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Yusomi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 04 April 2018 at 19:44:41

Artist: Hai Nan
Title: Ai La La
BPM: 120
Filesize: 5378kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Expert (4.59 stars, 575 notes)
  2. Hard (2.97 stars, 381 notes)
  3. Insane (3.66 stars, 492 notes)
  4. Normal (1.97 stars, 262 notes)
Download: Hai Nan - Ai La La
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For 1st rank

When I was new to this game i enjoyed playing moonlightleaf's map, the hard diff was my favourite beatmap back then. So i hope one day someone enjoys this map as much as i enjoyed that one :)

thank you !
Winfall
melloe
moonlightleaf
TT Mouse
Suzuki_1112
Shifu Touka
Senery
Kyousukee
Taoshi
Congrats your map got chosen for my "modding random maps i see"
First of all
Great song! :)
Your map does have potential, so i could only find very minor things that were a bit off to me.
Good luck. :)
[Normal]
00:02:976 (1) - consider flipping this slider so it looks like this
01:46:976 (1) - dosent flow with well
[Hard]
1/12 WOAH :o
[Insane]
01:49:476 (2) - blanket?
[Colby]
01:20:976 (1,2) - blanket?
Topic Starter
Yusomi

Taoshi wrote:

Congrats your map got chosen for my "modding random maps i see"
First of all
Great song! :)
Your map does have potential, so i could only find very minor things that were a bit off to me.
Good luck. :)
[Normal]
00:02:976 (1) - consider flipping this slider so it looks like this fixed
01:46:976 (1) - dosent flow with well fixed
[Hard]
1/12 WOAH :o huh? i don't think anything except preview point is snapped to 1/12
[Insane]
01:49:476 (2) - blanket? i like it more without blanket
[Colby]
01:20:976 (1,2) - blanket?fixed
Thank you for modding ! :)
Bibbity Bill
here's a mod

[Normal]
00:03:976 (3) - why not flip this vertically it looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9142884
00:06:976 (1,2,3) - why not try to make this a better triangle pattern since right now it looks ugly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9142899
00:12:976 (1,2) - 2 doesnt look like its in an exact straight line but maybe i'm just blind
00:13:976 (3,4) - same as above
00:14:976 - nc this since i feel it looks better
00:15:976 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - imo i think this looks ugly i would personally try to reorganize the shapes in a way like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9142950
00:18:976 (1,2,3,4) - these 2 top ones are really ugly imo i would try to shape them like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9142988
00:24:976 (1) - why not try to make the first half of the curve on this slider more pronouced it's gamebreaking and unrankable plz fix https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143021
00:26:476 (2) - 00:26:476 (2) - try to blanket more with the curve on 1 and 3 lol its seriously triggering
00:26:976 (3) - same as earlier make the curve more prounced on that 1 side
00:34:976 - same as above nc this
00:44:976 (1) - move the red anchor a bit so its more symmeterical aaa https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143081
00:46:976 (3) - same as above
00:47:976 (5) - move this over a bit so you can make 1 a straight line https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143093
00:55:476 - same as above nc this
00:56:976 (1) - line up the approach circles here so you can make a triangle of some sorts https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143099
01:06:976 - same as above nc this
01:10:976 - same as above nc this
01:12:976 (1,2) - make this a better straight line to 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143161
01:16:976 (1) - same as earlier aa uneven sliders trigger
01:22:976 - same as above nc this
01:26:976 - same as above nc this
01:34:976 (1) - this slider looks really ugly i would try to use one a slider like 01:16:976 (1) -
01:53:976 (3,4) - why not curve these 2 a bit more they look better to me atleast https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143257
01:58:476 - same as above nc this
02:02:976 - same as above nc this
02:05:726 (2) - same as earlier i dont think thats in a perfect straight line
02:06:976 - same as above nc this
02:08:976 (1) - same as above uneven aaa
02:10:976 (3) - same as above
02:26:976 - same as above nc this
02:27:476 (6) - incorrect spacing
02:27:976 (7,8,1,2) - i would rework the pattern to make 7 a parallel and 8 a more curvy one and then mimic it with 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143303 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143318
02:30:976 - same as above nc this
02:31:476 (6,7) - i would add a small curve here since it looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143336
02:32:976 (1,3) - why not just use standard curves here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143349
02:46:976 - same as above nc this

