but suits well to this kind of music, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/557231
- 00:25:645 this slider miss a beat in the middle. I suggest increasing the slider tick rate
- 00:28:145 there is no sound here, remove the circle
- 00:32:812 add a circle here
- 00:42:978 this slider miss a beat in the middle
- 00:44:312 also miss a beat
- 00:48:312 also miss a beat
- 00:49:645 also miss a beat
- 00:57:645 also miss a beat
- 01:04:312 starting to this point onward, this beatmap is good
- 01:22:978 though this slider miss a beat in the middle and I don't want to point out which one misses a beat, instead I recommend try to not ignore the guitar
- 01:51:312 but don't change this slider
- 02:00:978 owo growing sliders
- 02:45:645 this slider and the following 3 sliders except for the short one miss a beat, but it's not a problem this time
- overall this map has a lot of potentials. good job

Rumination

- change all slider velocity changes to 1.00. noobs can't handle those SV changes xd
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LEBlmgfQfC0 this video explains well how to map a normal diff
- this map is not yet suitable for beginners, don't be so harsh on them

about the gd that I promise, there is a lot of stuff going on, and I also have to remap the diff, sorry if the map is coming out late. but, i have some ideas on the map, such as using cs 2, so be patient please