[Hard]

i would increase hp to 5 it seems just so low

IMO i would make the first 16 seconds all .9 spacing instead of .95

00:04:976 (1) - .96 spacing pls move slightly
00:07:976 (4,1) - same here needs fixed spacing
00:10:476 (4) - fix spacing
00:17:976 (3) - maybe try blanketing with 1 better
00:18:476 (4) - slightly inconsistant spacing
00:22:976 - forgot nc?
00:27:476 (2) - fix spacing
00:48:976 (1) - inconsistant spacing
00:50:476 (4) - same as above
00:54:976 (5) - slightly off spacing
00:50:976 - forgot nc?
00:54:976 - move the nc here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9144231
01:07:726 (3) - inconsistant spacing
01:08:726 (2) - inconsistant spacing
01:11:476 (2) - inconsistant spacing
01:14:976 - forgot nc?
01:15:476 (6) - inconsistant spacing
01:15:976 (1,2) - inconsistant spacing
01:23:476 (2) - inconsistant spacing
01:25:476 (2) - inconsistant spacing
01:27:726 (3) - inconsistant spacing
01:31:476 (2) - inconsistant spacing
01:34:476 (5) - again inconsistant spacing
01:35:726 (2) - inconsistant spacing
01:37:976 (2) - inconsistant spacing
01:38:476 (3) - inconsistant spacing
01:38:976 - forgot nc?
01:39:476 (5) - ^
01:39:976 (6) - ^
01:42:476 (3) - ^
01:42:976 - forgot nc?
01:43:476 (5) - ^
01:45:476 (2) - why did you all of a sudden go .8 here make it .9
01:46:476 (4) - inconsistant spacing
01:47:476 (2) - ^
01:48:726 (2) - ^
01:48:976 (1) - ^
01:49:976 (3) - ^
01:51:476 (2) - ^
01:51:976 (3) - ^
01:53:476 (2) - ^
01:54:476 (7) - ^
01:54:976 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:57:476 (3) - ^
01:59:976 (4) - ^
02:03:476 (3) - inconsistant spacing
02:07:476 (3) - ^
02:07:976 (1) - ^
02:11:476 (2) - ^
02:12:976 (1) - ^
02:14:476 (5) - ^
02:16:226 (4,5,6,7,1) - why not make this a perfect triangle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143709
02:25:976 (3) - inconsistant spacing
02:26:976 - forgot nc?
02:31:976 (3) - inconsistant spacing
02:34:976 - forgot nc?
02:35:976 (8) - inconsistant spacing
02:36:476 (9) - bad overlap and and inconsistant spacing
02:38:976 (1) - inconsistant spacing
02:40:726 (6) - why not make this a perfect triangle
02:42:976 - forgot nc?
02:46:976 - forgot nc?

[Insane]

i would raise the hp to like 6 since it seems a bit low

00:09:851 (3,4) - not the same spacing as 00:03:851 -
00:26:976 - forgot nc?
00:42:976 - forgot nc?
00:52:226 (4) - why not have this larger spacing similar to 00:51:476 (1,2) -
01:38:976 - forgot nc?
01:42:976 - forgot nc?
01:52:226 - unneeded nc?
01:53:726 (5) - why not center this a bit more with 6
02:18:976 - forgot nc?
02:22:976 - forgot nc?
02:23:976 - unneeded nc?
02:33:976 - nc here
02:34:976 - and here
02:35:976 - and here instead so it would look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9144214
02:39:976 - move the nc here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9144222
02:41:851 (3,4) - inconsistant spacing again same as above
02:45:851 (3,4) - why not have this pointing inwards it looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143875
02:47:851 (3,4) - same as above inconsistant spacing
02:48:226 - unneeded nc?

[Colby]

why not make it cs 4 so its not a big star and a quarter gap in the spread
raise the hp to like 6 it's waaay too low
maybe make it od 8 also to mimic the insane

00:08:476 - i would have all 3 of these as the same nc so it looks like they are a part of the same pattern
00:32:476 - ^
00:48:476 - ^
00:52:476 - i feel this has too many finishes
00:56:476 - same as above make them all the same nc
01:20:476 - ^
01:36:476 - ^
01:52:476 - ^
02:16:476 - ^
02:28:476 - same as earlier i feel you went overboard on the finishes
02:32:476 - same as earlier all the same nc
02:36:476 - overboard on finishes
002:40:226 (1,2,1) - unneeded ncs?
01:47:476 - ^
Topic Starter
Yusomi

Bibbity Bill wrote:

here's a mod

[Normal]
00:03:976 (3) - why not flip this vertically it looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9142884 fixed
00:06:976 (1,2,3) - why not try to make this a better triangle pattern since right now it looks ugly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9142899 changed the next object instead, i like this 108 degree triangle with a gap at the top
00:12:976 (1,2) - 2 doesnt look like its in an exact straight line but maybe i'm just blind its probly not, but doesn't make a difference
00:13:976 (3,4) - same as above ^
00:14:976 - nc this since i feel it looks better fixed
00:15:976 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - imo i think this looks ugly i would personally try to reorganize the shapes in a way like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9142950 nah its ok
00:18:976 (1,2,3,4) - these 2 top ones are really ugly imo i would try to shape them like https:/osu.ppy.sh/ss/9142988 changed
00:24:976 (1) - why not try to make the first half of the curve on this slider more pronouced it's gamebreaking and unrankable plz fix https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143021 no haha
00:26:476 (2) - 00:26:476 (2) - try to blanket more with the curve on 1 and 3 lol its seriously triggeringnah
00:26:976 (3) - same as earlier make the curve more prounced on that 1 side
00:34:976 - same as above nc this ^
00:44:976 (1) - move the red anchor a bit so its more symmeterical aaa https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143081 nah that's gross
00:46:976 (3) - same as above ^
00:47:976 (5) - move this over a bit so you can make 1 a straight line https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143093 nah
00:55:476 - same as above nc this done
00:56:976 (1) - line up the approach circles here so you can make a triangle of some sorts https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143099 woops fixed
01:06:976 - same as above nc this done
01:10:976 - same as above nc this done
01:12:976 (1,2) - make this a better straight line to 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143161
01:16:976 (1) - same as earlier aa uneven sliders trigger i like it
01:22:976 - same as above nc this done
01:26:976 - same as above nc this done
01:34:976 (1) - this slider looks really ugly i would try to use one a slider like 01:16:976 (1) - i like it
01:53:976 (3,4) - why not curve these 2 a bit more they look better to me atleast https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143257 nah i like them how they are
01:58:476 - same as above nc this nah it disrupts the pattern
02:02:976 - same as above nc this done
02:05:726 (2) - same as earlier i dont think thats in a perfect straight line its close enough for me
02:06:976 - same as above nc this done
02:08:976 (1) - same as above uneven aaa these sliders are sick w
02:10:976 (3) - same as above ^
02:26:976 - same as above nc this hmmm kinda disrupts the pattern, but changed anyways
02:27:476 (6) - incorrect spacing oops fixed
02:27:976 (7,8,1,2) - i would rework the pattern to make 7 a parallel and 8 a more curvy one and then mimic it with 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143303 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143318 changed a little
02:30:976 - same as above nc this done
02:31:476 (6,7) - i would add a small curve here since it looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143336 nah
02:32:976 (1,3) - why not just use standard curves here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143349 these are cool
02:46:976 - same as above nc this done

[Hard]

i would increase hp to 5 it seems just so low i plan on leaving the Extra diff on hp4 so a Hard diff with higher hp than the Extra would be too weird

IMO i would make the first 16 seconds all .9 spacing instead of .95 this section has 1.0xSV so it has higher distance snap to compensate

00:04:976 (1) - .96 spacing pls move slightly a margin of error of 0.01 is surely acceptable
00:07:976 (4,1) - same here needs fixed spacing ^
00:10:476 (4) - fix spacing i prefer to keep pattern
00:17:976 (3) - maybe try blanketing with 1 better nah blanket isnt very necessary
00:18:476 (4) - slightly inconsistant spacing fixed
00:22:976 - forgot nc? nah
00:27:476 (2) - fix spacing there's nothing wrong with it?
00:48:976 (1) - inconsistant spacing fixed
00:50:476 (4) - same as above^
00:54:976 (5) - slightly off spacing fixed
00:50:976 - forgot nc? nah prefer keeping whole pattern 1 combo
00:54:976 - move the nc here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9144231 fixed
01:07:726 (3) - inconsistant spacing its fine
01:08:726 (2) - inconsistant spacing changed
01:11:476 (2) - inconsistant spacingits fine
01:14:976 - forgot nc? fixed
01:15:476 (6) - inconsistant spacing it's fine
01:15:976 (1,2) - inconsistant spacing ^
01:23:476 (2) - inconsistant spacing ^
01:25:476 (2) - inconsistant spacing fixed
01:27:726 (3) - inconsistant spacing its fine
01:31:476 (2) - inconsistant spacing these are all around 0.75 spacing
01:34:476 (5) - again inconsistant spacing ^
01:35:726 (2) - inconsistant spacing these are always placed in the blanket of the faster slider
01:37:976 (2) - inconsistant spacing slower section, different spacings here
01:38:476 (3) - inconsistant spacing ^
01:38:976 - forgot nc? nope
01:39:476 (5) - ^ ^
01:39:976 (6) - ^^
01:42:476 (3) - ^^
01:42:976 - forgot nc?^
01:43:476 (5) - ^^
01:45:476 (2) - why did you all of a sudden go .8 here make it .9 no vocals, lower spacing
01:46:476 (4) - inconsistant spacing spacing matches music, not an arbitrary number in editor
01:47:476 (2) - ^changed
01:48:726 (2) - ^its fine
01:48:976 (1) - ^its fine
01:49:976 (3) - ^its fine
01:51:476 (2) - ^its fine
01:51:976 (3) - ^its fine
01:53:476 (2) - ^its fine
01:54:476 (7) - ^its fine
01:54:976 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:57:476 (3) - ^
01:59:976 (4) - ^
02:03:476 (3) - inconsistant spacing 0.75 as always. which is similar to 0.9 in the other sections btw since its higher sv
02:07:476 (3) - ^
02:07:976 (1) - ^
02:11:476 (2) - ^
02:12:976 (1) - ^
02:14:476 (5) - ^
02:16:226 (4,5,6,7,1) - why not make this a perfect triangle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143709 they already are?
02:25:976 (3) - inconsistant spacing changed
02:26:976 - forgot nc? nope
02:31:976 (3) - inconsistant spacing its fine
02:34:976 - forgot nc? fixed
02:35:976 (8) - inconsistant spacing its fine
02:36:476 (9) - bad overlap and and inconsistant spacing fixed spacing not overlap
02:38:976 (1) - inconsistant spacing fixed
02:40:726 (6) - why not make this a perfect triangle done
02:42:976 - forgot nc? its fine
02:46:976 - forgot nc? its fine

[Insane]

i would raise the hp to like 6 since it seems a bit low ok

00:09:851 (3,4) - not the same spacing as 00:03:851 - changed a bit
00:26:976 - forgot nc? changed
00:42:976 - forgot nc? changed
00:52:226 (4) - why not have this larger spacing similar to 00:51:476 (1,2) - it follows the pattern, 2 big spacing 2 stacked note. but for the last pattern these notes are slightly spaced. I think it matches the music very nicely
01:38:976 - forgot nc? i dont like ncing the middle of a pattern like this, especially when the music doesn't demnd it. but i hate long double digit combo numbers more.. so fixed
01:42:976 - forgot nc? fixed
01:52:226 - unneeded nc? matches music
01:53:726 (5) - why not center this a bit more with 6 done
02:18:976 - forgot nc? nope
02:22:976 - forgot nc? nope
02:23:976 - unneeded nc? nope
02:33:976 - nc here
02:34:976 - and here
02:35:976 - and here instead so it would look like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9144214 that doesn't match the music very well
02:39:976 - move the nc here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9144222 ncing the largely spaced claps like earlier
02:41:851 (3,4) - inconsistant spacing again same as above its fine
02:45:851 (3,4) - why not have this pointing inwards it looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9143875 i think it looks better this way, and also it would be too close to 02:46:476 (6) -
02:47:851 (3,4) - same as above inconsistant spacing its fine
02:48:226 - unneeded nc?large spaced claps get nc'd like earlier

[Colby]

why not make it cs 4 so its not a big star and a quarter gap in the spread no wayyyyyy
raise the hp to like 6 it's waaay too low hp4 is high enough for such tricky patterns
maybe make it od 8 also to mimic the insane this diff is more rhythmically intense so OD7 is hard enough to acc already

00:08:476 - i would have all 3 of these as the same nc so it looks like they are a part of the same pattern i want 00:08:726 (1) - to have the importance it deserves
00:32:476 - ^ ^
00:48:476 - ^ ^
00:52:476 - i feel this has too many finishes it does, and i like itmight consider lowering hitsound volume on this pattern just a little, but the finishes are staying
00:56:476 - same as above make them all the same nc
01:20:476 - ^
01:36:476 - ^
01:52:476 - ^
02:16:476 - ^
02:28:476 - same as earlier i feel you went overboard on the finishes
02:32:476 - same as earlier all the same nc
02:36:476 - overboard on finishes
002:40:226 (1,2,1) - unneeded ncs? fixed
01:47:476 - ^changed this part a bit
Thanks so much for the amount of effort you put into this, i really appreciate it ! :)
Mithia
Hi Hi from my Inexpert Mod
Normal
is a normal, do not you think the speed of the sliders is very fast?
  1. 00:32:976 (1,2) - Blanket? owo
  2. 00:34:976 (1,2) - same?
  3. 01:46:726 (4,1) - improves the blanket (not great importance)
  4. 02:28:476 (4) - stack it with 02:28:476 (4) - ?
  5. 00:09:476 (2,3) - Far away (Thank Airmod XD)
Hard
  1. 00:49:976 (3) - NC (if you want)
  2. 00:50:976 (5) - same
  3. 00:55:476 (2,3,4) - you can improve this part..
  4. 02:26:476 (4) - NC (if you want x2)
  5. 02:27:976 (7) - same
  6. Some sliders of the end are uncomfortable, I can improve them
Insane
  1. AR 9 pls owo
  2. 00:04:476 (6) - NC?
  3. 00:05:976 (4) - same
  4. 00:05:726 (3,6) - stack it
  5. 00:13:976 (3) - NC
  6. 00:51:976 (3,4,5) - : that's better? :roll: ?
  7. 01:35:726 (2,3,4) - Improve that Jump
  8. 01:57:976 (5) - NC
  9. 01:58:476 (8) - same
  10. 01:58:976 (1,2,3,4) - I see it strange, you can do it better
  11. 01:59:976 (5) - NC
  12. 02:00:476 (8) - same
  13. 02:28:476 (5,1) - Blanket (If you want )
  14. 02:32:226 (2,1) - stack it
  15. from here 02:33:476 (2) - to here 02:36:226 (4) - you can improve the triangles
  16. 02:35:976 (3,5) - Blanket owo?
Colby
  1. why the diff is called colby? :roll: (I just want to know, nothing special)
  2. AR 9 pls owo
  3. 00:04:476 (7) - NC
  4. 00:08:726 (1) - that NC is not necessary, you can also improve this jump 00:08:476 (1,2,1,1) -
  5. 00:32:476 (1,2,1,1) - same
  6. 00:10:476 (7,8) - does not feel very flow
  7. 00:48:726 (1) - No NC
  8. 00:52:476 (1,2,1,2,1) - it seems very strange, improve it
  9. 00:56:476 (1,2,1,1) - same
  10. 01:18:976 (1,2,3) - try to make a triangle or something like that :roll:
  11. 01:20:726 (1) - No NC
  12. 01:36:726 (1) - same
    try something like that
  13. 01:49:976 (1,2,3) - Improve that, that jump is uncomfortable :)
  14. 01:52:476 (1,2,1,1) - pls... :roll: is it a kind of pattern this kind of parts?
  15. 02:28:476 (1,2,1,2,1) - improve that jump
  16. 02:36:476 (1,2,1,2,1) - same
General
I like it, it's great all the map, what I do not like at all is the difficulty Colby (I still want to know why it's called that) is very uncomfortable in some cases, the jumps can still be improved and you can decrease the size of the circles.
In the hard, insane and the same colby the sliders does not have much flow, can be improved, I know you can :P
IMPORTANT
NICE BG ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Any inconvenience tell me, I'm sorry if it does not help you much...
GL owo
Topic Starter
Yusomi

OsuDans wrote:

Hi Hi from my Inexpert Mod
Normal
is a normal, do not you think the speed of the sliders is very fast? i think it's ok
  1. 00:32:976 (1,2) - Blanket? owo fixed
  2. 00:34:976 (1,2) - same? fixed
  3. 01:46:726 (4,1) - improves the blanket (not great importance) fixed
  4. 02:28:476 (4) - stack it with 02:28:476 (4) - ? prefer to keep pattern
  5. 00:09:476 (2,3) - Far away (Thank Airmod XD) fixed :)
Hard
  1. 00:49:976 (3) - NC (if you want) prefer combo as 1 pattern
  2. 00:50:976 (5) - same same
  3. 00:55:476 (2,3,4) - you can improve this part.. you're right, part improved.
  4. 02:26:476 (4) - NC (if you want x2) prefer to keep whole pattern 1 combo like before
  5. 02:27:976 (7) - samesame
  6. Some sliders of the end are uncomfortable, I can improve them they're fine imo
Insane
  1. AR 9 pls owo too fast :o
  2. 00:04:476 (6) - NC? hmm nah
  3. 00:05:976 (4) - same nope
  4. 00:05:726 (3,6) - stack it fixed
  5. 00:13:976 (3) - NC i don't think it makes much sense, but it looks better, so i NC'd it like u said
  6. 00:51:976 (3,4,5) - : that's better? :roll: ?
    that breaks my logic in that jumps placement
  7. 01:35:726 (2,3,4) - Improve that Jump changed a bit
  8. 01:57:976 (5) - NC i prefer to keep this pattern as 1 combo
  9. 01:58:476 (8) - same
  10. 01:58:976 (1,2,3,4) - I see it strange, you can do it better these 1/2 beats have same spacing as the notes that are 1/2 beat apart in the triples. that's the logic im going with when making this pattern
  11. 01:59:976 (5) - NC
  12. 02:00:476 (8) - same
  13. 02:28:476 (5,1) - Blanket (If you want )
    prefer to not
  14. 02:32:226 (2,1) - stack it done
  15. from here 02:33:476 (2) - to here 02:36:226 (4) - you can improve the triangles they follow logic
  16. 02:35:976 (3,5) - Blanket owo? prefer not to
Colby
  1. why the diff is called colby? :roll: (I just want to know, nothing special) colby is name of my retarded friend, i'll change it hehe
  2. AR 9 pls owo too fast, and ruins reading challenge
  3. 00:04:476 (7) - NC nope
  4. 00:08:726 (1) - that NC is not necessary, you can also improve this jump 00:08:476 (1,2,1,1) - jump is fine how it is, NC helps readability
  5. 00:32:476 (1,2,1,1) - same
  6. 00:10:476 (7,8) - does not feel very flow good !
  7. 00:48:726 (1) - No NC
  8. 00:52:476 (1,2,1,2,1) - it seems very strange, improve it nope
  9. 00:56:476 (1,2,1,1) - same
  10. 01:18:976 (1,2,3) - try to make a triangle or something like that :roll:
    i like anti flow pattern here
  11. 01:20:726 (1) - No NC
  12. 01:36:726 (1) - same
    try something like that
  13. 01:49:976 (1,2,3) - Improve that, that jump is uncomfortable :) good !
  14. 01:52:476 (1,2,1,1) - pls... :roll: is it a kind of pattern this kind of parts? yes !
  15. 02:28:476 (1,2,1,2,1) - improve that jump nope
  16. 02:36:476 (1,2,1,2,1) - same
General
I like it, it's great all the map, what I do not like at all is the difficulty Colby (I still want to know why it's called that) is very uncomfortable in some cases, the jumps can still be improved and you can decrease the size of the circles.
In the hard, insane and the same colby the sliders does not have much flow | colby anti flow is intentional, that's the point. I changed some things in hard and insane thou |, can be improved, I know you can :P
IMPORTANT
NICE BG ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) hehehe w
Any inconvenience tell me, I'm sorry if it does not help you much... it was very helpful, thank you!
GL owo
Thanks for mod !
Einja
yusomi mapping for rank?

wots this owo
Topic Starter
Yusomi

Einja wrote:

yusomi mapping for rank?

wots this owo
owo;;
aru-
Hey yusomi :D
here is my cute lil mod for ya c:

Extra:

00:07:726 (4,5) - I dont see why you wouldnt put a slider here instead. There aint any change to the song
00:10:226 (6,7,8) - maybe try to centre the 7 with 6 and 8 on the x axis looks alot cleaner
00:10:976 (1,2,4,5,6) - ive tryed to make a triangle witht he sliderend of the 1 the sliderhead of the 2 and the tripple and it actualy looks quite nice maybe try that c:
00:14:976 (1,2,3) - same for this so it has not this overlap
00:47:226 (2,4,5,6) - align those as a triangle would look much better
Since you work alot with symmetry and clean patterns i would make those 00:55:226 (2,3) - parralel to those 00:54:476 (5,6) - (so that the followpoints are parralel)
01:14:976 (1,2,3,4) - This one aint clean you can see it if u ctrl + h the 3 and 4 and move them ontop of the 1 and 2
01:29:976 (4,5) - cmon u can do better ik that
01:39:976 (3,4) - dunno if u wanna stack them her voice changes in that part
01:54:351 (7) - this one ends on a strong beat
02:00:726 (3,4) - pitch of the piano increases so maybe increase spacing aswell ive tryed to form a triangle with those 02:00:601 (2,3,4) -
02:06:726 (7,1,2) - I'd centre the 7 between the 2 sliders


That was it :D
I wish u my very best with ur mapset getting ranked would love to see more metabreaking maps ranked c:
Topic Starter
Yusomi

Shifu Touka wrote:

Hey yusomi :D hi shifu !
here is my cute lil mod for ya c:

Extra:

00:07:726 (4,5) - I dont see why you wouldnt put a slider here instead. There aint any change to the song 00:07:851 (5) - there is drum beat here on blue tick, whereas there wasn't before
00:10:226 (6,7,8) - maybe try to centre the 7 with 6 and 8 on the x axis looks alot cleaner you're right! done
00:10:976 (1,2,4,5,6) - ive tryed to make a triangle witht he sliderend of the 1 the sliderhead of the 2 and the tripple and it actualy looks quite nice maybe try that c: oh, i already tried to do that, guess it wasn't perfect triangle enough. hopefully fixed it
00:14:976 (1,2,3) - same for this so it has not this overlap i like that overlap
00:47:226 (2,4,5,6) - align those as a triangle would look much better done
Since you work alot with symmetry and clean patterns i would make those 00:55:226 (2,3) - parralel to those 00:54:476 (5,6) - (so that the followpoints are parralel) ok changed
01:14:976 (1,2,3,4) - This one aint clean you can see it if u ctrl + h the 3 and 4 and move them ontop of the 1 and 2 fixed, but they aren't symmetrical by ctrl+h. distance snap was off by like 0.05 or something
01:29:976 (4,5) - cmon u can do better ik that aww i liked that, but now u make me feel its ugly so i change it
01:39:976 (3,4) - dunno if u wanna stack them her voice changes in that part ahh yeah you're right. changed
01:54:351 (7) - this one ends on a strong beat piano is stronger than drums here, so i chose to follow it instead
02:00:726 (3,4) - pitch of the piano increases so maybe increase spacing aswell ive tryed to form a triangle with those 02:00:601 (2,3,4) - you're right it should be more spaced, but i wanted this pattern to combine the 2 previous patterns in this piano section. hmm i created a new pattern which i think is much more fitting
02:06:726 (7,1,2) - I'd centre the 7 between the 2 sliders prefer it more without


That was it :D
I wish u my very best with ur mapset getting ranked would love to see more metabreaking maps ranked c:
Thank you for the mod ! good luck with your maps too Shifu <3
Enon
Ohh, the famous mapper
Topic Starter
Yusomi

Enon wrote:

Ohh, the famous mapper

I think you have wrong address ;w; here lives newbie mapper yusomi
Tiff
HI from my queue (M4M)
here comes the noob mod
I just deleted by accident I have to do it again nO
rip I have no comment for your extra and insane so I will mod a bit of normal and hard ;-;
Normal
02:24:976 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is this too hard for normal? that will confuse beginners
Hard
00:01:976 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, (5) and (6) should have the same DS as others, like this 00:05:976 (3,4,5,6) - if u want to make it as jumpy, change this one too 00:06:476 (5,6) -
00:23:226 (7) - u can make a blanket here (move down a bit)
It is a good map ;^; keep it up :)
Topic Starter
Yusomi

tiffany yu tyu wrote:

HI from my queue (M4M)
here comes the noob mod
I just deleted by accident I have to do it again nO aw ;w;
rip I have no comment for your extra and insane so I will mod a bit of normal and hard ;-; ok!
Normal
02:24:976 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is this too hard for normal? that will confuse beginners yeah, you're right. fixed
Hard
00:01:976 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, (5) and (6) should have the same DS as others, like this 00:05:976 (3,4,5,6) - if u want to make it as jumpy, change this one too 00:06:476 (5,6) - decreased spacing
00:23:226 (7) - u can make a blanket here (move down a bit) made a blanket!
It is a good map ;^; keep it up :) thanks !
Thanks for mod !
Mithia
waiting for rank :roll:
Topic Starter
Yusomi

OsuDans wrote:

waiting for rank :roll:
hehe, im trying hard! :)
Dignan
Here for the M4M you requested :)

Normal
00:11:476 (2,3) - are too close together imo, sliderborders shouldnt overlap
00:15:976 (3) - would be nicer to point in the direction of 00:16:476 (4) - unless you did this for aesthetics?
00:20:976 (1,2) - not lined up on purpose? would maybe look nicer
00:39:726 (2,3) - not a fan of this because of the way it flows, maybe rotate it a bit so that the circle leads into the slider
01:04:976 (1,2,3) - maybe make it a half circle and not have the circle stick out like that
01:06:976 (1) - too close to being offscreen?

Hard
00:04:476 (4) - repeat slider maps music better
00:29:976 (3,5) - again a wierd zig-zag movement, rotating slider is nicer
01:15:976 (1) - pretty sure its ofscreen
01:22:476 (5) - offscreen
01:28:726 (2) - offscreen
01:53:976 (6,7) - why didn't you map the rest of this sound? just put a circle on blue tick
02:28:476 (9) - first time you mapped the background instead of the voice, kinda wierd to read/play
02:36:476 (5) - ^

Insane
a lot of overlaps/stacks you could do, but it seems like you left them out on purpose
00:04:976 (1) - move this like 2 px to the right
00:11:476 (2,3,4) - why is this so offset?
00:45:976 (3) - could be long slider until blue tick, would map voice better
00:52:476 (5) - repeat slider maps sound better
01:07:976 (1) - close to being offscreen
01:19:726 (4) - offscreen
01:38:976 (1,2) - this shouldnt be nc?
02:30:226 (2) - offscreen
02:37:976 (1) - ^

Extra
00:15:226 (2) - some sliderheads seem silent to me
00:17:476 (2) - offscreen
00:32:226 (7) - slightly offscreen
00:44:976 (1) - offscreen
00:49:726 (3,4,5,6) - unreadeable. make it a stack or make it visually obvious this is a 1/4th rhythm
00:51:726 (2,3,4,5) - ummm
01:57:476 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - and onwards... why.
01:59:226 (2) - offscreen
02:25:726 (3,4,5,6) - .
02:50:851 (1,1) - ctrl g and stack makes it easier to understand

imo remap extra, the whole stacked/unstacked triples concept is wierd, doesn't look great and not fun to play for me.

Good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
Yusomi

Sylvarus wrote:

Here for the M4M you requested :)

Normal
00:11:476 (2,3) - are too close together imo, sliderborders shouldnt overlap not really an issue
00:15:976 (3) - would be nicer to point in the direction of 00:16:476 (4) - unless you did this for aesthetics? yea i think it looks nice
00:20:976 (1,2) - not lined up on purpose? would maybe look nicer it's ctrl+j
00:39:726 (2,3) - not a fan of this because of the way it flows, maybe rotate it a bit so that the circle leads into the slider it's fine
01:04:976 (1,2,3) - maybe make it a half circle and not have the circle stick out like that nope
01:06:976 (1) - too close to being offscreen? not sure this is an issue, if it get's mentioned again i'll fix

Hard
00:04:476 (4) - repeat slider maps music better fixed
00:29:976 (3,5) - again a wierd zig-zag movement, rotating slider is nicer i don't like such generic patterns
01:15:976 (1) - pretty sure its ofscreen it's not. things that are offscreen in editor are not offscreen in game. Try pressing F5 to view things like this.
01:22:476 (5) - offscreen no
01:28:726 (2) - offscreen no
01:53:976 (6,7) - why didn't you map the rest of this sound? just put a circle on blue tick quite tricky rhythm for a low hard diff but I added the circle anyway
02:28:476 (9) - first time you mapped the background instead of the voice, kinda wierd to read/play it's not - 00:52:476 (9) - . and i don't choose one or the other, i try to cover all strong sounds in a suitable way.
02:36:476 (5) - ^ ^

Insane
a lot of overlaps/stacks you could do, but it seems like you left them out on purpose
00:04:976 (1) - move this like 2 px to the right done
00:11:476 (2,3,4) - why is this so offset? i like how it looks and it blankets the previous slider, also creates better flow for following object.
00:45:976 (3) - could be long slider until blue tick, would map voice better i only use 3/4 slider for specific sound like here 00:42:476 (4) -
00:52:476 (5) - repeat slider maps sound better simplified rhythm since player just exited intense aiming section. I repeated this idea in the next kiai too
01:07:976 (1) - close to being offscreen no it's not
01:19:726 (4) - offscreen no
01:38:976 (1,2) - this shouldnt be nc? follows same NCing concept as kiai, since music is similar 00:50:476 (1,2,3,4) -
02:30:226 (2) - offscreen no
02:37:976 (1) - ^ ^

Extra
00:15:226 (2) - some sliderheads seem silent to me "step back GO! step back GO!"
00:17:476 (2) - offscreen no
00:32:226 (7) - slightly offscreen no
00:44:976 (1) - offscreen no
00:49:726 (3,4,5,6) - unreadeable. make it a stack or make it visually obvious this is a 1/4th rhythm your reading just not good enough then
00:51:726 (2,3,4,5) - ummm
01:57:476 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - and onwards... why.
01:59:226 (2) - offscreen
02:25:726 (3,4,5,6) - .
02:50:851 (1,1) - ctrl g and stack makes it easier to understand

imo remap extra, the whole stacked/unstacked triples concept is wierd, doesn't look great and not fun to play for me.

Good luck with the map!thanks
thanks for mod !
ABD007
m4m

Normal

02:00:226 - leave a gap at here is weird , got an interesting clap at there ! , would be nice if this 02:00:476 (8) - start on 02:00:226 - with reverse
01:09:976 (3,3) - fix this overlap ? it's not great i think

Hard

01:54:351 (7) - nc here would be great , it tell the player that note is important to take 'cause 1/4 at there

Insane

01:40:476 (6) - make these two 1/4 slider is good imo, reflect with sound and emphasize to the vocal . like this 01:53:476 (4,5) -
00:51:976 (3,4) - i prefer increase the spacing 'cause emphasize at here would be good
ctrl+g this 01:16:976 (1) - make a good flow
01:22:976 (1) - ^ , consistent flow with 01:26:726 (6,1) -
idk why u use variation space at here 01:50:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's got a same sound and same rhythm which is needed to consistent space at here . but at here , 01:54:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i understand that variation space at here is suitable 'cause got a different sound .
02:27:976 (3,4) - spacing issue . loud vocal tho
02:36:476 (5,1) - space is not consistent with 02:28:476 (5,1) -

Extra

Can u change the diffname of this ? Extra is suitable with 5* above. In this case, u got 4.52* which is suitable with unique diffname . Like Love ? or anything related to this song .

00:03:726 (4,5,6) - i dont think triplet is a good rhythm at here , use 1/4 on 00:03:726 (4,5) - is nice
00:13:851 (4) - remove this ? not consistent at here 00:14:851 - and 00:16:101 -

There are too many spacing issue on this diff , please be clear why you are spacing . I know you want to make an extra diff on this map but, a cheer and lovely map like this doesn't need that . E - N - H spread diff would be nice imo. but extra is not suitable in this case. I know it's up to you but , i'm just told u as a mapper :)

Nice song btw ! shoot star ~
gl /o

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